NB: Alright, alright here's the next chapter. Boy you people must really
want this story to be continue don't you? I won't say anything more less I
want to ruin this story for you. And I finally got review for answers! I'm
so happy.
Kirara: That's good.
NB: Yeah. But the thing is I decided to rewrite too. Oh well. Okay just to answer some reviews.
To Anime Writer Karica
Hai. I know about my grammar. Really stinks doesn't it. Also I sometimes forget to proof read the chapter cause I want to post it so you can read. But even then I still miss some. So you just got to live with cause I really stink at it. I still wonder how on earth I'm getting an A in English. Probably cause it's got nothing to do with spelling and grammar. Oh well. As for reviews, that's true but I like feedback so I know how I'm doing. It helps me write better.
To Android 71
I was actually addressing that to everyone. I don't know sometime my stories look like another's so I get worried sometime that I'm copying someone's idea.
To Kawaii Kai
Calm down. As you see I'm still coming out with more chapter just that this story at the moment isn't at the top of my write list.
Kirara: Hoshi doesn't own Beyblade only herself.
~*~
Ray played with his hair as he looked out the window. Two days since Kai disappeared and it was already tearing him apart. Hoshi's talk had helped him from not doing anything that he would regret. But it still was driving him crazy.
"Ray we're here," said Hoshi from the front seat. Ray looked at his co- captain. Apparently he was so lost in his own world that he didn't even notice that the van stopped and they were at their new training area. Hoshi had found this place. It was more so to get away from the fans and reporters. Not to mention to have some peace and quiet. It was also to get everyone minds off Kai.
It was an isolated place in the back parts of Hawaii Kai. But first they had to do some climbing. The training area was up in the mountains, but it was a long way up.
"No way," groaned Tyson.
"We have to climb that," asked Max.
"Yes we do," said Hoshi.
"I'm not ready for this," said Kenny, not believing that he would have to do this.
Hoshi rolled her eyes. She should have known something like this would have happen. She tossed a map to Ray.
"Here Ray. Lead them up. Use the map to get up there if you get lost. Pace yourself and don't get lost. Don't go off the trail and Tyson don't eat all of your food cause their all you get for the rest of the day. I suggest you take up a jacket cause it's going to get really cold up there. I'll be waiting for you at the top," she said as if it was the most easily thing to climb this mountain.
"Wait you're not going to wait for us," asked Ray.
Hoshi shook her head, "You guys can't keep up with me. Also I'm taking a faster way up."
"So why don't we take the faster way then," asked Tyson.
Hoshi's glared at Tyson, "It's a faster way only if you can take the same way as I can. The way I'm going is faster if you are a master of marital arts and gymnastics. Like I said I'll be waiting for at the top. It should only take you an hour or two to get up there." She walked towards the pathway. Just as she got to the trail she jumped up. The others watched as Hoshi just bounced up to the top with little effort.
Their eyes popped out. "No way," said Kenny.
"Man how come she can do that and we can't," complained Tyson.
"Probably since she's been doing something like that since she was young," suggest Ray, "But she right. We need to get going." He headed towards the trail. They had a long way to go up.
~*~An hour later~*~
The rest of the Bladebreakers stopped for a break. Of all them Ray was the only who wasn't that tired from walking up. Tyson, Kenny, and Max were all sitting on rocks and tree branches. They were completely exhausted. Ray looked up and estimated that they were about half way or so they thought.
~*~An hour and 30 minutes later~*~
"Man I thought Hoshi said it would only take us about two hours to get up there," groaned Tyson. He was breathing hard. From where they now stood they were nowhere near where they were supposed to be.
"Maybe it's two hours for some one who does this everyday," guessed Kenny.
"Maybe," said Ray. "But we need to keep on going. We still need to meet Hoshi at the top remember?"
"Yeah we remember," said Max. "But if we don't get there in another hour I'm heading back down."
~*~An Hour Later~*~
"Well what do you know we're here," said Max.
Hoshi eyebrow when up. "About time you got here. You're an hour and a half late. It shouldn't have taken that long."
"Well we did," said Tyson. He was laid on the ground, completely tired. Hoshi rolled her eyes at the same time. She couldn't believe how Tyson acted. Off in the corner of his eyes Ray thought he saw a white scarf. He looked in that direction, nothing. Was his eyes plying tricks on him? He wasn't the only one. Hoshi also thought she saw the same scarf but it disappeared for she could see if it was really Kai. Things weren't looking all that good. Something was about to happen.
