Thanks to:
Cotys Child ~ BIG REVIEW!! Yah, thank you much! I love big reviews. You know, it's not the dream suppressant pills she had an addiction problem with, you'd think it would be that but it's not. Writing this story for fun as gotten me a devoted fan! *Jumps for joy* Jenny's dull when she's around Julian, or so it seems because he so.you know? When she's with Tom she seems fun. I just don't think Jenny lives up to Julian's image, my opinion anyway. It's not that I don't read fics with Jenny and Julian pairings, I do, it's just that.well you get the picture!
Yunami The Dragon ~ Thank you, thank you, thank you!
Janie Hodges-Bradley ~ I know, aren't I a stinker!! Be prepared that's going to be after every part! I'm glad you 'love' it. I hope you continue reading. In my mind the story will get gobs better, that's in my mind though, we'll just see how it turns out. Suspense huh? Suspense is good. If you like my idea for this story you might want to check out my other unfinished stories. Hint to you.to everyone.
J. Smith ~ Three times! Three times! I guess you love it huh? A song came to mind when I said that, don't worry I won't sing it.
Caitlin Dean/Kira Storm ~ Yah, greatness of the story, I know Julian + Another Chance = Not with Jenny! Good idea on my part. *Bows* I really shouldn't have said this; I'm probably losing some reviewers from that little comment. Hope not! Enjoy this.
Note to story readers: More reviews! Come on I had so many more reviews last time I sent out some chapters. Don't be stingy! Love peeps that commented!!
Title: Eyes of a Lover
Author: Aya
Rating: 15+
Spoilers: The Forbidden Game
Disclaimers: I own all the characters not recognized. L.J. Smith characters from The Forbidden Game are hers.
Note: I'm getting tired of seeing all these stories where Jenny changes her mind and goes with Julian or she brings him back. Personally I think Jenny and Tom are perfect for each other, why not bring in a daughter and let Julian have a real chance. So instead of making this a challenge I decided to take it up for myself!
Summary: After three years of film making Callie Locke is coming home. The ambitious, successful, and sexy actress rocks the world of her small hometown when she returns, but someone's back from her mother's past and he's rocking Callie's world.
Note: Movies that I mention in this story are titles that I thought up and are not real movies. If there's a title that I say that does have a movie named after it sorry.I've probably have never heard about it.
Part Five: Sweet Home
"I can't believe we're here!" Callie whispered.
Looking at the house she grew up in brought more emotions than she had planned on and tears filled in her eyes. Nothing had changed, except for the fence surrounding the yard for the chocolate lab puppy Drew had gotten for this fourteenth birthday last year.
"You know Callie, this is the first time I've been here," Alice smiled over to her as she suppressed a smile.
"What?" Callie asked looking at her mysteriously.
"It looks like a doll house!" Alice laughed.
Callie lifted her eyebrow. "How is that funny?"
"Little inside joke."
Callie 'hmmed' her and lifted up her carry on bag. She looked over at Alice and shook her head as they both walked up the walk, but before they could get with in two feet of the door a shout came from the inside of the house.
"Drew! Damnit!"
Callie grinned as Drew raced out the door with Uncle Zack trailing behind waving his arms like a mad man. Drew jumped down the three stairs and bashed right in to Callie making them both fall. Having the wind blown out of her Callie looked down at the boy in her lap and glared playfully.
"If I have a bruise on my ass major sueage is happening," Callie pierced her lips.
Drew's respond was throwing himself into her and hugging her tightly. "Callie! I missed you so much."
"Okay sweet pea breathing is becoming a problem here."
Drew smiled sheepishly. "Sorry."
"No problem bro!" Callie then ruffled his hair as a tender note in her voice entered. "I missed you too."
Drew stood up waiting for Callie to get up. When she just sat there looking up at him he sighed, rolled his eyes and held out a hand.
"You know, for a movie star having to keep in shape to be a good movie star you sure are lazy."
When Callie got to her feet she smacked him in the back of the head. He grinned evilly and then ran back in to tell everyone the good news.
