EDIT!!!!: Ok, Chaos's one comment about Ked's blow up was all I need to
change it. I hate messing up on good battle scenes and I hate it even MORE
when I feel like I leave something out.....Ok, so now it's changed. Ah and
by the way, I usually don't change plot parts or dialogue or anything like
that....Cause....I dunno, I just don't care about them as much. Bad me!
Anyways, read it! BTW, I changed this like THREE times.Everytime I
finished, I looked at Chaos's stupid review and thought of more to add in.
Man, now I'm going to have to go through ALL my battle scenes and add more
to them!! Why?! Because they're not good until they're perfect!!
Ahhahahah!! ....Yes, I am getting too into this but hey, it just makes the
story better to read, no? Ah and BTW I may take a quick skim through all of
what I have and maybe add some deepers parts to charatcters of what-not, I
dunno, but man! This thing just went up a WHOLE other notch!!
Wow, and to think.It's all because of one thing Chaos said.....See, people!! Reviews are GOOD!! Lol, :p
Author's not: Hello again! Don't quite remember when I last updated this sucka, just know it was long enough, this flu really has knocked me off schedule. I think it's because I keep saying I have a new groove to this thing, Fate seems to want to twist that around for me so.....Note to self: NEVER say "Groove" again.
Ok, anyways......Oh! How do y'all like this chapter? I tried to make it better them most chapters with this characters in it....And hey! At least you got some action in this one!!! So take some time out and drop me a line. Starving writers need reviews, Y'know? Lol, :p
Oh, and just so you all know....K.C. and Ked will NOT(as in NOT EVER!) be a couple. They're just seven! They don't think of those things. They'll just be really good friends...And if you're asking why I said that it's because there's at least ONE person out there thinking it's gonna happen.....Why do you think there's all these legal disclaimers....Ahhhh, now you get it.
Also one last note. If you haven't found out, my good, good rival Chaosrayne had gotten PSO(Phantasy Star Online) for GC(Gamecube....Stupid non-gamer people....) So that's what he hasn't updated in forever! But fear not for he has not given up on you all, he will write again....Probably. Now has he said this in his own story? Maybe, I dunno. Should you care? Maybe, I dunno....MY question is why are you coming HERE to hear about Chaos?! Yeah, exactly.....Ok now ON WITH THE STORY!!!
P.S. Oh and tell me Ked doesn't remind you of Gohan from DBZ.....Go on, tell me.....
This is Blades "Good reading equals good times." I'm out.
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K.C. walked around with Ked, checking out the sights, chasing birds around, and doing just normal kid stuff.
"So Ked, what do you want to do now?"
Ked looked around. "I dunno, what do you want to do?"
A smile twice the size of K.C.'s head planted itself firmly on her face. "How 'bout...Tag!" She screamed, playfully slapping Ked on the arm.
As soon as she hit him she started running down the street voice blazing, with Ked right behind her. They played Tag for a solid two minutes before the game magically turned itself into Hide and go Seek, and before Ked knew it he was on a mad search for the other mischievous seven-year-old.
*** Ked saw her go hide around some dead-end street so he decided to sneak around the back of the building to surprise her. How surprised K.C. would be when she would see him sneak up from behind her, yet to his own surprise he heard K.C. scream loud enough to break glass. In a flash he was off in the direction of the scream.
It took him seconds to get to her. He didn't know how fast he went and at the moment he didn't care.
"K.C.! Are you Ok? Who are these guys?" He asked, pointing to the men standing over her.
"You never mind!" One of them yelled.
K.C. was sitting on the ground, shaking and crying. Anger started to fill Ked. He couldn't stand watching people get bullied around, even if sometimes he was too afraid himself to stand up to them.
"K.C.!" Ked yelled. "Please stand back!"
K.C. shot up. "No Ked! No fighting!" She turned to the people. "Go away!" She demanded, thrusting her hands forward.
Ked watched to see what she was going to do. He saw her eyes close and her muscles tense. Tiny green balls spun around K.C.'s hands. But as soon as it started it ended in a puff of smoke. Ked wondered if anything was supposed to happen after the puff of smoke but nothing did. The two men were as puzzled as Ked but they quickly snapped out of it and lunged at K.C.
Ked quickly put himself between the attackers and K.C..
"Hey get out of the way kid!" One of them yelled.
"No." Ked told them, his eyes were fierce and determined. Filling every second with courage and defiance.
"What did you just say to us, you little brat?"
"I said no, you won't touch K.C."
