The Right Kind of Wrong
Disclaimer: Hey you guys know I'm just a big poor loser who doesn't own anything right? Grand- moving on.
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Chapter Two The Chosen One
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Lily and Alora had spent all the rest of their vacation together. They became instant best friends, and Lily felt as if Alora was an angel sent just to help her. The night before September 1st, when they would finally start the new school year, Lily stayed at Alora's.
"Truth or dare?" Lily asked while painting her toenails. Well she wasn't exactly 'painting' her own toenails. Alora was a pureblood witch and lived in a magical house. So basically Lily named the color, and which toe and the polish sort of 'magically' appeared.
"Truth." Alora said a mouth full of pizza.
"Who do you think is the hottest guy at Hogwarts?" Lily asked grinning like a cat.
"In our year or in general?" Alora asked, obviously in deep thought of a most important subject.
"Either." Lily said.
"Oh screw it! This is easy. The Marauders of course." Alora said sipping on a glass of pumpkin juice.
"Who is that?" Lily asked obviously oblivious.
"Oh. you don't know them do you. Duh Lora!" Alora said to herself. "Well, The Marauders are the most popular boys and pranksters at Hogwarts, they're in our year, and in my school house. My house is Gryffindor by the way which you have to get into!" Alora said. She suddenly jumped up and grabbed something out of her drawer. She came back and Lily saw it was a picture.
"Ok- from the left." Alora pointed to a young teenage boy. "Sirius Black, school prankster, heart breaker, etc. He's super nice, super friendly, and super loveable- if you aren't in Slytherin." Lily looked at this 'Sirius'. And attractive was an understatement. He had slightly long black hair(think the style now), and what appeared to be brown- gray eyes. He was tall, maybe 6'0, and Lily could tell that he was built and toned.
"He's incredible." Lily said in awe. Alora laughed.
"Next this is Remus Lupin. He's so nice! He's like the ultimate boyfriend, only he never dates much. He's a real brain too. I think he's the brains behind all the pranks." Lily stared at Remus. He had light brown hair, that fell right by his ears. His eyes were golden, he too had a nice build to him, he was cute indeed.
"Nice." Lily said smiling.
"Here we have the hottest, funniest, most athletic, sarcastically hilarious, and as we prefer to call him 'God of everything hott', The James Potter. He's top of his class even though he never does homework, and he's always in detention. He's a real bad boy." Lily stared at the boy. He was probably around 5'9" or so, majorly built, and toned. He had extremely messy black hair, that covered his eyes almost. His eyes, those were entrancing. They were chocolate brown, framed by wire rimmed glasses. He was looking from underneath his hair almost. seductively. Lily shivered. Alora laughed.
"Yea, he does that to ya." She smiled. The pointed to a slightly chubby, short boy. He had blonde hair, and blue watery like eyes. He wasn't exactly ugly, but he didn't hold a small flame to the other three. "That's Peter Pettigrew. He's kinda.dumb almost. I'm not sure why he's a Marauder, but he has in fair share in girls and pranks." Lily sighed and felt against a pillow.
"Good. Gravy." She said shaking her head and grinning. "God sure did bless Hogwarts with some heavenly bodies huh?" Alora laughed.
"Bloody hell Lils- wait 'til you see them in person!" Alora and Lily burst into a fit of giggles.
"Oh tomorrow is going to be fantastic." Lily said laying down.
"Lily. I'm glad you moved here, American or not. you're really great." Alora smiled.
"Aw, tear." Lily said tracing a fake tear with her finger.
"Oh shove it you! I was trying to be sensitive and you go off ruining it!" Alora laughed and threw a pillow and Lily. Lily just grinned.
"PILLOW FIGHT!!!!!!!!!" She cried as feathers could be seen flying in the air.
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Miles away, in a mansion in Godric's Hollow were two boys. Two infamous boys named James Potter and Sirius Black.
James was sitting in his room, on his king sized bed, sprawled out like a dead animal. He was laughing while he heard singing from the bathroom.
'Yesterday. all my troubles seemed so far away! Blah blah blah blah blah blee bloo bloo, oh yesterday came sunddenly...." Sirius came through the doors, wrapped in a towel. (A/n: Sorry! But raise your hand if you'd KILL to see that! Me me!! Ok- sorry! Also- song by the beatles!!!!! Not me!!!)
