Ah! My Hina! -A crossover fanfic featuring Love Hina and Ah! My Goddess!
-Written by Kyle Dohring (A.K.A Buncy The Frog), with help from members of angelofanime.com forums and the angelroms.com forums-check them out!!! Please note I own shit, except maybe for the characters I make up along the series.
-I'd like to hear from you guys more! If you want to discuss this story, or something else, feel free to e-mail me at buncythefrog@hotmail.com
Ah! My Hina! Episode 4-Wishing for love? Debate.
It was a nice day in Japan, there was practically no cloud cover, the temperature was just right, and the students of Toudai had a long weekend off of school. Naru and Keitaro, although Naru had been a bit hard to convince, had gone on a date. Belldandy and Keiichi also took this opportunity to take some time alone also. This left all the single ladies alone in the dorm. They mulled and shuffled around the dorms, but even after a while, game systems, no matter how elaborately made by Skuld and Suu, got boring, along with sitting, pacing, talking, bathing, anything just seemed less interesting without the four people who had left.
Urd and Kitsume were drinking some sake left over from the previous night's dinner, when Urd's eyes suddenly came to life. She sat up quickly, pushing over her chair in the process. Kitsume looked up.
"What's the matter? This sake not good? It does taste a little bland to me, next time let's-" Urd placed a finger on Kitsume's lips, silencing her.
"I've got something we can do." Kitsume's eyes brightened, although the spectacle was blocked behind her eyelids. Urd snapped her fingers and a loudspeaker appeared in her hands. She spoke into it, causing her voice to bring throughout the entire dorm.
"Any young ladies who have nothing to do, come to the main hall immediately!"
Five minutes, everyone had gathered around Urd. Everyone looked at her with unbroken concentration. Skuld walked over to her sister and whispered into her ear.
"Is this about what I think it's about?" Urd nodded, and a smile appeared on Skuld's face. Urd spoke again.
"We're going on a little trip, to a country called Canada." Shinobu frowned, her face contorting into one of concentration.
"Ca-na-da. I don't remember that country at all." Urd laughed.
"Not many people do. It's just north of the united states."
"Ooh! I thought that that place was too cold to have any people in it!" Suu piped in, and jumped towards her computer, then started up an atlas program.
Sitting at his computer, Kyle was watching the latest episode of Ah! My Hina! Which he had just gotten from the creators FTP. Hearing all the cracks about his home country, he got mad and shut the media player off. Then got up to have a snack. Maybe a Popsicle. Yea, a Popsicle would be good.
The girls set out only a little after Suu had shown them the location of the place they were going using her atlas program. They moved into the living room, where a TV stood. Kitsume raised an eyebrow.
"You did say that we were going to this Canada right? I mean, what are we going here, watching a documentary on it or something?" Urd laughed, and Skuld smiled, her hands behind her back, fiddling with the hammer strapped to her back.
"Just grab hands, and trust me." Urd said, trying to look as serious as possible. "Ara...Hello everyone. How are you?" Everyone turned to see Mutsumi Otohime standing at the doorway. Shinobu marched over to her and grasped her hand, stretching the other people who were connected in the chain.
"We're going for a trip." She said matter-of-factly.
"Skuld, meet us at his hub ok?" Urd asked. Skuld nodded, and Urd slid into the TV, suddenly all the other girls were sucked into the TV also. Skuld shook her head, then headed to the hot springs.
As the non-goddesses traveled through the God/Goddess Travel Flux, simply referred to as the GTF, they saw a sight that they would never be able to recall properly, never mind even being sure of what they were seeing as they floated away from a wavy navy blue shape that looked awfully like the dorm. It seemed that the world had been splashed onto by a rather large bucket of paint, but there were discrepancies. They passed one and realized that they were passing a person. They couldn't make out what sex or clothes they were wearing though, it was just a white cloud shaped like a human that walked along the street. They suddenly started traveling very fast, floating over Tokyo and then Japan, then after a few seconds, the continent that was their destination came into view. They slowed down drastically as they approached a cluster of lakes. They could soon make out buildings and people again, and flew straight down, in to a house, then entered it. Immediately something was different. There were pink spots around them. Also, Skuld was there.
"I think a dramatic entrance would be in order?" Skuld asked.
