Rayjee: GOMEN, GOMEN, GOMEN, GOMEN!!! I SERIOUSLY didn't want for this fic
to take so long... Been through a lot and YAY! I got my own Laptop! ^-^!!
Warning, if you dislike rape or abuse, stop reading, Now.
Disclaimer: I do not own any character from Inuyasha © but I do own Makitsu ©, She's meh biatche! Just kidding, I'm straight. ;
Responses to reviews:
To Remedy: YES I WROTE A LEMON! XD... Wait... What's so surprising about that? I'm a fricken pervert...YOU... should know that... more than anyone... XD!! Yes there is a point to this whole story and not just pointless sex...
To Sadie Knight: Yes I will explain why she has youkai blood and why our Lord-Sesshoumaru is there later on in the story. I'll try to work on this fic as much and as fast as I can... Now that I can work anywhere with my laptop, I should have no other excuse than either being grounded or writers block WHICH I HOPE DOESN'T ATTACK ME ANYMORE X.x...
To Sayah1112: Yup I Updated... hard too... x.x... After reading it over and over again as I corrected typos... I started to think the story sucked completely! But arigatou for your great compliment... along with others I got ARIGATOU! Btw... I LOVE YOUR STORIES X.x... I'VE READ ALL OF THEM SO FAR... just waiting for YOUR updates as well! ^.~
To all others who reviewed as well Thanks for your opinions and I'm glad I didn't get one flame ^^! Still all opinions are needed... good or bad... x.x so I can know where I suck at things...
...On with the fic XD! ...
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"Please... don't do this... to me..."
"I'll give you five seconds to give me one good reason why I shouldn't."
Before she could even open her mouth, he began to push into her roughly, but slowly...
"Time's up."
He pushed harder into her all the way up to her barrier... "She's a virgin? ..."
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Chapter 2 - Makitsu's Wish.
"You never said you were a virgin."
He kept his same emotionless gaze on her, waiting for her reply. Simply watching her face's expression while he was in her, aroused him even more... wanting to thrust into her as wildly as his instincts told him to. Still gasping for air, Makitsu growled at him for his remark. 'What is he? Stupid?'
"Oh... Hey... by the way... I'm a... virgin."
After she let those sarcasm words slip out of her mouth with in- between gasps, he backhanded her incredibly hard with a rare, angry expression on him.
"So you dare play me with your little sarcasm game? ...How disrespectful."
She closed her eyes not really knowing what was going to happen... the though that he would hurt her... kept scurrying around in her mind though.
He gave her a second or two to actually prepare herself for what he was going to do, and with one quick thrust, he broke through her barrier.
She didn't want this. She didn't want this at all. This man she didn't even know took the one thing she held dearly for quite some time now, for a man that she actually loved and wanted to be with for the rest of her life. But he took it, and she would never forgive him for it.
As he broke through her, she yelled and cried at the same time, but his bruising kiss took the sound coming from her mouth into his.
"Don't do that," he commanded. She whimpered slightly trying to obey his words.
He started a pretty fast pace, though too fast for her at her first time... All she could do was moan in response. Makitsu gripped onto his shoulders for comfort, and surprisingly... he let her. He quickened his pace, going rougher on her as the seconds pass. He closed his eyes himself, getting lost in pleasure.
A moment later, she snapped her head back, letting out a loud growl as she came to him.
"So... You're ...enjoying this... hmm?"
She responds with a soft moan as she presses her cheek against his neck. He looks down at her, surprised somewhat with what she's doing, but he pushes his hips hard against hers... making his length dig deeper into her. He groans loudly and shuts his eyes, spilling his seed deeply into her.
"Oh gods!" she yelled as she stayed stiff under him... also cursing at herself for reacting like she did... How could she let her body enjoy him, she was unwilling, or so she thought until she came to him.
The man pushes himself up slowly, looking down in between them to find their mixed juices drip out of her as his length is removed from her. Both exhausted and breathing heavily... he lays beside her, pulling her closer to him to just fondle with her breasts for a moment and let's go of her.
'Gods, I can't believe I enjoyed that... I'm only fifteen for crying out loud! What if I get pregnant!?! No! I can't let that happen to me... not now!!'
'What could she possibly be thinking...?' He smirks a bit as he watches her fight against her thoughts... enjoying the different facial expressions he sees on her.
Without a warning, she pushes herself up to start running. Where? Who knows... she doesn't but it's all she could think about doing. He growls and pushes himself up as well. quickly grabbing her by the collar and pulling her back down into his arms. He holds on tightly... growling at her ear in anger.
