Okay all, I have two wanting me to keep the story as is and to clarify Sofia's age and I have two wanting me to rewrite it. Either way everyone is enjoying the story.
I am already rewriting the story to go more in depth and I like where I'm heading with it since I can add in more details or change certain things in the story. So I may just end up with a rewritten story, just like all the other stories I have.
Would you all like me to post a preview of the rewrite so you all can get a sense of where the rewrite is headed?
Let me know what you think. Thanks. ~Immortalshark
