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Phil's POV:
When I reached Lil's cubicle I stopped and gulped. "Phillip, this is very important." The nurse prodded. "I.I'm not sure I want to see what this is about." I said shakily. I was trembling so violently that I wondered if I was going to collapse. The nurse looked sympathetically at me, but held my pale hand and led me into Lil's cubicle. I shut my eyes tightly but as soon as I had entered the cubicle I heard a soft whispery voice. "Phil?" I snapped my eyes open and gasped. Lil was sitting up in her bed her arm balanced on a small tray and tubes still sticking out of her shoulder. I couldn't trust my voice; I was sure that if I tried to say something it would come out in a choking sob, so I nodded, my mouth still hanging open. She smiled weakly and beckoned for me to come over. I rushed over and wrapped her in a gentle hug. "Careful!" Lil exclaimed, before coughing so violently I wondered if she was going to vomit, so backed away. She laughed shakily and whispered, "Don't worry I'm fine." I nodded and lent down next to her bed. I then felt so ridiculous that I had moaned to Kimi that I was in pain, and then my sister, Lil, was putting a brave face on and saying she was fine when she clearly wasn't. It made me sound so pathetic. I placed a hand on hers, shocked to find her hand now toasty warm. She curled her fingers around mine, her sweaty palm slipping on my wrist. I felt how shaky she was, and it suddenly became clear how nervous and upset she was behind her cover.
I then tried my voice, "Lil, I guess you'll want to know what happened to the others?" Lil shook her head much to my surprise. "No. I'll let them tell me." She said stubbornly. "Erm.ok" I said puzzled, "Well then I'll just let you know that you were the worst off." "Phew." She said sighing deeply. "That's a relief, at least I no my friends are ok." I nodded. "Is Tommy here?" She asked enthusiastically. I looked bizarrely at her. "I mean . . . a.and the others, Chuckie, Kimi and Angelica?" She added on half- heartedly. I was confused, but dismissed it thinking that Tommy was probably the first name that came to her mind. "Tommy is the only one still in hospital, the others, except me have gone home and their injuries aren't that bad." What happened to Tommy?" She asked, snapping at me. "Geesh sorry for talking." I shot back, now a little angry with her outburst. "Sorry Phil." She said hanging her head in shame, "But being hooked up to big metal machines and tubes pumping blood out of your shoulder, and now I have to wear crutches for ages too, it does get to me." I instantly felt bad, and hugged her very gently. "I know it must be nasty" I whispered, "but remember it wont last forever, now the worst is over. Oh and Tommy has a spinal injury, he has to lay down for ages and wear a back brace." Lil suddenly looked away from me, and as I didn't know what had come over her, the nurse said to me, "Leave her be now Phillip let her get her rest." I nodded and slid the pale green curtains aside to go back to my cubicle.
Lil's POV:
A silent tear slipped down my pale cheek, and I wiped it hastily away. I couldn't let Phil see me like this, so it was lucky he had gone. My head throbbed painfully, and I was in the most excruciating pain I had ever been in. My leg and shoulder felt as though I had had a knife sliced into me. As much as I tried to fight my tears it was hopeless, they started tumbling down my cheeks at a furious rate. Still my face remained emotionless. The waterfall of tears splashed onto my white hospital clothes, but I didn't care. The nurse stared faffing about, talking at such a fast speed I hardly understood a word she was saying. "Oh Lillian please, look here's a tissue and a cloth, wipe your eyes and blow your nose, dab at those tear marks on your clothes, we don't want them going transparent do we? Oh no no, dab gently at those clothes they are expensive, and we have to do enough washing already, that's it carefully does it good good." She said rushing around the cubicle opening draws chucking tissues and cloths at my bed, slamming shut cupboards and sorting me out. I just looked at her, her image slightly blurry because of the tears still splashing around inside my eyes. Once the nurse dabbed my eyes lightly and dabbing my clothes.
