I'm bbbbbbbbbbaaaaaaaaaccccccccccccccckkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk!!!!! Sorry, I just couldn't resist .. I got a
few good reviews, and I'm on top of the world . Anyway ..Here's the deal ..the RK characters, sadly
for me, lucky for them, don't belong to me Who knows what I would make them do .O.o Hope you
like this is the first time I'm typing off the top of my head not having it be on paper . Oh boy .Kami,
I pray for this chapter to be logical .
I have a few thank you's and what not to make.....please....you don't have to read them....just...I feel it is
something I should do....Things I would never tell someone in person....for...fear of.....hm.....I
dunno...just read...^^
These are in no particular order.....just...whatever...I am referring to fanfiction.net pen names, whenever
I can....
First, and foremost....
Sakabatou-tetsusaiga: Hm....so much to say....I really hope I get the chance to speak to you face to face
one day...I think it would be very entertaining....^^ Thanks is an understatement....I could never thank
you enough.... you have helped me a lot in my writing....and, you listen to me...which is more than I can
say about a lot of people! I think we can relate, somehow....I do want you to know...I consider you as a
best friend....in an odd way....I just don't think I could just...tell you. ^^
Misao-chan: What to say? I love you, you know that...yet...you are so....frustrating!!! Anyway....we are
best friends forever...remember that, weasel...:P
Shii-chan...and Lauren-chan....: Beware.....Tomoe is not done murdering Kaoru yet....muhahaha!!!
Reviewer people: You have made me sooo happy.....I wouldn't write, if you guys didn't like it.....
Anyway...I'm done....lol...^^
Chapter 3:
Kaoru did not reply to Kenshin .she didn't even hear him.
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Kenshin was frantically calling her name out to her, praying for a response. He noticed she was still
breathing, and he sighed out of relief. He looked into her eyes, but they were closed. He, after all of that,
realized she was sleeping. He smiled, and tried to shake her a bit, to move her into her own futon. She
would not wake. She seemed to be in a deep slumber, though there were tears still wet on her cheeks.
He brushed them off gently. He tried to move her into her room himself, but she was clutching onto his
gi, and could not be pried off. Even if he tried which he didn't. He smiled, looking down at the angel
sleeping in his arms. She smelled of jasmine She looked .so beautiful .
He took the ribbon out of her hair. He thought that would be most comfortable for her. He also thought
she looked prettier that way, but would never dare tell her, for fear of being struck. He smiled, the young
lady before him, was perfect. So perfect, she could never love him. And he could never expect her to. He
was so unworthy of her ..
He did, finally, get her to let go of him, and he put her in her futon. He didn't want her waking up in his
arms. He probably get slapped and locked in the shed .She call him a hentai, among other names he
didn't even want to imagine. He watched her sleep. He made her tea, then came back with it. She was
still asleep.
He brushed the hair from her face gently. She had been asleep for a few hours, not moving, not
murmuring; nothing. The only sign that she was still alive, was her breathing. He knew why she was
sleeping like this. He had also been up late; not even sleeping at all most of the nights that week. He
heard someone up. He looked around the entire Dojo, not finding any signs of an intruder .. It must
have been her. He cursed himself in his mind .that would have been the perfect opportunity to be with
her .
He shook his head, freeing himself of the thought. He knew he would have to let her go someday .
Someday not so soon, he hoped. He then winced at his extreme selfishness. His deepest desire was for
her to be happy .and, whether it was with or, most likely, without him, it
wouldn't .couldn't .shouldn't matter
He gazed upon her for what seemed like only five minutes but was really hours. She looked so calm; so
peaceful. She looked like a goddess. Though, her calmness made him uneasy. She looked like she was
dead if Kenshin couldn't hear hear her breathing he would have sworn she was dead. He took her
wrist, and took her pulse once more. He did that often, as if she was as delicate as a porcelain doll, that
would at any moment break, leaving him nothing but broken shards. Remnants of a love, to never
form.....
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Heh.... more of my stuff in this chapter, then story....well.....I hope you liked it.....
I like my ellipses!!! It.....helps.....put...spaces...in...things....
