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checked my grammar.
A/N: Ummmm.... Ok I have nothing to say...this is going to be a short chapter oh and Wild-Melody Yeah he's going to clean up his act but it will be after the accident and will be a little too late...and the accident will be in this chapter so read! and then review!
--Sorry haven't written in a while I just moved again from Japan to Madagascar--
Ch. 2: The Party
Lars' friends invited him to a party that night there would be a lot of guys there and a lot of booze. Lars felt guilty for saying yes he knew deep down he shouldn't but he needed to keep up his reputation of being 'cool .' He'd been selected as driver because most of his friends had their licenses taken away.
They got to the party around 10:00 PM, little did Lars know that his brother was at a friends house down the street Twister and Otto were fighting over something dumb of course and Twister decided he would go and find his brother and get him to take him home, he knew his brother was probably down the street as there was loud music and lots of older guys and girls around so he went to go check it out sure enough there was Lars, not only was he drunk but he was their smoking a joint! Twister sighed at the sight he didn't like what Lars was doing. Lars noticed Lars standing there and asked him what the hell he was doing there he told him about the fight him and Otto had Lars' friends told him they were going to a different party.
Lars already felt sick and decided he'd just take Twister home with him they climbed into the car it was only about a 10 minute drive so Twister didn't bother to put his seat belt on. Lars started the car and took off down the road. Twister had never been in a car while Lars was driving he wanted to tell Lars to stop and to let him walk he was going way to fast it was raining out and Twister couldn't see out the front window as Lars was drunk and wouldn't put the windshield wipers on, this made Twister think of how well he could see out the window people were beeping he told Lars he should slow down he answered "what are you talking 'bout I'm not going fast at all." Twister could see the street sign of his street he felt relived. Suddenly there seemed to be a big blue blur out of the front window he screamed louder then he had ever screamed before. He felt a pain shooting threw his shoulder and then blacked out.
A/N: Wow, I didn't realize how hard it was to write an accident like that. I know it was pretty sucky but the chapters to come will be better :)
~ Cassidy
A/N: Ummmm.... Ok I have nothing to say...this is going to be a short chapter oh and Wild-Melody Yeah he's going to clean up his act but it will be after the accident and will be a little too late...and the accident will be in this chapter so read! and then review!
--Sorry haven't written in a while I just moved again from Japan to Madagascar--
Ch. 2: The Party
Lars' friends invited him to a party that night there would be a lot of guys there and a lot of booze. Lars felt guilty for saying yes he knew deep down he shouldn't but he needed to keep up his reputation of being 'cool .' He'd been selected as driver because most of his friends had their licenses taken away.
They got to the party around 10:00 PM, little did Lars know that his brother was at a friends house down the street Twister and Otto were fighting over something dumb of course and Twister decided he would go and find his brother and get him to take him home, he knew his brother was probably down the street as there was loud music and lots of older guys and girls around so he went to go check it out sure enough there was Lars, not only was he drunk but he was their smoking a joint! Twister sighed at the sight he didn't like what Lars was doing. Lars noticed Lars standing there and asked him what the hell he was doing there he told him about the fight him and Otto had Lars' friends told him they were going to a different party.
Lars already felt sick and decided he'd just take Twister home with him they climbed into the car it was only about a 10 minute drive so Twister didn't bother to put his seat belt on. Lars started the car and took off down the road. Twister had never been in a car while Lars was driving he wanted to tell Lars to stop and to let him walk he was going way to fast it was raining out and Twister couldn't see out the front window as Lars was drunk and wouldn't put the windshield wipers on, this made Twister think of how well he could see out the window people were beeping he told Lars he should slow down he answered "what are you talking 'bout I'm not going fast at all." Twister could see the street sign of his street he felt relived. Suddenly there seemed to be a big blue blur out of the front window he screamed louder then he had ever screamed before. He felt a pain shooting threw his shoulder and then blacked out.
A/N: Wow, I didn't realize how hard it was to write an accident like that. I know it was pretty sucky but the chapters to come will be better :)
~ Cassidy