"Sure, you take a few, and we'll have one hell of an entrance."
Kyle was sitting on his couch, watching TV, eating a Popsicle, which was against his house rules, which he had been reminded of many times, but he still ate there anyway. He was flipping through the channels, when he heard a crash from behind him, and his basement door open. He turned to see a familiar-looking woman walking out. She put her hand to her head, and spoke in language Kyle recognized immediately to be Japanese, but he could only pick out one word. He thought it sounded like "Ara".
He opened his mouth to speak, but before any words came out, a crash resounded from the kitchen. He turned his head slightly, and saw two small girls, one looked like she came from North America, and one looked more exotic. Again, before he could speak, his door crashed open, and a girl holding a hammer and a blond haired woman came through. He turned, seeing a shy looking girl walking toward the rest from upstairs. He heard someone clearing their throat from the direction of his TV and turned. There was a woman wriggling THROUGH his TV! Something clicked in Kyle's head, and he managed to say through the shock of what he just saw,
"Wait a second..." he pointed to each of them in turn, "Urd, Skuld, Kitsume, Suu, Sara, Shinobu, and... Mutsumi, what the? Why..." The blond haired woman spoke, surprisingly in English.
"Hey, how did you name all of us? We've never met before, have we?" The other girls shot her looks of surprise, but she just shrugged, "summer vacation." There was something strange about what she had just said Kyle couldn't put his finger on it, but then she spoke again, fencing off the stares. "What? I had to learn English to go on it." He finally figured it out. She was speaking Japanese, and he could understand it!" He pointed to Urd.
"You cast some sort of spell to make me learn Japanese didn't you? An I'm the one you were going to grant a wish for, right?" Skuld blinked a few times.
"Are you sure you only cast a language spell on him?" She asked, tightening her grip on her hammer. Urd shook her head.
"I hate when they find the GTA." She sighed.
"GTA?" Kyle replied, raising an eyebrow, "I download your episodes off an FTP." Urd snapped her fingers, and an image appeared before her, showing a teenager watching this whole scene play out. Seeing himself in the video, he turned to the point where a camera would have been, and was reaching out at the point when Urd snapped her fingers again, eliminating the image.
"That isn't a FTP." She explained, "It's a GTA or God/Goddess Transmitting Apparatus. It records more interesting events in out lives, and streams them to our main computer, yggasdrill. For some reason, people that are candidates for receiving a wish can access the files." She summoned a calendar, looked at the pages, then vanished it. "You should have been able to access our files just as we moved into the dorm. For some reason, they get named. Some yahoo called this section of our eternity Ah! My Hina! I guess he's trying to continue the naming scheme as long as Belldandy and Keiichi are together." Kyle racked his brain.
"You mean.... Ah! My Goddess?" He said, rather triumphantly.
"You got it." Urd stated. "So, what's it gonna be, riches? Fame? Some sort of power?" Kyle looked confused for a second, then snapped his fingers.
"Oh yeah! My wish! But... Wasn't the point of coming here to pass some time? Why get this over with so quickly? We could have some tea..." Shinobu suddenly looked surprised.
"But. I thought that Am-"
"Canadians"
"Sorry! Erm. Canadians drank coffee, not tea." Kyle laughed.
"Coffee? Can't stand the stuff. I usually drink tea actually. Much better." He rubbed the back of his head. "So. Are you going to have any? I've got some specialty teas if you want them." Shinobu joined Kyle in the kitchen to help prepare the tea after all the girls had agreed on a strawberry flavored tea.
Everyone sat in silence when as they sipped their tea. Urd looked over at Kyle, who was sitting in a comfortable chair, with Suu sitting contentedly on the ottoman, and raised her eyebrow.
"Decided yet?" She asked simply. Kyle snapped back into reality.
"Oh right, my wish! Well, I guess I could ask now." Mutsumi came into the room then, still holding her tea, as amazing as that was, and sat down in a chair in the kitchen.
"Ara, this Americ-"
"Canadian, please, I'm Canadian!"
"Ara, right. This Canadian house is so strange."
