Hey, Dark Gothic Lolita here!
How has everyone been?! So sorry, I was doing a few shifts that weren't update friendly and then I went to South Korea for 2 weeks, so I didn't update. I'm back now (unfortunately), so I'm able to update (fortunately)!
So, there's a guest review up from some pussy who decided to review. You guys can go and read it for yourselves and see what they said, but I always find it funny that it's the people who are guest reviewers that are clearly too scared to have an account to think that their opinions mean anything. They said my story (that isn't even finished) is forgettable after reading 2 or 3 different stories, yet they came back to tell me this, so it seems like my story is on their mind. They definitely can't write for shit, I can just tell. If there's anything I hate in this world, it's a troll and a keyboard warrior because if anyone was ever to say that shit to my face, they best hope they can fight lol. I'm not bothered by their puny guest review, because if they were someone important, they would have used their account to chat shit about my story and proven why they're better at writing stories than me, but they can't because they're not.
This is just a word of advice to ANYONE who is ever scared of trolls or pissy reviewers like this person. Don't even listen to them, they're actually full of shit and most definitely have the shittiest home life. I'm really not the bigger person and I'm all for shaming, because if someone wants to go out of their way to make someone feel bad, I'm DEFINITELY going out of my way to show that you're an insignificant cretin who doesn't deserve any happiness in this world. Write your stories with no care, because if they think this will ever stop me from writing, then they really don't know shit. If they ever decide to respond to this A/N of mine, then they were lying about my story being forgettable because they're clearly back here, reading my updates lmaoooo, fucking cunt.
ENJOY!
The wrong girl
Chapter four
The duo had already ordered their food when they finally received a text from Erza telling them that they had gotten to the hotel and Juvia face palmed. "Why did it take them so long to find the hotel? It's not that hard to find."
"Well, they can wait for us to finish eating, I'm fucking starving."
Natsu watched as his 5 day mate nodded her head in agreement and it felt nice having someone agree to his ideas that wasn't Happy. As they were waiting for their food, someone gasped when they saw the duo. As they both turned, Natsu's face went hard when he realised it was two men who seemed to be staring at Juvia as if she were a piece of meat.
"Ain't ya that water woman from the magic games?"
"Of course she is, look at them killer legs and she's got the Fairy Tail insignia!"
The two guys started cheering as if they had hit some sort of jackpot. Juvia just rolled her eyes and ignored the pair of them, standing closer to Natsu and hoping that they would get the picture.
"So you and that guy, Blue? You guys dating or what?"
Natsu almost snickered at how wrong they got Gray's name. Okay, so maybe he didn't like the two of them, but he liked the wrong name. Maybe he was going to have to use that one some time.
"His name is Gray and no, we're not dating."
The guys howled again, but a lot louder. They were clearly excited to hear that she wasn't with Gray. Natsu had to cover his ears at this point and he was trying to do everything in his power not to knock them out.
"So are you willing to-"
"No."
"But-"
"No."
"We-"
"No."
Clearly, these guys had never been told no in their lives and now Juvia wasn't even giving them the time of day. Natsu found it funny and before they could do anything, he put his around her waist and glared at them. They both jumped at the sight of him as if they had just noticed him. Knowing how annoying they were, they probably had. Well, for now, Juvia was his mate and no one could hit on her until after the 5 day period was done.
"She already said no, so fuck off."
That's all it took before they started stuttering and dodging through everyone as they practically ran out. Natsu could hear what they were saying and it seems that they remembered exactly who he was. He smirked, enjoying his nickname 'Salamander' for the first time in his life. The only time it was a good thing that his reckless reputation preceded him.
Juvia looked up at him and he wondered if he should move his arm. "Ah, you want me to move my arm?"
She shook her head, suddenly growing shy. "No, Natsu is fine to keep his arm there. Ano, thank you."
He squeezed her waist and shook his head. "Nah, it's my pleasure." Their food was called up as Natsu went to retrieve their meals.
~x~
Erza had scolded them for returning to the hotel so late, but the pair of them had shrugged their shoulders and pointed at their food that they had gotten. Natsu decided to take most of the heat so that Juvia wouldn't get into any trouble.
"I was hungry."
Natsu was surprised when Juvia piped up, not caring that she would have to face Erza's wrath too. "Juvia too!"
They both shared a look with a grin on their faces as Happy coughed and they both looked to glare at him. He whistled as if to act innocently as they ignored him and turned to Erza.
