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To Help a Friend
The residents stared in horror as Naru, in an attempt to help their landlord, missed her chance to strike at Motoko and was rewarded with a vicious backhand for her efforts. She landed a few feet away with a sickening thud .and lay still, unmoving. Equally as horrifying was the unnatural POPPING sound they heard emanating from said manager as he purposefully knocked his shoulder out of its socket in an attempt to free himself from his attacker.
"OH MY GOD-SEMPAI!!" cried Shinobu as she witnessed her beloved elder mutilate himself in this manner.
"KEITARO NO!" yelled his Aunt Haruka, equally as disgusted.
Both Sara and Kitsune turned away in shock, not wanting to witness their friends destroy themselves.
No one was more shocked than Motoko, her eyes wide in disbelief as she felt his arm..loosen from its socket. So focused was she on this latest development that she was unprepared for Keitaro's latest assault. His arm out of its socket, Keitaro squatted down a little and launched himself over Motoko in a back flip just as she had done to him only moments ago and landed facing her. As soon as he touched down, he landed a hard left at her already bruised face, which forced her to release his dislocated arm.
Though she staggered back from the blow, her battle senses were still at the ready. Without thinking, she deflected the furious blows she knew would follow.Keitaro's anger made him that much more dangerous. So aggressive were his attacks that she couldn't put up an offense of her own.
Meanwhile, Haruka and the girls were again at Naru's side examining her. Kitsune knelt down while Shinobu gently placed Naru's head on the older woman's knees. No one could believe all that had transpired on this most terrible of days. Kitsune stared sadly at her best friend's unconscious form.
"I hope you both are happy." She spat, enough so Haruka can hear. " This was supposed to be between Motoko and Keitaro."
"I-I didn't expect her, of all people, to go to HIS rescue." She replied weakly, averting Kitsune's angry glare and staring at her nephew and Motoko. 'This has gone long enough.this isn't what Motoko and I planned for.' Haruka was about to approach the pair when movement caught her eye. Dr. Hikari and Su were racing toward there location (actually Su was more like bouncing). Hikari knelt by Naru, checked her vitals, and spoke to the group.
" She's just a bit shaken up but she should come around soon. "
The residents were relieved at this bit of news. Hikari reached into her medical bag and started treating the cut on the side of her neck as well as her bruised cheek. She then turned her attention on the battle and yelled to Haruka.
"What the HELL are those two doing? " Haruka turned toward her friend as she continued. " Motoko's supposed to be RESTING.not fighting some useless batt---" then she realized who she was fighting WITH ---"it can't be!" then she looked at SU.
"Waking up isn't the half of it."
"Yup! Always thought that Big Brother Keitaro was 'sleeping'" said a very cheery Su, as if she had waited for this all along.
All eyes looked at her in surprise, even Haruka who was shocked.
"You mean.you KNEW?" asked his Aunt.
Su just nodded her head very quickly. A sudden explosion shocked them all back to reality..there was still a life or death fight ensuing.
"AIR SPLITTING BLADE!!" cried Motoko, who had obviously recovered her katana in the last few moments. She had fired not one but THREE successive blasts at Keitaro this time.each one dispersed by an enraged burst of his chi. He charged again. All traces of his old gentle self-gone.
He was out for blood.
'I fired three of my most powerful blasts at him.and Urashima still attacks!' an unexpected thought occurred to her. 'I would rather die in combat with so honorable a foe, then to let this 'illness' claim me.' She seemed at peace with this last thought.
Keitaro flew at her headfirst. Motoko braced herself for what she thought was a flying tackle. Instead, he landed on his good arm a couple of feet in front of her and spring boarded off it kicking her square in the jaw. Motoko was slammed against a nearby tree with the wind knocked out of her. She slid down the tree and supported herself with the blade..clutching at her chest. Hikari and Haruka caught on at once, her body was starting to fail. The fight must have sped up the sickness within her. The agony that Motoko was going through was evident to everyone on that hill .except Keitaro, who was still slowly advancing on the fallen Swordswoman. That fact was not lost on Motoko.
"U-Urashima!" she started with false strength. "Finish me! This battle is yours!"
Keitaro slowed his advance, only a few feet away.
"No Motoko. You will not get off so easily." His eyes continued to show no emotion whatsoever. "Despite my anger towards you and my Aunt..I will not kill you."
