Author's note: Hello again! Ok, Got some stuff to say. First off I put chap
4 and 5 up at once because it took my sooo long to update and I KNOW how
heart-breaking that was for you all. ;p Anyways, This chap is SOLEY based
on Nite and Vyse's fight. I wrote it in Microsoft Word(If you don't have
this GET IT. It's superb) and it was four and a half pages long! This is my
longest chapters to date!! Good thing it's all fighting and not some boring
talking crap. But ohhh doggie, you all should be thanking me for making it
this long. When I first wrote this thing out it was one paragraph long.
ONE! UNO!!! One paragraph to four pages, I was sure pleased in the end.
Oh and by the way. I'm super uber busy with school and chores and what-not and in my free time I'm working on all my stories. Mainly this one and another fanfic I'm writing which takes place in the Outlaw Star universe. It's semi-original but not as much as this one, it still has the main characters in it..For a while anyways. (Make sure you to check this out too ;p)
Ok, that's all from me. Oh and I try not to do this because I feel stupid asking people to review my stuff, but if you're going to say ANYTHING about my story say it about this chapter. It's my first big fight-scene and I put a lot into it. I hope you all enjoy!! **************************************************************************** * Nite was walking around this stupid town for what he thought was an eternity. He decided to sit down and try to get his barring .
Nite was sitting for no more then a couple of seconds before a very tall woman with oddly glowing blue eyes and black hair walked up to him. "Excuse me young sir, but by any chance would you have seen a young lady about your age with blonde hair and green eyes?" Nite shook his head. The women groaned while running her fingers through her hair.
She thanked him for his time and left. Nite looked back at the women's sack that she was carrying. There was a white flowing cape sticking out of it and Nite saw what might be some type of cross printed on it. Nite wondered why a Holy Knight would be around these parts. He shook the thought out of his mind, stood up, and started to look for his mystery man once again.
Nite was beginning to think that Kage had him on a wild goose chase...Yet something caught his attention that quickly changed his mind. He walked up to the group of people surrounding a man that fit Vyse's description to the letter, now all he had to do is get that info Kage was talking about.
*** "Ok then! Who shall be my next opponent!" Vyse shouted at the group around him.
Everyone was silent and that's just how Vyse liked it, being able to strike fear into the people around him. He started to laugh up at the sky but was interrupted by a young man's voice.
"I will fight you." The young man in a black cloak said from the crowd.
Vyse smiled. "You're kidding. You're just a kid." He said with another laugh.
"I am not kidding but I do have a deal for you. You have some information that I need, now normally I would just ask you for it but walking around this boring place has made me restless and since you're looking for a fight I thought that it would work out perfectly." The boy he replied with the most serious of tones, walking towards him. Vyse didn't know what information he was talking about but if this kid wanted his butt handed to him Vyse was happy to oblige.
"So what's your name, kid?" Vyse asked, crossing his arms.
"Nite."
"Well all right Nite, if you win the fight then I'll give you that info you need," Vyse stopped and looked at Nite's waist, "but if I win then I get that pretty little sword of yours. Agreed?"
Nite smiled. "Agreed."
Vyse started to crack his knuckles. "Now I hope you know that I'm not gonna go easy on ya just 'cause you're a kid." Vyse warned.
Nite nodded his head and said. "I know."
Vyse was charging at him the minute Nite said 'I know'. He wrenched his fist back and slammed it into Nite's face, sending him right into the crowd of people behind him. Vyse crossed his arms and sighed. He thought that with all the talking that this kid was doing he would be able to at least withstand one punch.
He was about to walk away but was stopped by Nite's hand. He grabbed Vyse's foot and twirled it around allowing enough momentum for Nite to stand and for him to fall. Vyse bolted off of the ground and swung at Nite. He ducked the fist and slammed his own into Vyse's stomach. The hit surprised Vyse more then it hurt him...But not a lot more. Vyse forced himself not to grab his stomach, which would show just how much pain he was in.
Vyse stepped back a bit to re-examine the child and suddenly it hit him. This was the person that Kage was talking about! He remember hearing about their little skirmish in the forest and how this punk kid took a good chunk out of his stomach. Vyse thought about calling the match a draw right then and just give the info to Nite, but how much fun would that be?