~*~
Ray walked around the area near the beginning of the trail. Hoshi had just let them go from the training and they all hiked back down. It took them a while but they got the bottom. By now the sun was setting under the buildings, coloring the sky it's color. He couldn't get his mind off the fact that he may have seen Kai. There was no way it couldn't have been. Again out of the corner of his eye he thought he saw the same white scarf. There was now way Ray was going to let Kai get way this time.
He darted after the scarf. Who ever the person was he suddenly became aware of Ray. Ray hoped it was Kai.
~*~
Ray had followed the person back up the mountain ridge he had just climbed down. Ray was almost sure it was Kai. No one else he knew, (Aside from Hoshi,) could climb a mountain this fast.
They neared the ridge fast. Suddenly Ray lost track of Kai. The next thing he remembered was blacking out.
~*~Ray's POV~*~
Ow what hit me? I opened my eyes. It was completely dark. Lucky for me I'm use to seeing in the dark. My cat-like eyes did help the fact. It looked like I was in some kind of room. The strangest thing was there was nothing in the room. Not even a window or chair. Heck all there was a door, dust and dirt.
Man what ever hit me was pretty hard too. I think there's a bump forming. Okay reality check. Name: Raymond, yuck, "Ray", much better, Kon. Team: Bladebreakers. Bit Beast: Driger. I paused, panic was beginning so fill me. Did I still have Driger?! I checked my pockets. Yeah still had him.
Driger glowed at my call. I knew he was worried about me. "I'm find old friend." Okay back to reality check, Family none, Friends: Tyson, Max, Kenny, Hoshi, Mariah, Lee, Gary, Kevin, Michael though he's really annoying but somewhere I guess I do consider him as a friend, Emily she's the same as Michael then again so is the rest of the All Stars, Eddie, Steve, Johnny, who was like the rest of All Stars, Oliver, Enrique, and Robert. I don't know if I consider the Demolition Boys friends after what they did, but then again it wasn't completely their fault. They grew up like that. Just like Kai. Secret crush: Kai. I stopped. It hurt too much to think about Kai. It just reminded me how much a missed him. That when a heard the door open.
~*~ (The Person we've been waiting for)'s POV~*~
I couldn't believe I let Ray see me like that. How could I've been so careless. Why did have to happen to me?! Why me?! Wait don't answer that. It's because Fate has cursed me since the beginning of time. I hope Ray had the sense to stay away from me. I don't want him to get hurt because of me.
I ran my hand through my two toned blue hair. This was getting really confusing. Maybe Hoshi was right. Maybe I do love that White Tiger. Argh. Ray why did you go and screw up my mind and feelings and Hoshi why on earth did you go and push the blade in my heart even further. Off in my mind I somewhat knew what Hoshi would say. Somewhere along the lines, "Gee I don't know, because you love him as well but is too stubborn to admit it."
Ray I have no idea what Ray would say. Damn I really hope Ray decided not to follow me.
~*~Hoshi's POV~*~
I pronounce this really not good. Ray disappeared and I can't find him, I thought I saw Kai's scarf, Tyson is annoying me for putting him through that "torture", Max is on sugar and is also driving me crazy, Kenny ignoring me and all of this chaos was driving me crazy!
Deep breaths Hoshi. Don't lose yourself over something like this. How will you explain yourself. Damn it. That's it. I need to at least get Tyson to stop bugging me.
"TYSON SHUT UP!!!!!!!!!"
Finally some peace and quiet. "Tyson," I said in my most calmest voice I could muster. The others were already edging away from me in fear of what I would do. I didn't blame them. I can be really scarily when I want to be. Also if you add something else to oh never mind that's not important right now.
"Stop annoying me right now, Tyson. I'm not in the mood to listen to your whining. Take Max with you and go and look for Ray. It's 7:30 and he's still not back. I'm getting worried. Kenny stay here and you can finish updating the Beyblades. I'm going out for some aspirin."
Tyson being his annoying self never did actually stop, "What worried about your White Tiger?"
I wanted to strangle him for the comment. "Tyson," I said in a very low, cold, dangerous voice, "Yes I am worried about Ray. But I certainly don't love him the way you are thinking. His heart belongs to someone else."
I think it was worth it to see Tyson's face pale like that. But I think I shouldn't have said anything. Tyson's face then lit up like a Christmas tree, "Really who?"