"Wow Padfoot. your voice is. unique indeed." James said busting into fits of laughter.
"Oh ha ha ha, I'll have you know Hannah Daniels thinks I can sing like a god." Sirius said smiling.
"Hannah Daniels? Oh goodness Padfoot- that air-head can't tell the difference between a wand and broomstick." James said almost crying.
"Oh suuuurrree Prongs! Like Laura Bruce wasn't an air-head!" Sirius said smirking.
"Laura might have been an air-head, but she was one hell of a snog!" James said putting his fist in the air. They both rolled on the floor laughing. Sirius was gasping for air.
"I told Hannah I'd get her some boiled eggs one time for breakfast.and she- she-" Sirius was crying from laughing, "she told me she didn't eat baby chickens!! Ahahaha!" The both were rolling on the floor- literally when James looked up and faced a very upset face of an older girl. It was his older cousin, Mandi Potter.
"James Matthew Potter, get your ass off the floor and into that bed before I hex you into next week!" She yelled at him.
"Oh yea? Do it and I'll come back and kick your ass on Sunday!" James cried, him and Sirius falling to the ground again. Mandi held a smile. She looked like a female James almost. Long curly black hair, brown eyes, and a killer figure. She was a well wanted prize.
"Whatever James, Sirius- you best get some sleep. you wouldn't want to be too tired to do a prank at the feast tomorrow night would you wittle babies?" She asked pushing her bottom lip out.
"Oh bite me." Sirius said.
"I don't eat trash." Mandi said as she slammed the door.
"Ouch. and Mandi gets the point!" James cried out. He began to scream like a banshee and run around the room, reason being Sirius was well on his way to kill him.
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Lily and Alora made it to King's Cross and Platform 9 ¾ , well after Lily was finally able to run straight at a brick wall without spazzing out.
"Alright, well the girls and me usually sit here, the Marauders will come crashing in about 5 minutes after we leave." Alora said sitting down by Lily. Lily laughed nervously.
"Don't get nervous on me Lils." Alora laughed.
"I'm trying." Lily said, a small smile on her face. Just then the door slid open to find three teenage girls. Alora stood up and exchanged hugs.
"Guys, this is Lily. She just moved here from America and she's in our year. Lily- these are the girls!" Alora said moving out of the way. A short girl with long, silky black hair came up. She had saphire blue eyes, she looked like a glass doll.
"The name's Bell." She said smiling and shaking Lily's hand. The next girl to come up had straight brown hair that fell right past her shoulders. She was rather tall, reaching 5'7" , but she was built to the core. She was a quidditch star no doubt. Her light green eyes shone with laughter as she introduced herself.
"Hey. I'm Kinsey, wonderful to meet you." She said, her accent was stronger than any other Lily had heard. The last girl had strawberry hair, and eyes so dark they looked black. She was sort of scary to look at first, but then Lily could feel something in her. It was like something was telling her this girl was something special. The girl wasn't extremely skinny, but rather average. She stepped forward and grinned.
"Hey Lily, I'm Leah, but the girls call me Lee." She said as she touched Lily's hand. Lily felt a vibe go up her arm and into her chest she gasped. Alora laughed.
"Yea, she does that. Lee here is a seer. Don't look straight into those black holes she calls eyes- she'll tell all your secrets." Alora whispered.
"Do not you hag!" Leah cried hitting Alora in the head with her purse. The compartment started laughing and they all settled down. They started talking about quidditch, music, guys, and Hogwarts in general.
"Dumbledore is bloody awesome." Kinsey said eating a chocolate frog.
"Oh but Professor Tyler, the potions master, ugh. Total prick!" Bell said laughing.
"Oh baby! Don't forget Professor Warren, our Care of Magical Creatures teacher- that man is an angel! I'm taking- razor fine. I could eat that man alive." Leah said. The girls all started laughing when the door slid open again.
The sight that Lily saw caught her breath in her throat. She could have sworn her heart stopped beating. There she was sitting in a compartment of awesome girls, when the finest guys she ever saw opened the door.
"Hello ladies." Came the voice of Sirius Black.
"Hey Sirius." "Sup Si-man?" "Hey man." Were three responses.