Vyse put up his fists. "Ok Nite, I'm done playing with you. I have a very powerful energy in me. I have perfected my body into a weapon. Maybe if you use that shiny sword you might stand a chance....But a fist fight. Don't make me laugh, kid."
Nite grinned. "Good. I was hoping this wouldn't be an easy fight. I told you already. I need a challenge."
They had a silent stand off for a small while, but finally Vyse became annoyed with this and went in for an attack.
He rocketed his hand right at Nite's head. He jerked to the left, spinning at the same time, rising his left leg for a roundhouse. Vyse bent back and avoided the attack. He stood back up and wacked Nite in the head with his right hand. Nite stumbled but regained his footing and spun around. Vyse was already in his face and plowed Nite to the ground. There was a loud "ohhhhh" from the crowd when he knocked him down.
Nite slowly got to his feet and raised his hand to his nose. There was blood on his fingers. Nite laughed.
"Well! I see you're still holding back, Vyse. If you weren't pulling your punches. I'd still be on the ground."
Vyse glared at him. Nite was just begging him to show his true power. Fine Vyse'll just have to bring it all out for Nite....Hopefully Kage doesn't get mad at him for killing this kid.
"Alright! Fine! Let's see how you handle this!" Vyse yelled, raising his hands in the air and grabbing them, forming a ball with his fists. He started to tighten his fists together, causing a small glow to come from them.
Nite looked on confused at first but quickly caught on. "Oh crap, he's a Monk." Nite thought as he watched Vyse perform his attack.
Vyse smashed his hands into the ground, letting the energy he had been collecting in his fists flow through the earth. The energy created a large ripple and made everyone around fall to their feet. Everyone but Nite.
Nite saw the ripple coming and barely managed to jump over it. This unfortunately left him wide open for Vyse's next attack. Vyse came run up to the, now still in the air, Nite and belted him right in the stomach. He must have saved some of that energy he collected because the hit sent Nite well up into the air.
Vyse put his right arm up to his side and started to charge more energy. He quickly got what he needed and waited for Nite's body to fall back down to earth. Nite was falling all right but he saw what Vyse was doing while he waited for him to fall. He straightened out his body so he came right at Vyse like an arrow. Vyse grinned at the clean target Nite made. He shot his right fist up and a wave of clear energy came from it.
Nite curved his body as far as he could to dodge it. He just was able to make it past but he could still feel the force of the blow shoving up against his side. Nite tried to regain his arrow-like posture in the air, but wasn't able to. Nite put his hands out towards his adversary and braced for impact. He caught Vyse's head with his hands and spring-boarded to the ground. Vyse started to fall to his knees when Nite jumped off, but he quickly caught himself and spun around towards Nite, releasing the last bit of stored up energy. Nite hit the ground and faced Vyse, He saw another wave of energy coming towards him. Without thinking Nite took out his sword, which was already glowing with a black aura, and sliced at the wave heading his way. The aura from his blade projected out and collided with the wave, canceling each other out. Nite made a dash at Vyse, sword still in hand. He swung at Vyse scratching him across his chest. Vyse grabbed Nite's left hand that was carrying the weapon and twisted it around so the arm was tied up behind his back. Nite struggled to free himself, but couldn't.
"Ok! The fight is over Nite! You used your weapon!" Vyse said to Nite.
Nite laughed. "You never said I couldn't." He stated, twisting his already bent arm around. A loud "pop" came from his shoulder and again the crowed went "ohhh." Nite switched his sword to his right hand and again attacked Vyse. "This kid is insane!" Vyse thought to himself as he dodged another of Nite's attacks.
Nite once again went in for a frontal attack. He was like some rabid dog that really wanted to bite you. Vyse saw him attack, but this time Vyse went all out. He focused on Nite's stomach as his main target and when he came close, Vyse nailed him...Over and over again. Vyse's hands were moving in blurs. He was getting at least ten hits for every second. He saw Nite's body reacting to the blows bit he figured is was just because he was slamming him so hard. Vyse ended with one last, divesting punch that sent Nite sailing into a wall. Vyse sighed and looked at Nite....But he felt...Almost itchy all over...And his leg stung. He looked down at his leg and gasped.