I just rolled my eyes. "Tyson if you paid attention more you would know who I'm talking about."
I walked out the door. God I need those aspirins right now.
~*~Ray's POV~*~
I bit down on my lip. It took all of my will power not to strangle the man in front of me. Kai's grandfather, Voltaire Hiwatari. Damn why was he always getting in our way?
"Hello Ray how are you," said Voltaire.
What were you hoping for something in replied? How am I? Gee I don't know? Maybe a headache cause when you hit me on the head, anger cause you kidnapped my one true love, revenge wanting to kill you for taking Kai, gee what do you think? "That's now of your concern ," I replied. My voice sounded so cold I think the room temperature dropped a bit.
"Well now that's not a good answer," said Voltaire. "By the way I must thank you for following my grandson up here. Having you join will greatly help. Getting him to help will be much easier now."
That did it. My anger snapped, "What have you done to Kai?!"
Voltaire just smirked. Oh how I wanted to rub that smirk off his face. "I haven't done nothing to him yet. But if you don't want him to get hurt, then a would suggest that you will do as I say."
"WHAT?!"
"You see I'm making another Beyblade Team. Kai is already one of the members but he's putting up a fight. having you here will make it easier to have him obey my orders. You also are the next strongest of the Bladebreakers. So unless you want Kai to get seriously hurt I suggest you take this offer."
This wasn't too good. Caught between a rock and a hard place. I don't want Kai to get hurt but I don't want to help Voltaire either. What to do? As much as I didn't want to do this I didn't want Kai to get hurt. "Alright I'll join your team," said I through my teeth.
Voltaire just gave me a smile that sent shivers down my spine. Kami-san how I hated this man. He ruined the life of my love and is trying to ruin mine's. "Good," he said. "Now for your first lesson." He snapped his fingers. Two men appeared in the doorway. Double confirm this. I don't like this at all. The two men approached me. I tried to get away but there wasn't anywhere to go. Their faces were the last things I saw before darkness once again took my world.
~*~
NB: I'll end it here.
Fans: WHAT?! YOU CAN'T!!!!!!!
NB: I can. Dang just calm down. The next will be out sooner or later.
Fans: WHAT NO!!!!!!!!
Kirara: Just wait. You're lucky that she manage to post the chapter at all. She's got another what five, seven stories to finish.
NB: Ah well review please!
Kirara: That's good.
NB: Yeah. But the thing is I decided to rewrite too. Oh well. Okay just to answer some reviews.
To Anime Writer Karica
Hai. I know about my grammar. Really stinks doesn't it. Also I sometimes forget to proof read the chapter cause I want to post it so you can read. But even then I still miss some. So you just got to live with cause I really stink at it. I still wonder how on earth I'm getting an A in English. Probably cause it's got nothing to do with spelling and grammar. Oh well. As for reviews, that's true but I like feedback so I know how I'm doing. It helps me write better.
To Android 71
I was actually addressing that to everyone. I don't know sometime my stories look like another's so I get worried sometime that I'm copying someone's idea.
To Kawaii Kai
Calm down. As you see I'm still coming out with more chapter just that this story at the moment isn't at the top of my write list.
Kirara: Hoshi doesn't own Beyblade only herself.
~*~
Ray played with his hair as he looked out the window. Two days since Kai disappeared and it was already tearing him apart. Hoshi's talk had helped him from not doing anything that he would regret. But it still was driving him crazy.
"Ray we're here," said Hoshi from the front seat. Ray looked at his co- captain. Apparently he was so lost in his own world that he didn't even notice that the van stopped and they were at their new training area. Hoshi had found this place. It was more so to get away from the fans and reporters. Not to mention to have some peace and quiet. It was also to get everyone minds off Kai.
It was an isolated place in the back parts of Hawaii Kai. But first they had to do some climbing. The training area was up in the mountains, but it was a long way up.
"No way," groaned Tyson.
"We have to climb that," asked Max.
"Yes we do," said Hoshi.
"I'm not ready for this," said Kenny, not believing that he would have to do this.
Hoshi rolled her eyes. She should have known something like this would have happen. She tossed a map to Ray.
"Here Ray. Lead them up. Use the map to get up there if you get lost. Pace yourself and don't get lost. Don't go off the trail and Tyson don't eat all of your food cause their all you get for the rest of the day. I suggest you take up a jacket cause it's going to get really cold up there. I'll be waiting for you at the top," she said as if it was the most easily thing to climb this mountain.