The men laughed. "Listen, you're just a kid. You have no right to be telling US what to do. Now MOVE!"
The men became angry but Ked was as calm as ever.
"No."
"Oh that's it, let's just move him ourselves!" One man ordered with the rest happily agreeing.
Ked knew that they where going to do something about him then go right after K.C.... He couldn't let that happen. He couldn't let something happen to one of his friends. Then, 'it' happened. Ked didn't remember what happened in those couple seconds, he never does, all he ever remembers is getting really mad. Then his brain gets fuzzy and his muscles tense, filling with his magical energy. Next thing he knows, he wakes back up to see the damage that he didn't know he even created.
*** K.C. watched on. The two men were practically right on top of Ked who only seemed to be standing there! She wished so much that she could use her powers to their fullest extent.....But she was afraid and she could never cast when she was scared.
So she kept watching, she watched as the men went to grab for Ked. Watched how intense, unforgiving flames sprouted around him, encircling him. Growing, swirling around like a raging inferno. The fire didn't look natural, it didn't MOVE naturally, it was clearly the start of something massive.
Ked looked just as odd, the calm he had was gone. His anger seemed to rage on as large and as powerful as the fire around him.....No, on second thought his anger WAS the fire around him! A pure manifestation if the fierce, madding power building in him, pulsating through him! His fists clenched, his eyes closed, and his teeth shut so tight, they threatened to break his own jaw.
Even the two men stopped and stared.....Unfortunately for them, their show was much more different then K.C.'s. They saw the anger growing in him, and in this little boy's anger, they saw there own fear. The own fear of what kind of power who would soon unleash on them, they quickly turned and ran. Ked thought other wise, he pointed his hands towards them, the flames around him erupted and covered the two people. On contact, the flames exploded and expanded and ripped through their bodies, causing them to scream in pain....But their screams were only overshadowed be the sounds of the flames. It spread in large streams into all directions. And even then it did not look natural, the fire seemed to have a calm but demanding flow to it and not just some rigged explosion, as other fire spells were famous for. Some of the fearsome flames arched over to a nearby house and set that on fire like a dried up twig, engulfing it and eating away at the wood that built it.
The two men themselves were thrown back and down to the ground. The flames had clearly eaten away much of their skin, leaving little left. K.C. guessed that they either died on impact or....She gulpled.....Burn to death. She shivered as the flames reverted back into Ked's tiny frame.
*** So what happened to Ked every single time before, happened again. When he snapped out of his daze he found the men lying on the ground with burn marks across their bodies. He must have used a Fire spell, and a powerful one at that. When he looked around he saw that his attack had also set one of the houses on fire. He just wished he knew what had happened. He just wanted to know how bad the spell was.....Maybe if he KNEW he could stop it....
Before Ked could stop and see if he could help the men, he was being dragged by K.C. down street and away from the disaster that he had just now caused.
K.C. couldn't believe what she just saw. What in the world was that? One minute Ked was standing there with his hands up and, the next minute a giant wall of fire exploded from him!
They where in so much trouble, she just knew it. How in the world was she going to get out of this one, if only Ked hadn't blown up those people! Now she had to drag his stupid butt out of danger! This sucks!
K.C. dragged Ked out onto the main street and ran to the Inn they were staying at, but three more men came out to stop her.
"Please Miss, we mean you no harm but you must come back with us." One of the men said, slowly walking towards her.
"No!" K.C. screamed. "Don't come any closer!"
They ignored her warning and tried to grab her.
"Ked, do something!" K.C. screamed without thinking about what Ked could actually do.
*** Ked, still in his full out "protection" phase, quickly jumped in front of her and waved his right hand, making a circle in the air, his spell had to be quick since his enemies were right in front of him. He could feel then energy pass through his arm, it pumped through his veins, it felt almost like adrenaline, it was odd. Tiny shocks circled in his palm as the spell grew. Small sparks formed around his fingers. The sparks soon became bigger and suddenly jumped from his hand to the men standing in front of him. All three of them went down instantly. They were unconscious and would wake up in a few hours...Unlike those other people at that house.
"The house!" Ked thought to himself. He turned in the direction of the house. The fire had now crept to the front and even jumped to the other houses next to it.
People were running around in a panicked daze, trying to stop the fire which was now out of control. Amongst the screaming people trying to put out the flames. The two children just stared on as they watched the chaos unfold. Without warning Bridget came by and scooped the two starters of the mayhem into her arms and carried them to a near by carriage, which would take them to Lindinbum...Even in all this confusion.