"Where the hell do you think you're going?!... I don't remember telling you that you could move." He pushes her down against the ground and leaves her there as she starts to cry again... tilting her new cat ears back in pain from his yelling. He pulls his pants back up and ties on his sash to keep them up.
Three knocks at the door is enough to scare Makitsu as she stays on her knees... too frightened to move or stop the man from opening the door, hoping that its nobody important. As the man opens the door, she scoots back against a wall, covering herself with the towel she had on a while ago, biting onto her lower lip hard.
"It's about time Jaken. What kept you?"
A small, green, toad-like man squabbles through the open doorway, closing the door behind him as well and bows to the silver-haired man.
"Forgive me my Lord Sesshoumaru!... I was simply disposing of the other occupants of this home. They would only cause problems if they were to come back and not find this huma-.... SESSHOUMARU-SAMA!! WHAT HAPPENED TO HER?!"
Makitsu simply sighed in relief that it wasn't her parents at the door and listened to what the green toad thing and the man were speaking about, not knowing what he meant by '...disposing of the other occupants..'.
"Wasn't she supposed to be a human? Why is she a neko now?"
Jaken wobbles up to her as she continues to back away, even if the wall behind her doesn't allow it.
"That's right, fear me! Worthless huma-. neko!"
Makitsu tilts her ears forward, taking in the toad's insulting words. She growls loudly and flexes her claws, ready to attack him.
"Jaken, stay away from her."
Jaken sticks out his tongue at her as he quickly backs away, dodging her claw attack by merely an inch. Before he could withdraw it, she grabs his tongue and pulls him closer to her and bites onto his neck so firmly that he can't escape her mouth.
"Girl, drop him before I make you do so."
She growls low, ears tilted back, obviously ignoring him.
"You dare to defy me?"
He quickly moves towards her again and grabs her by the neck, squeezing almost harshly.
"Obey your Lord-Sesshoumaru. Release him, now."
She ignores him once again... still growling as she hold this Jaken character in her mouth, her fangs already piercing through his skin as blood spills into her mouth and the ground.
"You have courage, neko, but you are not near intelligent."
He grabs her tail and attempts to pull her off of Jaken, but her piercing loud scream grabs his attention instead. He ceases moving her, but keeps his grip on her tail.
'I barely even touched her, what could have caused her to scream?'
He looks down at his hand on her tail and squeezes just a bit. Makitsu growls loudly in pain. She had let go of Jaken When Sesshoumaru first grabbed her.
"I see. So this is your weakness? Very interesting. This could prove useful in helping me cease your disobedience."
Makitsu can barely stand the pain as she lies on the ground helplessly; she fists her hands and bites onto her lower lip a bit to hold in another growl.
Sesshoumaru smirks somewhat and lets go of her; she quickly aids herself by rubbing and licking at her abused tail.
"Jaken, gather all her belongings. She will be staying at my palace. If I do not see her things in the guest room next to mine, Jaken, know that you will feel pain. This Sesshoumaru does not like disobedience."
"Yes of course Sesshoumaru-Sama!" Bows Jaken and runs into a room with Makitsu's scent.
With that said, he looks over to Makitsu, who quickly avoids his gaze by looking downward. Sesshoumaru smirks again as he reaches out for her, watching her move further back from him.
"Sleep."
One simple word is all that's said as he grips tightly onto her neck, cutting out her ability to breath for the moment. She passes out, and is carried by Sesshoumaru as a father would a baby.
"Rest is what you need, it being your first time means you shouldn't walk. I wouldn't want my little toy to be in pain now, would I?" He grins sarcastically.
Knowing she's unconscious, he kisses her forehead and steps out of the house through the back door with her in his arms. Above them is the darkened sky, lit up by simple stars in the autumn season, but no moon looms before them.
With a blink of his eyes, he creates a silver cloud under his feet and lays Makitsu just beside him on it before they take off into the sky with a silver sparkling trail forming behind them from the cloud.
Rayjee: And what is to become of Makitsu? Where are they headed? Is Makitsu all alone now, without a family and being taken prisoner? Stay tuned and wait for the next episode of Dragon Ball Z!!!... -.-; Not. -Cough- Heh. Just thought this was a good place to leave it. Kinda without a cliffhanger I think. Again, I'm really sorry this Chapter took so long to write. Like I said, I'm having some problems with my family, but I'm trying my best to keep going. Please review, I have chapter three ready but I want to see what you think of this chapter first!! Any comments or questions, Email me at rayjeechan@hotmail.com.