"Wait you're not going to wait for us," asked Ray.
Hoshi shook her head, "You guys can't keep up with me. Also I'm taking a faster way up."
"So why don't we take the faster way then," asked Tyson.
Hoshi's glared at Tyson, "It's a faster way only if you can take the same way as I can. The way I'm going is faster if you are a master of marital arts and gymnastics. Like I said I'll be waiting for at the top. It should only take you an hour or two to get up there." She walked towards the pathway. Just as she got to the trail she jumped up. The others watched as Hoshi just bounced up to the top with little effort.
Their eyes popped out. "No way," said Kenny.
"Man how come she can do that and we can't," complained Tyson.
"Probably since she's been doing something like that since she was young," suggest Ray, "But she right. We need to get going." He headed towards the trail. They had a long way to go up.
~*~An hour later~*~
The rest of the Bladebreakers stopped for a break. Of all them Ray was the only who wasn't that tired from walking up. Tyson, Kenny, and Max were all sitting on rocks and tree branches. They were completely exhausted. Ray looked up and estimated that they were about half way or so they thought.
~*~An hour and 30 minutes later~*~
"Man I thought Hoshi said it would only take us about two hours to get up there," groaned Tyson. He was breathing hard. From where they now stood they were nowhere near where they were supposed to be.
"Maybe it's two hours for some one who does this everyday," guessed Kenny.
"Maybe," said Ray. "But we need to keep on going. We still need to meet Hoshi at the top remember?"
"Yeah we remember," said Max. "But if we don't get there in another hour I'm heading back down."
~*~An Hour Later~*~
"Well what do you know we're here," said Max.
Hoshi eyebrow when up. "About time you got here. You're an hour and a half late. It shouldn't have taken that long."
"Well we did," said Tyson. He was laid on the ground, completely tired. Hoshi rolled her eyes at the same time. She couldn't believe how Tyson acted. Off in the corner of his eyes Ray thought he saw a white scarf. He looked in that direction, nothing. Was his eyes plying tricks on him? He wasn't the only one. Hoshi also thought she saw the same scarf but it disappeared for she could see if it was really Kai. Things weren't looking all that good. Something was about to happen.
~*~
Ray walked around the area near the beginning of the trail. Hoshi had just let them go from the training and they all hiked back down. It took them a while but they got the bottom. By now the sun was setting under the buildings, coloring the sky it's color. He couldn't get his mind off the fact that he may have seen Kai. There was no way it couldn't have been. Again out of the corner of his eye he thought he saw the same white scarf. There was now way Ray was going to let Kai get way this time.
He darted after the scarf. Who ever the person was he suddenly became aware of Ray. Ray hoped it was Kai.
~*~
Ray had followed the person back up the mountain ridge he had just climbed down. Ray was almost sure it was Kai. No one else he knew, (Aside from Hoshi,) could climb a mountain this fast.
They neared the ridge fast. Suddenly Ray lost track of Kai. The next thing he remembered was blacking out.
~*~Ray's POV~*~
Ow what hit me? I opened my eyes. It was completely dark. Lucky for me I'm use to seeing in the dark. My cat-like eyes did help the fact. It looked like I was in some kind of room. The strangest thing was there was nothing in the room. Not even a window or chair. Heck all there was a door, dust and dirt.
Man what ever hit me was pretty hard too. I think there's a bump forming. Okay reality check. Name: Raymond, yuck, "Ray", much better, Kon. Team: Bladebreakers. Bit Beast: Driger. I paused, panic was beginning so fill me. Did I still have Driger?! I checked my pockets. Yeah still had him.
Driger glowed at my call. I knew he was worried about me. "I'm find old friend." Okay back to reality check, Family none, Friends: Tyson, Max, Kenny, Hoshi, Mariah, Lee, Gary, Kevin, Michael though he's really annoying but somewhere I guess I do consider him as a friend, Emily she's the same as Michael then again so is the rest of the All Stars, Eddie, Steve, Johnny, who was like the rest of All Stars, Oliver, Enrique, and Robert. I don't know if I consider the Demolition Boys friends after what they did, but then again it wasn't completely their fault. They grew up like that. Just like Kai. Secret crush: Kai. I stopped. It hurt too much to think about Kai. It just reminded me how much a missed him. That when a heard the door open.