"And who are you my lovely lady?" Sirius asked getting on one knee and kissing Lily's hand. She blushed.
"Cut the shit Sirius- this is Lily, new girl from the U.S." Alora said. Sirius smiled.
"Nice to meet you flower." He said. "You too." Lily replied.
"How rude Padfoot! You didn't even introduce your best mates!" came a voice from behind Sirius.
"Hello lovely Lily, I'm Remus Lupin." A boy came up and kissed her other hand. She smiled at him.
"And I, beautiful Lily-of-the-valley am James Potter." James said bowing. Lily laughed and replied with a hello.
"And this Peter." Remus said pointing to a small boy in the corner.
"'Sup?" he asked. Lily just nodded to him.
"Padfoot? How incredibly gay is that?" Alora said.
"Yea. What the hell is up with those names anyways?" Kinsey asked the boys. Bell laughed and in the best guy voice she could muster up. " Yo Moony, Me and Prongs are headed to scope some chicks. You up for it?" The girls howled with laughter. Sirius sighed dramatically.
"We've told you a thousand times. When we were little we decided to start a secret club. We created these names and decided they would make us cool. So bada-bing, bada-boom here we are." Sirius said clapping his hands together.
"Sure sure." Bell said waving her hand away.
"It's going to be a long train ride." Leah said as James laid his head on her shoulder.
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The girls and Marauders found their way to the carriages, and into the Great Hall. Lily was told to sit at whichever table she liked until after the first years were sorted. So obviously, she sat at the Gryffindor table with her new friends.
Whispers were ignited as she walked through the hall. Lily heard cat- calls and various words like " New, hot, popular, and a word she wasn't familiar with. mudblood." The sorting started, and seemed as if it was never going to end.
"This is hell- I have been sent to hell!" Sirius kept saying over and over.
"Shut up Sirius, you're just mad because you haven't eaten in one whole hour." Bell said laughing.
"I know Bell- he'll go raving mad soon." James said smirking. Finally the group heard the last name 'Zabini, Ken' be sorted into Hufflepuff. Lily saw an older man, with a long white beard stand up. He had moon-framed glasses, and looking friendly indeed.
"Well, before we all fill ourselves, we have a new student this year. Lily Evans is starting her 5th year, and is from America. I trust all of you will help her feel welcomed. And Miss Evans if you wouldn't mind coming up here and being sorted."
Lily stood nervously and began to walk to the front of the hall. She heard a catcall then slap and a "Sirius you retard!" come from Alora. She silently laughed and she sat on the stool. The hat jumped and so did she as she listened to what it said.
"Ah, Miss Evans.welcome, welcome. Let's see.courage? Yes, most definitely. Loyalty I see too. Hmm. Hufflepuff? No, no. Oh my. what's this? A prophecy has been told of you my dear. oh yes. I see it now. You are the chosen one. so you must be put with him- yes. I know. GRYFFINDOR!" the hat finished and Lily walked back to the Gryffindor table, listening to the wild cheers, smiling, and going completely crazy in her mind.
"The chosen one?" She asked herself as she sat down.
"What?" Leah asked her. Lily wouldn't look at her eyes.
"Nothing, nothing. I'm starved." And she began to eat. She oblivious to the eyes that watched her. One of her new friend, one of a professor, and one of an enemy.
"That's her." Dumbledore whispered to himself. "Most definitely."
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WOW! Chappie two done too!! How do you guys like it? huh?Do ya? Do ya? DO YA? Lol. I hope so! PLEAAAAAAASSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEE review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm not sure how crazy you guys are for it. so review and tell!!!!
Okie doke Thanks are in order tooooooooo-
Anarane Anwamane- Thanks so much for reviewing!!! Glad to know you like it.
peeves'twinsister - thanks bunches!! Willow is kick-bum huh? Love Val Kilmer in it- lol. But yea thanks!!
LimeJuiceTub- um ok. Yea I kinda told everyone it wasn't very original.I'm not much on creativity and I know it's not the best- I like fail English every semester and all. And the 'Lilian' dealio- dude I dunno what her name was, everyone says that so I kind of went along with it. Um, yea but I was kind of put down and even though you said to keep writing. I kind of don't want to if everyone thinks the same as you. And I do have a beta- reader.sort of, my friend comes over and re-reads everything. So thanks I guess.