"Yeah, I guess me being in a Japanese house would be strange for me too, but I've watched animes, so I wouldn't be too surprised. I hope." Urd circled her hand, urging him to make his wish. "Right. My wish. Well, there's this girl." Kyle blushed deeply, "Named Katie." Urd and Kitsume let out loud laughs. Urd moved onto the table in the middle of the room and sat down cross-legged.
"Wish away." She said, her eyes showing pure pleasure.
"Ok. I wish that Katie and I would be together forever."
Keiichi stood stunned. Belldandy had just disappeared for no reason. His mind was a blank. She must have left for something really important though. He shrugged, knowing that everything would turn out all right in the end, as long as Belldandy was involved, and mounted his motorcycle, speeding off towards the temple. When she returned, she would first check there for him. He desperately hoped she would explain what caused her to disappear so quickly. He leaned back and let the wind rush through his helmet, ruffling his hair slightly.
Belldandy's face was contorted into one of pure determination. She entered the hub and immediately turned for her nearest entrance point. She raced towards it, knowing what would probably happen, but it would be worth it. She knew that it would.
Keitaro would have been better off if Naru had left suddenly, his date was going terribly. She had just about broken every bone in his body many times, once such incident occurred when he had been zoned out waiting in line for food for a movie, staring at a poster, and a group of high school girls just happened to walk in front of it just as Naru tried t figure out what it was that had him so interested. As long as this helps more then hurts. Keitaro thought.
Belldandy smashed through the mirror in Kyle's main "hall". She flew through so fast, the glass shattered and flew along her, cutting and gouging her along all exposed skin, and even through her clothes large pieces managed to leave their mark. She landed on the hardwood floor with a thump. Her eyes shot to Urd, who was the only one of the group what was not staring at her. Urd's forehead marking started to glow. The "wish beam" got out of it, but at a rather unusual angle. It went straight for Belldandy. She put her hands in front of her, palms facing each other, fingers spread, waiting for the beam. As it reached her, it splashed, as if it were water hitting a wall. The splashed thought soon came to be making a spherical shape in front of her hands. When the light finally dimmed, Urd glared at her sister, very aware of what she had done.
"Let me grant his wish." She snarled. Belldandy raised her arms, fingers not loosing their shape, causing the ball to move up, wriggling along wither her movements. She talked as she raised her hands.
"I, First Class Goddess Belldandy, cannot allow this wish the be granted!" With the utterance of the last word, her palms turned face out, fingers together. The ball froze, and turned into what looked like a solid shape.
"BE GONE!" She thrust her hands downward, and the ball followed, smashing into the floor. Fragments of the wish scattered all around.
Kyle watched as a shard flew straight for his head. He froze, not knowing what to do. When the shard was inches from his face, an orange rippling appeared in the air in front of him, the shard hit this and flew off harmlessly. Kyle scanned the space around him. Similar shards were bouncing off him, and other people too. When the shards had settled, they evaporated in a blue smoke.
Urd threw down her hand, which she had raised in activating the shield spell, and stormed to Belldandy, who was slowly working a healing spell on herself, closing wounds one at a time.
"WHAT THE HELL," Urd screamed, "DO YOU THINK YOU"RE DOING?!" Belldandy stopped, and glared at her sister.
"How could you even think of granting a wish like that!" She insisted, "Forcing love on someone? It'd bad enough with your potions, but with the ultimate force involved, there is nothing that could be done to remove the effect. It's low, even for you.' The two tried to stare each other down, but neither flinched. Suu and Skuld started sharing a whispered conversation. After a few moments, they nodded, and faced the two sisters. Suu jumped up, and landed past the goddesses, and turned around.
"We can have a trial!" She gladly announced.
"She means debate." Skuld corrected. Urd straightened, and put her hand to her chin, as if thinking. Eventually she nodded.
"That would work."
Before Kyle knew it, the girls had divided, and gone with separate goddesses back the Inn. After thinking it over, he decided that there was nothing that he could do, and stepped into the kitchen to throw out his Popsicle sticks. He grabbed the book he was reading, Fallen Dragon by Peter F. Hamilton, and went out to his pool deck to read, pushing aside the ruins of the door that Skuld had smashed in with her hammer.