Nite's sword was firmly planted in his thigh, and that itchy feeling he felt. Those were deep cuts that Nite had given him during his speedy attack. Then it hit him...Nite's body wasn't moving that way because he was being annulated. It was moving that way because Nite was counterattacking every blow!!
"Oh...He's not human..." Vyse said in awe.
He pulled out the sword and stumbled over to Nite. Nite himself was slowly staggered to his feet.
"This is yours." Vyse said, holding out the weapon.
"But, I lost." Nite said, looking down. Vyse laughed feebly.
"No, kid. It was a tie. And because you are the only person who had ever cut me up this bad. I'm calling you the winner."
Nite tried to smile, but his stomach was directing all of his attention to it.
"Don't worry," Vyse told him, "Monks can do more then fight."
Vyse placed his hand on Nite's stomach. For awhile nothing happened, but suddenly Vyse yelled at loud as he could and a bright light came from his body. It happened so fast. Both of the fighter's wounds tightened up and closed with force. Their brushes quickly subsided but that's all that happened. Only a light healing spell.
"Chakra." Vyse stated. "A Monk's best friend."
He laughed as he finished his sentence and started to walk away, motioning for Nite to follow him.
"Hold on a sec." Nite took his left arm in his other arm and started moving it around. When he got the arm where he wanted it, he slammed his shoulder into the wall. There was once again a loud pop and yet again the crowd went "Ohhhh!!!" Nite laughed off the pain and walked after Vyse.
Nite followed him into his small cottage. Vyse offered him a seat then he sat in a chair opposite of Nite's.
"So kid what do you need to know."
"Honestly, I don't know. Kage sent me here to help him on a task he was given." Nite admitted. Vyse solemnly nodded his head.
"I'm gonna take a shot in the dark and guess that he wants me to take you to him." Vyse said.
Nite shrugged a shoulder. "I thought you were just going to tell me where he was."
Vyse put his hands behind his head. "Well I'll take that one step further. I am going SHOW you where he was...I mean is." Nite circled his finger in the air, showing his fake enthusiasm. " Yeah I'm glad your impressed but we should probably get going before it gets too dark out. Vyse instructed, walking out of his house but stopping suddenly.
"Oh and nice job roughing Kage up bit don't let it go to his head. Knowing him he wasn't even trying."
"Wasn't even trying? Why not?"
"Ain't that obvious? He was testing you. He didn't want your help if you weren't up to stuff."
After that being said. The two walked out of the cabin.
Oh and by the way. I'm super uber busy with school and chores and what-not and in my free time I'm working on all my stories. Mainly this one and another fanfic I'm writing which takes place in the Outlaw Star universe. It's semi-original but not as much as this one, it still has the main characters in it..For a while anyways. (Make sure you to check this out too ;p)
Ok, that's all from me. Oh and I try not to do this because I feel stupid asking people to review my stuff, but if you're going to say ANYTHING about my story say it about this chapter. It's my first big fight-scene and I put a lot into it. I hope you all enjoy!! **************************************************************************** * Nite was walking around this stupid town for what he thought was an eternity. He decided to sit down and try to get his barring .
Nite was sitting for no more then a couple of seconds before a very tall woman with oddly glowing blue eyes and black hair walked up to him. "Excuse me young sir, but by any chance would you have seen a young lady about your age with blonde hair and green eyes?" Nite shook his head. The women groaned while running her fingers through her hair.
She thanked him for his time and left. Nite looked back at the women's sack that she was carrying. There was a white flowing cape sticking out of it and Nite saw what might be some type of cross printed on it. Nite wondered why a Holy Knight would be around these parts. He shook the thought out of his mind, stood up, and started to look for his mystery man once again.
Nite was beginning to think that Kage had him on a wild goose chase...Yet something caught his attention that quickly changed his mind. He walked up to the group of people surrounding a man that fit Vyse's description to the letter, now all he had to do is get that info Kage was talking about.
*** "Ok then! Who shall be my next opponent!" Vyse shouted at the group around him.
Everyone was silent and that's just how Vyse liked it, being able to strike fear into the people around him. He started to laugh up at the sky but was interrupted by a young man's voice.
"I will fight you." The young man in a black cloak said from the crowd.
Vyse smiled. "You're kidding. You're just a kid." He said with another laugh.
