Thanks to:
Amber Evans Potter ~ Thank you very much. About Jenny and Tom never letting their daughter be disrespectful, well I made Callie's character that way because it makes her the total opposite of Jenny. So if I decide to make Julian fall in love with her, that's a big 'if', than it won't be because she reminded him of something he couldn't have, Jenny.
Kitten ~ Something my mother use to say 'shit in one hand, want in the other, and see which one gets filled faster', boy that really irritated me. So I decided that I 'wanted' so much that the want would get filled way more quickly, so here's the next part. *Smiles*
Soraia ~ Julian + Nice = Wrong in Eyes of a Lover, for the time being. The only way I can say it, without being too obscene is that he's going to be a real asshole in some of these parts, but the hot, sweet, 'honey', Julian tends to melt a bit. I quoted 'honey' because I have a naughty idea that I only shared with Cotys Child, and oh my gosh, you guys are in for a treat!
Zabella ~ He's only goggled eyed by Callie's entrance and a little by her resemblance to Jen. I have something in store for both of them. Although, I just e-mailed Cotys with a new plot twist, 'twist' you say, as usual, and I'm waiting for the response on it. Just to see if it's a good idea and if she likes it, and if she does it'll be in the story, if not you guys will never know.
alocin ~ 'Unique' huh? Well, I've never really had anyone call a story of mine 'Unique'. I'm flattered. I did once have someone ask what my other 'books' were called so they could 'buy' them. I was like 'I don't have any books out, just fanfiction and some original work' and she was like 'I'll buy your books when you publish them.' Of course I loved it! *Grins*
Shadow ~ Short and to the point was your review. Thanks for having an interest!
cotys child ~ Aren't I a stinker with the cliffhangers? I hate them myself, but as I continue to write I find it hard to not have them. If you don't have them people won't be practically starving, thirsting, for the next part, you know? Here it is, enjoy!
Elle ~ Sorry you had to wait to find out I had actually two more chapters up. I've been lacking with posting them up on the Night World list and TTales. Sorry!
Note: Someone e-mailed me, not sure who, about asking me to notify them when I updated my stories, well I forgot your e-mail address and I'd love to inform you, but as you can tell I'm having a bit of a problem. So sorry! Aya
Oh, Oh and another note: I know it's been awhile for this part to come out, I'm sorry. I don't have this part done, but I made a three-page teaser. I hope you enjoy it and ah don't forget to comment!!
More spoilers: I use one line from Buffy the Vampire Slayer, and one line from Sherrilyn Kenyons' Fantasy Lover. Read this book along with her other book Night Pleasure. Also I kind of use the concept of knowing ones true name from the books Sweep. How if someone knew someone else's true name they'd have power of them.
Title: Eyes of a Lover
Rating: 15+
Spoilers: The Forbidden Game
Summary: After three years of film making Callie Locke is coming home. The ambitious, successful, and sexy actress rocks the world of her small hometown when she returns, but someone's back from her mother's past and he's rocking Callie's world.
More spoilers: I use one line from Buffy the Vampire Slayer, and one line from Sherrilyn Kenyons' Fantasy Lover. Read this book along with her other book Night Pleasure. Also I kind of use the concept of knowing ones true name from the books Sweep. How if someone knew someone else's true name they'd have power of them.
Chapter Seven: The Meeting
More spoilers: I use one line from Buffy the Vampire Slayer, and one line from Sherrilyn Kenyons' Fantasy Lover. Read this book along with her other book Night Pleasure. Also I kind of use the concept of knowing ones true name from the books Sweep. How if someone knew someone else's true name they'd have power of them.
"Are you just going to stand there?" Callie demanded as she doggy paddled in the middle of the ice cold water.
Will lifted his arm up and pointed to the right indicating steps to get out. Callie groaned, rolled her head, and went underneath the water free styling towards the stairs.
"Oh Callie," Jenny whispered despairingly. "Why does she have to be here? I don't want anything to happened to her Tom."
