(A/n yes yes I know I up-date concrete angel way slower then my other stories on my other ff.net account, 'sweet little country girl'. But the reason that is is bethis is supppost to be drama and it's a challenge for me since wiriting humor is really easy to me. But hey I finally up-dated!!!)
~*~ Review response !*!
Jupiter's light: uh.. well it took me a few weeks ok months but hey a new chapter is up!!
Katy: yep hope this chapy's good to!!!!
Puppkid: Thaxs.. just hope it stays that way.... gonna be kinda weird in this chappy hope I don't sorta get ya'll confused...
Dreamer wolf: Thaxs!!! *Takes bag of sugar* sorry it took so long!!!!! Like I said this is a challenge for me.!!!! And now I know wat the third verse is!!! YAY!!!
Chu-Chu13: uh......... nothing? Lol I gotta go read and remember wat I wrote!! *Feels ashame of self*
Shanaka: i'm trying!!! I almost quit but I figured I needed to continue!!! So here ya'll r!!!!
Chapter 4: Blood....
Inuyasha and Kagome walked into the dirty old motel, the wallpaper was peeling off and the counter looked as if it would fall any second. Inuyasha walked up with Kagome to the counter and cleared his throat so the man behind the counter would give them a room, but he didn't say a thing, just watched porn on the small TV. He was tall with curly brown hair and a beer belly, and his clothes looked like they hadn't been washed in years.
Inuyasha tapped his fingers on the counter and then tapped the man on the head when he didn't get a response. When the fat man looked at Inuyasha Inuyasha smirked.
"How much are ya'lls crappy rooms?" Inuyasha questioned.
"Uh...well sir that depends." He slurred his words a little while scratching his big belly before continuing," We got the honey moon sweet which is twenty dollars and then we got your regular rooms which are eleven dollars each. So what will ya' and the little lady have?"
Inuyasha didn't wont to share a room but getting the sweet would save some money and yes he had to admit he was a cheap son of a bitch but hell he was a hot cheap son of a bitch. He looked at Kagome who didn't notice. She was to busy looking at the fat man with a disgusted face.
"We'll have the sweet." Inuyasha said not looking at Kagome, as she stared at him in shock. She didn't want to share a room with Inuyasha!! She wanted to sleep in her own room with nobody else in there but her!
Inuyasha gave the man his money and listen as the man told him the room number. "Ok Mr. Here's your key, room number twenty two. And before ya'll go I got know, ya;ll are married right?" He gave them a confused out of state look.
"Why yes we are, isn't that right sweety pie?" Inuyasha said trying to sound like the fat man.
"Uh....." Was Kagome's all intelligent answer. The man shot Inuyasha a look.
"We're newly weds and she's just in shock. Isn't that right honey?" Inuyasha shook her a little bit before walking down the old yellowish hallway with his arm around Kagome.
Kagome finally processed what had just happened she moved away from Inuyasha and stared at him coldly.
"We are not married, I am not your sweety pie or honey I am not sharing the bed with you!" She stated in a hiss only for him to hear.
"Ok." Was his answer and he opened their door while Kagome's eye started to twitch.
"Ok? Ok? That's all you are going to say is ok?"
Inuyasha shrugged as he looked into the room. "Yeah pretty much, after all you'll get the coach." Inuyasha stated before running and jumping on the bed.
"But!!! But this is my room!! And my bed!!! Get off!!!!!!" She yelled and he just laid there staring at her.
"First off this isn't your room or your bed it's the motels. And why should you get the bed?" Inuyasha argued.
"Because!!"
"because why?"
"Because I'm a girl!!!!! "
"So!??!?!" Inuyasha yelled back at her.
" Fine I'll sleep on the coach." Kagome stated Before walking over and laying down on the hard uncomfortable puke green coach.
"Ok. Now that that is settled I going to go pee." Inuyasha stated before heading to where ever the bathroom was.
Kagome sighed, before jumping off the coach and onto the bed and letting the sleep consume her.
When Inuyasha came back he looked at Kagome with the evil eye. (My friend jed says 'don't give me that evil eye!' when I look at him when i'm mad. Lmao)
"Damn fucking girls." Inuyasha muttered as he made his way to the coach and tried to fall asleep.
~*~
Blood, it was everywhere. Blood was on the walls, the Windows and all over her hands. Kagome looked at the place shaking staring at her blood cover hands until the sound of the door being slammed open disturbed her. It was her dad, and she was in her old house.
"You bitch!" He yelled as blood spilled out of his chest and flowed to the floor. "You fucking now good bitch!" He yelled angrily.
Kagome crouched down covering her ears while chanting, "you're dead." She screamed in pain as he forced her to stand on her toes when lifted her up by her hair.
"Look what you did to me!!!! " He yelled in her face before ripping part of his shirt to let her see his wound.
"No...!!! You're dead!!" Kagome screamed and cried out while kicking and trying to get free of his grip.
"Damn right I'm dead and you are to!" He yelled and pulled a knife and sliced her throat. She watched in horror as blood spilled out like a water fall from her neck before jolting up, wide awake!
Kagome took in deep, rapid breaths as her hands flew up to her neck to check for any cuts. She then looked around only to see the old peeling wallpaper of the motel. It was just a dream.... only a dream.....
