Chapter 5: The railing
Author's notes
This chapter may be a little slow but it does contain the first death. Allrighty then let's get started.
Tom, Kimberly and Burke sat at the table thinking about the design. Kimberly was struck with an idea "Okay think of the order of the deaths in
your vision and then put that order in reverse." Tom tried to remember. While he figured the order of the deaths Kimberly and burke sat down and tried to find the survivors addresses. "Okay I'm done" Tom said finally. He
put a piece of paper in front of Kimberly and she read:
( ) = DIED IN UNISON
RON, ROB, (WALLY, WILLARD,) BEN, AMY (MIMI, JIM,) DAVE, ME
"Are you sure this is right Tom?" Kimberly asked. "Yeah I'm positive." "Okay so Ron's next do you have the address "she asked looking at Burke.
"Got all of em right here" "Okay lets go." ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- ----------------------------- Tom Kimberly and Burke discovered that Ron was at the park again. "Darn it
there are tons of things that could kill him there" Tom said looking terrified. "Well if we know his favorite rides are it'll make it easier for us to find him" Kimberly called from the front seat of the car. When they
got to the park they saw Ron and Dave in line for a multi level ride. Kimberly looked at Tom "Okay whenever someone's about to die you should get another vision like if they're about to die from a pigeon attack you should see a vision of pigeons." Tom concentrated he thought he saw Ron slip and he heard screaming. That was it Ron would slip and fall over the rail. "RON WATCH OUT' Ron saw Tom and waved but not paying attention he slipped and
knocked against the side of the ride. The crash resulted in the rail a level above them to come down and crush Dave to a bloody pile of skin. They
all looked horrified as Ron screamed. "But I thought Ron was next." Tom
finally realized something. "there's no order"
Author's notes
This chapter may be a little slow but it does contain the first death. Allrighty then let's get started.
Tom, Kimberly and Burke sat at the table thinking about the design. Kimberly was struck with an idea "Okay think of the order of the deaths in
your vision and then put that order in reverse." Tom tried to remember. While he figured the order of the deaths Kimberly and burke sat down and tried to find the survivors addresses. "Okay I'm done" Tom said finally. He
put a piece of paper in front of Kimberly and she read:
( ) = DIED IN UNISON
RON, ROB, (WALLY, WILLARD,) BEN, AMY (MIMI, JIM,) DAVE, ME
"Are you sure this is right Tom?" Kimberly asked. "Yeah I'm positive." "Okay so Ron's next do you have the address "she asked looking at Burke.
"Got all of em right here" "Okay lets go." ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- ----------------------------- Tom Kimberly and Burke discovered that Ron was at the park again. "Darn it
there are tons of things that could kill him there" Tom said looking terrified. "Well if we know his favorite rides are it'll make it easier for us to find him" Kimberly called from the front seat of the car. When they
got to the park they saw Ron and Dave in line for a multi level ride. Kimberly looked at Tom "Okay whenever someone's about to die you should get another vision like if they're about to die from a pigeon attack you should see a vision of pigeons." Tom concentrated he thought he saw Ron slip and he heard screaming. That was it Ron would slip and fall over the rail. "RON WATCH OUT' Ron saw Tom and waved but not paying attention he slipped and
knocked against the side of the ride. The crash resulted in the rail a level above them to come down and crush Dave to a bloody pile of skin. They
all looked horrified as Ron screamed. "But I thought Ron was next." Tom
finally realized something. "there's no order"