Tom grinded his teeth together and glanced towards Jenny, "I don't either, but what can we do?"
Jenny lifted a hand to her mouth and choked back a cry. "There must be something."
As Callie started up the stairs she slipped and dropped back into the water half way. Grunting she glanced up as she lifted herself up. "Slippery there."
Ami grinned and shook her head at her best friend. She galloped, avoiding the mysterious man, over to where she was and offered a hand.
"Finally, someone with manners," Callie said.
Callie got out and straightened her soaked shirt and pants. Sighing she reached into her pocket for her hair tie. Hair was plastered to her forehead, but ignoring that she took the rest, that wasn't attached to her face, and put it up into a messy ponytail.
"I am so going to take the longest bath, with tons of the bubblies, the hottest, not luke warm, not cold, of the century," Callie hollered as she threw her hands up.
Everyone watched Callie as she walked across the room to the other side right in front of Julian. Jenny's eyes widened, Tom stiffened, Dee sucked in her breath, Michael scratched his head, Audrey bit her lip, but the others looked and just smiled.
Realizing there wasn't anywhere to go Callie turned around. "Um, where are we?"
Julian who had been looking at her in shock slowly grinned. The evil smile sent chills down Jenny's back as she watched her daughter turn her eyes to the man that gave her nightmares so long ago.
"Who are you?" Callie asked.
"Well, I shan't stoop to the basic cliché of saying 'your worst nightmare', but, well, it's true."
"I don't have a worst nightmare," Callie said looking him in the eye.
"You do now," the electric blue eyed grinned evilly and snapped his fingers.
Next thing Callie felt was harsh wind whipping through her clothes and her wet hair. She heard her mother call out to her in a panic and then everything went black.
~~~~~
A pain slashed through Callie's back. "Owe, owe, and OWE."
Slowly, painfully, she got up holding her hand to her head. Her eyes blurred and she had to double over from a nauseating feeling that was coming into her stomach.
"Oh god, talk about your highness," she moaned. "Where in the freaking hell am I?"
The place smelled of must and mildew. The smell was so raunchy and full force that Callie gagged hard. It was dark. Pitch black, so dark Callie could barely see her hand in front of her face.
Taking a deep breath Callie placed her fingers on the cold, rough, cemented ground, and lifted herself up. She headed towards what she guessed was a wall and contacted slimy ooze. Jerking back swiftly she rubbed the ooze onto her jeans.
"That was gross," Callie said to herself.
As she said this lights turned on, but what was weird is that when they came on Callie saw no sign of a lamp or ceiling bulb anywhere. The walls were opaque and very dingy, but clear. There wasn't any glisten of ooze that she'd touched.
"Odd."
"Callie?" came a worried voice.
"Ami? Where are we?"
"I have the same question, but no answer, but this seems familiar."
"You're in the game you started playing about an hour ago," a masculine, exotic voice whispered in Callie's ear, which was a little too close for comfort.
Callie jerked to the left side, away from the voice, jumped over to where Ami was, and turned swiftly to see familiar electric green eyes.
"You're that guy that can use both his hands!" Callie confirmed her familiarity.
His gaze on Callie intensified. "Yes, I use them very well too."
Callie paused, lifted her mouth open to say something, paused again, and then spoke. "Right."
"Holy green guacamole," was all Ami got out as she stared at the beautiful man.
They just stared at each other. The man at Callie, Callie at him, and Ami at him, there was silence and starring. Callie felt her wet clothes plastered to her skin and suddenly became uncomfortable with the intensity of the mans stare and as it began wondering down. Insecurely Callie lifted her arms up and folded them around the upper half of her body. Her actions seemed to please the man and he grinned sexily.
"Holy green guacamole," Ami repeated. "Holy green guaca."
"Am's, enough with the holy greenness, please," Callie shouted in frustration.
Ami jerked her gaze away from the mysterious, exotic man, and looked at Callie. "Can't help it," was her reply.