This sent a wave of relief amongst all who witnessed the battle, hoping to get Motoko back to the safety of the dorm. Hikari was still tending to Naru attempting to recover the young woman with some smelling salts. However, what they heard next sent chills.
"You are going to pay for hurting Naru. I asked you to let her go and you refused. Then you sent her flying when she was only trying to help." He paused staring blankly in her direction. "You'll wish you had let her go when I asked."
Motoko, still clutching her chest, and accepting her fate merely stated. "T- then that is how it shall be. I await your p-punishment Urashima." Keitaro slowly advanced.
Keitaro was so intent on reaching his prey that he almost failed to register the figure that suddenly blocked his path. He looked up slightly to reveal that his Aunt Haruka had stood in front of Motoko, her feet spread apart with her arms outstretched.
"Keitaro! That's enough!" she yelled in defiance. "You've won! Now let her go!"
Kitsune and the others stared dumbfounded at the scene before them. One moment Haruka was standing next to them witnessing the drama unfold, then a millisecond later she was standing in front of Motoko barring her landlord's path.
'The hell did she do THAT?' thought the normally fox-eyed woman, opening her eyes for the first time in lord knows how long.
"You'd better wake Naru up quick Doc. She may be the only one to calm that man down." Hikari was still trying to wake Naru with little suceess.
"I-I can try to calm s-sempai down." Offered a very nervous Shinobu. " He won't hurt me."
"Are you crazy! That aint the dork that everyone's used to you know." Stated Sara flatly. " Not even my PAPA could take him on right now.and he's REAL strong."
"I can always have my new Mecha-Tama fly over the hill to take him out." Added an unusually happy SU. The looks that everyone gave her indicated that it might not be such a good idea after all. " On second thought.."
*******
"Get out of my way Aunt Haruka!"
"No! It's Over! She's been through too much already today."
" I don't care. She should not have involved Naru."
"That wasn't her idea.it was mine alright!"
A thought had just occurred to the landlord.
"Why?" he asked. "Why did you break my promise? Why did you tell Motoko about me? You had to know what would happen if I started fighting again." anguish permeating his words.
"It wasn't supposed to be this way. No one was supposed to get hurt." She pleaded.
"Too late for that isn't it?" he asked sarcastically.
Haruka could sense where both Motoko and her nephew were injured. She can picture Motoko's face turning into one big bruise where her nephew struck her, as well as imagine what her body must be feeling as her sickness had returned. She also could see the cuts all over Keitaro's body, and can imagine how they stung as sweat covered his entire frame. To Motoko's credit, he was not without his own set of bruises. Her nephew's breathing was heavy as he stared at her.
Then she noticed his arm, hanging limply at his side.
"K-Keitaro please!" She pleaded. "Let's get you both inside the dorm. You both need Hikari to take a look at you."
"You should have thought about that before you sent Motoko after me. If it weren't for you.Naru wouldn't have gotten hurt. You are just as much to blame as if you had struck her yourself." Keitaro body tensed.
" I won't let you get to her." She stated in defiance. " I'll stop you."
He chuckled. It was tinged with malice. "You mean you will try. Yes Auntie, I know you've been training since we were kids. I can read it all over your Chi. Sensei would be proud."
"Sensei would have been proud of you too nephew, he was right--your skill is exceptional. However, he wouldn't want to see us fight like this---we're family. "
"H-Haruka." Said Motoko from behind her. "It is alright. I will accept my fate at Urashima's hand."
"No!" Haruka almost screamed. "Don't you see? If he does this, he will be no better than a bully." Then looking back at her nephew, "And I know how much he HATES bullies."
This infuriated Keitaro, suddenly remembering what happened those many years ago. 'Comparing me to a bully? A stinking Bully?' Abandoning all reason, Keitaro sprinted toward his Aunt ready to strike. Haruka stood immobile , hoping that he'd come to his senses. ' Kami, he means to do this.' She still did not move.
Keitaro readied his good arm to attack. He screamed with a primal bloodlust as he pulled his good arm back to strike a painful blow to his only Aunt.
Time seemed to slow.
He let it the fist go, aiming for Haruka's head.
She didn't move, a tear starting to form, as the fist grew closer to its mark.
"KEI- KUN! STOP!"
Keitaro's fist stopped dead, right in front of his Aunt's shocked face.