"So do we get a room for ourselves?"
Natsu really hoped that would be the case. He was already thinking of sneaking into Juvia's room or sneaking her into his room so that they could hang out. And while he didn't dare put her down and think she was too weak to take care of herself, he would have some peace of mind if she stayed with him.
Before Erza could try and delegate rooms, Juvia spoke up.
"Ano, Juvia is a guest here, so everyone will be getting their own rooms. It will either be at a discounted rate or for free, but we'll have to check in with the manager."
Lucy's eyes widened in surprise. Not like she was complaining, but she was very curious. "How can we get a room in a place like this for free?!"
They all turned to face the water mage as she laughed sheepishly. "Juvia and Gajeel have helped out this town a lot, so we're kind of really well known around here with a lot of establishments. The owner's grandson was kidnapped once and we rescued him, so Gajeel and Juvia got to own a suite each around here."
That was like music to Natsu's ears as he nodded along with everyone else. It was fine if that was the case, because then he could go and spend time with Juvia. He could just imagine being in the bed with her, stroking her soft skin and-
He saw Juvia's eyes widened as she covered her mark with her hand, staring at him as if to stop. He shot her an apologetic look, not realising that his thoughts would then feed the mate bite. There were still a lot of things he had to learn about the mate situation. Like say he accidentally kissed her, would that be bad for them? Because technically, they're not sealing the deal or contaminating anything, right? He needed to know these things, because right now, it was extremely hard trying to stay away from her.
"Miss Juvia!"
They all looked up to see the receptionist smiling and grinning. Juvia smiled as she walked away from the group and went to meet her halfway. Natsu's eyes followed her hips swishing from side to side. He felt like Happy whenever he used to swish catnip in front of his face. He had never really appreciated the female body before and now he was. There had been many times where he'd held Erza in arms, had Lucy's breasts pushed in his face, but there was something sensual about the way Juvia walked and she didn't even try. It just had to be because of the mate bite, but he didn't really care right about now. He was going to enjoy himself.
The two women seemed to be sharing pleasantries and then Juvia was back, handing them the keys to their room. "This one is for Lucy-chan, this is for Erza-chan, Gray and then Natsu and Happy."
They all grabbed their key cards and Lucy noticed that Juvia didn't have one. "Juvia, where's yours?"
"Oh, Juvia's suite is in the penthouse area. The owner kind of sees Juvia and Gajeel-kun as family, so that floor is reserved for family members. Juvia's fingerprint is in the system, so she doesn't need a key card."
Everyone was floored at the privileges that she received and all Natsu could think about was how good Juvia's bed must be for them to-
"Stop that," she hissed out quietly. Natsu smirked and shrugged. He replied back in a low tone.
"I can't help it, you're kinda distracting."
He saw her trying her best not to smile, but she couldn't help it. They all made their way to the lift with Natsu still holding Juvia's bag. Gray couldn't help himself as he was eyeing the two of them, wondering if there was something going on between them. He even went as far as wondering if Natsu was coaching Juvia in different ways to get his attention. He knew that she had asked Erza to help her once, but that didn't work out well. He sighed, shaking his head. His stalker and his rival in cahoots was something he didn't want to think about. Natsu would give her all the wrong information which would piss him off.
"So Juvia, can we hang out in your suite?"
Natsu knew that she wouldn't be able to say no, but he wanted to see it before everyone else did. Just like he predicted, she nodded with a simple smile.
"You can, just go and put your stuff away first. When you come into the lift, just press the penthouse suite button and one of the bellhops will answer. State your name and he will let you up to see Juvia. Juvia has already given in your names so that no one else can come in here."
Erza and Lucy squealed, Gray smirked and Natsu just stared at Juvia. He didn't want to waste any more time. "I'll put my stuff away later, I'm holding all your stuff."
Juvia could have easily taken her bag off of him, but she wanted some more alone time with him too, even if it was going against everything that they had already said. They were supposed to be staying away from each other, yet they found themselves getting closer and closer. They both knew that they were playing a dangerous game, but they couldn't help themselves.
"Oh, and also!"
Lucy started rummaging through her bag, looking for something. When she found it, she handed it to Juvia who read the label and smiled tightly.
"Sorry, I couldn't help but notice you have a really big bite on your neck, so I bought you some cream to help calm it down. It must be extremely itchy!"
