Hey All! Usual Disclaimer Applies.
Please review, this is my first fic and I'm not that good at writing
I tried to make it longer so here it is. If you don't like it, don't sue me for all the money I have - which
is British so you wont want it (about $30) because I try saving up hard and I don't even get pocket money!
~ ON WITH THE STORY!
(AN - sorry about spelling!)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
~...until they reached the clearing.
At first it looked like some sort of shrine. There was a small waterfall splashing in to a rather large rock pool.
The luscious green grass was well kept and it was evident that no life form had been there.
Surrounding the 'fall were seven small spherical rocks.
Wilko had also noticed it too - she was approaching them... Suddenly, she tripped over her laces, fell flat on
the ground, and fell unconscious (AN- I know this is probably surreal, but just deal with it ^_^)
"WILKO! SAY SOMETHING!" I screamed at her. I was always known for being over protective about me
friends - they didn't like it but I guess I got it from my parents. Wilko lifted her head, squinted at me and said
something suspiciously like "...mill...hill...bleh." before hitting her head on the ground and losing
consciousness for the second time.
She sounded ok, or at least I thought she sounded OK, so after checking that she was alright, I advanced
to one of the seven stones which was flashing a sort of gold colour. I stared at it suspiciously for a while when
suddenly my inner self said to me, "...place your right index finger on the dent in the rock...".
I was really puzzled - "What dent? It's perfectly round!" I hissed back. There was no answer. So I examined it
closely and saw it! It looked so obvious now. the small dip had the marking of a fingerprint on it. I stared at my
own finger - it looked similar. I was very nervous but obeying the voice, I slowly lowered my own finger on to it and
waited for something to happen...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Ok, so I know I failed the lengthening thing. And I know I left a cliff hanger - well, not much of one but please
read my story and review! Reviews are open to all. Email me at aka_lita_03@yahoo.co.uk or neomail me -
crystal_freedom . I will try to post up regularly which is quite easy seeing as I have written pages and pages
of chapters. Please tell all friends. I am open to flames but not harsh ones ^_^.
Please review, this is my first fic and I'm not that good at writing
I tried to make it longer so here it is. If you don't like it, don't sue me for all the money I have - which
is British so you wont want it (about $30) because I try saving up hard and I don't even get pocket money!
~ ON WITH THE STORY!
(AN - sorry about spelling!)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
~...until they reached the clearing.
At first it looked like some sort of shrine. There was a small waterfall splashing in to a rather large rock pool.
The luscious green grass was well kept and it was evident that no life form had been there.
Surrounding the 'fall were seven small spherical rocks.
Wilko had also noticed it too - she was approaching them... Suddenly, she tripped over her laces, fell flat on
the ground, and fell unconscious (AN- I know this is probably surreal, but just deal with it ^_^)
"WILKO! SAY SOMETHING!" I screamed at her. I was always known for being over protective about me
friends - they didn't like it but I guess I got it from my parents. Wilko lifted her head, squinted at me and said
something suspiciously like "...mill...hill...bleh." before hitting her head on the ground and losing
consciousness for the second time.
She sounded ok, or at least I thought she sounded OK, so after checking that she was alright, I advanced
to one of the seven stones which was flashing a sort of gold colour. I stared at it suspiciously for a while when
suddenly my inner self said to me, "...place your right index finger on the dent in the rock...".
I was really puzzled - "What dent? It's perfectly round!" I hissed back. There was no answer. So I examined it
closely and saw it! It looked so obvious now. the small dip had the marking of a fingerprint on it. I stared at my
own finger - it looked similar. I was very nervous but obeying the voice, I slowly lowered my own finger on to it and
waited for something to happen...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Ok, so I know I failed the lengthening thing. And I know I left a cliff hanger - well, not much of one but please
read my story and review! Reviews are open to all. Email me at aka_lita_03@yahoo.co.uk or neomail me -
crystal_freedom . I will try to post up regularly which is quite easy seeing as I have written pages and pages
of chapters. Please tell all friends. I am open to flames but not harsh ones ^_^.