All eyes turned towards the pleading voice of the only other person on the planet who could ever get through to Keitaro as effectively as Naru Narusegawa could.
Noone had noticed that both Mutsumi and Tama-chan had finally arrived on the hill and had approached no more than a few feet from the battle site. Her hands clasped in front of her, she slowly approached her childhood friend.
"Kei-Kun?" she asked in a low, tranquil voice meant to soothe the landlord. "Please. Stop this."
Something seemed to break inside him as Mutsumi spoke. The dark part of his soul seemed to weaken as he allowed her to approach him. His fist was still in front of Haruka.
"M-mutsumi?" He started taking in his friend's calming presence. "They H- hurt Naru." His voice starting to crack as tears slowly started to form on his own face.
The rest of the girls froze, as Mutsumi seemed to have the desired effect on Keitaro. Tama-chan flew towards Naru and landed on her head. "Myuh?" was all it said as Naru's eyes started to slowly open.
"T-tama?" she asked weakly as Hikari gently told her to lay still.
"This is not like before. I am sure they meant no real harm Kei-Kun" she walked closer to Keitaro. "Even you must believe that."
"T-they hurt her." He repeated as tears flowed more freely from his face as he saw his Aunt---Really saw his Aunt and what he almost did to her.
"Oh Lord!" he said weakly as Mutsumi finally stood next to him and gently lowered the fist he had almost used to hurt his Aunt.
"I-I didn't mean.."
"Ssh Kei-Kun. " She gently turned him to face her. "It wasn't your fault. Just as it wasn't all those years ago." She brought him close to her and let him rest his head on her shoulder. She carefully rubbed his injured shoulder. "Please Kei-Kun, Let Dr. Hikari help you and Motoko get well."
Dr. Hikari, satisfied that Naru needed no further medical attention, rushed to Motoko's side and examined her as Haruka placed her head on her knees --- just as Kitsune did for Naru earlier. The rest of the Hinata girls slowly approached both groups..not wanting to stop the assistance both combatants were receiving. Naru, looking at both Keitaro and Mutsumi, didn't feel her usual jealously as she eyed the pair. She felt more of a ..deja-vu', as if this exact scene played out before.
"You ok Naru?" asked her best friend.
"No Kitsune." She answered. " I have a real BAD feeling about those two.
The old Kitsune threatened to show herself again as she grinned.
"Oh you know how Mutsumi is.all love-dovey over your boyfriend." She didn't get the reaction she expected.
Ignoring the last part of her statement, Naru simply stated.
"Kitsune, not Mutsumi and Keitaro." she noticed the confused look on her friend's face."Keitaro and Motoko..something bad is going on with those two...i can feel it."
Her heart broke as she saw Keitaro, who not too long ago was giving Motoko Aoyama more than a run for her money, sobbing on Mutsumi's shoulder. His body shuddered with remorse.
" I didn't want to hurt anyone else. T-that's why I kept it secret for so long. I didn't want to hurt anyone." He continued to weep as Mutsumi held him, careful not to hurt his dislocated arm.
Keitaro's body seemed to calm as Naru heard a familiar melody escape Mutsumi's lips. After only a few seconds, his body almost stopped shuddering all together. Naru KNEW right then that she has seen this before. She was about to approach her friends when Hikari yelled.
"Help me get her to her room quick! We don't have much time."
"W-why?" asked a frightened Shinobu.
"Motoko is dying!"
'NO!' thought Keitaro, lifting her face up from Mutsumi. 'Its happening just like in my nightmare!'
-to be continued-
Author's notes: Hello everyone. I'd like to start off by apologizing to everyone for not adding any author's notes these last couple of chapters.just been too busy with everything else.
Next off I'd like to apologize to Black-Mage010.I had noticed in his story "Make me believe" (which you should REALLY check out by the way) that he has a character named Dr. Hikari as well. Please believe me when I say that it was pure coincidence that I named mine the same. I meant no disrespect.
On a lighter note, I'd like to thank everyone who has read this story whether you reviewed or not. Its nice to know that people seem to like and support my work. I'll continue to update as soon as possible. And for those that DID review.keep them coming. I want to hear your feedback.
So what does everyone think so far? Good? Not-so-good? As always , I welcome CONSTRUCTIVE criticism.no flames plz. And please.Read and REVIEW.
