HI! Here's the 1st chapter. Please review or it will be discontinued.
*We fade in on Hiei in the weight training room of the gym, lifting
weights on the bench press*
Hiei: (lifting the weights) UUGGHH, I should've kept training during that
battle of
The bands competition (referring to my earlier story).
Taking a
Break took it's toll on my weight-training, although I
have to
Say that I am THE strongest guy compared to the
belly-huggers
Around this town.
**We zoom in on a huge, muscular guy(we're talking 3x as big as tugora
here) standing at the door way. It's evident that he overheard Hiei as he
shakes his Bleached blond, greasy hair and Laughs**
Weird guy(we'll replace this with his name later): You pathetic idiot
*Hiei, his eyes red with anger, sits up and looks over the stranger*
Hiei: You better be talking about Kuwabara
Weird guy: Who?
Hiei: Ok, you're in trouble. Who are you anyway?
Weird guy: Pratto McLorrit. And I have a better idea.
Hiei: You have 10 seconds to talk
Pratto: You boasted that you were the strongest in the town. Well, let's
Test that out, half-pint
Hiei: (now REALLY ticked off) Fine, what are the stakes?
Pratto: My brother is the president of Billboards Etc. If you win, then
I'll have
Him put your picture on every billboard labeled"
The strongest alive"
Hiei: Sounds good. And what if I lose?
Pratto: The pedigree dog show is being held in this town. WHEN you lose,
you
Have to enter a dog into the show.
Hiei: Fine, because I will NOT lose
Pratto: Fine, let's go!
**Pratto and Hiei both lift 100 pounds with no effort. They continue to
add on tremendous weight, but as Hiei begins to lift up a massive 500
pounds, Kuwabara slams the door open*
Kuwabara: Hiei, what are you trying to do, kill yourself?
**Kuwabara surprised Hiei so much that he dropped the bar , which made
the weights clang and roll across the room*
Pratto: (setting down his bar) Well, well, well. It loks like you lost
Hiei: That doesn't count, the pea-brained moron made me drop it!
Kuwabara: Hey..
Hiei: (glares at Kuwabara) SHUT UP!!
Pratto: you lost fair and square
Hiei: The only thing square around here is your head
Pratto: Well, if your in the laughing mood, than you can call your mutt giggles, because
The competition is in 5 months
*Pratto tosses a brochure of the competition to Hiei*
Pratto: So saddle, up doggy. You have to train the dog too.
**Pratto walks out of the gym laughing**
Kuwabara: Did I just miss something?
TO BE CONTINUED-PLEASE REVIEW OR IT WILL BE DISCONTINUED. THANKS
*We fade in on Hiei in the weight training room of the gym, lifting
weights on the bench press*
Hiei: (lifting the weights) UUGGHH, I should've kept training during that
battle of
The bands competition (referring to my earlier story).
Taking a
Break took it's toll on my weight-training, although I
have to
Say that I am THE strongest guy compared to the
belly-huggers
Around this town.
**We zoom in on a huge, muscular guy(we're talking 3x as big as tugora
here) standing at the door way. It's evident that he overheard Hiei as he
shakes his Bleached blond, greasy hair and Laughs**
Weird guy(we'll replace this with his name later): You pathetic idiot
*Hiei, his eyes red with anger, sits up and looks over the stranger*
Hiei: You better be talking about Kuwabara
Weird guy: Who?
Hiei: Ok, you're in trouble. Who are you anyway?
Weird guy: Pratto McLorrit. And I have a better idea.
Hiei: You have 10 seconds to talk
Pratto: You boasted that you were the strongest in the town. Well, let's
Test that out, half-pint
Hiei: (now REALLY ticked off) Fine, what are the stakes?
Pratto: My brother is the president of Billboards Etc. If you win, then
I'll have
Him put your picture on every billboard labeled"
The strongest alive"
Hiei: Sounds good. And what if I lose?
Pratto: The pedigree dog show is being held in this town. WHEN you lose,
you
Have to enter a dog into the show.
Hiei: Fine, because I will NOT lose
Pratto: Fine, let's go!
**Pratto and Hiei both lift 100 pounds with no effort. They continue to
add on tremendous weight, but as Hiei begins to lift up a massive 500
pounds, Kuwabara slams the door open*
Kuwabara: Hiei, what are you trying to do, kill yourself?
**Kuwabara surprised Hiei so much that he dropped the bar , which made
the weights clang and roll across the room*
Pratto: (setting down his bar) Well, well, well. It loks like you lost
Hiei: That doesn't count, the pea-brained moron made me drop it!
Kuwabara: Hey..
Hiei: (glares at Kuwabara) SHUT UP!!
Pratto: you lost fair and square
Hiei: The only thing square around here is your head
Pratto: Well, if your in the laughing mood, than you can call your mutt giggles, because
The competition is in 5 months
*Pratto tosses a brochure of the competition to Hiei*
Pratto: So saddle, up doggy. You have to train the dog too.
**Pratto walks out of the gym laughing**
Kuwabara: Did I just miss something?
TO BE CONTINUED-PLEASE REVIEW OR IT WILL BE DISCONTINUED. THANKS