~*~ (The Person we've been waiting for)'s POV~*~
I couldn't believe I let Ray see me like that. How could I've been so careless. Why did have to happen to me?! Why me?! Wait don't answer that. It's because Fate has cursed me since the beginning of time. I hope Ray had the sense to stay away from me. I don't want him to get hurt because of me.
I ran my hand through my two toned blue hair. This was getting really confusing. Maybe Hoshi was right. Maybe I do love that White Tiger. Argh. Ray why did you go and screw up my mind and feelings and Hoshi why on earth did you go and push the blade in my heart even further. Off in my mind I somewhat knew what Hoshi would say. Somewhere along the lines, "Gee I don't know, because you love him as well but is too stubborn to admit it."
Ray I have no idea what Ray would say. Damn I really hope Ray decided not to follow me.
~*~Hoshi's POV~*~
I pronounce this really not good. Ray disappeared and I can't find him, I thought I saw Kai's scarf, Tyson is annoying me for putting him through that "torture", Max is on sugar and is also driving me crazy, Kenny ignoring me and all of this chaos was driving me crazy!
Deep breaths Hoshi. Don't lose yourself over something like this. How will you explain yourself. Damn it. That's it. I need to at least get Tyson to stop bugging me.
"TYSON SHUT UP!!!!!!!!!"
Finally some peace and quiet. "Tyson," I said in my most calmest voice I could muster. The others were already edging away from me in fear of what I would do. I didn't blame them. I can be really scarily when I want to be. Also if you add something else to oh never mind that's not important right now.
"Stop annoying me right now, Tyson. I'm not in the mood to listen to your whining. Take Max with you and go and look for Ray. It's 7:30 and he's still not back. I'm getting worried. Kenny stay here and you can finish updating the Beyblades. I'm going out for some aspirin."
Tyson being his annoying self never did actually stop, "What worried about your White Tiger?"
I wanted to strangle him for the comment. "Tyson," I said in a very low, cold, dangerous voice, "Yes I am worried about Ray. But I certainly don't love him the way you are thinking. His heart belongs to someone else."
I think it was worth it to see Tyson's face pale like that. But I think I shouldn't have said anything. Tyson's face then lit up like a Christmas tree, "Really who?"
I just rolled my eyes. "Tyson if you paid attention more you would know who I'm talking about."
I walked out the door. God I need those aspirins right now.
~*~Ray's POV~*~
I bit down on my lip. It took all of my will power not to strangle the man in front of me. Kai's grandfather, Voltaire Hiwatari. Damn why was he always getting in our way?
"Hello Ray how are you," said Voltaire.
What were you hoping for something in replied? How am I? Gee I don't know? Maybe a headache cause when you hit me on the head, anger cause you kidnapped my one true love, revenge wanting to kill you for taking Kai, gee what do you think? "That's now of your concern ," I replied. My voice sounded so cold I think the room temperature dropped a bit.
"Well now that's not a good answer," said Voltaire. "By the way I must thank you for following my grandson up here. Having you join will greatly help. Getting him to help will be much easier now."
That did it. My anger snapped, "What have you done to Kai?!"
Voltaire just smirked. Oh how I wanted to rub that smirk off his face. "I haven't done nothing to him yet. But if you don't want him to get hurt, then a would suggest that you will do as I say."
"WHAT?!"
"You see I'm making another Beyblade Team. Kai is already one of the members but he's putting up a fight. having you here will make it easier to have him obey my orders. You also are the next strongest of the Bladebreakers. So unless you want Kai to get seriously hurt I suggest you take this offer."
This wasn't too good. Caught between a rock and a hard place. I don't want Kai to get hurt but I don't want to help Voltaire either. What to do? As much as I didn't want to do this I didn't want Kai to get hurt. "Alright I'll join your team," said I through my teeth.
Voltaire just gave me a smile that sent shivers down my spine. Kami-san how I hated this man. He ruined the life of my love and is trying to ruin mine's. "Good," he said. "Now for your first lesson." He snapped his fingers. Two men appeared in the doorway. Double confirm this. I don't like this at all. The two men approached me. I tried to get away but there wasn't anywhere to go. Their faces were the last things I saw before darkness once again took my world.
~*~
NB: I'll end it here.
Fans: WHAT?! YOU CAN'T!!!!!!!
NB: I can. Dang just calm down. The next will be out sooner or later.
Fans: WHAT NO!!!!!!!!
Kirara: Just wait. You're lucky that she manage to post the chapter at all. She's got another what five, seven stories to finish.
NB: Ah well review please!