Erza placed her hand on Juvia's cheek and turned her head to the side. Natsu mentally begged to any god who would listen that she didn't touch it. Luckily, Juvia covered it up herself as she thanked Lucy, blocking Erza off from it. Natsu sighed in relief, happy that he had never told any of them about what a dragon slayer's mate bite looks like. That would have been difficult to explain to them why she was wearing his. He also wouldn't have been able to stop the automatic response of knocking Erza into the wall if she touched it.
The others all got out of the lift on their floor while Juvia, Natsu and Happy continued up to the penthouse. They kept sneaking glances at each other whenever they thought that the other wasn't looking, but Happy just huffed before speaking.
"Why don't you guys just kiss already! There's no way you're gonna be able to hold off from sucking each other's faces off, I can tell!"
The two mages jumped at his outburst, practically clinging onto each other as they listened to Happy's words. Natsu tried to argue.
"We ain't gonna do that, we'll be fine!"
Happy crossed his arms over. "Look me dead in my eyes and tell me that you weren't gonna try and sneak into Juvia's room tonight."
Natsu didn't even bother. "Okay, you caught me!"
Juvia gasped as she looked amused. "Natsu, you didn't even try!"
He was red-faced as he decided to come clean to her. "I can't lie for shit, so please never let me do it. I'm a terrible liar, so Happy knew that I wouldn't be able to do it. Not gonna put myself through hell when he can already smell the lie in my brain."
He thought she would laugh at him for some reason, but all she did was loop her arm with his as she held his bicep. He ignored the fact that she was now feeling up his muscles as if impressed and his ego swelled a little bit.
"That's really cute! Juvia doesn't like liars anyway."
Natsu could feel the pride surging through him before Happy spoke again. "You make it sound like the two of you are going to start dating soon."
They both spluttered before Natsu explained himself. "Look, we're gonna be mates for 5 days and there's nothing we can do about it. After the 5 days, we'll go back to normal! Well, technically 4 days seeing as I bit her yesterday evening, but whatever! We can't fight what the mate bite is doing."
Happy put his hands up as if to say he's not going to argue with them anymore and that they can believe what they want to believe. The lift finally opened and Natsu realised that they had been moving the whole entire time and yet he was fine. He narrowed his eyes at it before Juvia tugged him into the direction of her suite. She pointed at one down the hall.
"That one down there is Gajeel-kun's. This one is Juvia's."
"What a fucking load of shit that Tincan gets a sweet place like this to stay in whenever he's in town."
Juvia smiled before placing her thumb above the lock and the machinery whirled before clicking, signalling that she could open the door. Natsu and Happy's jaws dropped as they stared around the room in absolute awe of the place. It really was a rich person's paradise. Natsu was worried that if he touched anything, he might actually end up shattering something, which would hurt his bank account.
It was all designed to Juvia's taste clearly, because the whole colour scheme was blue with waves and oceans crashing. It was so beautiful. On top of that, it really smelled like Juvia, almost as if she had stayed here recently.
"You come here often?"
Juvia shrugged and nodded. "Yes, it's like home away from home. Juvia and Gajeel-kun have made so many friends while we're here, we come back as often as we can. Gajeel-kun has even started to bring Levy-chan here as well. Sometimes they come here after a very difficult job as a way to unwind first before they come home. Juvia was here about 3 weeks ago. She just needed to get away for a while."
Natsu nodded solemnly. He remembered what had happened three weeks ago. It wasn't like it was Gray's fault, but he definitely didn't help the situation. Juvia had made him a birthday cake with his face on it and a guild brawl broke out, causing Juvia's cake to fall to the ground with a splat. Juvia had tried her best not to burst into tears there and then, but Gray had basically thanked Kami because it was so weird seeing his face on a cake.
Natsu boiled at the thought of it. Juvia had basically poured her blood sweat and tears into that cake and that was the thank you that she got. It made Natsu want to bash his head in and they didn't even have the mate bite link then. Everyone had pretty much laughed off the situation, claiming that Juvia would bounce back from it, but she didn't show up for a week. Natsu had tried his best to find her, but no one knew where she was. It was clear that Levy and Gajeel did, but didn't want to say anything.
Happy had gone to ransack the fridge and Natsu took the opportunity to step forward. He didn't like the sad expression on Juvia's face, so he hesitantly moved a lock of her hair behind her ear and cupped her face so that she was looking up at him. He wrote her face into his memory, almost as if he was never going to see her again. Her midnight blue eyes were extremely expressive, she had a cute button nose and her full pink lips. Lips that he wanted to ravage with his own.