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Disclaimer: Hey you guys know I'm just a big poor loser who doesn't own anything right? Grand- moving on.
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Chapter Two The Chosen One
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Lily and Alora had spent all the rest of their vacation together. They became instant best friends, and Lily felt as if Alora was an angel sent just to help her. The night before September 1st, when they would finally start the new school year, Lily stayed at Alora's.
"Truth or dare?" Lily asked while painting her toenails. Well she wasn't exactly 'painting' her own toenails. Alora was a pureblood witch and lived in a magical house. So basically Lily named the color, and which toe and the polish sort of 'magically' appeared.
"Truth." Alora said a mouth full of pizza.
"Who do you think is the hottest guy at Hogwarts?" Lily asked grinning like a cat.
"In our year or in general?" Alora asked, obviously in deep thought of a most important subject.
"Either." Lily said.
"Oh screw it! This is easy. The Marauders of course." Alora said sipping on a glass of pumpkin juice.
"Who is that?" Lily asked obviously oblivious.
"Oh. you don't know them do you. Duh Lora!" Alora said to herself. "Well, The Marauders are the most popular boys and pranksters at Hogwarts, they're in our year, and in my school house. My house is Gryffindor by the way which you have to get into!" Alora said. She suddenly jumped up and grabbed something out of her drawer. She came back and Lily saw it was a picture.
"Ok- from the left." Alora pointed to a young teenage boy. "Sirius Black, school prankster, heart breaker, etc. He's super nice, super friendly, and super loveable- if you aren't in Slytherin." Lily looked at this 'Sirius'. And attractive was an understatement. He had slightly long black hair(think the style now), and what appeared to be brown- gray eyes. He was tall, maybe 6'0, and Lily could tell that he was built and toned.
"He's incredible." Lily said in awe. Alora laughed.
"Next this is Remus Lupin. He's so nice! He's like the ultimate boyfriend, only he never dates much. He's a real brain too. I think he's the brains behind all the pranks." Lily stared at Remus. He had light brown hair, that fell right by his ears. His eyes were golden, he too had a nice build to him, he was cute indeed.
"Nice." Lily said smiling.
"Here we have the hottest, funniest, most athletic, sarcastically hilarious, and as we prefer to call him 'God of everything hott', The James Potter. He's top of his class even though he never does homework, and he's always in detention. He's a real bad boy." Lily stared at the boy. He was probably around 5'9" or so, majorly built, and toned. He had extremely messy black hair, that covered his eyes almost. His eyes, those were entrancing. They were chocolate brown, framed by wire rimmed glasses. He was looking from underneath his hair almost. seductively. Lily shivered. Alora laughed.
"Yea, he does that to ya." She smiled. The pointed to a slightly chubby, short boy. He had blonde hair, and blue watery like eyes. He wasn't exactly ugly, but he didn't hold a small flame to the other three. "That's Peter Pettigrew. He's kinda.dumb almost. I'm not sure why he's a Marauder, but he has in fair share in girls and pranks." Lily sighed and felt against a pillow.
"Good. Gravy." She said shaking her head and grinning. "God sure did bless Hogwarts with some heavenly bodies huh?" Alora laughed.
"Bloody hell Lils- wait 'til you see them in person!" Alora and Lily burst into a fit of giggles.
"Oh tomorrow is going to be fantastic." Lily said laying down.
"Lily. I'm glad you moved here, American or not. you're really great." Alora smiled.
"Aw, tear." Lily said tracing a fake tear with her finger.
"Oh shove it you! I was trying to be sensitive and you go off ruining it!" Alora laughed and threw a pillow and Lily. Lily just grinned.
"PILLOW FIGHT!!!!!!!!!" She cried as feathers could be seen flying in the air.
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Miles away, in a mansion in Godric's Hollow were two boys. Two infamous boys named James Potter and Sirius Black.
James was sitting in his room, on his king sized bed, sprawled out like a dead animal. He was laughing while he heard singing from the bathroom.
'Yesterday. all my troubles seemed so far away! Blah blah blah blah blah blee bloo bloo, oh yesterday came sunddenly...." Sirius came through the doors, wrapped in a towel. (A/n: Sorry! But raise your hand if you'd KILL to see that! Me me!! Ok- sorry! Also- song by the beatles!!!!! Not me!!!)