I then thought of my leg. I gingerly peeled back the clammy hospital sheets and looked at my leg. An area around my knee was stained with blood and there were two metal pins sticking out of my leg. I retched. The sight was awful, the first thought that crossed my mind was, 'I'll never be able to wear a skirt again.' I then looked up at the nurse, "Will the scars be temporary?" I asked in an anxious tone. The nurse shook her head. "Never completely fade. There will just be a few pale pink scars where the pins are now." "Oh." I said. "Will they be obvious?" "No, you'll probably not be able to see them from where I'm standing." She replied. She was standing about 2-3 metres away. I breathed a sigh of relief. I just kept thinking that guys would find me less attractive now I had purple scars on my knee.
Tommy's POV:
I lay staring at the ceiling in my hospital bed trying to figure out faces and patterns in the swirling paintwork. "Tommy!" I tried to swivel my eyes to the end of the bed, as Phil had just leapt into my cubicle and hurriedly ran over to me. "What?" I asked. Phil beamed, "Its Lil, she's awake, she's ok!" "yes Yes YES!" I yelled.
Kimi's POV:
This is SO great! I've just had a phone call from Phil saying Lil's ok! It turned out the deer died though, and Grandpa Lou escaped with barely a scratch after diving behind his seat. Luckily it was only us lot on the bus as we were the first stop, so no one else was hurt. I then decided to go and write about what happened today in my diary.
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(Oh Kimi will use slang and text words such as 'Cos' When she is writing in her journal ok?)
Dear Diary/Journal,
I have had the weirdest couple of days in my life! I'd just got on the bus, and then we crashed cos of a deer in the road. I escaped with not much injury, but Lil could have died! Its so great that she has woken up now! I'm gonna tell you a secret tho. I think that Lil and Tommy still have feelings for each ova, cos they seem, so.so excited and they can barely contain their happiness when they see each other. But no1 can do anything cos we have no proof that they r still with each other. I dunno what 2 do. I will ask Phil when he comes out of the hospital, as Lil's his twin sis, he mite be able 2 find another fact that they r dating still.
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I looked up from my diary when I heard a familiar squeaking noise. "Kimi, teatime!" I sighed and quickly turned back to my journal.
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I gotta go now. I might write more later, bye.
Luv Kimi xXx
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Phil's POV:
When I reached Lil's cubicle I stopped and gulped. "Phillip, this is very important." The nurse prodded. "I.I'm not sure I want to see what this is about." I said shakily. I was trembling so violently that I wondered if I was going to collapse. The nurse looked sympathetically at me, but held my pale hand and led me into Lil's cubicle. I shut my eyes tightly but as soon as I had entered the cubicle I heard a soft whispery voice. "Phil?" I snapped my eyes open and gasped. Lil was sitting up in her bed her arm balanced on a small tray and tubes still sticking out of her shoulder. I couldn't trust my voice; I was sure that if I tried to say something it would come out in a choking sob, so I nodded, my mouth still hanging open. She smiled weakly and beckoned for me to come over. I rushed over and wrapped her in a gentle hug. "Careful!" Lil exclaimed, before coughing so violently I wondered if she was going to vomit, so backed away. She laughed shakily and whispered, "Don't worry I'm fine." I nodded and lent down next to her bed. I then felt so ridiculous that I had moaned to Kimi that I was in pain, and then my sister, Lil, was putting a brave face on and saying she was fine when she clearly wasn't. It made me sound so pathetic. I placed a hand on hers, shocked to find her hand now toasty warm. She curled her fingers around mine, her sweaty palm slipping on my wrist. I felt how shaky she was, and it suddenly became clear how nervous and upset she was behind her cover.
