Final destination 3 you can't run forever
Chapter One: The nightmare begins.
The day was sunny and Tom Dark had just arrived at the amusement park
with his friends, Mimi, Jim, Dave and Ron. "These lines are freaking
long man" Ron said looking around. "I'm hungry" said Mimi looking
longingly at the funnel cake a young man of about 17 was buying. "Well
I asked you if you wanted anything before we left my house but you
said "oh I'm not hungry I've got money for food at the park" Tom said
tauntingly. "Well how should I know I had a hole in my pocket" Mimi
said sounding annoyed. "Stop bickering you two" Ron said "the line for
"The Strider" is shorter. Mimi and Tom stopped arguing and followed
Jim, Dave and Ron to the ride. They got in line and saw that the man
who had bought the funnel cake was right in front of them. They got in
their seats and saw that their car was shared by a man who had a
cigarette in his hand. A 7-year old boy was twitching nervously in his
seat next to his dad. They also saw the cheerleader captain of the
school. She turned around, saw Tom and scoffed. "I didn't know that
losers got in free either that or you sold your house for tickets"
"Leave him alone Amy " Ron said standing up "Just cause you're the
richest girl in school you don't have to pick on Tom just cause you
were jealous " "I'm not jealous I'm just glad that Tom is now the
poorest guy in school." Mimi Jim and Dave stood up. The man with the
cigarette looked over at them "Hey people chill you can fight after
the rides over". They all sat down. Tom was looking as mad as they had
ever seen him. "Hey man chill don't listen to her" said Ron. Tom
cooled down "Thanks Ron." "Excuse me there's a little problem with the
car so you can relax for a while before we start" The little boy
looked relieved but everyone else groaned. Tom suddenly felt very
tired and drifted off to sleep
Sorry if the fight between Toms friends and Amy stunk but I needed to
make it obvious that Tom was poor. Please bear with me no flames.
There will be more of course but it might take me a while so I can get
some ideas.
Chapter One: The nightmare begins.
The day was sunny and Tom Dark had just arrived at the amusement park
with his friends, Mimi, Jim, Dave and Ron. "These lines are freaking
long man" Ron said looking around. "I'm hungry" said Mimi looking
longingly at the funnel cake a young man of about 17 was buying. "Well
I asked you if you wanted anything before we left my house but you
said "oh I'm not hungry I've got money for food at the park" Tom said
tauntingly. "Well how should I know I had a hole in my pocket" Mimi
said sounding annoyed. "Stop bickering you two" Ron said "the line for
"The Strider" is shorter. Mimi and Tom stopped arguing and followed
Jim, Dave and Ron to the ride. They got in line and saw that the man
who had bought the funnel cake was right in front of them. They got in
their seats and saw that their car was shared by a man who had a
cigarette in his hand. A 7-year old boy was twitching nervously in his
seat next to his dad. They also saw the cheerleader captain of the
school. She turned around, saw Tom and scoffed. "I didn't know that
losers got in free either that or you sold your house for tickets"
"Leave him alone Amy " Ron said standing up "Just cause you're the
richest girl in school you don't have to pick on Tom just cause you
were jealous " "I'm not jealous I'm just glad that Tom is now the
poorest guy in school." Mimi Jim and Dave stood up. The man with the
cigarette looked over at them "Hey people chill you can fight after
the rides over". They all sat down. Tom was looking as mad as they had
ever seen him. "Hey man chill don't listen to her" said Ron. Tom
cooled down "Thanks Ron." "Excuse me there's a little problem with the
car so you can relax for a while before we start" The little boy
looked relieved but everyone else groaned. Tom suddenly felt very
tired and drifted off to sleep
Sorry if the fight between Toms friends and Amy stunk but I needed to
make it obvious that Tom was poor. Please bear with me no flames.
There will be more of course but it might take me a while so I can get
some ideas.