To Help a Friend
The residents stared in horror as Naru, in an attempt to help their landlord, missed her chance to strike at Motoko and was rewarded with a vicious backhand for her efforts. She landed a few feet away with a sickening thud .and lay still, unmoving. Equally as horrifying was the unnatural POPPING sound they heard emanating from said manager as he purposefully knocked his shoulder out of its socket in an attempt to free himself from his attacker.
"OH MY GOD-SEMPAI!!" cried Shinobu as she witnessed her beloved elder mutilate himself in this manner.
"KEITARO NO!" yelled his Aunt Haruka, equally as disgusted.
Both Sara and Kitsune turned away in shock, not wanting to witness their friends destroy themselves.
No one was more shocked than Motoko, her eyes wide in disbelief as she felt his arm..loosen from its socket. So focused was she on this latest development that she was unprepared for Keitaro's latest assault. His arm out of its socket, Keitaro squatted down a little and launched himself over Motoko in a back flip just as she had done to him only moments ago and landed facing her. As soon as he touched down, he landed a hard left at her already bruised face, which forced her to release his dislocated arm.
Though she staggered back from the blow, her battle senses were still at the ready. Without thinking, she deflected the furious blows she knew would follow.Keitaro's anger made him that much more dangerous. So aggressive were his attacks that she couldn't put up an offense of her own.
Meanwhile, Haruka and the girls were again at Naru's side examining her. Kitsune knelt down while Shinobu gently placed Naru's head on the older woman's knees. No one could believe all that had transpired on this most terrible of days. Kitsune stared sadly at her best friend's unconscious form.
"I hope you both are happy." She spat, enough so Haruka can hear. " This was supposed to be between Motoko and Keitaro."
"I-I didn't expect her, of all people, to go to HIS rescue." She replied weakly, averting Kitsune's angry glare and staring at her nephew and Motoko. 'This has gone long enough.this isn't what Motoko and I planned for.' Haruka was about to approach the pair when movement caught her eye. Dr. Hikari and Su were racing toward there location (actually Su was more like bouncing). Hikari knelt by Naru, checked her vitals, and spoke to the group.
" She's just a bit shaken up but she should come around soon. "
The residents were relieved at this bit of news. Hikari reached into her medical bag and started treating the cut on the side of her neck as well as her bruised cheek. She then turned her attention on the battle and yelled to Haruka.
"What the HELL are those two doing? " Haruka turned toward her friend as she continued. " Motoko's supposed to be RESTING.not fighting some useless batt---" then she realized who she was fighting WITH ---"it can't be!" then she looked at SU.
"Waking up isn't the half of it."
"Yup! Always thought that Big Brother Keitaro was 'sleeping'" said a very cheery Su, as if she had waited for this all along.
All eyes looked at her in surprise, even Haruka who was shocked.
"You mean.you KNEW?" asked his Aunt.
Su just nodded her head very quickly. A sudden explosion shocked them all back to reality..there was still a life or death fight ensuing.
"AIR SPLITTING BLADE!!" cried Motoko, who had obviously recovered her katana in the last few moments. She had fired not one but THREE successive blasts at Keitaro this time.each one dispersed by an enraged burst of his chi. He charged again. All traces of his old gentle self-gone.
He was out for blood.
'I fired three of my most powerful blasts at him.and Urashima still attacks!' an unexpected thought occurred to her. 'I would rather die in combat with so honorable a foe, then to let this 'illness' claim me.' She seemed at peace with this last thought.
Keitaro flew at her headfirst. Motoko braced herself for what she thought was a flying tackle. Instead, he landed on his good arm a couple of feet in front of her and spring boarded off it kicking her square in the jaw. Motoko was slammed against a nearby tree with the wind knocked out of her. She slid down the tree and supported herself with the blade..clutching at her chest. Hikari and Haruka caught on at once, her body was starting to fail. The fight must have sped up the sickness within her. The agony that Motoko was going through was evident to everyone on that hill .except Keitaro, who was still slowly advancing on the fallen Swordswoman. That fact was not lost on Motoko.
"U-Urashima!" she started with false strength. "Finish me! This battle is yours!"
Keitaro slowed his advance, only a few feet away.
"No Motoko. You will not get off so easily." His eyes continued to show no emotion whatsoever. "Despite my anger towards you and my Aunt..I will not kill you."
