CR: Well I have started my story and if you have read Alice in Wonderland the beginning will sound just like it. That is intended. It will break of into an action packed story soon. ____________________________________________________________________________ __________ Chapter 1: Down The Rabbit-Hole Silo was tired his brother had been lecturing him all day and he didn't understand a word he said. This was going to be a long evening. The sun was setting over the horizon, it had a beautiful palette of colors all smeared over the sky. Silo was so distracted that his brother, Endo had stopped talking and looked out over the hill. They sat there until only sliver of the sun remained. A small black rabbit hopped away in a striped sports jacket and a wristwatch. "Oh dear, Oh dear I really shall be late," The little black rabbit said to itself. Silo thought for a second. Do rabbits wear snazzy sports jackets? Do they wear wristwatches? Do they talk? This really was extraordinary. He ran after the little black rabbit. "Oh mister Rabbit. Where are you going Mister Rabbit?" Silo yelled as he ran after the little rabbit. Endo did not even notice him get up from his little patch of grass. "Oh a child! I'm so sorry boy but I must be going," Said the black rabbit a continued his retreat. But Silo persisted chasing the rabbit until the rabbit stopped. They had stopped in front of a poorly dug hole in the ground. The hole was so small neither of them could make it through the space. But the rabbit jumped through anyway. If the rabbit could do it then Silo could do it too. And just as the rabbit had Silo fell through. This was not an ordinary rabbit-hole it had bookshelves and shelves of many foods. Silo managed to grab a jar as he slowly; it was labeled "Orange Marmalade". It was empty so he put it on one of the shelves as he passed it. He noticed that he was falling very slowly for falling at all. Did this normally happen when people fall? Maybe time had slowed so he could save himself? He thought it absurd to lose a chance like this. So he grabbed onto a nearby shelf and climbed down. At the bottom the rabbit was sitting there waiting. For him? Probably not. Silo walked closer to the rabbit and the rabbit slowly hopped to the door. The black rabbit opened the door and Silo looked out onto what he saw. The ground outside was cracked and spires of earth towered up into the red sky. A volcano erupted in the distance. "What is this place?" Silo asked the rabbit. "This is Wonderland." The rabbit paused to sigh. ____________________________________________________________________________ __________CR: Scary, huh? Okay maybe not but it gives you a good idea of how my story is going to be. Not really horror but a lot of action is in this story. This is Silo's quest to save Wonderland.