Keitaro had done it. He had finally turned the date around. It involved some careful handling, but he had done it. Naru now sat beside him as he sat, recalling some f their earlier adventures. She occasionally added in a comment, but for the most part, she was laughing right along with Keitaro. He reached over to her hand, cautiously. Slowly, he placed his hand next to hers. He glanced at her, to see if she was watching. Naru was gazing off at the mountain range in the distance. Taking a deep breath, he lifted hid hand, and placed it on hers. She instantly snapped back to reality and looked at their hands, then him. Feeling it was in order, Keitaro steadied himself and said,
"Narusegawa, there is nothing that I want to be doing more then spending time with you." Naru smiled, and Keitaro let out the breath he had been holding.
"This is pretty enjoyable isn't it?" It's a nice change from homework and school." Keitaro felt very relived, and took both her hands.
"Narusegawa," Keitaro said, "There is something I have to tell you." Naru looked concerned, and tried to draw her hands away. Keitaro let her pull for a while, the stopped her. "Naru, I... I... I lo-"
A kick landed on the side of is head, sending him sprawling out of his chair and onto the floor, twitching once or twice. Suu looked over him.
"KEEEIITTAARROOO!!! The scary lady says you should come back to the dorm! Hammer lady came with me!" Skuld sighed.
"We do have names you know." Suu pursed her lips and raised a hand.
"Yeah! Cooking Lady, Scary Lady, and you, Hammer Lady!" Suu jumped over her and made a grab at Skuld's hammer. Skuld pulled away and Suu landed gracefully on her feet. Skuld sighed, and shrugged her shoulders.
"Ah well, come on, there's a hot springs not far from here, we can use that to get back."
Damn. Was he going to tell me, I wonder? Naru thought. After a moment she shook her head. Nah, the wimp doesn't have the guts to admit it. What am I thinking about anyway? I don't have any feelings for Kei, so why would I care?
"Naru, hurry up!" Naru looked up, the others were moving away, and Keitaro was waving her over. She ran up to his side, and held his arm, leaning her head on his shoulder.
"You know, we never got to finish this date, let's do this again soon." She blushed slightly at the announcement of this with company, and held on a little tighter.
When they arrived, Keitaro and Keiichi, who had recently arrived on his motorcycle, were given cloths to tie on their eyes.
"What's this for?" Keiichi asked, as Belldandy secured his cloth.
"Oh, the girls from the dorm insisted on it, you'll see soon."
"OOOWWWW!!!!" Keitaro yelped, and turned to glare at Naru, although he couldn't see a thing. "This is tight!"
"Good." Naru replied. "We don't want you seeing anything." Keitaro shrugged, but allowed Naru to lead him to the main hall, where Keiichi also was. Skuld nodded when Belldandy and Naru had moved away form the boys, and raised her hand, her fingers curled. A ball of light formed in her hand. She lowered this into her other hand, and raised her hand again. Another ball formed. She stood facing the two men, and took aim. She threw the balls at the two unknowing males, and the balls hit them square in the eyes. Their blindfolds fell off, and they looked around. Not knowing what happened, they looked to one another for an answer. They shrugged and looked at the girls. Shinobu was blushing crazily, Mokoto was looking nervous, and Naru seemed to be on the edge of hitting something.
"Can you see something strange?" Urd asked. Keitaro and Keiichi nodded no. "Great, then..." She clapped her hands, and everyone appeared in the hot springs, the girls in the water, divided, and the bys a little while away. Keiichi snapped his fingers.
"They're naked." He said. Keitaro looked shocked. "It's a simple disguise spell." Keitaro let out a yelp. He was going to get beaten for this no matter what.
In the center of the girls, away from each group, Mutsumi stood up.
"Ara... Let the debate. "Forcing love? Is now... in session!" Naru shook her head, and gestured towards the spring.
"Tell me again, why is this being held in here?"
Wow, sorry for that delay, an incomplete story too. I've been caught up in some stuff, like school and work, so I'll force myself to write more often. Look forward to the next chapter, 'cause if you're thinking "this is gonna be awesome" through the whole thing, it'll give a less chance of your realizing how bad it'll be. I have some ideas, but we'll see.
Oh, and if you haven't noticed, yeah, I've written myself in to my fanfic. I'll be making fun of myself more later, but just a note: I would never wish for something like that. Don't worry; I'll be out by the end of the next chapter for you guys who are set against that. Chapter 5-Debate for love? Resolution.