This sent a wave of relief amongst all who witnessed the battle, hoping to get Motoko back to the safety of the dorm. Hikari was still tending to Naru attempting to recover the young woman with some smelling salts. However, what they heard next sent chills.
"You are going to pay for hurting Naru. I asked you to let her go and you refused. Then you sent her flying when she was only trying to help." He paused staring blankly in her direction. "You'll wish you had let her go when I asked."
Motoko, still clutching her chest, and accepting her fate merely stated. "T- then that is how it shall be. I await your p-punishment Urashima." Keitaro slowly advanced.
Keitaro was so intent on reaching his prey that he almost failed to register the figure that suddenly blocked his path. He looked up slightly to reveal that his Aunt Haruka had stood in front of Motoko, her feet spread apart with her arms outstretched.
"Keitaro! That's enough!" she yelled in defiance. "You've won! Now let her go!"
Kitsune and the others stared dumbfounded at the scene before them. One moment Haruka was standing next to them witnessing the drama unfold, then a millisecond later she was standing in front of Motoko barring her landlord's path.
'The hell did she do THAT?' thought the normally fox-eyed woman, opening her eyes for the first time in lord knows how long.
"You'd better wake Naru up quick Doc. She may be the only one to calm that man down." Hikari was still trying to wake Naru with little suceess.
"I-I can try to calm s-sempai down." Offered a very nervous Shinobu. " He won't hurt me."
"Are you crazy! That aint the dork that everyone's used to you know." Stated Sara flatly. " Not even my PAPA could take him on right now.and he's REAL strong."
"I can always have my new Mecha-Tama fly over the hill to take him out." Added an unusually happy SU. The looks that everyone gave her indicated that it might not be such a good idea after all. " On second thought.."
*******
"Get out of my way Aunt Haruka!"
"No! It's Over! She's been through too much already today."
" I don't care. She should not have involved Naru."
"That wasn't her idea.it was mine alright!"
A thought had just occurred to the landlord.
"Why?" he asked. "Why did you break my promise? Why did you tell Motoko about me? You had to know what would happen if I started fighting again." anguish permeating his words.
"It wasn't supposed to be this way. No one was supposed to get hurt." She pleaded.
"Too late for that isn't it?" he asked sarcastically.
Haruka could sense where both Motoko and her nephew were injured. She can picture Motoko's face turning into one big bruise where her nephew struck her, as well as imagine what her body must be feeling as her sickness had returned. She also could see the cuts all over Keitaro's body, and can imagine how they stung as sweat covered his entire frame. To Motoko's credit, he was not without his own set of bruises. Her nephew's breathing was heavy as he stared at her.
Then she noticed his arm, hanging limply at his side.
"K-Keitaro please!" She pleaded. "Let's get you both inside the dorm. You both need Hikari to take a look at you."
"You should have thought about that before you sent Motoko after me. If it weren't for you.Naru wouldn't have gotten hurt. You are just as much to blame as if you had struck her yourself." Keitaro body tensed.
" I won't let you get to her." She stated in defiance. " I'll stop you."
He chuckled. It was tinged with malice. "You mean you will try. Yes Auntie, I know you've been training since we were kids. I can read it all over your Chi. Sensei would be proud."
"Sensei would have been proud of you too nephew, he was right--your skill is exceptional. However, he wouldn't want to see us fight like this---we're family. "
"H-Haruka." Said Motoko from behind her. "It is alright. I will accept my fate at Urashima's hand."
"No!" Haruka almost screamed. "Don't you see? If he does this, he will be no better than a bully." Then looking back at her nephew, "And I know how much he HATES bullies."
This infuriated Keitaro, suddenly remembering what happened those many years ago. 'Comparing me to a bully? A stinking Bully?' Abandoning all reason, Keitaro sprinted toward his Aunt ready to strike. Haruka stood immobile , hoping that he'd come to his senses. ' Kami, he means to do this.' She still did not move.
Keitaro readied his good arm to attack. He screamed with a primal bloodlust as he pulled his good arm back to strike a painful blow to his only Aunt.
Time seemed to slow.
He let it the fist go, aiming for Haruka's head.
She didn't move, a tear starting to form, as the fist grew closer to its mark.
"KEI- KUN! STOP!"
Keitaro's fist stopped dead, right in front of his Aunt's shocked face.
