Hello lol
Sorry for the long time to wait but in exchange you have lots of my own writting and personnal ideas about the previous chapters.
I want to thank all those who make this copy and paste story their favorite !
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I have some ideas of new additions, new paths, new researchs and news techs find in the past episodes.
But i want also some review with your point of views, ideas, suggestions or comments about some things you thinks need to be added to à rewrite.
So, REVIEW please !
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First episode (chapters 1 & 2) :
* For example from the holo technology from the caretaker the Voyager can have better and more holo people like the Doctor.
Imagine some holo nurse, holo doctor, holo concelor, holo physicien, holo navigator, holo commercant, holo planner, holo tacticien, holo stratege, holo philosophe, holo security, holo engineer, holo scientist, holo security and some holo worker !
* If the SI is himself a spy and download the caretaker database, the Delta Force Task will have usefull datas and maps from aliens races in the Delta quadrant for their travel. So the SI can plan ahead.
Or the SI can use a charge for Delta Quadrant Race Lore to have some forknowledge, some plan B or a wiki of the races in the Delta quadrant.
* Also the SI can save more crews from Voyager and the Maquis. Using the inspired inventor power to recreate the gaould sarcophage technology from Stargate. And upgrade to alteran version in the future with the Doctor to save other aliens races.
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Second episode (chapters 3 & 4) :
* Imagine Neelix in some holo sims from the best cook with some holo chefs and some other cooks from the crews. I really want to see Neelix on a tutorial of cooking and find a sergent chef to coach him.
I image neelix having his hand hit by a ladle held by THE CHEF, because greedy, he was going to eat his cooked pastry !
* Also for helping the crews who dont have enough rations or have the holo suit reserved the SI can introduce TV screen, portable computer, gaming console and VR tech with a charge in E-GameTech.
The VR Tech can use Delta quadrant tech like synaptic stimulators and neural interfaces
The VR tech can multipling the time spend by 50 times or more with using the speed of thought. And the tech can be used when sleeping. I really hope the SI upgrade this VR tech with some human/machine interface to upload online the ship database some animes, games, books and movies.
* And for the decoration of the ship, i think some caretaker type holo emitter to be used to project decoration, mural painting and direction if needed with capteur or feedback from omnitools.
I really hope the holo emitter to create false door, hide real door or create holo security like halo's master chief, spartan team and ODST, the doomslayer, judge dread, robocop, batman, spiderman, the avengers, the justice league or prophets from crysis, or monsters like alien xenophorm and predator, the demons from DOOM eternal, terran zerg and protoss from starcraft, xenos from XCOM, Warhammer 40 000 or others franchise.
* Also use a charge in Mass Effect : Omni Tech and not Mass Effect : Omni Tool.
The difference been Omni Tech regroup omni tool, omni armour, omni shield, medigel injector and weapons shifting system in magnetic case.
* Use a charge for Alternative Energy Source and not Marvel MCU: Arc Reactor.
I really think the broader AES can give techs like arc reactor but also solar collector, solar forge, protoculture from macross/robotech, naquada generator, asgard Neutrino-ion generators from stargate or something like GN Drive from Gundam 00. If you have something to add to this, ADD A COMMENT !
Really want to read some of your ideas, reference to other series or links to fanfiction.
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Number 3 episode (chapters 5 & 6) :
* First, without concellor, i think a wall of dead or monument to the dead is needed for people to accept the death of their friend.
Something like sheppard make in Mass Effect 2 in memory to the people dead on the SR1 normandy.
* Replicate Berillium - the question : possible or not ?
If you have the answer, please review !
* Nova-Class USS Equinox, Norway-Class USS Lillehammer, and the Saber-Class USS Talwar - the question : alive or not ?
Your ideas and side story please !
* For the omnitool, i think of some options : like a grapple like Batman or the pilots in Titanfall, some hand repulsor and hand energy shield like Ironman, some hidden blade like Assassin Creed, some energy sword like the protoss, omniblade, some tech attack, some ME Andromeda attack, some Web grenade or wall crawling like Spiderman.
For some of the tech using eezo, i hope to use some of the tech from star trek that give gravity on ships ! Hope to find a vay to recreate biotic attack !
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Number 4 episode (chapters 7, 8 & 9) :
* To find a solution of the long travel, i really want the SI to give access to scans from the USS enterprise of other aliens FTL or other aliens ships for techs.
Like the subspace vortex of the xindi (star trek enterprise) - time to return to earth : 1 month. The spore drive (star trek discovery) - time to return to earth : 1 second. General Chang bird of prey. The narada. The borg cube. Specie 8472 bioship (in the future). The scimitar. The USS prometheus.
Take the 20 or 10 Most Lethal Ships in Star Trek if needed for idea.
* Some of the FTL techs blueprint discovered by Voyager and used only one time. Really want to see if the SI can create some hybrid FTL with those techs.
