Angel: OHMYGODSOHMYGODSOHMYGODS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! five, count that FIVE reviews in about a days time on my idea!!!
Aaries: yep, sure looks that way. so what should we do for the next chapter?
Chaos: I like the idea submited by one of your reviewers, Kely, that Ryou is his lover in the past but i dont realy see how that would work here.....
Aaries: I thought you were centerd on Seto/Jou fics?
Chaos: I am, but I also recognise a good fic when I like one. This is angsty enough that it suits me just fine.
Angel: I hope it gets better though, you know with more fluff. I like fluff.
Aaries: -_-* what ever... this coming from the angel that wears leather, chains, and all sorts of goodies like that.
Angel: ^-^ yep!
Chaos: *sniggering* Baka
Angel+Chaos: *gets into fight*
PR: ^0_0^ whateverwhateverwhateverijustwanttoreadmoreofthestorriesohurryupandtypealready!!
Aaries: Ok!
Disclamer: PR: werealydontowndodontlooktousformoneyandcrap
By the way, we realize that our italics dont show up so from now on and when i go back a little later these (* bla bla...*) will mean italics, ok?
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**********Ryou 1st person POV**********
I was walking home from school when Yugi and the others caught up to me and started pestering me. Dont get me wrong, I realy like those guys and all but sometimes they can be so anoying.
"So Bakura, would you like to go to the game shop with us?" Yugi asked me, calling me by my last name. Because of my transfer from an English school, my name is writen diferently than theirs.
"No thanks Yugi, I have a lot of work to do today." I said, and it wasnt quite a lie, more like a little fib because Bakura would get angry if I was to awfully late and I did have homework from three diferent classes.
"Ok, well call if you change your mind." they said going thier own way.
I was home a moment later, and not a moment to soon either. Bakura looked real angry when I walked in, not to strange but not realy good either.
"Why does it have to take you so long to get home!?!?" he demanded as I put my Backpack away.
"I'm sorry, Yugi and the others wanted to talk to me after school." I said apologising.
"The Pharo's brat and his friends." my Yami snorted. I quickly escaped to the kitchen to get something to eat, but I didnt realize he had followed me untill I turned around again. "Dont you have Homework of something?" He asked rudely.
"Yes." I said and putting my apple down took my back pack upstairs to my room so I could get it done.
*********end Ryou POV*********
Bakura watched his light go, then went back to the living room so he could watch TV. For a wonder his headach had been gone by lunch time instead of persisting all daylike it usualy did after a night of drinking like that but he must not have drunk as much as he thought he did. Bakura was watching some stupid show about a wandering samurai when he began to fall asleep.
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I sat in my room doing my homework for a few hours, then sat staring out my bedroom window wondering why Bakura hadnt started beating me when I got home. Normaly Bakura would hit me and beat me when he was in that kind of mood, but today he didnt. I was scared truth to be told, frightend of what he might be planning but I couldnt let that feeling leak through our link or he would come up to beat me.
Laying down I decided to read my new library book that I just got today. It was a good one about a griphon and an evil dark mage and a good mage. I fell asleep reading it, and didnt wake up till I realized that I was supposed to be making dinner now. I went down the stairs quietsly, good thing I did too because my dark was asleep on the couch. I quietly started making spagheti, its one of his favoretts and I hoped it might help improve his mood.
I might have been wrong though because when I woke him up he took one look at it and stormed up to his room. I calmly ate one plate full, and put the rest in the oven so it wouldnt get cold whenever he got hungry. Leaving a note to explain it I went back to my room to read my book.
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(*Bakura's POV*)
When he woke me up to tell me he had made dinner I was stunned. He had made my favorett, that italian stuff with tomatoe sauce, but I was feeling kind of peevish because of last nights drinking binge and when I felt the tears in my eyes..... I just couldnt let him see me that way. I went to my room to think about it. I can hear him moving around down there, Probably putting some in the oven so it wont get cold. I cant believe I got such a great Hikari, and I have yet to figure out why he's so nice to me after all I've done to him. After crying my eyes out in my room, I decide to go down and eat some of the food my Hikari made.
After dinner, I decided to take a walk around the neiborhood and clear my mind. As I walk out, I realize its snowing. I dont like the cold at this time of year, but the snow doesnt realy bother me. Its all soft and pure, Just like my Hikari. I dont realy know why I get so angry with my Hikari, I just cant contain it in me sometimes. I've tried to, but it just seems to dam up inside me till it explodes on my unsuspecting Hikari. I hurt him even more somtimes when that happens, and contrary to what I've found as popular belief I dont realy like to beat my Hikari. I just can't help it sometimes, especialy when I'm angry at something. Like that danm Pharoh, and his light's friends. His light wasn't too bad, he was a lot like Ryou in most respects and I suppose thats why they get along so well. Its that danm Pharoh, I just hate him so much.
***End Bakura POV***
The white haird demon walked down the street, becoming more and more angry with each step.
**********end fic**********
OOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooooooooookay.... Whatever the hell that was I dont want to know.
Angel: You should know though you wrote it.
Chaos: Yea, so dont play inocent with us!!!
Aaries: O_O I wrote that????? who is it then who is sitting in the back row giving tips on what to do next?
Angel: Us, but those are just sugestions..