All eyes turned towards the pleading voice of the only other person on the planet who could ever get through to Keitaro as effectively as Naru Narusegawa could.
Noone had noticed that both Mutsumi and Tama-chan had finally arrived on the hill and had approached no more than a few feet from the battle site. Her hands clasped in front of her, she slowly approached her childhood friend.
"Kei-Kun?" she asked in a low, tranquil voice meant to soothe the landlord. "Please. Stop this."
Something seemed to break inside him as Mutsumi spoke. The dark part of his soul seemed to weaken as he allowed her to approach him. His fist was still in front of Haruka.
"M-mutsumi?" He started taking in his friend's calming presence. "They H- hurt Naru." His voice starting to crack as tears slowly started to form on his own face.
The rest of the girls froze, as Mutsumi seemed to have the desired effect on Keitaro. Tama-chan flew towards Naru and landed on her head. "Myuh?" was all it said as Naru's eyes started to slowly open.
"T-tama?" she asked weakly as Hikari gently told her to lay still.
"This is not like before. I am sure they meant no real harm Kei-Kun" she walked closer to Keitaro. "Even you must believe that."
"T-they hurt her." He repeated as tears flowed more freely from his face as he saw his Aunt---Really saw his Aunt and what he almost did to her.
"Oh Lord!" he said weakly as Mutsumi finally stood next to him and gently lowered the fist he had almost used to hurt his Aunt.
"I-I didn't mean.."
"Ssh Kei-Kun. " She gently turned him to face her. "It wasn't your fault. Just as it wasn't all those years ago." She brought him close to her and let him rest his head on her shoulder. She carefully rubbed his injured shoulder. "Please Kei-Kun, Let Dr. Hikari help you and Motoko get well."
Dr. Hikari, satisfied that Naru needed no further medical attention, rushed to Motoko's side and examined her as Haruka placed her head on her knees --- just as Kitsune did for Naru earlier. The rest of the Hinata girls slowly approached both groups..not wanting to stop the assistance both combatants were receiving. Naru, looking at both Keitaro and Mutsumi, didn't feel her usual jealously as she eyed the pair. She felt more of a ..deja-vu', as if this exact scene played out before.
"You ok Naru?" asked her best friend.
"No Kitsune." She answered. " I have a real BAD feeling about those two.
The old Kitsune threatened to show herself again as she grinned.
"Oh you know how Mutsumi is.all love-dovey over your boyfriend." She didn't get the reaction she expected.
Ignoring the last part of her statement, Naru simply stated.
"Kitsune, not Mutsumi and Keitaro." she noticed the confused look on her friend's face."Keitaro and Motoko..something bad is going on with those two...i can feel it."
Her heart broke as she saw Keitaro, who not too long ago was giving Motoko Aoyama more than a run for her money, sobbing on Mutsumi's shoulder. His body shuddered with remorse.
" I didn't want to hurt anyone else. T-that's why I kept it secret for so long. I didn't want to hurt anyone." He continued to weep as Mutsumi held him, careful not to hurt his dislocated arm.
Keitaro's body seemed to calm as Naru heard a familiar melody escape Mutsumi's lips. After only a few seconds, his body almost stopped shuddering all together. Naru KNEW right then that she has seen this before. She was about to approach her friends when Hikari yelled.
"Help me get her to her room quick! We don't have much time."
"W-why?" asked a frightened Shinobu.
"Motoko is dying!"
'NO!' thought Keitaro, lifting her face up from Mutsumi. 'Its happening just like in my nightmare!'
-to be continued-
Author's notes: Hello everyone. I'd like to start off by apologizing to everyone for not adding any author's notes these last couple of chapters.just been too busy with everything else.
Next off I'd like to apologize to Black-Mage010.I had noticed in his story "Make me believe" (which you should REALLY check out by the way) that he has a character named Dr. Hikari as well. Please believe me when I say that it was pure coincidence that I named mine the same. I meant no disrespect.
On a lighter note, I'd like to thank everyone who has read this story whether you reviewed or not. Its nice to know that people seem to like and support my work. I'll continue to update as soon as possible. And for those that DID review.keep them coming. I want to hear your feedback.
So what does everyone think so far? Good? Not-so-good? As always , I welcome CONSTRUCTIVE criticism.no flames plz. And please.Read and REVIEW.