Till next time,
~*Kaoru-dono*~
few good reviews, and I'm on top of the world . Anyway ..Here's the deal ..the RK characters, sadly
for me, lucky for them, don't belong to me Who knows what I would make them do .O.o Hope you
like this is the first time I'm typing off the top of my head not having it be on paper . Oh boy .Kami,
I pray for this chapter to be logical .
I have a few thank you's and what not to make.....please....you don't have to read them....just...I feel it is
something I should do....Things I would never tell someone in person....for...fear of.....hm.....I
dunno...just read...^^
These are in no particular order.....just...whatever...I am referring to fanfiction.net pen names, whenever
I can....
First, and foremost....
Sakabatou-tetsusaiga: Hm....so much to say....I really hope I get the chance to speak to you face to face
one day...I think it would be very entertaining....^^ Thanks is an understatement....I could never thank
you enough.... you have helped me a lot in my writing....and, you listen to me...which is more than I can
say about a lot of people! I think we can relate, somehow....I do want you to know...I consider you as a
best friend....in an odd way....I just don't think I could just...tell you. ^^
Misao-chan: What to say? I love you, you know that...yet...you are so....frustrating!!! Anyway....we are
best friends forever...remember that, weasel...:P
Shii-chan...and Lauren-chan....: Beware.....Tomoe is not done murdering Kaoru yet....muhahaha!!!
Reviewer people: You have made me sooo happy.....I wouldn't write, if you guys didn't like it.....
Anyway...I'm done....lol...^^
Chapter 3:
Kaoru did not reply to Kenshin .she didn't even hear him.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Kenshin was frantically calling her name out to her, praying for a response. He noticed she was still
breathing, and he sighed out of relief. He looked into her eyes, but they were closed. He, after all of that,
realized she was sleeping. He smiled, and tried to shake her a bit, to move her into her own futon. She
would not wake. She seemed to be in a deep slumber, though there were tears still wet on her cheeks.
He brushed them off gently. He tried to move her into her room himself, but she was clutching onto his
gi, and could not be pried off. Even if he tried which he didn't. He smiled, looking down at the angel
sleeping in his arms. She smelled of jasmine She looked .so beautiful .
He took the ribbon out of her hair. He thought that would be most comfortable for her. He also thought
she looked prettier that way, but would never dare tell her, for fear of being struck. He smiled, the young
lady before him, was perfect. So perfect, she could never love him. And he could never expect her to. He
was so unworthy of her ..
He did, finally, get her to let go of him, and he put her in her futon. He didn't want her waking up in his
arms. He probably get slapped and locked in the shed .She call him a hentai, among other names he
didn't even want to imagine. He watched her sleep. He made her tea, then came back with it. She was
still asleep.
He brushed the hair from her face gently. She had been asleep for a few hours, not moving, not
murmuring; nothing. The only sign that she was still alive, was her breathing. He knew why she was
sleeping like this. He had also been up late; not even sleeping at all most of the nights that week. He
heard someone up. He looked around the entire Dojo, not finding any signs of an intruder .. It must
have been her. He cursed himself in his mind .that would have been the perfect opportunity to be with
her .
He shook his head, freeing himself of the thought. He knew he would have to let her go someday .
Someday not so soon, he hoped. He then winced at his extreme selfishness. His deepest desire was for
her to be happy .and, whether it was with or, most likely, without him, it
wouldn't .couldn't .shouldn't matter
He gazed upon her for what seemed like only five minutes but was really hours. She looked so calm; so
peaceful. She looked like a goddess. Though, her calmness made him uneasy. She looked like she was
dead if Kenshin couldn't hear hear her breathing he would have sworn she was dead. He took her
wrist, and took her pulse once more. He did that often, as if she was as delicate as a porcelain doll, that
would at any moment break, leaving him nothing but broken shards. Remnants of a love, to never
form.....
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
~
Heh.... more of my stuff in this chapter, then story....well.....I hope you liked it.....
I like my ellipses!!! It.....helps.....put...spaces...in...things....
Till next time,
~*Kaoru-dono*~