Chapter Six
Heres the rewrite of Chapter six, its very similar to the other one, I am just switching around a few words and adding replies to all the reviews:
Times Mortal Enemy: It was actually a drawing I made once, I called it "Cloudweaver" and since then I liked that name a lot, so I decided to call her "Cloudweaver"
Chibi1309: thanks for all your reviews, your sweet too!! :D
The H.I.V.E take Cloudweaver to Slade's new Headquarters, meanwhile the Titans are trying to find out where she is, what exactly is Slade planning? Is he luring Robin there?? Or is he looking to make Cloudweaver his new apprentice?? Read to find out. Rated for swearing
I do not own the Teen Titans, Except for Cloudweaver
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"Cloudweaver!" yelled The titans, but it was too late, Jinx and the other H.I.V.E members had already taken off with her,
"Damn it!" said Robin "I bet you a million dollars Slade is up to this"
"Why would he want Cloudweaver?" said Raven,
"Who knows, maybe he saw her as a new threat, or maybe he is using her as bait" said Robin
"or maybe he's using her as a new apprentice" said Raven
"He can't pull the nano-probe thing again, does he think we are that stupid?" said Cyborg
"I'm not sure" said Robin "but whatever he's planning, we've got to get Cloudweaver back"
:: Slade's Headquarters::
Cloudweaver woke up, she looked around, 'where the hell am I?' she thought, she was hanging from her wrists which had metal braces around them, attached to chains that were attached to the ceiling, her legs were dangling freely, "did those hive creeps put me here?" she thought out loud
"No, I did" said a voice, and out from the shadows came a tall figure with a metal golden mask,
"who are you?" said Cloudweaver raising one eyebrow
"I am Slade" he said, Cloudweaver had heard a lot about Slade, but never actually seen him,
"so your Slade?" said Cloudweaver
"yes" said Slade
"you'd better let me go" said Cloudweaver
"or what?" said Slade "your small and harmless, you couldn't hurt me if you tried" said Slade walking up to Cloudweaver, who narrowed her eyes in anger, and kicked Slade in the face with her free leg, "Small and harmless?!?!?!?" she yelled,
"why you little brat-" Slade Began, but one of his Men came in and said "sir, we have received the video tape of the Titans"
"fine, Play it" said Slade, turning around and walking away from Cloudweaver, and the man pressed a button on a remote and a screen appeared out of no where and it was Robin, and the other Titans, the H.I.V.E must have planted a camera somewhere, because they didn't seem to notice that there was a camera there,
Video: '"damn it!" said Robin "I bet you a million dollars Slade is up to this"
"Why would he want Cloudweaver?" said Raven,
"who knows, maybe he saw her as a new threat, or maybe he is using her as bait" said Robin
"or maybe he's using her as a new apprentice" said Raven
"He can't pull the nano-probe thing again, does he think we are that stupid?" said Cyborg
"I'm not sure" said Robin "but whatever he's planning, we've got to get Cloudweaver back
"we have no idea where she is though" said Beast Boy
"We'll have to find out" said Robin
"Oh, I hope she is unharmed" said Starfire
"She's a strong girl, I'm sure she's fine"' Said Raven
Just then, the tape ended
"I see" said Slade, "young Raven was correct"
"If you think I'm gonna be your apprentice you've got another thing coming" said Cloudweaver
"you don't have a choice, you see, if you don't serve me, I'll turn you back over to the government, we don't want that now do we?" said Slade, as Cloudweaver narrowed her eyes even more, then she said "how are you going to do that? You're a villain yourself, you would go to jail for sure"
"I have my ways" said Slade,
"what about the other Titans?" said Cloudweaver, "their sure to find me"
"I wouldn't be so sure about that" said Slade, "I'm not giving them any clues, they will have no way of finding out where I am"
Cloudweaver was starting to believe she really Didn't have a choice, until she thought of something, 'Raven' she thought, 'maybe she'll be able to track me down somehow' she closed her eyes and sighed, 'I've got to breathe I can't keep going under' she sang in her head, she opened her eyes to find Slade was looking at her
"get yourself a Polaroid and take a picture it'll last longer" said Cloudweaver glaring back at him
"I'm waiting for your answer" said Slade
'who knows how long it'll take the other Titans to get here, if they even come' thought Cloudweaver 'and I sure as hell don't want to go back to those labs, damn it, and I don't want to be this creeps apprentice either'
::Titans Tower::
"This is odd" said Beast Boy "he usually gives us a clue as to where he is by this time"
"I know, its like he doesn't want us to find her" said Robin
"I'm aiming on the apprentice thing then" said Cyborg "because if he gives us a clue then we might find her and ruin all hope of having another apprentice"
"that makes sense" said Raven "but why Cloudweaver? Why an 11 year old girl?"
"who knows" said Beast Boy "but it seems like we have no way of finding her"
No one said anything for awhile, Starfire sat down on the couch, meanwhile, back at Slades headquarters, Cloudweaver was battling with some very hard choices.
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Ooooo this is getting good! Please R&R and Chapter seven will be up soon!