"What is this, a cook out? I here Dee and Audrey fighting."
"Hey sweet face," Zack smiled and embraced her.
"Hey Uncle Zack. How are the young'uns? Oh how's Summer? Pregnant again I hear," Callie grinned then added with a jiggling motion. "Keeping the bed a jumping huh?"
Zack's smiled wiped off his face and his eyes widened. "I can not believe you just said that."
Callie smiled again then punched him in the arm. "Well believe it Mr."
Zack turned swiftly, stopped, and then walked in.
"Callie." Jenny whimpered as she came to the door.
Callie lifted her smiling face up. When she saw her mother she did something she hadn't done in years; cried.
"Mamma," Callie held her arms up and ran to her.
Jenny embraced her tightly and shoved her face in her hair.
"Mmm, mom smell," Callie, whispered into her mother's neck.
"What?"
"You have a comforting mom smell, it's what you always smell like. I still remember it even though I haven't seen you for a while."
Jenny grinned and fresh tears popped into her eyes as she held Callie's checks in her hand. "You're so strange Callie doll."
"I'm your daughter, where do you think I get if from?"
"Callie!" came none other than Dee's voice.
Instead of hugging her however Dee ran up and gave her a hearty pat on the back. "I saw your new movie. Nice," was all she said.
"Thanks! I thought it was 'nice' too when I got to make out with Tom Cruise."
"Callie, Callie, Callie, what were you thinking?" Tom's voice came as he heard the conversation about Blue Night.
"You saw it too huh?" Callie grinned at her fathers face.
"I told you not to take that part! It was too provocative. That's the only reason you got those good ratings," Tom scolded gently as he hugged his daughter.
"No Pop's it was a good movie and part. Just that the fans got to see a little of body added a perk. Don't freak."
Tom chucked her under the chin and then kissed her cheek.
"Hey Mikey, Auds," Callie yelled as she saw Michael and Audrey in the door.
Michael shook his head. "I hate that name."
Audrey glanced at her husband. "How do you think I feel? She calls me Auds."
"Why do you hate them? They're so cute." Callie asked and then, not waiting for an answer turned her head towards Jenny and asked, "What's for dinner?"
Jenny's smile wiped off her face and she stomped in the house muttering, "Typical response. Comes home after ten months and the first think she asks is 'what's for dinner?'"
"Mamma what do you expect I'd come home for. I'm gonna eat me a good home cooked meal tonight."
"Callie talk properly our you won't be eating."
"Yeah, yeah," Callie muttered as she dragged her feet up the front porch steps and into the house. "I'm going upstairs and changing into some comfortable clothes."
She leapt up the stairs and into her old room. It was just how she left it. She jumped on the bad and turned her head into the sheets. The soothing smell of laundry detergent from the blankets greeted her.
"I could sleep for hours," she mumbled into the comforter.
But, since she couldn't she jumped up a bit and searched her closet for clothes she had left here in preparation for her next visit. She flipped through the assortment of clothes until she decided on a pair of black, stretch material, drawstring pants, and a matching black t-shirt. Just as she was about to take them off the hanger a silver glint caught her eye. She pushed her clothes aside and saw strange carvings.
"This was here last time I visited."
Come to think of it, Callie hadn't come her in three years, her parents always visited her, and it really could have been anyone. Callie thought as she traced her fingers over it.
"It had to be Drew," she said as she turned around with her clothes in hand.
She put the pajamas on and was about to go out when she heard something from the closet she'd closed. She walked over, opened it, and was greeted by a breeze.
"Wind? Inside a closet? Creepy house," Callie said shaking her head.
She failed to see four pair of eyes that had been staring at her behind the close as she closed the closet one more time and headed down stairs.
TBC..