I then tried my voice, "Lil, I guess you'll want to know what happened to the others?" Lil shook her head much to my surprise. "No. I'll let them tell me." She said stubbornly. "Erm.ok" I said puzzled, "Well then I'll just let you know that you were the worst off." "Phew." She said sighing deeply. "That's a relief, at least I no my friends are ok." I nodded. "Is Tommy here?" She asked enthusiastically. I looked bizarrely at her. "I mean . . . a.and the others, Chuckie, Kimi and Angelica?" She added on half- heartedly. I was confused, but dismissed it thinking that Tommy was probably the first name that came to her mind. "Tommy is the only one still in hospital, the others, except me have gone home and their injuries aren't that bad." What happened to Tommy?" She asked, snapping at me. "Geesh sorry for talking." I shot back, now a little angry with her outburst. "Sorry Phil." She said hanging her head in shame, "But being hooked up to big metal machines and tubes pumping blood out of your shoulder, and now I have to wear crutches for ages too, it does get to me." I instantly felt bad, and hugged her very gently. "I know it must be nasty" I whispered, "but remember it wont last forever, now the worst is over. Oh and Tommy has a spinal injury, he has to lay down for ages and wear a back brace." Lil suddenly looked away from me, and as I didn't know what had come over her, the nurse said to me, "Leave her be now Phillip let her get her rest." I nodded and slid the pale green curtains aside to go back to my cubicle.
Lil's POV:
A silent tear slipped down my pale cheek, and I wiped it hastily away. I couldn't let Phil see me like this, so it was lucky he had gone. My head throbbed painfully, and I was in the most excruciating pain I had ever been in. My leg and shoulder felt as though I had had a knife sliced into me. As much as I tried to fight my tears it was hopeless, they started tumbling down my cheeks at a furious rate. Still my face remained emotionless. The waterfall of tears splashed onto my white hospital clothes, but I didn't care. The nurse stared faffing about, talking at such a fast speed I hardly understood a word she was saying. "Oh Lillian please, look here's a tissue and a cloth, wipe your eyes and blow your nose, dab at those tear marks on your clothes, we don't want them going transparent do we? Oh no no, dab gently at those clothes they are expensive, and we have to do enough washing already, that's it carefully does it good good." She said rushing around the cubicle opening draws chucking tissues and cloths at my bed, slamming shut cupboards and sorting me out. I just looked at her, her image slightly blurry because of the tears still splashing around inside my eyes. Once the nurse dabbed my eyes lightly and dabbing my clothes.
I then thought of my leg. I gingerly peeled back the clammy hospital sheets and looked at my leg. An area around my knee was stained with blood and there were two metal pins sticking out of my leg. I retched. The sight was awful, the first thought that crossed my mind was, 'I'll never be able to wear a skirt again.' I then looked up at the nurse, "Will the scars be temporary?" I asked in an anxious tone. The nurse shook her head. "Never completely fade. There will just be a few pale pink scars where the pins are now." "Oh." I said. "Will they be obvious?" "No, you'll probably not be able to see them from where I'm standing." She replied. She was standing about 2-3 metres away. I breathed a sigh of relief. I just kept thinking that guys would find me less attractive now I had purple scars on my knee.
Tommy's POV:
I lay staring at the ceiling in my hospital bed trying to figure out faces and patterns in the swirling paintwork. "Tommy!" I tried to swivel my eyes to the end of the bed, as Phil had just leapt into my cubicle and hurriedly ran over to me. "What?" I asked. Phil beamed, "Its Lil, she's awake, she's ok!" "yes Yes YES!" I yelled.
Kimi's POV:
This is SO great! I've just had a phone call from Phil saying Lil's ok! It turned out the deer died though, and Grandpa Lou escaped with barely a scratch after diving behind his seat. Luckily it was only us lot on the bus as we were the first stop, so no one else was hurt. I then decided to go and write about what happened today in my diary.
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(Oh Kimi will use slang and text words such as 'Cos' When she is writing in her journal ok?)
Dear Diary/Journal,
I have had the weirdest couple of days in my life! I'd just got on the bus, and then we crashed cos of a deer in the road. I escaped with not much injury, but Lil could have died! Its so great that she has woken up now! I'm gonna tell you a secret tho. I think that Lil and Tommy still have feelings for each ova, cos they seem, so.so excited and they can barely contain their happiness when they see each other. But no1 can do anything cos we have no proof that they r still with each other. I dunno what 2 do. I will ask Phil when he comes out of the hospital, as Lil's his twin sis, he mite be able 2 find another fact that they r dating still.
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I looked up from my diary when I heard a familiar squeaking noise. "Kimi, teatime!" I sighed and quickly turned back to my journal.
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I gotta go now. I might write more later, bye.
Luv Kimi xXx