CR: Sorry how the first chapter was a little messed up in paragraphs I'll
try to make it easier to read this time.
Chapter 2: The
Pool Of Tears
Silo didn't know what to think. Was this place always like this? Did this happen recently? The little black rabbit plodded over the cracked earth. Could this be called Earth? Apparently it was safe so he followed the rabbit.
They arrived at a little village. The village was directly under one of the coiled spires, protecting it from the nearby volcano. The rabbit walked up to a lizard standing nearby. Silo looked at the two them standing there they were both more than half his height. It was kind of scary. "Bill," Said the rabbit to lizard, "I have a child ere who may be able to remove the Keyblade."
"So this is a child?" Said Bill with a Scottish accent, "I've never seen one,"
"If we'd seen one before we would have the Keyblade by now," Exclaimed the rabbit.
"So lets take him to the pool of tears" Said Bill. The two took him right up to the spire and pointed to a rippling mirror.
"This is the Pool of Tears, Silo," The rabbit began, " It is the only hope Wonderland has. You must pull the Keyblade from the pool and defeat The Card Ace," Silo assumed the Card Ace was he one who made this place looks so dead.
Silo sunk his hand into the pool in the face of the spire. It felt like magic jelly, this was probably how it didn't spill all over. Silo groped his hand around in the liquid. Why could only a child do this? Was it a spell? He finally felt something; it was cold and hard. He pulled it out. He found himself holding a large key. It was metallic silver at the key part. The handle was a golden metal with a chain on it. Dangling on the chain was a symbol of three circles joined together. It looked kind of like Mickey Mouse's head.
All of the sudden the column that held the pool began to fall. It would destroy the village if it hit ground. Silo decided to put the Keyblade to the test. He jumped up as high as he could on the spire and slashed at it with the Keyblade. Strangely like he was using a powerful sword the spire broke through and missed the village by an inch.
Silo felt very relieved. CR: He will fight some enemies in the next chapter so this story won't stay boring for long.
Silo didn't know what to think. Was this place always like this? Did this happen recently? The little black rabbit plodded over the cracked earth. Could this be called Earth? Apparently it was safe so he followed the rabbit.
They arrived at a little village. The village was directly under one of the coiled spires, protecting it from the nearby volcano. The rabbit walked up to a lizard standing nearby. Silo looked at the two them standing there they were both more than half his height. It was kind of scary. "Bill," Said the rabbit to lizard, "I have a child ere who may be able to remove the Keyblade."
"So this is a child?" Said Bill with a Scottish accent, "I've never seen one,"
"If we'd seen one before we would have the Keyblade by now," Exclaimed the rabbit.
"So lets take him to the pool of tears" Said Bill. The two took him right up to the spire and pointed to a rippling mirror.
"This is the Pool of Tears, Silo," The rabbit began, " It is the only hope Wonderland has. You must pull the Keyblade from the pool and defeat The Card Ace," Silo assumed the Card Ace was he one who made this place looks so dead.
Silo sunk his hand into the pool in the face of the spire. It felt like magic jelly, this was probably how it didn't spill all over. Silo groped his hand around in the liquid. Why could only a child do this? Was it a spell? He finally felt something; it was cold and hard. He pulled it out. He found himself holding a large key. It was metallic silver at the key part. The handle was a golden metal with a chain on it. Dangling on the chain was a symbol of three circles joined together. It looked kind of like Mickey Mouse's head.
All of the sudden the column that held the pool began to fall. It would destroy the village if it hit ground. Silo decided to put the Keyblade to the test. He jumped up as high as he could on the spire and slashed at it with the Keyblade. Strangely like he was using a powerful sword the spire broke through and missed the village by an inch.
Silo felt very relieved. CR: He will fight some enemies in the next chapter so this story won't stay boring for long.