I know it's been forever. Business busyness and so forth. Happy Christmas Eve everyone. I just thought I'd send a short part out, since it's been so long. I didn't add very much to it, but it's a chapter/part. Comments please.the next part will come out faster if I get a lot (HINT HINT)
Cotys Child ~ BIG REVIEW!! Yah, thank you much! I love big reviews. You know, it's not the dream suppressant pills she had an addiction problem with, you'd think it would be that but it's not. Writing this story for fun as gotten me a devoted fan! *Jumps for joy* Jenny's dull when she's around Julian, or so it seems because he so.you know? When she's with Tom she seems fun. I just don't think Jenny lives up to Julian's image, my opinion anyway. It's not that I don't read fics with Jenny and Julian pairings, I do, it's just that.well you get the picture!
Yunami The Dragon ~ Thank you, thank you, thank you!
Janie Hodges-Bradley ~ I know, aren't I a stinker!! Be prepared that's going to be after every part! I'm glad you 'love' it. I hope you continue reading. In my mind the story will get gobs better, that's in my mind though, we'll just see how it turns out. Suspense huh? Suspense is good. If you like my idea for this story you might want to check out my other unfinished stories. Hint to you.to everyone.
J. Smith ~ Three times! Three times! I guess you love it huh? A song came to mind when I said that, don't worry I won't sing it.
Caitlin Dean/Kira Storm ~ Yah, greatness of the story, I know Julian + Another Chance = Not with Jenny! Good idea on my part. *Bows* I really shouldn't have said this; I'm probably losing some reviewers from that little comment. Hope not! Enjoy this.
Note to story readers: More reviews! Come on I had so many more reviews last time I sent out some chapters. Don't be stingy! Love peeps that commented!!
Title: Eyes of a Lover
Author: Aya
Rating: 15+
Spoilers: The Forbidden Game
Disclaimers: I own all the characters not recognized. L.J. Smith characters from The Forbidden Game are hers.
Note: I'm getting tired of seeing all these stories where Jenny changes her mind and goes with Julian or she brings him back. Personally I think Jenny and Tom are perfect for each other, why not bring in a daughter and let Julian have a real chance. So instead of making this a challenge I decided to take it up for myself!
Summary: After three years of film making Callie Locke is coming home. The ambitious, successful, and sexy actress rocks the world of her small hometown when she returns, but someone's back from her mother's past and he's rocking Callie's world.
Note: Movies that I mention in this story are titles that I thought up and are not real movies. If there's a title that I say that does have a movie named after it sorry.I've probably have never heard about it.
Part Five: Sweet Home
"I can't believe we're here!" Callie whispered.
Looking at the house she grew up in brought more emotions than she had planned on and tears filled in her eyes. Nothing had changed, except for the fence surrounding the yard for the chocolate lab puppy Drew had gotten for this fourteenth birthday last year.
"You know Callie, this is the first time I've been here," Alice smiled over to her as she suppressed a smile.
"What?" Callie asked looking at her mysteriously.
"It looks like a doll house!" Alice laughed.
Callie lifted her eyebrow. "How is that funny?"
"Little inside joke."
Callie 'hmmed' her and lifted up her carry on bag. She looked over at Alice and shook her head as they both walked up the walk, but before they could get with in two feet of the door a shout came from the inside of the house.
"Drew! Damnit!"
Callie grinned as Drew raced out the door with Uncle Zack trailing behind waving his arms like a mad man. Drew jumped down the three stairs and bashed right in to Callie making them both fall. Having the wind blown out of her Callie looked down at the boy in her lap and glared playfully.
"If I have a bruise on my ass major sueage is happening," Callie pierced her lips.
Drew's respond was throwing himself into her and hugging her tightly. "Callie! I missed you so much."
"Okay sweet pea breathing is becoming a problem here."
Drew smiled sheepishly. "Sorry."
"No problem bro!" Callie then ruffled his hair as a tender note in her voice entered. "I missed you too."
Drew stood up waiting for Callie to get up. When she just sat there looking up at him he sighed, rolled his eyes and held out a hand.
"You know, for a movie star having to keep in shape to be a good movie star you sure are lazy."
When Callie got to her feet she smacked him in the back of the head. He grinned evilly and then ran back in to tell everyone the good news.