-Written by Kyle Dohring (A.K.A Buncy The Frog), with help from members of angelofanime.com forums and the angelroms.com forums-check them out!!! Please note I own shit, except maybe for the characters I make up along the series.
-I'd like to hear from you guys more! If you want to discuss this story, or something else, feel free to e-mail me at buncythefrog@hotmail.com
Ah! My Hina! Episode 4-Wishing for love? Debate.
It was a nice day in Japan, there was practically no cloud cover, the temperature was just right, and the students of Toudai had a long weekend off of school. Naru and Keitaro, although Naru had been a bit hard to convince, had gone on a date. Belldandy and Keiichi also took this opportunity to take some time alone also. This left all the single ladies alone in the dorm. They mulled and shuffled around the dorms, but even after a while, game systems, no matter how elaborately made by Skuld and Suu, got boring, along with sitting, pacing, talking, bathing, anything just seemed less interesting without the four people who had left.
Urd and Kitsume were drinking some sake left over from the previous night's dinner, when Urd's eyes suddenly came to life. She sat up quickly, pushing over her chair in the process. Kitsume looked up.
"What's the matter? This sake not good? It does taste a little bland to me, next time let's-" Urd placed a finger on Kitsume's lips, silencing her.
"I've got something we can do." Kitsume's eyes brightened, although the spectacle was blocked behind her eyelids. Urd snapped her fingers and a loudspeaker appeared in her hands. She spoke into it, causing her voice to bring throughout the entire dorm.
"Any young ladies who have nothing to do, come to the main hall immediately!"
Five minutes, everyone had gathered around Urd. Everyone looked at her with unbroken concentration. Skuld walked over to her sister and whispered into her ear.
"Is this about what I think it's about?" Urd nodded, and a smile appeared on Skuld's face. Urd spoke again.
"We're going on a little trip, to a country called Canada." Shinobu frowned, her face contorting into one of concentration.
"Ca-na-da. I don't remember that country at all." Urd laughed.
"Not many people do. It's just north of the united states."
"Ooh! I thought that that place was too cold to have any people in it!" Suu piped in, and jumped towards her computer, then started up an atlas program.
Sitting at his computer, Kyle was watching the latest episode of Ah! My Hina! Which he had just gotten from the creators FTP. Hearing all the cracks about his home country, he got mad and shut the media player off. Then got up to have a snack. Maybe a Popsicle. Yea, a Popsicle would be good.
The girls set out only a little after Suu had shown them the location of the place they were going using her atlas program. They moved into the living room, where a TV stood. Kitsume raised an eyebrow.
"You did say that we were going to this Canada right? I mean, what are we going here, watching a documentary on it or something?" Urd laughed, and Skuld smiled, her hands behind her back, fiddling with the hammer strapped to her back.
"Just grab hands, and trust me." Urd said, trying to look as serious as possible. "Ara...Hello everyone. How are you?" Everyone turned to see Mutsumi Otohime standing at the doorway. Shinobu marched over to her and grasped her hand, stretching the other people who were connected in the chain.
"We're going for a trip." She said matter-of-factly.
"Skuld, meet us at his hub ok?" Urd asked. Skuld nodded, and Urd slid into the TV, suddenly all the other girls were sucked into the TV also. Skuld shook her head, then headed to the hot springs.
As the non-goddesses traveled through the God/Goddess Travel Flux, simply referred to as the GTF, they saw a sight that they would never be able to recall properly, never mind even being sure of what they were seeing as they floated away from a wavy navy blue shape that looked awfully like the dorm. It seemed that the world had been splashed onto by a rather large bucket of paint, but there were discrepancies. They passed one and realized that they were passing a person. They couldn't make out what sex or clothes they were wearing though, it was just a white cloud shaped like a human that walked along the street. They suddenly started traveling very fast, floating over Tokyo and then Japan, then after a few seconds, the continent that was their destination came into view. They slowed down drastically as they approached a cluster of lakes. They could soon make out buildings and people again, and flew straight down, in to a house, then entered it. Immediately something was different. There were pink spots around them. Also, Skuld was there.
"I think a dramatic entrance would be in order?" Skuld asked.