"I am not kidding but I do have a deal for you. You have some information that I need, now normally I would just ask you for it but walking around this boring place has made me restless and since you're looking for a fight I thought that it would work out perfectly." The boy he replied with the most serious of tones, walking towards him. Vyse didn't know what information he was talking about but if this kid wanted his butt handed to him Vyse was happy to oblige.
"So what's your name, kid?" Vyse asked, crossing his arms.
"Nite."
"Well all right Nite, if you win the fight then I'll give you that info you need," Vyse stopped and looked at Nite's waist, "but if I win then I get that pretty little sword of yours. Agreed?"
Nite smiled. "Agreed."
Vyse started to crack his knuckles. "Now I hope you know that I'm not gonna go easy on ya just 'cause you're a kid." Vyse warned.
Nite nodded his head and said. "I know."
Vyse was charging at him the minute Nite said 'I know'. He wrenched his fist back and slammed it into Nite's face, sending him right into the crowd of people behind him. Vyse crossed his arms and sighed. He thought that with all the talking that this kid was doing he would be able to at least withstand one punch.
He was about to walk away but was stopped by Nite's hand. He grabbed Vyse's foot and twirled it around allowing enough momentum for Nite to stand and for him to fall. Vyse bolted off of the ground and swung at Nite. He ducked the fist and slammed his own into Vyse's stomach. The hit surprised Vyse more then it hurt him...But not a lot more. Vyse forced himself not to grab his stomach, which would show just how much pain he was in.
Vyse stepped back a bit to re-examine the child and suddenly it hit him. This was the person that Kage was talking about! He remember hearing about their little skirmish in the forest and how this punk kid took a good chunk out of his stomach. Vyse thought about calling the match a draw right then and just give the info to Nite, but how much fun would that be?
Vyse put up his fists. "Ok Nite, I'm done playing with you. I have a very powerful energy in me. I have perfected my body into a weapon. Maybe if you use that shiny sword you might stand a chance....But a fist fight. Don't make me laugh, kid."
Nite grinned. "Good. I was hoping this wouldn't be an easy fight. I told you already. I need a challenge."
They had a silent stand off for a small while, but finally Vyse became annoyed with this and went in for an attack.
He rocketed his hand right at Nite's head. He jerked to the left, spinning at the same time, rising his left leg for a roundhouse. Vyse bent back and avoided the attack. He stood back up and wacked Nite in the head with his right hand. Nite stumbled but regained his footing and spun around. Vyse was already in his face and plowed Nite to the ground. There was a loud "ohhhhh" from the crowd when he knocked him down.
Nite slowly got to his feet and raised his hand to his nose. There was blood on his fingers. Nite laughed.
"Well! I see you're still holding back, Vyse. If you weren't pulling your punches. I'd still be on the ground."
Vyse glared at him. Nite was just begging him to show his true power. Fine Vyse'll just have to bring it all out for Nite....Hopefully Kage doesn't get mad at him for killing this kid.
"Alright! Fine! Let's see how you handle this!" Vyse yelled, raising his hands in the air and grabbing them, forming a ball with his fists. He started to tighten his fists together, causing a small glow to come from them.
Nite looked on confused at first but quickly caught on. "Oh crap, he's a Monk." Nite thought as he watched Vyse perform his attack.
Vyse smashed his hands into the ground, letting the energy he had been collecting in his fists flow through the earth. The energy created a large ripple and made everyone around fall to their feet. Everyone but Nite.
Nite saw the ripple coming and barely managed to jump over it. This unfortunately left him wide open for Vyse's next attack. Vyse came run up to the, now still in the air, Nite and belted him right in the stomach. He must have saved some of that energy he collected because the hit sent Nite well up into the air.
Vyse put his right arm up to his side and started to charge more energy. He quickly got what he needed and waited for Nite's body to fall back down to earth. Nite was falling all right but he saw what Vyse was doing while he waited for him to fall. He straightened out his body so he came right at Vyse like an arrow. Vyse grinned at the clean target Nite made. He shot his right fist up and a wave of clear energy came from it.