*** Tera was already waiting patiently in the carriage when Bridget first came in with the children. She was the first one to ask what happened.
"I'm not sure," Ked said, still dazed by the chaos, "but I'll tell you one thing, I am never going exploring again." They all laughed at Ked's declaration. Tera looked out the back of the carriage as it started to roll off. The fire was being subsided, she sighed in relief. It least it was stopping. She rested her head on the back of her seat of listened as the wagon rode across the bumpy road to Lindinbum.
Wow, and to think.It's all because of one thing Chaos said.....See, people!! Reviews are GOOD!! Lol, :p
Author's not: Hello again! Don't quite remember when I last updated this sucka, just know it was long enough, this flu really has knocked me off schedule. I think it's because I keep saying I have a new groove to this thing, Fate seems to want to twist that around for me so.....Note to self: NEVER say "Groove" again.
Ok, anyways......Oh! How do y'all like this chapter? I tried to make it better them most chapters with this characters in it....And hey! At least you got some action in this one!!! So take some time out and drop me a line. Starving writers need reviews, Y'know? Lol, :p
Oh, and just so you all know....K.C. and Ked will NOT(as in NOT EVER!) be a couple. They're just seven! They don't think of those things. They'll just be really good friends...And if you're asking why I said that it's because there's at least ONE person out there thinking it's gonna happen.....Why do you think there's all these legal disclaimers....Ahhhh, now you get it.
Also one last note. If you haven't found out, my good, good rival Chaosrayne had gotten PSO(Phantasy Star Online) for GC(Gamecube....Stupid non-gamer people....) So that's what he hasn't updated in forever! But fear not for he has not given up on you all, he will write again....Probably. Now has he said this in his own story? Maybe, I dunno. Should you care? Maybe, I dunno....MY question is why are you coming HERE to hear about Chaos?! Yeah, exactly.....Ok now ON WITH THE STORY!!!
P.S. Oh and tell me Ked doesn't remind you of Gohan from DBZ.....Go on, tell me.....
This is Blades "Good reading equals good times." I'm out.
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K.C. walked around with Ked, checking out the sights, chasing birds around, and doing just normal kid stuff.
"So Ked, what do you want to do now?"
Ked looked around. "I dunno, what do you want to do?"
A smile twice the size of K.C.'s head planted itself firmly on her face. "How 'bout...Tag!" She screamed, playfully slapping Ked on the arm.
As soon as she hit him she started running down the street voice blazing, with Ked right behind her. They played Tag for a solid two minutes before the game magically turned itself into Hide and go Seek, and before Ked knew it he was on a mad search for the other mischievous seven-year-old.
*** Ked saw her go hide around some dead-end street so he decided to sneak around the back of the building to surprise her. How surprised K.C. would be when she would see him sneak up from behind her, yet to his own surprise he heard K.C. scream loud enough to break glass. In a flash he was off in the direction of the scream.
It took him seconds to get to her. He didn't know how fast he went and at the moment he didn't care.
"K.C.! Are you Ok? Who are these guys?" He asked, pointing to the men standing over her.
"You never mind!" One of them yelled.
K.C. was sitting on the ground, shaking and crying. Anger started to fill Ked. He couldn't stand watching people get bullied around, even if sometimes he was too afraid himself to stand up to them.
"K.C.!" Ked yelled. "Please stand back!"
K.C. shot up. "No Ked! No fighting!" She turned to the people. "Go away!" She demanded, thrusting her hands forward.
Ked watched to see what she was going to do. He saw her eyes close and her muscles tense. Tiny green balls spun around K.C.'s hands. But as soon as it started it ended in a puff of smoke. Ked wondered if anything was supposed to happen after the puff of smoke but nothing did. The two men were as puzzled as Ked but they quickly snapped out of it and lunged at K.C.
Ked quickly put himself between the attackers and K.C..
"Hey get out of the way kid!" One of them yelled.
"No." Ked told them, his eyes were fierce and determined. Filling every second with courage and defiance.
"What did you just say to us, you little brat?"
"I said no, you won't touch K.C."
The men laughed. "Listen, you're just a kid. You have no right to be telling US what to do. Now MOVE!"
The men became angry but Ked was as calm as ever.
"No."
"Oh that's it, let's just move him ourselves!" One man ordered with the rest happily agreeing.
Ked knew that they where going to do something about him then go right after K.C.... He couldn't let that happen. He couldn't let something happen to one of his friends. Then, 'it' happened. Ked didn't remember what happened in those couple seconds, he never does, all he ever remembers is getting really mad. Then his brain gets fuzzy and his muscles tense, filling with his magical energy. Next thing he knows, he wakes back up to see the damage that he didn't know he even created.