"Sure, you take a few, and we'll have one hell of an entrance."
Kyle was sitting on his couch, watching TV, eating a Popsicle, which was against his house rules, which he had been reminded of many times, but he still ate there anyway. He was flipping through the channels, when he heard a crash from behind him, and his basement door open. He turned to see a familiar-looking woman walking out. She put her hand to her head, and spoke in language Kyle recognized immediately to be Japanese, but he could only pick out one word. He thought it sounded like "Ara".
He opened his mouth to speak, but before any words came out, a crash resounded from the kitchen. He turned his head slightly, and saw two small girls, one looked like she came from North America, and one looked more exotic. Again, before he could speak, his door crashed open, and a girl holding a hammer and a blond haired woman came through. He turned, seeing a shy looking girl walking toward the rest from upstairs. He heard someone clearing their throat from the direction of his TV and turned. There was a woman wriggling THROUGH his TV! Something clicked in Kyle's head, and he managed to say through the shock of what he just saw,
"Wait a second..." he pointed to each of them in turn, "Urd, Skuld, Kitsume, Suu, Sara, Shinobu, and... Mutsumi, what the? Why..." The blond haired woman spoke, surprisingly in English.
"Hey, how did you name all of us? We've never met before, have we?" The other girls shot her looks of surprise, but she just shrugged, "summer vacation." There was something strange about what she had just said Kyle couldn't put his finger on it, but then she spoke again, fencing off the stares. "What? I had to learn English to go on it." He finally figured it out. She was speaking Japanese, and he could understand it!" He pointed to Urd.
"You cast some sort of spell to make me learn Japanese didn't you? An I'm the one you were going to grant a wish for, right?" Skuld blinked a few times.
"Are you sure you only cast a language spell on him?" She asked, tightening her grip on her hammer. Urd shook her head.
"I hate when they find the GTA." She sighed.
"GTA?" Kyle replied, raising an eyebrow, "I download your episodes off an FTP." Urd snapped her fingers, and an image appeared before her, showing a teenager watching this whole scene play out. Seeing himself in the video, he turned to the point where a camera would have been, and was reaching out at the point when Urd snapped her fingers again, eliminating the image.
"That isn't a FTP." She explained, "It's a GTA or God/Goddess Transmitting Apparatus. It records more interesting events in out lives, and streams them to our main computer, yggasdrill. For some reason, people that are candidates for receiving a wish can access the files." She summoned a calendar, looked at the pages, then vanished it. "You should have been able to access our files just as we moved into the dorm. For some reason, they get named. Some yahoo called this section of our eternity Ah! My Hina! I guess he's trying to continue the naming scheme as long as Belldandy and Keiichi are together." Kyle racked his brain.
"You mean.... Ah! My Goddess?" He said, rather triumphantly.
"You got it." Urd stated. "So, what's it gonna be, riches? Fame? Some sort of power?" Kyle looked confused for a second, then snapped his fingers.
"Oh yeah! My wish! But... Wasn't the point of coming here to pass some time? Why get this over with so quickly? We could have some tea..." Shinobu suddenly looked surprised.
"But. I thought that Am-"
"Canadians"
"Sorry! Erm. Canadians drank coffee, not tea." Kyle laughed.
"Coffee? Can't stand the stuff. I usually drink tea actually. Much better." He rubbed the back of his head. "So. Are you going to have any? I've got some specialty teas if you want them." Shinobu joined Kyle in the kitchen to help prepare the tea after all the girls had agreed on a strawberry flavored tea.
Everyone sat in silence when as they sipped their tea. Urd looked over at Kyle, who was sitting in a comfortable chair, with Suu sitting contentedly on the ottoman, and raised her eyebrow.
"Decided yet?" She asked simply. Kyle snapped back into reality.
"Oh right, my wish! Well, I guess I could ask now." Mutsumi came into the room then, still holding her tea, as amazing as that was, and sat down in a chair in the kitchen.
"Ara, this Americ-"
"Canadian, please, I'm Canadian!"
"Ara, right. This Canadian house is so strange."
"Yeah, I guess me being in a Japanese house would be strange for me too, but I've watched animes, so I wouldn't be too surprised. I hope." Urd circled her hand, urging him to make his wish. "Right. My wish. Well, there's this girl." Kyle blushed deeply, "Named Katie." Urd and Kitsume let out loud laughs. Urd moved onto the table in the middle of the room and sat down cross-legged.