"You didn't deserve that at all. Gray was definitely a prick and I made sure to beat him up a bit harder on your behalf during one of the guild brawls while you were away."
A smile broke out on her lips and Natsu just stood there speechless. Juvia was a beautiful young woman and he had never even noticed it before. The way she lit up whenever she smiled was just an amazing sight to behold and he loved being the reason she smiled so widely.
"Thank you, Natsu. Happy-chan also told Juvia that you've been eating all of Gray's food that Juvia has ever made for him."
He retracted his hand quickly and nodded with a sheepish look on his face. "Yeah well, it tastes too good to waste. Plus, you make it with Gray's face on it, so sometimes I like to mash it up before I eat it. He's the weirdo for not wanting to eat something that's personalised for him. That shit would never bother me."
Juvia nodded as she bit her lip. There was curiosity in her eyes as well as a little bit of doubt. "It wouldn't?"
Natsu's eyes were now on her lips as he wondered how soft they would feel against his and just what she would taste like. If it was anything like biting into her neck, she would probably taste delicious.
"Nothing you do could ever bother me," he spoke lowly as he watched her move a little closer to him. He could feel and smell her arousal for him which got him a little excited in turn. Happy was occupied and the others were still in their rooms. There was nothing that could stop them from kissing but themselves.
"Natsu is just saying that because of the mate bite, isn't he?"
He could hear the twinge of sadness in her voice, but it still didn't stop her from wanting to get close to him either. He shook his head as he placed his hands on her hips, drawing her in slowly. He heard her release a breath that she probably didn't even realise that she was holding and she placed her hands on his chest as if to push herself away from him, but she just stopped there instead.
"Nah, I definitely mean it. First of all, you're my nakama. I always thought everything you did was funny and cool, I like it. You've never pissed me off. Trust me, the mate bite doesn't affect the fact that I've always seen you as a friend. You know me, I'm a shit liar."
She seemed to search his face to see if he was really lying or not, but she must have given up because then her eyes landed on his lips the same way that he was staring at hers. Just as he bent his head down to give in to the mate bite, there was a loud ring, causing them to spring apart in shock and Juvia scuttled over to the door to let the rest of their team in. Natsu dived into the kitchen as if to pretend that he had been there the whole time.
He listened out and could hear the amazed gasps of his teammates as they praised Juvia on getting such a nice suite. He glanced over at Happy who was giving him a smug look. Natsu didn't like that look at all. He hated it.
"Why the fuck are you looking at me like that?"
"You almost gave in there. I feel like I'm third wheeling you guys from a completely different room."
Natsu rolled his eyes and wondered how he didn't see his brain. This was going to be a painful time, listening to Happy just mock him until the mark faded away. The exceed didn't even stop there, he was still going on.
"I wanna make a bet! I bet that within a month of the mark fading, you guys are going to become mates for real! If I win, we will eat fish everyday for a month. If you win-"
"You have to stop asking out Carla for a month."
Happy paused when Natsu interrupted him before he gasped dramatically at what he had just said. "WHAT?! YOU TAKE THAT BACK!"
Natsu started laughing his head off, thinking that Happy's reaction was the best he had seen in a long time. Lucy walked into the kitchen, wondering why the two of them were being so loud.
"What's making you laugh so hard?"
Natsu pointed at Happy. "We're making a bet and he's not liking what I said he has to do if I win. He's not allowed to ask out Carla for a month."
Lucy snorted as she covered her mouth with her hand. "Oh wow, this must be a serious bet. What's it about?"
Natsu froze slightly before shaking his head. "Sorry, can't tell ya."
Lucy frowned. "What, why?"
"It's none of your business. Anyway, let's go check out the rest of the suite!"
Lucy sighed, and dropped the subject as she nodded. "Trust you guys to only check the kitchen. I want to see what kind of bed she has! Like I thought the room I was staying in was amazing, but Juvia's suite is definitely made from gold!"
Natsu also wanted to see Juvia's bedroom. He followed the blonde into Juvia's room as all three of their eyes widened. A queen sized circular shaped bed was parked against the wall in the middle of the room. There were large french style windows that were covered by royal blue curtains.
The water mage walked in with Erza and Gray behind her as everyone marvelled at her room. Natsu glanced over at her and caught her already looking at him. He smirked, watching her face blood as red as Erza's hair, but she didn't look away.