"So, we're playing that paper doll house game are we?"
"You must play and defeat your nightmares or die."
"Oh great, what else would I be playing for?" Callie sighed, and then realizing what she said smacked her hand over her mouth and then lowered it. "God I really just said that didn't I?"
He grinned. "I'm Orion."
"Like from Orion's Belt?" Callie asked.
"No, I just liked the name. I am getting tired of it, so long of life I'm beginning to forget my real name."
"So why don't you give us your real name?" Ami asked?
"And give you a small portion of power of me, I don't think so. Ami isn't your true name. Now back to the point. You're playing the game you started an hour ago, only in real life. Since, my buddy Jules, didn't pick a lead player, I'll pick you Callie Locke."
"Orion! What are you doing?" boomed a voice.
"Hey Jules, just appointing a main player."
"No one is to be a lead player, they're all on their own, to die alone in their nightmares."
"Don't be so harsh, you're going to get what you want anyway."
"What is it that he wants?" Callie asked looking at Orion.
"Revenge," he smiled softly at her.
"On who?"
Orion looked down and then flipped his head back up with another grin. "Your mother."
"M-my mother? What did she do?"
"Why don't you ask her?" Orion suggested.
"Okay, I will."
Orion gazed at her deeply walked closer to her and stood in front of her. "Okay."
Callie slowly pulled her head back. "You have a problem with personal space don'tcha?"
He laughed, not losing eye contact. He lifted his hand up and brushed her cheek. "I can't help it," he said pausing and looking up as if he could understand that something was going to happen. "Got to go kitten."
"Kitten?" Callie asked confused then jerked back in surprise as he disappeared.
"Callie, we're playing our nightmares, right?" Ami's voice quavered.
Callie smacked her hands against her thighs, sighed, and turned towards Ami. "That's what I got."
Ami shook her head. "Great."
A growl pierced the air.
To Be Continued
Note: Guess what? I got chapter eight done too, so if I get some time I'll send it out tomorrow, maybe tonight. I'll have to think about it.
Amber Evans Potter ~ Thank you very much. About Jenny and Tom never letting their daughter be disrespectful, well I made Callie's character that way because it makes her the total opposite of Jenny. So if I decide to make Julian fall in love with her, that's a big 'if', than it won't be because she reminded him of something he couldn't have, Jenny.
Kitten ~ Something my mother use to say 'shit in one hand, want in the other, and see which one gets filled faster', boy that really irritated me. So I decided that I 'wanted' so much that the want would get filled way more quickly, so here's the next part. *Smiles*
Soraia ~ Julian + Nice = Wrong in Eyes of a Lover, for the time being. The only way I can say it, without being too obscene is that he's going to be a real asshole in some of these parts, but the hot, sweet, 'honey', Julian tends to melt a bit. I quoted 'honey' because I have a naughty idea that I only shared with Cotys Child, and oh my gosh, you guys are in for a treat!
Zabella ~ He's only goggled eyed by Callie's entrance and a little by her resemblance to Jen. I have something in store for both of them. Although, I just e-mailed Cotys with a new plot twist, 'twist' you say, as usual, and I'm waiting for the response on it. Just to see if it's a good idea and if she likes it, and if she does it'll be in the story, if not you guys will never know.
alocin ~ 'Unique' huh? Well, I've never really had anyone call a story of mine 'Unique'. I'm flattered. I did once have someone ask what my other 'books' were called so they could 'buy' them. I was like 'I don't have any books out, just fanfiction and some original work' and she was like 'I'll buy your books when you publish them.' Of course I loved it! *Grins*
Shadow ~ Short and to the point was your review. Thanks for having an interest!
cotys child ~ Aren't I a stinker with the cliffhangers? I hate them myself, but as I continue to write I find it hard to not have them. If you don't have them people won't be practically starving, thirsting, for the next part, you know? Here it is, enjoy!
Elle ~ Sorry you had to wait to find out I had actually two more chapters up. I've been lacking with posting them up on the Night World list and TTales. Sorry!
