DN: I don't Own SSX Tricky so stop trying to sue me and get money

God Works in Mysterious ways:

Chapter # 1



"And the winner is...It"s Close... Ohh Mac is our winner! With Eddie and Soe fighting for Second. Here they come.....Oh NO!! Here comes Kaori! This looks like trouble..she knocked Zoe down and is taking the lead, She did it!! Kaori is our second place winner, with Eddie in third, Zoe in fourth.................."

Kaori: Zoe I'm so sorry. I Didn't mean to hurt you.

Zoe: It's alright. Just don't hit so hard next time.*Rubs arm*

Kaori: Ok.

Eddie: Hey Mac since when did you turn into Mr. I-Have-To-knock-Someone- Down-to-win.

Mac: I always knock someone down to win today it just happened to be you.

Eddie: No you don't. You didn't yesterday.

Mac: Prove it.*crosses arms over chest*

Eddie: What about Kaori. you never knock her down.

Mac: She has nothing to do with ths.

Eddie: She has everything to do with this.

That pissed Mac off as he punched Eddie so hard that he fell on his butt. Eddie gets up and punches mac back. They start fighting for about 5 Minutes. It tookd Luther and Psymon to break them apart. Eddie: Had a black eye and a Bloody nose, Mac had a Black eye with a busted lip, and both boys cloths were riped up pretty good.

Luther: now what happened here?

*Mac walks away*

Luther: DOn't trun you back on me boy.

Mac: I don't have ot listen to you.

Luther: WHy you little.......

He grabs Mac and Punches him. (PoorMac!!) htey start otfight and no one can stop them. Even the Regulatores treats are no help. After about !0 Minutes a girl came behind Luther and pulled his hair.

Girl: let him go

Luther: why sould I?

*Pulls hair harder*

Luther: Alright: I'll let him go.

*releases Mac*

Girl: *rushes to Macs side* You ok Mac?

Mac: No.*And he falls to the ground holding his chest*

Girl: Come on we have to get you to the hospital*Helps him up but is stoped by a regulator*

Regulator: who are you?

Girl: I'm Mac's little sister Sara

All: What?!?!?!

Mac: I'll explain later

Kaori: i'll come with you.

So hows my first SSX Tricky Fic? Sucky? Never want to hear my name again? Please tell me i would love to know. And please be honest, I can handle the truth.

~Angel From Hell~