*** K.C. watched on. The two men were practically right on top of Ked who only seemed to be standing there! She wished so much that she could use her powers to their fullest extent.....But she was afraid and she could never cast when she was scared.
So she kept watching, she watched as the men went to grab for Ked. Watched how intense, unforgiving flames sprouted around him, encircling him. Growing, swirling around like a raging inferno. The fire didn't look natural, it didn't MOVE naturally, it was clearly the start of something massive.
Ked looked just as odd, the calm he had was gone. His anger seemed to rage on as large and as powerful as the fire around him.....No, on second thought his anger WAS the fire around him! A pure manifestation if the fierce, madding power building in him, pulsating through him! His fists clenched, his eyes closed, and his teeth shut so tight, they threatened to break his own jaw.
Even the two men stopped and stared.....Unfortunately for them, their show was much more different then K.C.'s. They saw the anger growing in him, and in this little boy's anger, they saw there own fear. The own fear of what kind of power who would soon unleash on them, they quickly turned and ran. Ked thought other wise, he pointed his hands towards them, the flames around him erupted and covered the two people. On contact, the flames exploded and expanded and ripped through their bodies, causing them to scream in pain....But their screams were only overshadowed be the sounds of the flames. It spread in large streams into all directions. And even then it did not look natural, the fire seemed to have a calm but demanding flow to it and not just some rigged explosion, as other fire spells were famous for. Some of the fearsome flames arched over to a nearby house and set that on fire like a dried up twig, engulfing it and eating away at the wood that built it.
The two men themselves were thrown back and down to the ground. The flames had clearly eaten away much of their skin, leaving little left. K.C. guessed that they either died on impact or....She gulpled.....Burn to death. She shivered as the flames reverted back into Ked's tiny frame.
*** So what happened to Ked every single time before, happened again. When he snapped out of his daze he found the men lying on the ground with burn marks across their bodies. He must have used a Fire spell, and a powerful one at that. When he looked around he saw that his attack had also set one of the houses on fire. He just wished he knew what had happened. He just wanted to know how bad the spell was.....Maybe if he KNEW he could stop it....
Before Ked could stop and see if he could help the men, he was being dragged by K.C. down street and away from the disaster that he had just now caused.
K.C. couldn't believe what she just saw. What in the world was that? One minute Ked was standing there with his hands up and, the next minute a giant wall of fire exploded from him!
They where in so much trouble, she just knew it. How in the world was she going to get out of this one, if only Ked hadn't blown up those people! Now she had to drag his stupid butt out of danger! This sucks!
K.C. dragged Ked out onto the main street and ran to the Inn they were staying at, but three more men came out to stop her.
"Please Miss, we mean you no harm but you must come back with us." One of the men said, slowly walking towards her.
"No!" K.C. screamed. "Don't come any closer!"
They ignored her warning and tried to grab her.
"Ked, do something!" K.C. screamed without thinking about what Ked could actually do.
*** Ked, still in his full out "protection" phase, quickly jumped in front of her and waved his right hand, making a circle in the air, his spell had to be quick since his enemies were right in front of him. He could feel then energy pass through his arm, it pumped through his veins, it felt almost like adrenaline, it was odd. Tiny shocks circled in his palm as the spell grew. Small sparks formed around his fingers. The sparks soon became bigger and suddenly jumped from his hand to the men standing in front of him. All three of them went down instantly. They were unconscious and would wake up in a few hours...Unlike those other people at that house.
"The house!" Ked thought to himself. He turned in the direction of the house. The fire had now crept to the front and even jumped to the other houses next to it.
People were running around in a panicked daze, trying to stop the fire which was now out of control. Amongst the screaming people trying to put out the flames. The two children just stared on as they watched the chaos unfold. Without warning Bridget came by and scooped the two starters of the mayhem into her arms and carried them to a near by carriage, which would take them to Lindinbum...Even in all this confusion.
*** Tera was already waiting patiently in the carriage when Bridget first came in with the children. She was the first one to ask what happened.
"I'm not sure," Ked said, still dazed by the chaos, "but I'll tell you one thing, I am never going exploring again." They all laughed at Ked's declaration. Tera looked out the back of the carriage as it started to roll off. The fire was being subsided, she sighed in relief. It least it was stopping. She rested her head on the back of her seat of listened as the wagon rode across the bumpy road to Lindinbum.