Aaries: what ever....... BY the way, the rating will go up for rape in later chapters so look out. Please oh please continue reviewing this its made us so happy. Ja ne~
Aaries: yep, sure looks that way. so what should we do for the next chapter?
Chaos: I like the idea submited by one of your reviewers, Kely, that Ryou is his lover in the past but i dont realy see how that would work here.....
Aaries: I thought you were centerd on Seto/Jou fics?
Chaos: I am, but I also recognise a good fic when I like one. This is angsty enough that it suits me just fine.
Angel: I hope it gets better though, you know with more fluff. I like fluff.
Aaries: -_-* what ever... this coming from the angel that wears leather, chains, and all sorts of goodies like that.
Angel: ^-^ yep!
Chaos: *sniggering* Baka
Angel+Chaos: *gets into fight*
PR: ^0_0^ whateverwhateverwhateverijustwanttoreadmoreofthestorriesohurryupandtypealready!!
Aaries: Ok!
Disclamer: PR: werealydontowndodontlooktousformoneyandcrap
By the way, we realize that our italics dont show up so from now on and when i go back a little later these (* bla bla...*) will mean italics, ok?
****************************************************
**********Ryou 1st person POV**********
I was walking home from school when Yugi and the others caught up to me and started pestering me. Dont get me wrong, I realy like those guys and all but sometimes they can be so anoying.
"So Bakura, would you like to go to the game shop with us?" Yugi asked me, calling me by my last name. Because of my transfer from an English school, my name is writen diferently than theirs.
"No thanks Yugi, I have a lot of work to do today." I said, and it wasnt quite a lie, more like a little fib because Bakura would get angry if I was to awfully late and I did have homework from three diferent classes.
"Ok, well call if you change your mind." they said going thier own way.
I was home a moment later, and not a moment to soon either. Bakura looked real angry when I walked in, not to strange but not realy good either.
"Why does it have to take you so long to get home!?!?" he demanded as I put my Backpack away.
"I'm sorry, Yugi and the others wanted to talk to me after school." I said apologising.
"The Pharo's brat and his friends." my Yami snorted. I quickly escaped to the kitchen to get something to eat, but I didnt realize he had followed me untill I turned around again. "Dont you have Homework of something?" He asked rudely.
"Yes." I said and putting my apple down took my back pack upstairs to my room so I could get it done.
*********end Ryou POV*********
Bakura watched his light go, then went back to the living room so he could watch TV. For a wonder his headach had been gone by lunch time instead of persisting all daylike it usualy did after a night of drinking like that but he must not have drunk as much as he thought he did. Bakura was watching some stupid show about a wandering samurai when he began to fall asleep.
** * **
I sat in my room doing my homework for a few hours, then sat staring out my bedroom window wondering why Bakura hadnt started beating me when I got home. Normaly Bakura would hit me and beat me when he was in that kind of mood, but today he didnt. I was scared truth to be told, frightend of what he might be planning but I couldnt let that feeling leak through our link or he would come up to beat me.
Laying down I decided to read my new library book that I just got today. It was a good one about a griphon and an evil dark mage and a good mage. I fell asleep reading it, and didnt wake up till I realized that I was supposed to be making dinner now. I went down the stairs quietsly, good thing I did too because my dark was asleep on the couch. I quietly started making spagheti, its one of his favoretts and I hoped it might help improve his mood.
I might have been wrong though because when I woke him up he took one look at it and stormed up to his room. I calmly ate one plate full, and put the rest in the oven so it wouldnt get cold whenever he got hungry. Leaving a note to explain it I went back to my room to read my book.
** * **
(*Bakura's POV*)
When he woke me up to tell me he had made dinner I was stunned. He had made my favorett, that italian stuff with tomatoe sauce, but I was feeling kind of peevish because of last nights drinking binge and when I felt the tears in my eyes..... I just couldnt let him see me that way. I went to my room to think about it. I can hear him moving around down there, Probably putting some in the oven so it wont get cold. I cant believe I got such a great Hikari, and I have yet to figure out why he's so nice to me after all I've done to him. After crying my eyes out in my room, I decide to go down and eat some of the food my Hikari made.
After dinner, I decided to take a walk around the neiborhood and clear my mind. As I walk out, I realize its snowing. I dont like the cold at this time of year, but the snow doesnt realy bother me. Its all soft and pure, Just like my Hikari. I dont realy know why I get so angry with my Hikari, I just cant contain it in me sometimes. I've tried to, but it just seems to dam up inside me till it explodes on my unsuspecting Hikari. I hurt him even more somtimes when that happens, and contrary to what I've found as popular belief I dont realy like to beat my Hikari. I just can't help it sometimes, especialy when I'm angry at something. Like that danm Pharoh, and his light's friends. His light wasn't too bad, he was a lot like Ryou in most respects and I suppose thats why they get along so well. Its that danm Pharoh, I just hate him so much.
***End Bakura POV***
The white haird demon walked down the street, becoming more and more angry with each step.
**********end fic**********
OOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooooooooookay.... Whatever the hell that was I dont want to know.
Angel: You should know though you wrote it.
Chaos: Yea, so dont play inocent with us!!!
Aaries: O_O I wrote that????? who is it then who is sitting in the back row giving tips on what to do next?
Angel: Us, but those are just sugestions..
Aaries: what ever....... BY the way, the rating will go up for rape in later chapters so look out. Please oh please continue reviewing this its made us so happy. Ja ne~