I'm going to try this one more time. For some reason, I'm having trouble
getting it to load properly!
A/N Please forgive me for this. I just wanted to thank you all for your kind and enthusiastic feedback. What a great bunch of people you all are! Great writers, and you encourage others as well.
Anyway, I wanted to tell you that I did go ahead and revised the 2nd chappie a little, and you might want to go back and take a look before moving on. I removed a little of the angst (don't worry, I didn't get rid of it ~ just postponed it a little) and added a little more to the scene with Miroku. Hope it gives you a laugh or two. It did me!
Talon Skydragon~ you were right. I thought so too, but I wrote that chapter at 2am after watching a really sappy movie, so I guess I was a little affected. That's why I fixed it a little. Thanks for your help.
Code name: Anrui Yuy~Of course you liked that line: "Mission Accomplished" It sounds just like Heero! Mmmmm! I always try to read and review those who do me the favour, so I went to your bio page. I like 1xR stories too, and 2xHilde.
Anyway, I am working right now on chapter 3, so please don't pelt me with stones (Pocky would be ok, though!).
A/N Please forgive me for this. I just wanted to thank you all for your kind and enthusiastic feedback. What a great bunch of people you all are! Great writers, and you encourage others as well.
Anyway, I wanted to tell you that I did go ahead and revised the 2nd chappie a little, and you might want to go back and take a look before moving on. I removed a little of the angst (don't worry, I didn't get rid of it ~ just postponed it a little) and added a little more to the scene with Miroku. Hope it gives you a laugh or two. It did me!
Talon Skydragon~ you were right. I thought so too, but I wrote that chapter at 2am after watching a really sappy movie, so I guess I was a little affected. That's why I fixed it a little. Thanks for your help.
Code name: Anrui Yuy~Of course you liked that line: "Mission Accomplished" It sounds just like Heero! Mmmmm! I always try to read and review those who do me the favour, so I went to your bio page. I like 1xR stories too, and 2xHilde.
Anyway, I am working right now on chapter 3, so please don't pelt me with stones (Pocky would be ok, though!).