Hi, everyonne, my latest story, reviews please, I don't own this stuuf by the way I just write.
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The cell was musty. The smell of it was wet and dirty, and the sense Sirius had only experienced this sense when people came to be imprisoned. It was a sense of excitemnt.
He lay on his damp bed thinkiing, hoping, he didn't know what to hope for, there was no hope, but a voice in the back of his head said "There is always hope", that was James'
voice, he said that a week before he died, there wasn't much hope, well there would have been if it had not been for Peter, thought Sirius, the traitor.
He always wondered if he'd ever meet him again, he dreamed about it, avenging Lily and James, the rat was out there somewhere, biding his time. Sirius wanted to see him so much.
The dementors outside his cell were not concentrating on him, for once, they seemed to have a new sense of excitment, one which he had not seen for about 2 years. It was most obviously
the thought of new prey, fresh blood, like Lily and James were to Voldemort a new prisoner was to a Demento thought Sirius.
He wondered who it was, he found out in the end, wondered if the prisoner was someone he knew, or had known, none of his friends would be his friends now, especially Remus.
This was the worst part of his time in Azkaban, the time spent dwelling on Remus and his old friends.
The dementors were rising, Sirius could here the wailing of a man, he knew how that felt.
"Gettoffa me" he shouted,"I'm tellin' yeh, gettaoffa me". Sirius recognised that voice, he knew the man's struggle would soon end, everyone struggled and all failed.
The man was coming into view, he was a giant of a man with a shaggy mane of hair covering his face.
"Hagrid" whispered Sirius, Hagrid was locked up in a cell crying, weeping.
"Wat, who's there" moaned Hagrid.
"Hagrid it's me, me Sirius."
"Watta yeh want, yeh traitor?"
"What?"
"Yeh, betrayed Lily and James, Dumbledore tol' me, yeh betrayed yeh bes' friends"
"No Hagrid, Listen I didn't, I switched."
"Yeh did and there's no denyin' it."
"Hagrid, what are you in here for"
"Ministry think ive bin openin' the Chamber of Secrets, codswalop."
"Opening the Chamber of Secrets, you wouldn't do that, your like me innocent but ignored."
"Yeh wrong Sirius, yeh not innocen' and I'm not ignored, Professer Dumbledore believes me, Great Man Dumbledore." This if anything gave Sirius the determination to break out of Azkaban. He had lost Hagrid now as welll.
"Hagrid, believe me I didn't kill Pettigrew and didn't betray Lily and James."
"Yeah, Yeah."
"Hagrid it'll be allright, you'll see, they can't keep you in here forever, they will find out your innocent, but not me"
"Migh' do, never know these day's, Ministry's Codswalop, Fudge has los' it"
"I knew that the first time I met him, when he took me to Azkaban."
"Sirius, why yeh bein' so nice to me."
"Because of what you once did for me Hagrid, because of what you once did for me"
"When?"
"At Godrics Hollow Hagrid remember, thankyou Hagrid, tell Dumbledore, tell him I'm innocent" but that night Hagrid was muttering in his sleep about the traitor Black, and Sirius had the distinct feeling that#
when Hagrid got out he would not tell Dumbledore.
"Because of what you once did for Me, believe me Hagrid, I'm being nice to you because Your my friend and because of what you once did for me" But Hagrid lay fast asleep, they all did in the end.
The Cell was dripping, Drip, Drip
Drip Lily, Drip James, Drip Harry, Drip Remus, Drip Hagrid
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What do you think, meant to be an emotional story, set when Hagrid is taken to Azkaban in Chamber of Secrets. Thought it would be good describing Sirius meeting him, and emotional because Sirius loseseveryone.
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The cell was musty. The smell of it was wet and dirty, and the sense Sirius had only experienced this sense when people came to be imprisoned. It was a sense of excitemnt.
He lay on his damp bed thinkiing, hoping, he didn't know what to hope for, there was no hope, but a voice in the back of his head said "There is always hope", that was James'
voice, he said that a week before he died, there wasn't much hope, well there would have been if it had not been for Peter, thought Sirius, the traitor.
He always wondered if he'd ever meet him again, he dreamed about it, avenging Lily and James, the rat was out there somewhere, biding his time. Sirius wanted to see him so much.
The dementors outside his cell were not concentrating on him, for once, they seemed to have a new sense of excitment, one which he had not seen for about 2 years. It was most obviously
the thought of new prey, fresh blood, like Lily and James were to Voldemort a new prisoner was to a Demento thought Sirius.
He wondered who it was, he found out in the end, wondered if the prisoner was someone he knew, or had known, none of his friends would be his friends now, especially Remus.
This was the worst part of his time in Azkaban, the time spent dwelling on Remus and his old friends.
The dementors were rising, Sirius could here the wailing of a man, he knew how that felt.
"Gettoffa me" he shouted,"I'm tellin' yeh, gettaoffa me". Sirius recognised that voice, he knew the man's struggle would soon end, everyone struggled and all failed.
The man was coming into view, he was a giant of a man with a shaggy mane of hair covering his face.
"Hagrid" whispered Sirius, Hagrid was locked up in a cell crying, weeping.
"Wat, who's there" moaned Hagrid.
"Hagrid it's me, me Sirius."
"Watta yeh want, yeh traitor?"
"What?"
"Yeh, betrayed Lily and James, Dumbledore tol' me, yeh betrayed yeh bes' friends"
"No Hagrid, Listen I didn't, I switched."
"Yeh did and there's no denyin' it."
"Hagrid, what are you in here for"
"Ministry think ive bin openin' the Chamber of Secrets, codswalop."
"Opening the Chamber of Secrets, you wouldn't do that, your like me innocent but ignored."
"Yeh wrong Sirius, yeh not innocen' and I'm not ignored, Professer Dumbledore believes me, Great Man Dumbledore." This if anything gave Sirius the determination to break out of Azkaban. He had lost Hagrid now as welll.
"Hagrid, believe me I didn't kill Pettigrew and didn't betray Lily and James."
"Yeah, Yeah."
"Hagrid it'll be allright, you'll see, they can't keep you in here forever, they will find out your innocent, but not me"
"Migh' do, never know these day's, Ministry's Codswalop, Fudge has los' it"
"I knew that the first time I met him, when he took me to Azkaban."
"Sirius, why yeh bein' so nice to me."
"Because of what you once did for me Hagrid, because of what you once did for me"
"When?"
"At Godrics Hollow Hagrid remember, thankyou Hagrid, tell Dumbledore, tell him I'm innocent" but that night Hagrid was muttering in his sleep about the traitor Black, and Sirius had the distinct feeling that#
when Hagrid got out he would not tell Dumbledore.
"Because of what you once did for Me, believe me Hagrid, I'm being nice to you because Your my friend and because of what you once did for me" But Hagrid lay fast asleep, they all did in the end.
The Cell was dripping, Drip, Drip
Drip Lily, Drip James, Drip Harry, Drip Remus, Drip Hagrid
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What do you think, meant to be an emotional story, set when Hagrid is taken to Azkaban in Chamber of Secrets. Thought it would be good describing Sirius meeting him, and emotional because Sirius loseseveryone.