"I wish we could help out someone who could give us a place like this! This place is amazing, Juvia!"
She broke her eye contact with Natsu to thank the re-equip mage and Natsu rolled his eyes, unhappy that her attention was now divided.
"Oh! Let's discuss the job! Juvia has a list of the assassins we need to find and she's already crossed off all those who we dealt with today. We have quite a lot more, so Juvia hopes that we can do it in the remaining days that we have left. Let's go to the living room."
She turned on her head and was out immediately. Natsu didn't bother waiting as he followed her, his eyes planted firmly on her butt as she walked. He wanted to sit down next to her, but had to do it in a way where it wouldn't be seen as suspicious. She placed the list on the circular table as she stood up and pointed at it.
Everyone nodded as she spoke and Natsu just watched her in awe. He had never really seen anyone take charge other than Erza, so it was amazing to see Juvia seemingly in her element. She spoke seriously, gave pointers on what assassins do and how they can counteract it. Before he had been put under Vidaldus' control, Samagui had left a full detailed report on everyone's ability.
Natsu wasn't the only one who was in awe of Juvia's abilities. Everyone around the table was staring at her as if she were some sort of celebrity. Whenever Gray had been in her presence, Juvia always lost common sense and usually made Gray the focus of her attention. Not this time though. She barely even looked at him and everyone wondered what had changed.
"Does anyone have any questions?"
Her eyes swept the table and Natsu saw her eyes linger on him a little longer than everyone before she turned to face Gray who put his hand up. "Yes?"
Natsu felt smug when he saw how shocked Gray looked when Juvia didn't seem to be infatuated with him. He caught himself as he asked his question.
"How do you know all this stuff about assassins?"
Natsu stiffened and so did Juvia. It had been their little secret and he wondered if Juvia would open up about it now. He felt envy running through him. He didn't want her to tell anyone else. It was something that she had opened to him about and he wanted to keep it that way, even if it did sound selfish. He didn't care.
She then smiled and shrugged. "Juvia used to have to deal with assassins back in Phantom Lord. Juvia was an S class mage, remember?"
It was a vague answer, but it also made a lot of sense. Gray seemed satisfied with the answer and they all continued to read the list in front of them. Juvia turned her head over to where Natsu was sitting and he shot her a supportive look. She nodded at him and he watched as her worries melted away from her.
"Juvia isn't sure if Erza-chan wanted to change the teams or if she had a different idea."
The redhead hummed as she scanned over the lists quickly. "It would have been easier for us to go by ourselves if these were the sort of assassins that liked to work alone, but after what happened in the other hotel, it would seem as though they're happy to work together and they do so efficiently. However, we do know that their strongest is dead. I dealt with her personally."
They were all silent when Erza reminded them of the death of Ikaruga, but they skipped over it. "So I guess we'll go in pairs again, only this time, I can go by myself. You go with Natsu and Happy and then Gray and Lucy can go together. How does that sound?"
Natsu knew that Juvia was relieved with that. The last person she would want to work with is Lucy, just because she was almost made to kill her the last time she was brainwashed. Besides, he was happy that Juvia was coming with him this time. Juvia nodded her head.
"That's fine with Juvia. Anyway, we've got a bit of time to kill, so Juvia was wondering if you guys would like to go to the pool?"
"This place has a pool?"
"Is there a spa? I bet there's a spa!"
"What about a bar?"
"Who are you, Cana?"
Juvia giggled at the antics of the team and nodded. "Yes, there's all of that. It's okay if you don't have any swimming suits, just add it under Juvia's tab and Juvia will pay for it at the end of the job. How does that sound?"
They all cheered and whooped, the two girls hugging her close to them. Natsu took the opportunity to do the same thing. It wasn't his first time hugging Juvia in excitement, he had done it many times, so no one thought anything of it. It was just the first time they had hugged each other with a hidden meaning.
"Okay, well let's all go and get ready! Juvia, we'll meet you in the lobby? Just because we don't really know where we're going."
Juvia nodded. "Of course! Let's meet in 20 minutes in the lobby, okay?"
They all agreed and Lucy started walking out with Erza as they started discussing the different types of bikinis they wanted to wear. Natsu shared one last glance with Juvia, excited that he would get to see and appreciate Juvia in a bikini.
"Oi flamebrain, come on."
Natsu rolled his eyes before he turned to face the ice mage and followed him out with Happy. Juvia followed them as she closed the door behind them. Natsu turned around before she could close the door and winked at her. "See ya later."