Disclaimer: I do not own any character from Inuyasha © but I do own Makitsu ©, She's meh biatche! Just kidding, I'm straight. ;
Responses to reviews:
To Remedy: YES I WROTE A LEMON! XD... Wait... What's so surprising about that? I'm a fricken pervert...YOU... should know that... more than anyone... XD!! Yes there is a point to this whole story and not just pointless sex...
To Sadie Knight: Yes I will explain why she has youkai blood and why our Lord-Sesshoumaru is there later on in the story. I'll try to work on this fic as much and as fast as I can... Now that I can work anywhere with my laptop, I should have no other excuse than either being grounded or writers block WHICH I HOPE DOESN'T ATTACK ME ANYMORE X.x...
To Sayah1112: Yup I Updated... hard too... x.x... After reading it over and over again as I corrected typos... I started to think the story sucked completely! But arigatou for your great compliment... along with others I got ARIGATOU! Btw... I LOVE YOUR STORIES X.x... I'VE READ ALL OF THEM SO FAR... just waiting for YOUR updates as well! ^.~
To all others who reviewed as well Thanks for your opinions and I'm glad I didn't get one flame ^^! Still all opinions are needed... good or bad... x.x so I can know where I suck at things...
...On with the fic XD! ...
¤·..·??·..·??·..·??·..·??Going Back...·??·..·??·..·??·..·??·..·??¤
"Please... don't do this... to me..."
"I'll give you five seconds to give me one good reason why I shouldn't."
Before she could even open her mouth, he began to push into her roughly, but slowly...
"Time's up."
He pushed harder into her all the way up to her barrier... "She's a virgin? ..."
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Chapter 2 - Makitsu's Wish.
"You never said you were a virgin."
He kept his same emotionless gaze on her, waiting for her reply. Simply watching her face's expression while he was in her, aroused him even more... wanting to thrust into her as wildly as his instincts told him to. Still gasping for air, Makitsu growled at him for his remark. 'What is he? Stupid?'
"Oh... Hey... by the way... I'm a... virgin."
After she let those sarcasm words slip out of her mouth with in- between gasps, he backhanded her incredibly hard with a rare, angry expression on him.
"So you dare play me with your little sarcasm game? ...How disrespectful."
She closed her eyes not really knowing what was going to happen... the though that he would hurt her... kept scurrying around in her mind though.
He gave her a second or two to actually prepare herself for what he was going to do, and with one quick thrust, he broke through her barrier.
She didn't want this. She didn't want this at all. This man she didn't even know took the one thing she held dearly for quite some time now, for a man that she actually loved and wanted to be with for the rest of her life. But he took it, and she would never forgive him for it.
As he broke through her, she yelled and cried at the same time, but his bruising kiss took the sound coming from her mouth into his.
"Don't do that," he commanded. She whimpered slightly trying to obey his words.
He started a pretty fast pace, though too fast for her at her first time... All she could do was moan in response. Makitsu gripped onto his shoulders for comfort, and surprisingly... he let her. He quickened his pace, going rougher on her as the seconds pass. He closed his eyes himself, getting lost in pleasure.
A moment later, she snapped her head back, letting out a loud growl as she came to him.
"So... You're ...enjoying this... hmm?"
She responds with a soft moan as she presses her cheek against his neck. He looks down at her, surprised somewhat with what she's doing, but he pushes his hips hard against hers... making his length dig deeper into her. He groans loudly and shuts his eyes, spilling his seed deeply into her.
"Oh gods!" she yelled as she stayed stiff under him... also cursing at herself for reacting like she did... How could she let her body enjoy him, she was unwilling, or so she thought until she came to him.
The man pushes himself up slowly, looking down in between them to find their mixed juices drip out of her as his length is removed from her. Both exhausted and breathing heavily... he lays beside her, pulling her closer to him to just fondle with her breasts for a moment and let's go of her.
'Gods, I can't believe I enjoyed that... I'm only fifteen for crying out loud! What if I get pregnant!?! No! I can't let that happen to me... not now!!'
'What could she possibly be thinking...?' He smirks a bit as he watches her fight against her thoughts... enjoying the different facial expressions he sees on her.
Without a warning, she pushes herself up to start running. Where? Who knows... she doesn't but it's all she could think about doing. He growls and pushes himself up as well. quickly grabbing her by the collar and pulling her back down into his arms. He holds on tightly... growling at her ear in anger.