Heres the rewrite of Chapter six, its very similar to the other one, I am just switching around a few words and adding replies to all the reviews:
Times Mortal Enemy: It was actually a drawing I made once, I called it "Cloudweaver" and since then I liked that name a lot, so I decided to call her "Cloudweaver"
Chibi1309: thanks for all your reviews, your sweet too!! :D
The H.I.V.E take Cloudweaver to Slade's new Headquarters, meanwhile the Titans are trying to find out where she is, what exactly is Slade planning? Is he luring Robin there?? Or is he looking to make Cloudweaver his new apprentice?? Read to find out. Rated for swearing
I do not own the Teen Titans, Except for Cloudweaver
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"Cloudweaver!" yelled The titans, but it was too late, Jinx and the other H.I.V.E members had already taken off with her,
"Damn it!" said Robin "I bet you a million dollars Slade is up to this"
"Why would he want Cloudweaver?" said Raven,
"Who knows, maybe he saw her as a new threat, or maybe he is using her as bait" said Robin
"or maybe he's using her as a new apprentice" said Raven
"He can't pull the nano-probe thing again, does he think we are that stupid?" said Cyborg
"I'm not sure" said Robin "but whatever he's planning, we've got to get Cloudweaver back"
:: Slade's Headquarters::
Cloudweaver woke up, she looked around, 'where the hell am I?' she thought, she was hanging from her wrists which had metal braces around them, attached to chains that were attached to the ceiling, her legs were dangling freely, "did those hive creeps put me here?" she thought out loud
"No, I did" said a voice, and out from the shadows came a tall figure with a metal golden mask,
"who are you?" said Cloudweaver raising one eyebrow
"I am Slade" he said, Cloudweaver had heard a lot about Slade, but never actually seen him,
"so your Slade?" said Cloudweaver
"yes" said Slade
"you'd better let me go" said Cloudweaver
"or what?" said Slade "your small and harmless, you couldn't hurt me if you tried" said Slade walking up to Cloudweaver, who narrowed her eyes in anger, and kicked Slade in the face with her free leg, "Small and harmless?!?!?!?" she yelled,
"why you little brat-" Slade Began, but one of his Men came in and said "sir, we have received the video tape of the Titans"
"fine, Play it" said Slade, turning around and walking away from Cloudweaver, and the man pressed a button on a remote and a screen appeared out of no where and it was Robin, and the other Titans, the H.I.V.E must have planted a camera somewhere, because they didn't seem to notice that there was a camera there,
Video: '"damn it!" said Robin "I bet you a million dollars Slade is up to this"
"Why would he want Cloudweaver?" said Raven,
"who knows, maybe he saw her as a new threat, or maybe he is using her as bait" said Robin
"or maybe he's using her as a new apprentice" said Raven
"He can't pull the nano-probe thing again, does he think we are that stupid?" said Cyborg
"I'm not sure" said Robin "but whatever he's planning, we've got to get Cloudweaver back
"we have no idea where she is though" said Beast Boy
"We'll have to find out" said Robin
"Oh, I hope she is unharmed" said Starfire
"She's a strong girl, I'm sure she's fine"' Said Raven
Just then, the tape ended
"I see" said Slade, "young Raven was correct"
"If you think I'm gonna be your apprentice you've got another thing coming" said Cloudweaver
"you don't have a choice, you see, if you don't serve me, I'll turn you back over to the government, we don't want that now do we?" said Slade, as Cloudweaver narrowed her eyes even more, then she said "how are you going to do that? You're a villain yourself, you would go to jail for sure"
"I have my ways" said Slade,
"what about the other Titans?" said Cloudweaver, "their sure to find me"
"I wouldn't be so sure about that" said Slade, "I'm not giving them any clues, they will have no way of finding out where I am"
Cloudweaver was starting to believe she really Didn't have a choice, until she thought of something, 'Raven' she thought, 'maybe she'll be able to track me down somehow' she closed her eyes and sighed, 'I've got to breathe I can't keep going under' she sang in her head, she opened her eyes to find Slade was looking at her
"get yourself a Polaroid and take a picture it'll last longer" said Cloudweaver glaring back at him
"I'm waiting for your answer" said Slade
'who knows how long it'll take the other Titans to get here, if they even come' thought Cloudweaver 'and I sure as hell don't want to go back to those labs, damn it, and I don't want to be this creeps apprentice either'
::Titans Tower::
"This is odd" said Beast Boy "he usually gives us a clue as to where he is by this time"
"I know, its like he doesn't want us to find her" said Robin
"I'm aiming on the apprentice thing then" said Cyborg "because if he gives us a clue then we might find her and ruin all hope of having another apprentice"
"that makes sense" said Raven "but why Cloudweaver? Why an 11 year old girl?"
"who knows" said Beast Boy "but it seems like we have no way of finding her"
No one said anything for awhile, Starfire sat down on the couch, meanwhile, back at Slades headquarters, Cloudweaver was battling with some very hard choices.
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Ooooo this is getting good! Please R&R and Chapter seven will be up soon!