Transwarp (borg ftl) - speed : 20 X warp and need a hub. Subspace distortion. Quantum slipstream. Coaxial warp drive. Subspace corridor - underspace. Graviton catapult - speed : 600 lightyear by hour. Wormholes. Chrono deflector - one use tech.
Or use a charge for the blueprint of the Orville FTL, the Infinity slipscace forerunner drive (halo), the drive in starcraft and the hyperspace drive in starwars, stargate and/or homeworld. Or just spend a charge in FTL Systems and Drive.
* The SI used 5 charges :
Subspace Fractures: (1 Charge)
Planetary Escape Pods: (1 Charge)
Polaric Energy: (1 Charge)
Temporal Paradox Mechanics: (1 Charge)
Temporal Isolation Beacons: (1 Charge)
What better use of charges can you suggest me ? Like Subspace, Escape Technology, Exotic Energy and Temporal Defense.
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Number 5 episode (chapters 10) :
* After download all the database from the boom planet, the SI make a VI to search for theoric FTL or theoric techs usefull for Voyager and her crews. Need help there !
Upgrade Voyager with the Makull Tech of Artificial Neural Network over the neural gel pack.
Or upgrade the console with the security mesure of the Makull Polaric Energy Generator to stop the console to explose to the crew face.
* After the team sims, i would let them see some sims with the offense team been the SWAT, the GIGN, the SAS, the US Navy, the Seal or the US Air Force, so that they can take some notes !
After i will let them see the same sims but with Sam Fisher (splinter cell), solide snake (metal gear), Batman, Spiderman, Titanfall pilots or James Bond for the fun of it ! And last, some team from Call of Duty, the Divsion or other squad games with their advanced gear.
* Really want some people of the security team to take some ideas from those real and scifi team to make their own projects or personnel gear ! Really i want a Shop List. And the people on the teams think "Can i have/make/do that ?"
* Also upgrades to gear, grenade and some ideas for omnitool or others kits.
* If you or me rewrite the episode 5, make the chapter 10 in part 1 and write a part 2 were you add my and/or your own ideas !
* If was thinking to introduce some people to other series, animes, movies or games.
Like Mass Effect to the Doctor so he can recreate biotic tech on their own.
Introduce some Code geass, Gundam, Armored Core, Metal Gear and Titanfall to see if the enginneer corps or Tom Paris can create some hybride mech/fighter/interceptor. Also want to think what others projets some will propose like to create mech to help upgrade the ship Voyager in place of shipyard.
Stargate so the scientist think about stargate tech from the tollans, the asgard and alterans.
Splinter Cell, the Division, Batman and Spiderman games to see if security want some gadgets !
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Number 6 episode (chapters 11 to 14) :
* The SI use survay drones and protection drones on the asteroid to map, mine and protect the away team.
The SI can use a charge on Drone Tech. Or some other techs for small arms, grenades or heavy weapons.
Give me ideas or better write your story.
* Before going, Sheppard can add some delayed program to download malwares, virus and spywares in all Vidiian network. Or to add the plague in all harvested organs.
* Let some deadly virus like the VIH, covid or others horror virus to kill the organs thiefs. Let some hidden booby traps, bug or some bomb.
Better again program some holo monsters, holo horror or some infortune holo bug i cant wait to read what will kill them. A cluedo murder program, a shapeshifter killer, Species program, a DOOM Eternal and Warhammer 40 000 program without safety protection.
* Upgrade the ship with Vidiian force field technologies, including the ability to cloak the force field as an object, like a wall.
Good tech to make the ship a real maze for all enemy boarders, add some Starwars compacter and supper is made !
* Scan the gun of the bad guy. Take their holo tech to hide doors from enemy. Take the cargos of the enemy base and download all datas and databases from the enemy ship.
Their anti-starship weaponry included hyper-thermic charges. But it is better than phaser or can this tech be used to upgrade or mixte with phaser or transporter tech ?
General Rule : Loot all that arent fixed on the ships.
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Number 7 episode (chapters 15 and 16) :
* Bio neural gel pack - what uses on the ship after taking them out ? And can you think if a new tech to remplace, upgrade or be better ?
Use a charge for what ? Bio Neural Gel Pack Tech, Computer Network Tech, Hardware Computer Tech or some other branch of tech ?
* System anti overload on replicator added to all console and keyboard. To stop people to be send flying on the bridge.
* Do you think some tutos to create or upgrade some systems can be shooted for all the crew ?
And what subject and content in them or only some tittles to see what interest the crew ?
* Imagine some information with News of the ship. Give some good ideas, some report about research and techs, inspire people to have hobbies... !
* What name for the new device created with 2 charge in Subspace Communication ? Subspace Beacon, Subspace Broacaster, Omnidirectional Subspace Interplexing Beacon or another name ?
" Ways to improve what we already used, special repeaters that could be built to increase signal range, frequencies that shorten the bandwidth, and so much more. "
And also why didnt Voyager send the blueprint of the device ? So the other federation ships can contact them and exchange information, send maps or give some rallye point !