"What is this, a cook out? I here Dee and Audrey fighting."
"Hey sweet face," Zack smiled and embraced her.
"Hey Uncle Zack. How are the young'uns? Oh how's Summer? Pregnant again I hear," Callie grinned then added with a jiggling motion. "Keeping the bed a jumping huh?"
Zack's smiled wiped off his face and his eyes widened. "I can not believe you just said that."
Callie smiled again then punched him in the arm. "Well believe it Mr."
Zack turned swiftly, stopped, and then walked in.
"Callie." Jenny whimpered as she came to the door.
Callie lifted her smiling face up. When she saw her mother she did something she hadn't done in years; cried.
"Mamma," Callie held her arms up and ran to her.
Jenny embraced her tightly and shoved her face in her hair.
"Mmm, mom smell," Callie, whispered into her mother's neck.
"What?"
"You have a comforting mom smell, it's what you always smell like. I still remember it even though I haven't seen you for a while."
Jenny grinned and fresh tears popped into her eyes as she held Callie's checks in her hand. "You're so strange Callie doll."
"I'm your daughter, where do you think I get if from?"
"Callie!" came none other than Dee's voice.
Instead of hugging her however Dee ran up and gave her a hearty pat on the back. "I saw your new movie. Nice," was all she said.
"Thanks! I thought it was 'nice' too when I got to make out with Tom Cruise."
"Callie, Callie, Callie, what were you thinking?" Tom's voice came as he heard the conversation about Blue Night.
"You saw it too huh?" Callie grinned at her fathers face.
"I told you not to take that part! It was too provocative. That's the only reason you got those good ratings," Tom scolded gently as he hugged his daughter.
"No Pop's it was a good movie and part. Just that the fans got to see a little of body added a perk. Don't freak."
Tom chucked her under the chin and then kissed her cheek.
"Hey Mikey, Auds," Callie yelled as she saw Michael and Audrey in the door.
Michael shook his head. "I hate that name."
Audrey glanced at her husband. "How do you think I feel? She calls me Auds."
"Why do you hate them? They're so cute." Callie asked and then, not waiting for an answer turned her head towards Jenny and asked, "What's for dinner?"
Jenny's smile wiped off her face and she stomped in the house muttering, "Typical response. Comes home after ten months and the first think she asks is 'what's for dinner?'"
"Mamma what do you expect I'd come home for. I'm gonna eat me a good home cooked meal tonight."
"Callie talk properly our you won't be eating."
"Yeah, yeah," Callie muttered as she dragged her feet up the front porch steps and into the house. "I'm going upstairs and changing into some comfortable clothes."
She leapt up the stairs and into her old room. It was just how she left it. She jumped on the bad and turned her head into the sheets. The soothing smell of laundry detergent from the blankets greeted her.
"I could sleep for hours," she mumbled into the comforter.
But, since she couldn't she jumped up a bit and searched her closet for clothes she had left here in preparation for her next visit. She flipped through the assortment of clothes until she decided on a pair of black, stretch material, drawstring pants, and a matching black t-shirt. Just as she was about to take them off the hanger a silver glint caught her eye. She pushed her clothes aside and saw strange carvings.
"This was here last time I visited."
Come to think of it, Callie hadn't come her in three years, her parents always visited her, and it really could have been anyone. Callie thought as she traced her fingers over it.
"It had to be Drew," she said as she turned around with her clothes in hand.
She put the pajamas on and was about to go out when she heard something from the closet she'd closed. She walked over, opened it, and was greeted by a breeze.
"Wind? Inside a closet? Creepy house," Callie said shaking her head.
She failed to see four pair of eyes that had been staring at her behind the close as she closed the closet one more time and headed down stairs.
TBC..
I know it's been forever. Business busyness and so forth. Happy Christmas Eve everyone. I just thought I'd send a short part out, since it's been so long. I didn't add very much to it, but it's a chapter/part. Comments please.the next part will come out faster if I get a lot (HINT HINT)