"Wow Padfoot. your voice is. unique indeed." James said busting into fits of laughter.
"Oh ha ha ha, I'll have you know Hannah Daniels thinks I can sing like a god." Sirius said smiling.
"Hannah Daniels? Oh goodness Padfoot- that air-head can't tell the difference between a wand and broomstick." James said almost crying.
"Oh suuuurrree Prongs! Like Laura Bruce wasn't an air-head!" Sirius said smirking.
"Laura might have been an air-head, but she was one hell of a snog!" James said putting his fist in the air. They both rolled on the floor laughing. Sirius was gasping for air.
"I told Hannah I'd get her some boiled eggs one time for breakfast.and she- she-" Sirius was crying from laughing, "she told me she didn't eat baby chickens!! Ahahaha!" The both were rolling on the floor- literally when James looked up and faced a very upset face of an older girl. It was his older cousin, Mandi Potter.
"James Matthew Potter, get your ass off the floor and into that bed before I hex you into next week!" She yelled at him.
"Oh yea? Do it and I'll come back and kick your ass on Sunday!" James cried, him and Sirius falling to the ground again. Mandi held a smile. She looked like a female James almost. Long curly black hair, brown eyes, and a killer figure. She was a well wanted prize.
"Whatever James, Sirius- you best get some sleep. you wouldn't want to be too tired to do a prank at the feast tomorrow night would you wittle babies?" She asked pushing her bottom lip out.
"Oh bite me." Sirius said.
"I don't eat trash." Mandi said as she slammed the door.
"Ouch. and Mandi gets the point!" James cried out. He began to scream like a banshee and run around the room, reason being Sirius was well on his way to kill him.
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Lily and Alora made it to King's Cross and Platform 9 ¾ , well after Lily was finally able to run straight at a brick wall without spazzing out.
"Alright, well the girls and me usually sit here, the Marauders will come crashing in about 5 minutes after we leave." Alora said sitting down by Lily. Lily laughed nervously.
"Don't get nervous on me Lils." Alora laughed.
"I'm trying." Lily said, a small smile on her face. Just then the door slid open to find three teenage girls. Alora stood up and exchanged hugs.
"Guys, this is Lily. She just moved here from America and she's in our year. Lily- these are the girls!" Alora said moving out of the way. A short girl with long, silky black hair came up. She had saphire blue eyes, she looked like a glass doll.
"The name's Bell." She said smiling and shaking Lily's hand. The next girl to come up had straight brown hair that fell right past her shoulders. She was rather tall, reaching 5'7" , but she was built to the core. She was a quidditch star no doubt. Her light green eyes shone with laughter as she introduced herself.
"Hey. I'm Kinsey, wonderful to meet you." She said, her accent was stronger than any other Lily had heard. The last girl had strawberry hair, and eyes so dark they looked black. She was sort of scary to look at first, but then Lily could feel something in her. It was like something was telling her this girl was something special. The girl wasn't extremely skinny, but rather average. She stepped forward and grinned.
"Hey Lily, I'm Leah, but the girls call me Lee." She said as she touched Lily's hand. Lily felt a vibe go up her arm and into her chest she gasped. Alora laughed.
"Yea, she does that. Lee here is a seer. Don't look straight into those black holes she calls eyes- she'll tell all your secrets." Alora whispered.
"Do not you hag!" Leah cried hitting Alora in the head with her purse. The compartment started laughing and they all settled down. They started talking about quidditch, music, guys, and Hogwarts in general.
"Dumbledore is bloody awesome." Kinsey said eating a chocolate frog.
"Oh but Professor Tyler, the potions master, ugh. Total prick!" Bell said laughing.
"Oh baby! Don't forget Professor Warren, our Care of Magical Creatures teacher- that man is an angel! I'm taking- razor fine. I could eat that man alive." Leah said. The girls all started laughing when the door slid open again.
The sight that Lily saw caught her breath in her throat. She could have sworn her heart stopped beating. There she was sitting in a compartment of awesome girls, when the finest guys she ever saw opened the door.
"Hello ladies." Came the voice of Sirius Black.
"Hey Sirius." "Sup Si-man?" "Hey man." Were three responses.