* TV screen and his gaming setup, good or have you some better ideas ?
* Wildman - your opinion and thinking ?
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Number 8 episode (chapters 17) :
This little interlude is so good that i only want to add on what Sheppard send.
Like all the Makull database with literature, music but also tech with the Makull Tech of Artificial Neural Network , their research about Polaric Energy Generator and their security mesure, Omni Tech (Omnitool), the Omni Subspace Beacon and the STArc reactor.
What do you think ?
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Number 9 episode (chapters 18, 19 and 20) :
* I think one charge should be in Material Science or Power Armour Tech ?
To help upgrade the armour from the security team and the armour of Voyager.
* Do you think he should take a charge in IronMan Tech Armour, Section 8 Power Suit, Crysis nano suit 2.0 or StarCraft Power Armour (Terran and Protoss Tech version).
I think Spartan Tech from Halo is too much because to wear a Mjorlnir Power Armour you need genetic and mechanic upgrade so a no to the Federation Security Teams.
* Or should the SI invest his charge in Exoskeleton Tech and Power armour Tech from Star Trek ? Add some VI Programmation Tech and IA Programmation Tech from Star Trek no ?
Or would a mixte of the different universe techs do ?
* Do anyone read on those 3 chapters that Voyager as his collimator remplaced by the advanced navigational array ? And should i write more about the subject.
Like a scene from the serie to add to the chapters or some log or datas who summary the upgrade ?
* I think that i wanted to see what blueprint, Sheppard could download and find with some hacking, worms or spider programs. I really think that some tech should be interesting for Sheppard to see in some Black market.
Imagine the blueprint of the Banean warship technology and weapons systems in the computer of Tolen Ren. And all being downloaded from the omnitool of Kim anfd Tom in the background without anyone but Sheppard knowing.
And what do you thing will the crew find in the Banean warship ?
Tell me what do you think Sheppard should find in this huge webnet of a market planet !?
* With the scan of the tower what interresting tech should Sheppard find ? Some city shield for anti bombardement from orbit or also some energy and transmission tech ?
Can he find something other and how to use it on Voyager ?
* Also what tech do you think Torres should have found in the public market ? What tech should Voyage buy to upgrade the ship ? What can be exchanged for the Vidiian tech ? And what tech should Sheppard discretly scan with his omnitool so he and Voyager crew can replicate it in the future ?
Give me your ideas, news techs or old techs upgraded !
* With the creation of the omnitool why is sheppard not recreation omni armour ?
You know the orange holo armour like in Mass Effect ? And why do Sheppard not recreate the holo Ironman armour who appeared in Ironman 2020 ?
What do you think ? Time or lavk of inspiration ? Or do we need Torres to give Sheppard the idea.
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I have other ideas but think to make them appear in a board of commission where the SI give them to the Science and engineer département :
* Have the SI create his own spy kit with his own spy programs and other spy tools.
* Use the tech of the Vidiian to create mining beam who teleporte mineral and ressources from asteroid, can take tech from dereclic ship or recuperate matters brom debris in battlefield or from destroyed ship.
Can take idea of the borg cutting beam and tractor beam to complement the tech.
Can use a charge in Mining Tech and Ressource Collection from Homeworld.
* Create a holo map of their travel or of the projected path.
Something like the galactic map in mass effect.
* Create some droid for maintenance and guard duty.
* Add barricade with energy barrier like in Mass Effect 3 to stop attack into the ship.
* Prepare for the borg.
Recreate ballistic weapons with upgrade and replicator. Ready modulator aleatoire of shield and energy weapons. Find a way to take borg FTL tech or to copy the borg database...
* Add more holo projector so the Doctor or other holo people work in the ship.
* Add some tollan anti explosion system to protect the crew from sabotage.
* Take more techs from the game serie Homeworld so the ship can upgrade himself more but take some enemy techs to upgrade itself.
Thanks Frankieu for her message :
"for finding the show online (Star Trek Voyager)
: / / web . watchserieshd . ru
it a site i use to watch tv shows and so on"
One old dead story and crossover to read that i recommand.
It is " Through a Temple " By: DesertChocolate
The summary is :
The Normandy and its crew are forced into the Trekverse by the Reapers. The Defiant is there to meet them. Now, two sets of very similar groups are forced together, fighting for whats right. In between just hanging out of course. (Dead Fic)
Is someone interrested to take back this story or to rewrite with his own twist ? Review me if yes or better the author !
Last i recommand a good story to go to read on this site.
It is " Mass Effect: A Very Terran (Re)solution " By: NihilMomentum
The summary is :
What would happen if someone with vast knowledge about the Mass Effect Universe, both official (wiki/Codex) and theoretical (fanfics), decent fighting ability and a plan was dropped into that Universe 13 years before Eden Prime? As it turns out, quite a lot! FemShep. Soft HFY. And a very different kind of self-insert.
Next chapter is again a copy and paste chapter who will be updated tomorrow !
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