"Wish away." She said, her eyes showing pure pleasure.
"Ok. I wish that Katie and I would be together forever."
Keiichi stood stunned. Belldandy had just disappeared for no reason. His mind was a blank. She must have left for something really important though. He shrugged, knowing that everything would turn out all right in the end, as long as Belldandy was involved, and mounted his motorcycle, speeding off towards the temple. When she returned, she would first check there for him. He desperately hoped she would explain what caused her to disappear so quickly. He leaned back and let the wind rush through his helmet, ruffling his hair slightly.
Belldandy's face was contorted into one of pure determination. She entered the hub and immediately turned for her nearest entrance point. She raced towards it, knowing what would probably happen, but it would be worth it. She knew that it would.
Keitaro would have been better off if Naru had left suddenly, his date was going terribly. She had just about broken every bone in his body many times, once such incident occurred when he had been zoned out waiting in line for food for a movie, staring at a poster, and a group of high school girls just happened to walk in front of it just as Naru tried t figure out what it was that had him so interested. As long as this helps more then hurts. Keitaro thought.
Belldandy smashed through the mirror in Kyle's main "hall". She flew through so fast, the glass shattered and flew along her, cutting and gouging her along all exposed skin, and even through her clothes large pieces managed to leave their mark. She landed on the hardwood floor with a thump. Her eyes shot to Urd, who was the only one of the group what was not staring at her. Urd's forehead marking started to glow. The "wish beam" got out of it, but at a rather unusual angle. It went straight for Belldandy. She put her hands in front of her, palms facing each other, fingers spread, waiting for the beam. As it reached her, it splashed, as if it were water hitting a wall. The splashed thought soon came to be making a spherical shape in front of her hands. When the light finally dimmed, Urd glared at her sister, very aware of what she had done.
"Let me grant his wish." She snarled. Belldandy raised her arms, fingers not loosing their shape, causing the ball to move up, wriggling along wither her movements. She talked as she raised her hands.
"I, First Class Goddess Belldandy, cannot allow this wish the be granted!" With the utterance of the last word, her palms turned face out, fingers together. The ball froze, and turned into what looked like a solid shape.
"BE GONE!" She thrust her hands downward, and the ball followed, smashing into the floor. Fragments of the wish scattered all around.
Kyle watched as a shard flew straight for his head. He froze, not knowing what to do. When the shard was inches from his face, an orange rippling appeared in the air in front of him, the shard hit this and flew off harmlessly. Kyle scanned the space around him. Similar shards were bouncing off him, and other people too. When the shards had settled, they evaporated in a blue smoke.
Urd threw down her hand, which she had raised in activating the shield spell, and stormed to Belldandy, who was slowly working a healing spell on herself, closing wounds one at a time.
"WHAT THE HELL," Urd screamed, "DO YOU THINK YOU"RE DOING?!" Belldandy stopped, and glared at her sister.
"How could you even think of granting a wish like that!" She insisted, "Forcing love on someone? It'd bad enough with your potions, but with the ultimate force involved, there is nothing that could be done to remove the effect. It's low, even for you.' The two tried to stare each other down, but neither flinched. Suu and Skuld started sharing a whispered conversation. After a few moments, they nodded, and faced the two sisters. Suu jumped up, and landed past the goddesses, and turned around.
"We can have a trial!" She gladly announced.
"She means debate." Skuld corrected. Urd straightened, and put her hand to her chin, as if thinking. Eventually she nodded.
"That would work."
Before Kyle knew it, the girls had divided, and gone with separate goddesses back the Inn. After thinking it over, he decided that there was nothing that he could do, and stepped into the kitchen to throw out his Popsicle sticks. He grabbed the book he was reading, Fallen Dragon by Peter F. Hamilton, and went out to his pool deck to read, pushing aside the ruins of the door that Skuld had smashed in with her hammer.
