Ok! Sorry about not updating for awhile.. I've been studying for this exam
and had to deal with life in general which is hard enough. Anyways here is
chapter 4.Oh yeah and I don't own FLCL or the 7-eleven.
CH4 Atomsk Arrives!
-7-Eleven-
Haruko jumped off her vespa and in one movement had pulled out her guitar and hit Canti on the head with it. Pieces of Canti's head shattered everywhere and Canti started glowing red..
-Back at the car-
Mammimi and Naota were speeding through the town toward 7-eleven and it seemed like things were going a lot better than the last time when everything went wrong..Mammimi overflowed (I honestly don't know what they mean by that but it seemed like a headache or something) naota realized in less than a second that they were going about 70 something mph and if nobody was driving the car they would crash..As this was registered in his thoughts he saw a flashing red light up ahead.
Naota pushed Mammimi out of the way and jumped in the front seat.and remembered he didn't know how to drive.and that the pedals to the car were jammed. He would have to drive somehow or just steer out of the way of everything..
-7-eleven-
The hyperventilating store clerk had just started to feel better when he thought he saw headlights coming toward his store..
*car crashes through broken 7-eleven window*
*store clerk passes out*
*Naota gets out of the totaled car*
Naota: Haruko do you like slurpees that much?!
No of course I don't!! Yelled Haruko
*Mammimi stumbles out of the car*
NAOTA YOURE TOO LATE!! I'M GONNA GET HIS POWER!! Yelled haruko.
Canti began to glow even redder and things in the store began to come off the ground..it was as if gravity itself had disappeared. Then, it happened. Canti ate haruko. Everybody was silent.almost like time had stopped..and then out of canti's head (TV screen whatever.) was haruko glowing completely red. She stared at Naota and Mammimi for a split second before completely destroying the 7 eleven they were in with a single thrust of her hand. Naota remembered doing the same to the giant hand..
-Meanwhile at the Nandaba bakery- (It's another sub episode of the pervert and his father!)
Kamon.I am disappointed in you...you have been watching horrible accursed things..WITHOUT TELLING ME!!
Father why don't you go check on Naota...I am sure he is calling you right now..mumbled Kamon clearly trying to draw attention away from him.
FOOL!! Don't you know! Naota is at that bridge!!
No father! Naota is sleeping! It is 2 AM right now!
As this slowly registered into their perverted minds Kamon realized his car was gone..
-The destroyed 7-eleven-
Everything was flying. The force of Haruko's attack had destroyed 7 eleven and forced them all into the air (Except for Haruko of course) and in different directions. Through all the dust and smoke and debris nobody could see Haruko slip away into the darkness..With a mighty thud Naota, Mammimi, Canti, the store clerk, the vespa, the car, and all the debris fell to the dirt that was 7-eleven. (Which I don't own.)
While all this happened the all powerful Haruko was destroying the city of Mabase. She headed toward the Medical Mechanica factory iron which was still tipped over on the side of the hill. She would kill every employee for taking something she wanted..for making her go through all the crap she went through..and most of all; she would kill them all for imprisoning Atomsk. She swore on her life that with her new gained power she would make them suffer..hell she didn't have anything to do; maybe she would start using Atomsk's power to steal planets...
As she ran faster than her own vespa, she sped through the city towards the factory she would make pay. She laughed knowing that soon she would get her revenge. Soon she would make them pay.
Meanwhile inside the medical mechanica factory 20 robot canti's awoke and a giant eyebrow twitched...
Was this chapter any better? If you have any suggestions just tell me in your review! I am open to all suggestions unless.please review.
Oh yeah and in the next chapter Commander Amarao and Kitsurabami appear and Haruko has to fight twenty identical Canti's designed to fight. Hope you enjoy it!
CH4 Atomsk Arrives!
-7-Eleven-
Haruko jumped off her vespa and in one movement had pulled out her guitar and hit Canti on the head with it. Pieces of Canti's head shattered everywhere and Canti started glowing red..
-Back at the car-
Mammimi and Naota were speeding through the town toward 7-eleven and it seemed like things were going a lot better than the last time when everything went wrong..Mammimi overflowed (I honestly don't know what they mean by that but it seemed like a headache or something) naota realized in less than a second that they were going about 70 something mph and if nobody was driving the car they would crash..As this was registered in his thoughts he saw a flashing red light up ahead.
Naota pushed Mammimi out of the way and jumped in the front seat.and remembered he didn't know how to drive.and that the pedals to the car were jammed. He would have to drive somehow or just steer out of the way of everything..
-7-eleven-
The hyperventilating store clerk had just started to feel better when he thought he saw headlights coming toward his store..
*car crashes through broken 7-eleven window*
*store clerk passes out*
*Naota gets out of the totaled car*
Naota: Haruko do you like slurpees that much?!
No of course I don't!! Yelled Haruko
*Mammimi stumbles out of the car*
NAOTA YOURE TOO LATE!! I'M GONNA GET HIS POWER!! Yelled haruko.
Canti began to glow even redder and things in the store began to come off the ground..it was as if gravity itself had disappeared. Then, it happened. Canti ate haruko. Everybody was silent.almost like time had stopped..and then out of canti's head (TV screen whatever.) was haruko glowing completely red. She stared at Naota and Mammimi for a split second before completely destroying the 7 eleven they were in with a single thrust of her hand. Naota remembered doing the same to the giant hand..
-Meanwhile at the Nandaba bakery- (It's another sub episode of the pervert and his father!)
Kamon.I am disappointed in you...you have been watching horrible accursed things..WITHOUT TELLING ME!!
Father why don't you go check on Naota...I am sure he is calling you right now..mumbled Kamon clearly trying to draw attention away from him.
FOOL!! Don't you know! Naota is at that bridge!!
No father! Naota is sleeping! It is 2 AM right now!
As this slowly registered into their perverted minds Kamon realized his car was gone..
-The destroyed 7-eleven-
Everything was flying. The force of Haruko's attack had destroyed 7 eleven and forced them all into the air (Except for Haruko of course) and in different directions. Through all the dust and smoke and debris nobody could see Haruko slip away into the darkness..With a mighty thud Naota, Mammimi, Canti, the store clerk, the vespa, the car, and all the debris fell to the dirt that was 7-eleven. (Which I don't own.)
While all this happened the all powerful Haruko was destroying the city of Mabase. She headed toward the Medical Mechanica factory iron which was still tipped over on the side of the hill. She would kill every employee for taking something she wanted..for making her go through all the crap she went through..and most of all; she would kill them all for imprisoning Atomsk. She swore on her life that with her new gained power she would make them suffer..hell she didn't have anything to do; maybe she would start using Atomsk's power to steal planets...
As she ran faster than her own vespa, she sped through the city towards the factory she would make pay. She laughed knowing that soon she would get her revenge. Soon she would make them pay.
Meanwhile inside the medical mechanica factory 20 robot canti's awoke and a giant eyebrow twitched...
Was this chapter any better? If you have any suggestions just tell me in your review! I am open to all suggestions unless.please review.
Oh yeah and in the next chapter Commander Amarao and Kitsurabami appear and Haruko has to fight twenty identical Canti's designed to fight. Hope you enjoy it!