(A/N review!!! I sorry it took so long but I up-dated!!!!)
~*~ Review response !*!
Jupiter's light: uh.. well it took me a few weeks ok months but hey a new chapter is up!!
Katy: yep hope this chapy's good to!!!!
Puppkid: Thaxs.. just hope it stays that way.... gonna be kinda weird in this chappy hope I don't sorta get ya'll confused...
Dreamer wolf: Thaxs!!! *Takes bag of sugar* sorry it took so long!!!!! Like I said this is a challenge for me.!!!! And now I know wat the third verse is!!! YAY!!!
Chu-Chu13: uh......... nothing? Lol I gotta go read and remember wat I wrote!! *Feels ashame of self*
Shanaka: i'm trying!!! I almost quit but I figured I needed to continue!!! So here ya'll r!!!!
Chapter 4: Blood....
Inuyasha and Kagome walked into the dirty old motel, the wallpaper was peeling off and the counter looked as if it would fall any second. Inuyasha walked up with Kagome to the counter and cleared his throat so the man behind the counter would give them a room, but he didn't say a thing, just watched porn on the small TV. He was tall with curly brown hair and a beer belly, and his clothes looked like they hadn't been washed in years.
Inuyasha tapped his fingers on the counter and then tapped the man on the head when he didn't get a response. When the fat man looked at Inuyasha Inuyasha smirked.
"How much are ya'lls crappy rooms?" Inuyasha questioned.
"Uh...well sir that depends." He slurred his words a little while scratching his big belly before continuing," We got the honey moon sweet which is twenty dollars and then we got your regular rooms which are eleven dollars each. So what will ya' and the little lady have?"
Inuyasha didn't wont to share a room but getting the sweet would save some money and yes he had to admit he was a cheap son of a bitch but hell he was a hot cheap son of a bitch. He looked at Kagome who didn't notice. She was to busy looking at the fat man with a disgusted face.
"We'll have the sweet." Inuyasha said not looking at Kagome, as she stared at him in shock. She didn't want to share a room with Inuyasha!! She wanted to sleep in her own room with nobody else in there but her!
Inuyasha gave the man his money and listen as the man told him the room number. "Ok Mr. Here's your key, room number twenty two. And before ya'll go I got know, ya;ll are married right?" He gave them a confused out of state look.
"Why yes we are, isn't that right sweety pie?" Inuyasha said trying to sound like the fat man.
"Uh....." Was Kagome's all intelligent answer. The man shot Inuyasha a look.
"We're newly weds and she's just in shock. Isn't that right honey?" Inuyasha shook her a little bit before walking down the old yellowish hallway with his arm around Kagome.
Kagome finally processed what had just happened she moved away from Inuyasha and stared at him coldly.
"We are not married, I am not your sweety pie or honey I am not sharing the bed with you!" She stated in a hiss only for him to hear.
"Ok." Was his answer and he opened their door while Kagome's eye started to twitch.
"Ok? Ok? That's all you are going to say is ok?"
Inuyasha shrugged as he looked into the room. "Yeah pretty much, after all you'll get the coach." Inuyasha stated before running and jumping on the bed.
"But!!! But this is my room!! And my bed!!! Get off!!!!!!" She yelled and he just laid there staring at her.
"First off this isn't your room or your bed it's the motels. And why should you get the bed?" Inuyasha argued.
"Because!!"
"because why?"
"Because I'm a girl!!!!! "
"So!??!?!" Inuyasha yelled back at her.
" Fine I'll sleep on the coach." Kagome stated Before walking over and laying down on the hard uncomfortable puke green coach.
"Ok. Now that that is settled I going to go pee." Inuyasha stated before heading to where ever the bathroom was.
Kagome sighed, before jumping off the coach and onto the bed and letting the sleep consume her.
When Inuyasha came back he looked at Kagome with the evil eye. (My friend jed says 'don't give me that evil eye!' when I look at him when i'm mad. Lmao)
"Damn fucking girls." Inuyasha muttered as he made his way to the coach and tried to fall asleep.
~*~
Blood, it was everywhere. Blood was on the walls, the Windows and all over her hands. Kagome looked at the place shaking staring at her blood cover hands until the sound of the door being slammed open disturbed her. It was her dad, and she was in her old house.
"You bitch!" He yelled as blood spilled out of his chest and flowed to the floor. "You fucking now good bitch!" He yelled angrily.
Kagome crouched down covering her ears while chanting, "you're dead." She screamed in pain as he forced her to stand on her toes when lifted her up by her hair.
"Look what you did to me!!!! " He yelled in her face before ripping part of his shirt to let her see his wound.
"No...!!! You're dead!!" Kagome screamed and cried out while kicking and trying to get free of his grip.
"Damn right I'm dead and you are to!" He yelled and pulled a knife and sliced her throat. She watched in horror as blood spilled out like a water fall from her neck before jolting up, wide awake!
Kagome took in deep, rapid breaths as her hands flew up to her neck to check for any cuts. She then looked around only to see the old peeling wallpaper of the motel. It was just a dream.... only a dream.....
(A/N review!!! I sorry it took so long but I up-dated!!!!)