Keitaro had done it. He had finally turned the date around. It involved some careful handling, but he had done it. Naru now sat beside him as he sat, recalling some f their earlier adventures. She occasionally added in a comment, but for the most part, she was laughing right along with Keitaro. He reached over to her hand, cautiously. Slowly, he placed his hand next to hers. He glanced at her, to see if she was watching. Naru was gazing off at the mountain range in the distance. Taking a deep breath, he lifted hid hand, and placed it on hers. She instantly snapped back to reality and looked at their hands, then him. Feeling it was in order, Keitaro steadied himself and said,
"Narusegawa, there is nothing that I want to be doing more then spending time with you." Naru smiled, and Keitaro let out the breath he had been holding.
"This is pretty enjoyable isn't it?" It's a nice change from homework and school." Keitaro felt very relived, and took both her hands.
"Narusegawa," Keitaro said, "There is something I have to tell you." Naru looked concerned, and tried to draw her hands away. Keitaro let her pull for a while, the stopped her. "Naru, I... I... I lo-"
A kick landed on the side of is head, sending him sprawling out of his chair and onto the floor, twitching once or twice. Suu looked over him.
"KEEEIITTAARROOO!!! The scary lady says you should come back to the dorm! Hammer lady came with me!" Skuld sighed.
"We do have names you know." Suu pursed her lips and raised a hand.
"Yeah! Cooking Lady, Scary Lady, and you, Hammer Lady!" Suu jumped over her and made a grab at Skuld's hammer. Skuld pulled away and Suu landed gracefully on her feet. Skuld sighed, and shrugged her shoulders.
"Ah well, come on, there's a hot springs not far from here, we can use that to get back."
Damn. Was he going to tell me, I wonder? Naru thought. After a moment she shook her head. Nah, the wimp doesn't have the guts to admit it. What am I thinking about anyway? I don't have any feelings for Kei, so why would I care?
"Naru, hurry up!" Naru looked up, the others were moving away, and Keitaro was waving her over. She ran up to his side, and held his arm, leaning her head on his shoulder.
"You know, we never got to finish this date, let's do this again soon." She blushed slightly at the announcement of this with company, and held on a little tighter.
When they arrived, Keitaro and Keiichi, who had recently arrived on his motorcycle, were given cloths to tie on their eyes.
"What's this for?" Keiichi asked, as Belldandy secured his cloth.
"Oh, the girls from the dorm insisted on it, you'll see soon."
"OOOWWWW!!!!" Keitaro yelped, and turned to glare at Naru, although he couldn't see a thing. "This is tight!"
"Good." Naru replied. "We don't want you seeing anything." Keitaro shrugged, but allowed Naru to lead him to the main hall, where Keiichi also was. Skuld nodded when Belldandy and Naru had moved away form the boys, and raised her hand, her fingers curled. A ball of light formed in her hand. She lowered this into her other hand, and raised her hand again. Another ball formed. She stood facing the two men, and took aim. She threw the balls at the two unknowing males, and the balls hit them square in the eyes. Their blindfolds fell off, and they looked around. Not knowing what happened, they looked to one another for an answer. They shrugged and looked at the girls. Shinobu was blushing crazily, Mokoto was looking nervous, and Naru seemed to be on the edge of hitting something.
"Can you see something strange?" Urd asked. Keitaro and Keiichi nodded no. "Great, then..." She clapped her hands, and everyone appeared in the hot springs, the girls in the water, divided, and the bys a little while away. Keiichi snapped his fingers.
"They're naked." He said. Keitaro looked shocked. "It's a simple disguise spell." Keitaro let out a yelp. He was going to get beaten for this no matter what.
In the center of the girls, away from each group, Mutsumi stood up.
"Ara... Let the debate. "Forcing love? Is now... in session!" Naru shook her head, and gestured towards the spring.
"Tell me again, why is this being held in here?"
Wow, sorry for that delay, an incomplete story too. I've been caught up in some stuff, like school and work, so I'll force myself to write more often. Look forward to the next chapter, 'cause if you're thinking "this is gonna be awesome" through the whole thing, it'll give a less chance of your realizing how bad it'll be. I have some ideas, but we'll see.
Oh, and if you haven't noticed, yeah, I've written myself in to my fanfic. I'll be making fun of myself more later, but just a note: I would never wish for something like that. Don't worry; I'll be out by the end of the next chapter for you guys who are set against that. Chapter 5-Debate for love? Resolution.