Note: Someone e-mailed me, not sure who, about asking me to notify them when I updated my stories, well I forgot your e-mail address and I'd love to inform you, but as you can tell I'm having a bit of a problem. So sorry! Aya
Oh, Oh and another note: I know it's been awhile for this part to come out, I'm sorry. I don't have this part done, but I made a three-page teaser. I hope you enjoy it and ah don't forget to comment!!
More spoilers: I use one line from Buffy the Vampire Slayer, and one line from Sherrilyn Kenyons' Fantasy Lover. Read this book along with her other book Night Pleasure. Also I kind of use the concept of knowing ones true name from the books Sweep. How if someone knew someone else's true name they'd have power of them.
Title: Eyes of a Lover
Rating: 15+
Spoilers: The Forbidden Game
Summary: After three years of film making Callie Locke is coming home. The ambitious, successful, and sexy actress rocks the world of her small hometown when she returns, but someone's back from her mother's past and he's rocking Callie's world.
More spoilers: I use one line from Buffy the Vampire Slayer, and one line from Sherrilyn Kenyons' Fantasy Lover. Read this book along with her other book Night Pleasure. Also I kind of use the concept of knowing ones true name from the books Sweep. How if someone knew someone else's true name they'd have power of them.
Chapter Seven: The Meeting
More spoilers: I use one line from Buffy the Vampire Slayer, and one line from Sherrilyn Kenyons' Fantasy Lover. Read this book along with her other book Night Pleasure. Also I kind of use the concept of knowing ones true name from the books Sweep. How if someone knew someone else's true name they'd have power of them.
"Are you just going to stand there?" Callie demanded as she doggy paddled in the middle of the ice cold water.
Will lifted his arm up and pointed to the right indicating steps to get out. Callie groaned, rolled her head, and went underneath the water free styling towards the stairs.
"Oh Callie," Jenny whispered despairingly. "Why does she have to be here? I don't want anything to happened to her Tom."
Tom grinded his teeth together and glanced towards Jenny, "I don't either, but what can we do?"
Jenny lifted a hand to her mouth and choked back a cry. "There must be something."
As Callie started up the stairs she slipped and dropped back into the water half way. Grunting she glanced up as she lifted herself up. "Slippery there."
Ami grinned and shook her head at her best friend. She galloped, avoiding the mysterious man, over to where she was and offered a hand.
"Finally, someone with manners," Callie said.
Callie got out and straightened her soaked shirt and pants. Sighing she reached into her pocket for her hair tie. Hair was plastered to her forehead, but ignoring that she took the rest, that wasn't attached to her face, and put it up into a messy ponytail.
"I am so going to take the longest bath, with tons of the bubblies, the hottest, not luke warm, not cold, of the century," Callie hollered as she threw her hands up.
Everyone watched Callie as she walked across the room to the other side right in front of Julian. Jenny's eyes widened, Tom stiffened, Dee sucked in her breath, Michael scratched his head, Audrey bit her lip, but the others looked and just smiled.
Realizing there wasn't anywhere to go Callie turned around. "Um, where are we?"
Julian who had been looking at her in shock slowly grinned. The evil smile sent chills down Jenny's back as she watched her daughter turn her eyes to the man that gave her nightmares so long ago.
"Who are you?" Callie asked.
"Well, I shan't stoop to the basic cliché of saying 'your worst nightmare', but, well, it's true."
"I don't have a worst nightmare," Callie said looking him in the eye.
"You do now," the electric blue eyed grinned evilly and snapped his fingers.
Next thing Callie felt was harsh wind whipping through her clothes and her wet hair. She heard her mother call out to her in a panic and then everything went black.
~~~~~
A pain slashed through Callie's back. "Owe, owe, and OWE."
Slowly, painfully, she got up holding her hand to her head. Her eyes blurred and she had to double over from a nauseating feeling that was coming into her stomach.
"Oh god, talk about your highness," she moaned. "Where in the freaking hell am I?"