Nite curved his body as far as he could to dodge it. He just was able to make it past but he could still feel the force of the blow shoving up against his side. Nite tried to regain his arrow-like posture in the air, but wasn't able to. Nite put his hands out towards his adversary and braced for impact. He caught Vyse's head with his hands and spring-boarded to the ground. Vyse started to fall to his knees when Nite jumped off, but he quickly caught himself and spun around towards Nite, releasing the last bit of stored up energy. Nite hit the ground and faced Vyse, He saw another wave of energy coming towards him. Without thinking Nite took out his sword, which was already glowing with a black aura, and sliced at the wave heading his way. The aura from his blade projected out and collided with the wave, canceling each other out. Nite made a dash at Vyse, sword still in hand. He swung at Vyse scratching him across his chest. Vyse grabbed Nite's left hand that was carrying the weapon and twisted it around so the arm was tied up behind his back. Nite struggled to free himself, but couldn't.
"Ok! The fight is over Nite! You used your weapon!" Vyse said to Nite.
Nite laughed. "You never said I couldn't." He stated, twisting his already bent arm around. A loud "pop" came from his shoulder and again the crowed went "ohhh." Nite switched his sword to his right hand and again attacked Vyse. "This kid is insane!" Vyse thought to himself as he dodged another of Nite's attacks.
Nite once again went in for a frontal attack. He was like some rabid dog that really wanted to bite you. Vyse saw him attack, but this time Vyse went all out. He focused on Nite's stomach as his main target and when he came close, Vyse nailed him...Over and over again. Vyse's hands were moving in blurs. He was getting at least ten hits for every second. He saw Nite's body reacting to the blows bit he figured is was just because he was slamming him so hard. Vyse ended with one last, divesting punch that sent Nite sailing into a wall. Vyse sighed and looked at Nite....But he felt...Almost itchy all over...And his leg stung. He looked down at his leg and gasped.
Nite's sword was firmly planted in his thigh, and that itchy feeling he felt. Those were deep cuts that Nite had given him during his speedy attack. Then it hit him...Nite's body wasn't moving that way because he was being annulated. It was moving that way because Nite was counterattacking every blow!!
"Oh...He's not human..." Vyse said in awe.
He pulled out the sword and stumbled over to Nite. Nite himself was slowly staggered to his feet.
"This is yours." Vyse said, holding out the weapon.
"But, I lost." Nite said, looking down. Vyse laughed feebly.
"No, kid. It was a tie. And because you are the only person who had ever cut me up this bad. I'm calling you the winner."
Nite tried to smile, but his stomach was directing all of his attention to it.
"Don't worry," Vyse told him, "Monks can do more then fight."
Vyse placed his hand on Nite's stomach. For awhile nothing happened, but suddenly Vyse yelled at loud as he could and a bright light came from his body. It happened so fast. Both of the fighter's wounds tightened up and closed with force. Their brushes quickly subsided but that's all that happened. Only a light healing spell.
"Chakra." Vyse stated. "A Monk's best friend."
He laughed as he finished his sentence and started to walk away, motioning for Nite to follow him.
"Hold on a sec." Nite took his left arm in his other arm and started moving it around. When he got the arm where he wanted it, he slammed his shoulder into the wall. There was once again a loud pop and yet again the crowd went "Ohhhh!!!" Nite laughed off the pain and walked after Vyse.
Nite followed him into his small cottage. Vyse offered him a seat then he sat in a chair opposite of Nite's.
"So kid what do you need to know."
"Honestly, I don't know. Kage sent me here to help him on a task he was given." Nite admitted. Vyse solemnly nodded his head.
"I'm gonna take a shot in the dark and guess that he wants me to take you to him." Vyse said.
Nite shrugged a shoulder. "I thought you were just going to tell me where he was."
Vyse put his hands behind his head. "Well I'll take that one step further. I am going SHOW you where he was...I mean is." Nite circled his finger in the air, showing his fake enthusiasm. " Yeah I'm glad your impressed but we should probably get going before it gets too dark out. Vyse instructed, walking out of his house but stopping suddenly.
"Oh and nice job roughing Kage up bit don't let it go to his head. Knowing him he wasn't even trying."
"Wasn't even trying? Why not?"
"Ain't that obvious? He was testing you. He didn't want your help if you weren't up to stuff."
After that being said. The two walked out of the cabin.