"Where the hell do you think you're going?!... I don't remember telling you that you could move." He pushes her down against the ground and leaves her there as she starts to cry again... tilting her new cat ears back in pain from his yelling. He pulls his pants back up and ties on his sash to keep them up.
Three knocks at the door is enough to scare Makitsu as she stays on her knees... too frightened to move or stop the man from opening the door, hoping that its nobody important. As the man opens the door, she scoots back against a wall, covering herself with the towel she had on a while ago, biting onto her lower lip hard.
"It's about time Jaken. What kept you?"
A small, green, toad-like man squabbles through the open doorway, closing the door behind him as well and bows to the silver-haired man.
"Forgive me my Lord Sesshoumaru!... I was simply disposing of the other occupants of this home. They would only cause problems if they were to come back and not find this huma-.... SESSHOUMARU-SAMA!! WHAT HAPPENED TO HER?!"
Makitsu simply sighed in relief that it wasn't her parents at the door and listened to what the green toad thing and the man were speaking about, not knowing what he meant by '...disposing of the other occupants..'.
"Wasn't she supposed to be a human? Why is she a neko now?"
Jaken wobbles up to her as she continues to back away, even if the wall behind her doesn't allow it.
"That's right, fear me! Worthless huma-. neko!"
Makitsu tilts her ears forward, taking in the toad's insulting words. She growls loudly and flexes her claws, ready to attack him.
"Jaken, stay away from her."
Jaken sticks out his tongue at her as he quickly backs away, dodging her claw attack by merely an inch. Before he could withdraw it, she grabs his tongue and pulls him closer to her and bites onto his neck so firmly that he can't escape her mouth.
"Girl, drop him before I make you do so."
She growls low, ears tilted back, obviously ignoring him.
"You dare to defy me?"
He quickly moves towards her again and grabs her by the neck, squeezing almost harshly.
"Obey your Lord-Sesshoumaru. Release him, now."
She ignores him once again... still growling as she hold this Jaken character in her mouth, her fangs already piercing through his skin as blood spills into her mouth and the ground.
"You have courage, neko, but you are not near intelligent."
He grabs her tail and attempts to pull her off of Jaken, but her piercing loud scream grabs his attention instead. He ceases moving her, but keeps his grip on her tail.
'I barely even touched her, what could have caused her to scream?'
He looks down at his hand on her tail and squeezes just a bit. Makitsu growls loudly in pain. She had let go of Jaken When Sesshoumaru first grabbed her.
"I see. So this is your weakness? Very interesting. This could prove useful in helping me cease your disobedience."
Makitsu can barely stand the pain as she lies on the ground helplessly; she fists her hands and bites onto her lower lip a bit to hold in another growl.
Sesshoumaru smirks somewhat and lets go of her; she quickly aids herself by rubbing and licking at her abused tail.
"Jaken, gather all her belongings. She will be staying at my palace. If I do not see her things in the guest room next to mine, Jaken, know that you will feel pain. This Sesshoumaru does not like disobedience."
"Yes of course Sesshoumaru-Sama!" Bows Jaken and runs into a room with Makitsu's scent.
With that said, he looks over to Makitsu, who quickly avoids his gaze by looking downward. Sesshoumaru smirks again as he reaches out for her, watching her move further back from him.
"Sleep."
One simple word is all that's said as he grips tightly onto her neck, cutting out her ability to breath for the moment. She passes out, and is carried by Sesshoumaru as a father would a baby.
"Rest is what you need, it being your first time means you shouldn't walk. I wouldn't want my little toy to be in pain now, would I?" He grins sarcastically.
Knowing she's unconscious, he kisses her forehead and steps out of the house through the back door with her in his arms. Above them is the darkened sky, lit up by simple stars in the autumn season, but no moon looms before them.
With a blink of his eyes, he creates a silver cloud under his feet and lays Makitsu just beside him on it before they take off into the sky with a silver sparkling trail forming behind them from the cloud.
Rayjee: And what is to become of Makitsu? Where are they headed? Is Makitsu all alone now, without a family and being taken prisoner? Stay tuned and wait for the next episode of Dragon Ball Z!!!... -.-; Not. -Cough- Heh. Just thought this was a good place to leave it. Kinda without a cliffhanger I think. Again, I'm really sorry this Chapter took so long to write. Like I said, I'm having some problems with my family, but I'm trying my best to keep going. Please review, I have chapter three ready but I want to see what you think of this chapter first!! Any comments or questions, Email me at rayjeechan@hotmail.com.