Hey! Chapter 2 is now up!
AN: Please read and give comments - Flames Allowed
Disclaimer - I do not own anything in here apart from the ideas, some of the made-up characters, and the Diamond Warrior Senshi.
And all praise should really do to takeuchi-sama for the amazing invention of Sailor Moon.
Thank you so much:
Sailorserenity2 - Thank you! Well Here I am updating!
TopazSoarhire - That is some very good constructive criticism! I will keep that in mind. Sorry If it doesn't seem to do anything as yet but I am working on it! :)
Now, On with the story!
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Previously - I dropped my finger on it and waited for something to happen...
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I t suddenly grew quiet, Fiya jerked her head up to see that the waterfall had stopped flowing and behind the waterfall was actually a cave of some sort!
But what she didn't realize was that a gold stone - about the size of a golf ball - had materialized in front of her and had risen up from the spherical stone from a small crack in the rock that was not there before and was now hovering about 5 ft off the ground.
It glowed brightly trying to catch the attention of Fiya.
And if that hadn't shocked her then the cat which had stepped out from the cave, would.
"Greetings Fiya-san." the cat said.
"H-how d-do you kn-now me?" Fiya stuttered.
"I know you," replied the cat - who was transforming into a beautiful young woman in her late 20s wearing a red furusode Kimono (AN- that's the one with the big sleeves), "Because you are destined to be one of the 7 chosen diamond warrior senshi, I can sense your energy signal and if you weren't meant to be and scout, then your past self would not have told you to touch the stone." The woman smiled at her warmly.
"Oh," Fiya replied. Her eyes had glazed over as she tried to accept what was happening.
"Umm, HELLO? Earth to Fiya? Are you even listing to what I'm SAYING?" The woman half-shouted the last bit.
Fiya fell back to earth (so to speak) and said to the woman, "Sorry there, I just spaced out. I don't mean to be rude or anything but who are you?"
"Oh yes! Of course! How silly of me not to say. My name is Hikaruno Kakyuu. But you can call me Yuu-chan if you like. I am your 'aid' in a manner of speaking." As Kakyuu said this, her face filled with colour and her cheeks were tinted with pink as she blushed.
"Thank you, but what do you need me for?" Fiya asked ...
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Ok so here it is! I know it is a bit short but I was thinking of having lots of mini chapters but updated regularly. Or would you rather I doubled up chapters?
Please tell me!
Sorry for the cliff hanger but it seemed like a good place to stop! Please review - Tell me what you think, I wont bite!!!
AN: Please read and give comments - Flames Allowed
Disclaimer - I do not own anything in here apart from the ideas, some of the made-up characters, and the Diamond Warrior Senshi.
And all praise should really do to takeuchi-sama for the amazing invention of Sailor Moon.
Thank you so much:
Sailorserenity2 - Thank you! Well Here I am updating!
TopazSoarhire - That is some very good constructive criticism! I will keep that in mind. Sorry If it doesn't seem to do anything as yet but I am working on it! :)
Now, On with the story!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Previously - I dropped my finger on it and waited for something to happen...
****
I t suddenly grew quiet, Fiya jerked her head up to see that the waterfall had stopped flowing and behind the waterfall was actually a cave of some sort!
But what she didn't realize was that a gold stone - about the size of a golf ball - had materialized in front of her and had risen up from the spherical stone from a small crack in the rock that was not there before and was now hovering about 5 ft off the ground.
It glowed brightly trying to catch the attention of Fiya.
And if that hadn't shocked her then the cat which had stepped out from the cave, would.
"Greetings Fiya-san." the cat said.
"H-how d-do you kn-now me?" Fiya stuttered.
"I know you," replied the cat - who was transforming into a beautiful young woman in her late 20s wearing a red furusode Kimono (AN- that's the one with the big sleeves), "Because you are destined to be one of the 7 chosen diamond warrior senshi, I can sense your energy signal and if you weren't meant to be and scout, then your past self would not have told you to touch the stone." The woman smiled at her warmly.
"Oh," Fiya replied. Her eyes had glazed over as she tried to accept what was happening.
"Umm, HELLO? Earth to Fiya? Are you even listing to what I'm SAYING?" The woman half-shouted the last bit.
Fiya fell back to earth (so to speak) and said to the woman, "Sorry there, I just spaced out. I don't mean to be rude or anything but who are you?"
"Oh yes! Of course! How silly of me not to say. My name is Hikaruno Kakyuu. But you can call me Yuu-chan if you like. I am your 'aid' in a manner of speaking." As Kakyuu said this, her face filled with colour and her cheeks were tinted with pink as she blushed.
"Thank you, but what do you need me for?" Fiya asked ...
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Ok so here it is! I know it is a bit short but I was thinking of having lots of mini chapters but updated regularly. Or would you rather I doubled up chapters?
Please tell me!
Sorry for the cliff hanger but it seemed like a good place to stop! Please review - Tell me what you think, I wont bite!!!