I got inspired when my dad kicked me off the net for him to use the phone. It just came to me...sitting in front of the computer staring at the screen with nothing to do. Please R and R. Hope you like it. Disclaimer: Digimon isn't mines. PS: Some part are suppose to be italicize but ff.net is screwed up and won't italicize it for me, even though on the original document it is. [sigh]....PS: When I have [ ] around something, that means it suppose to be italicized.
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Title: Please Let It Not Be True
Chapter 1: Never Saw Him Again
By: Burningwaters
"DONT COME ANY CLOSER!"
"STOP!!!!"
"DONT MOVE!"
"Please don't hurt me."
"No...no...PLEASE DONT....OH GOD!!! HELP ME!!!"
"STAY OUT!"
BOOOOM!!!!
Everything went so fast yet so slow. Time seem to go into slow motion. Like every time the heart beats it plays another second.
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I walked into the store late at night with my brother.
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A stranger came running in with a gun, yelling.
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The stranger took my brother hostage when the police showed up.
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"DON'T COME ANY CLOSER!!" he press the gun closer to my brothers head. I felt helpless.
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The police didn't listen, they charge in.
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BOOOOOMMM! The gun went off.
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The look on my brother face scared me, FEAR.
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Screams rang out, "NOOOOOOOO!!!!" I yelled.
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The police opened fired as I ran to my brother.
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The stranger dropped my brother to the ground.
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His bloody lifeless corpse fell slowly towards the ground.
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I ran toward him
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I felt a sharp pang in the side of my shoulder.
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Everything was going black
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Screams everywhere but everything felt oddly numb.
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The last thing I saw was my brother's lifeless body as I pass out.
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What do you think? Good? Should I continue?