Authors Note
First of all I would like to apologize for how long it has been since I updated I will tell you why it has taken so long. I went on vacation the week before Christmas, I went to Florida. I brought a floppy disk with the current chapter I'm working on. But when I got to Florida I found out I forgot to bring it with me ( I left it on the table) so I was in Florida for three weeks. Now when I got back we went and looked at a house in a different town. So now we are in the middle of moving and I am trying to get some work done on the chapter but it doesn't seem to be happening so I will start working on it once I'm finished moving. It should be in about two weeks. Now I am going to ask some questions you can email the answers to me at Volcom78938@aol.com or you can but them in a review. So here are the questions.
What do you think I should work on to make the story better?
Is there to many or to little plot twists?
Is there any character you would like to see in there?
Is the story realistic ( I know I move the time fast some times but I want to get on with the action =) )
That's basically all I can think of for now. If you have additional comment email them to me or in review. Thanks I hope you had a good Holiday.
Alex
First of all I would like to apologize for how long it has been since I updated I will tell you why it has taken so long. I went on vacation the week before Christmas, I went to Florida. I brought a floppy disk with the current chapter I'm working on. But when I got to Florida I found out I forgot to bring it with me ( I left it on the table) so I was in Florida for three weeks. Now when I got back we went and looked at a house in a different town. So now we are in the middle of moving and I am trying to get some work done on the chapter but it doesn't seem to be happening so I will start working on it once I'm finished moving. It should be in about two weeks. Now I am going to ask some questions you can email the answers to me at Volcom78938@aol.com or you can but them in a review. So here are the questions.
What do you think I should work on to make the story better?
Is there to many or to little plot twists?
Is there any character you would like to see in there?
Is the story realistic ( I know I move the time fast some times but I want to get on with the action =) )
That's basically all I can think of for now. If you have additional comment email them to me or in review. Thanks I hope you had a good Holiday.
Alex