"See you..."
Natsu had to rip himself away from her before he did something stupid in front of Gray. The moment Juvia closed the door, she locked it. She sighed before heading into one of her rooms that she had left empty. It had been overlooked as the others hadn't seen anything in there, but there was a reason for that.
She pressed a button on the wall and it opened up. All of her weapons were now on for show in front of her face as she breathed out calmly. It had been a while since she had done a job on this large of a scale and she had already known about the job ahead of time. She even had Makarov's blessing to do whatever it was that she needed to do. When Samagui had been temporarily released from Vadaldus' control, he even had a note inside the envelope of jewels that came directly from the magic council allowing her to execute the guild.
She reached out and inspected her favourite weapon as she spoke to herself softly. "Juvia has to do this herself...Juvia can't let the others get their hands dirty for something like this. Juvia must shoulder this burden alone."
~x~
Kami sniffed as she watched Juvia taking all the weapons that she was going to use to execute her plan. She heard something behind her and was met with Anhkseram. She wiped her tears hastily as she smiled.
"What can I do for you?"
"I just wanted to see if you were watching my latest couple creation and it's great to know you are. Even you've got to admit that the two of them suit each other."
Kami scoffed. "Okay, so you may have a point. I'm just still surprised that you wanted to be involved with something like this."
Ankhseram shrugged his shoulders. "It's like I said, we've been around for a long time and I'm getting bored. No human has done anything crazy since Zeref, so I've had no one to curse. I know you do stuff like this all the time, so I wanted to see what it was that keeps you busy."
Kami hummed and looked back down at Juvia. "She's still not truly over her past, is she?"
Ankhseram agreed. "She's not, which is why I thought it would be better to put her with a guy who's a bit more lively than Gray. Gray and Juvia are similar and I don't think that's what they need."
Kami raised her eyebrows. "What do you mean?"
"Gray constantly thinks about Ur, is kinda moody and cold and he wasn't the sort of person that Juvia needs in her life. Natsu isn't afraid to show his emotions and he's pretty much a cheerful guy. That's the sort of person Juvia needs in her life. Juvia was all wrapped up in ice and water being similar in terms of magic, but didn't realise that fire and water being opposites is just as good."
Kami really hated to admit it, but Ankhseram was talking a lot of sense, too much sense. She stared at him, wondering just when he had changed before looking back down at the humans that they were stronger than. She sighed and smiled.
"I guess you have picked up a few things over the millenia. That's really nice of you."
"Eh, maybe it's time I started showing everyone that I'm actually a nice god and not some bitter prick, just because I deal with the underworld. Anyway, I better get going. Juvia's gonna send a whole guild to the underworld and I need to be there to judge them correctly."
Kami turned around and nodded as she watched her fellow god disappear. She couldn't help the dreamy smile that came up on her lips. Ankhseram was really changing for the better. She watched as Juvia sharpened all her tools for her job and couldn't help herself as she silently gave the water mage her blessing. She was definitely going to need it.
So how was that chapter? It did turn a little dark at the end, but I've really been wanting to play with darker themes lately. I know I've had many people in the past pissed off that I write about someone killing someone when Fairy Tail's mantra is to not kill, but shit happens. In the anime, Ikaruga survives her fight with Erza, but in the manga she actually died from her injuries, so technically, Erza killed her. Anime onlys wouldn't know that lmao.
Also, where Jose was a little dodgy, I decided to make him a complete bad man in disguise. Element 4 are a hit squad in my head lol.
If I seem a little aggressive in my A/N up at the top, it's just the Londoner in me. I know I say 'rate or hate, flames or floods' but that's only for when people have something useful to say. Believe it or not, there are some criticisms I read and I actually implement it into my stories. Some people have suggestions that I really like and I add it. When people just want to shit on something to make themselves feel good, that's where I draw the line. I'm really not a shy person and I thrive off of negativity, so the first thing I genuinely did when I read the review was laugh and I knew I was doing something EXTREMELY right. But I've had friends who write as well who let trolls get to them and get scared to continue writing. I say fuck them. Trolls can't write, because if they could, they would tell you how to better your story and not shit on you or your pairings.
But please don't forget to rate or hate, flames or floods! It's been a long time since I've had to rant about some piece of shit, but this isn't the first cunt I've dealt with and they won't be the last! I love you guys so much!
Lolita-chan