The place smelled of must and mildew. The smell was so raunchy and full force that Callie gagged hard. It was dark. Pitch black, so dark Callie could barely see her hand in front of her face.
Taking a deep breath Callie placed her fingers on the cold, rough, cemented ground, and lifted herself up. She headed towards what she guessed was a wall and contacted slimy ooze. Jerking back swiftly she rubbed the ooze onto her jeans.
"That was gross," Callie said to herself.
As she said this lights turned on, but what was weird is that when they came on Callie saw no sign of a lamp or ceiling bulb anywhere. The walls were opaque and very dingy, but clear. There wasn't any glisten of ooze that she'd touched.
"Odd."
"Callie?" came a worried voice.
"Ami? Where are we?"
"I have the same question, but no answer, but this seems familiar."
"You're in the game you started playing about an hour ago," a masculine, exotic voice whispered in Callie's ear, which was a little too close for comfort.
Callie jerked to the left side, away from the voice, jumped over to where Ami was, and turned swiftly to see familiar electric green eyes.
"You're that guy that can use both his hands!" Callie confirmed her familiarity.
His gaze on Callie intensified. "Yes, I use them very well too."
Callie paused, lifted her mouth open to say something, paused again, and then spoke. "Right."
"Holy green guacamole," was all Ami got out as she stared at the beautiful man.
They just stared at each other. The man at Callie, Callie at him, and Ami at him, there was silence and starring. Callie felt her wet clothes plastered to her skin and suddenly became uncomfortable with the intensity of the mans stare and as it began wondering down. Insecurely Callie lifted her arms up and folded them around the upper half of her body. Her actions seemed to please the man and he grinned sexily.
"Holy green guacamole," Ami repeated. "Holy green guaca."
"Am's, enough with the holy greenness, please," Callie shouted in frustration.
Ami jerked her gaze away from the mysterious, exotic man, and looked at Callie. "Can't help it," was her reply.
"So, we're playing that paper doll house game are we?"
"You must play and defeat your nightmares or die."
"Oh great, what else would I be playing for?" Callie sighed, and then realizing what she said smacked her hand over her mouth and then lowered it. "God I really just said that didn't I?"
He grinned. "I'm Orion."
"Like from Orion's Belt?" Callie asked.
"No, I just liked the name. I am getting tired of it, so long of life I'm beginning to forget my real name."
"So why don't you give us your real name?" Ami asked?
"And give you a small portion of power of me, I don't think so. Ami isn't your true name. Now back to the point. You're playing the game you started an hour ago, only in real life. Since, my buddy Jules, didn't pick a lead player, I'll pick you Callie Locke."
"Orion! What are you doing?" boomed a voice.
"Hey Jules, just appointing a main player."
"No one is to be a lead player, they're all on their own, to die alone in their nightmares."
"Don't be so harsh, you're going to get what you want anyway."
"What is it that he wants?" Callie asked looking at Orion.
"Revenge," he smiled softly at her.
"On who?"
Orion looked down and then flipped his head back up with another grin. "Your mother."
"M-my mother? What did she do?"
"Why don't you ask her?" Orion suggested.
"Okay, I will."
Orion gazed at her deeply walked closer to her and stood in front of her. "Okay."
Callie slowly pulled her head back. "You have a problem with personal space don'tcha?"
He laughed, not losing eye contact. He lifted his hand up and brushed her cheek. "I can't help it," he said pausing and looking up as if he could understand that something was going to happen. "Got to go kitten."
"Kitten?" Callie asked confused then jerked back in surprise as he disappeared.
"Callie, we're playing our nightmares, right?" Ami's voice quavered.
Callie smacked her hands against her thighs, sighed, and turned towards Ami. "That's what I got."
Ami shook her head. "Great."
A growl pierced the air.
To Be Continued
Note: Guess what? I got chapter eight done too, so if I get some time I'll send it out tomorrow, maybe tonight. I'll have to think about it.