"And who are you my lovely lady?" Sirius asked getting on one knee and kissing Lily's hand. She blushed.
"Cut the shit Sirius- this is Lily, new girl from the U.S." Alora said. Sirius smiled.
"Nice to meet you flower." He said. "You too." Lily replied.
"How rude Padfoot! You didn't even introduce your best mates!" came a voice from behind Sirius.
"Hello lovely Lily, I'm Remus Lupin." A boy came up and kissed her other hand. She smiled at him.
"And I, beautiful Lily-of-the-valley am James Potter." James said bowing. Lily laughed and replied with a hello.
"And this Peter." Remus said pointing to a small boy in the corner.
"'Sup?" he asked. Lily just nodded to him.
"Padfoot? How incredibly gay is that?" Alora said.
"Yea. What the hell is up with those names anyways?" Kinsey asked the boys. Bell laughed and in the best guy voice she could muster up. " Yo Moony, Me and Prongs are headed to scope some chicks. You up for it?" The girls howled with laughter. Sirius sighed dramatically.
"We've told you a thousand times. When we were little we decided to start a secret club. We created these names and decided they would make us cool. So bada-bing, bada-boom here we are." Sirius said clapping his hands together.
"Sure sure." Bell said waving her hand away.
"It's going to be a long train ride." Leah said as James laid his head on her shoulder.
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The girls and Marauders found their way to the carriages, and into the Great Hall. Lily was told to sit at whichever table she liked until after the first years were sorted. So obviously, she sat at the Gryffindor table with her new friends.
Whispers were ignited as she walked through the hall. Lily heard cat- calls and various words like " New, hot, popular, and a word she wasn't familiar with. mudblood." The sorting started, and seemed as if it was never going to end.
"This is hell- I have been sent to hell!" Sirius kept saying over and over.
"Shut up Sirius, you're just mad because you haven't eaten in one whole hour." Bell said laughing.
"I know Bell- he'll go raving mad soon." James said smirking. Finally the group heard the last name 'Zabini, Ken' be sorted into Hufflepuff. Lily saw an older man, with a long white beard stand up. He had moon-framed glasses, and looking friendly indeed.
"Well, before we all fill ourselves, we have a new student this year. Lily Evans is starting her 5th year, and is from America. I trust all of you will help her feel welcomed. And Miss Evans if you wouldn't mind coming up here and being sorted."
Lily stood nervously and began to walk to the front of the hall. She heard a catcall then slap and a "Sirius you retard!" come from Alora. She silently laughed and she sat on the stool. The hat jumped and so did she as she listened to what it said.
"Ah, Miss Evans.welcome, welcome. Let's see.courage? Yes, most definitely. Loyalty I see too. Hmm. Hufflepuff? No, no. Oh my. what's this? A prophecy has been told of you my dear. oh yes. I see it now. You are the chosen one. so you must be put with him- yes. I know. GRYFFINDOR!" the hat finished and Lily walked back to the Gryffindor table, listening to the wild cheers, smiling, and going completely crazy in her mind.
"The chosen one?" She asked herself as she sat down.
"What?" Leah asked her. Lily wouldn't look at her eyes.
"Nothing, nothing. I'm starved." And she began to eat. She oblivious to the eyes that watched her. One of her new friend, one of a professor, and one of an enemy.
"That's her." Dumbledore whispered to himself. "Most definitely."
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WOW! Chappie two done too!! How do you guys like it? huh?Do ya? Do ya? DO YA? Lol. I hope so! PLEAAAAAAASSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEE review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm not sure how crazy you guys are for it. so review and tell!!!!
Okie doke Thanks are in order tooooooooo-
Anarane Anwamane- Thanks so much for reviewing!!! Glad to know you like it.
peeves'twinsister - thanks bunches!! Willow is kick-bum huh? Love Val Kilmer in it- lol. But yea thanks!!
LimeJuiceTub- um ok. Yea I kinda told everyone it wasn't very original.I'm not much on creativity and I know it's not the best- I like fail English every semester and all. And the 'Lilian' dealio- dude I dunno what her name was, everyone says that so I kind of went along with it. Um, yea but I was kind of put down and even though you said to keep writing. I kind of don't want to if everyone thinks the same as you. And I do have a beta- reader.sort of, my friend comes over and re-reads everything. So thanks I guess.
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