Thanks for the reviews. Yaoi Angle thanks again.
It might be a little fuzzy I've been in the city all day, on my feet. My
sister told me AFTER I had bought a particular c.d that she already has it.
Oh well like she'd ever let me borrow it. I had a go on the fake snow slide
in the city today, it was worth the wait, I hope to see real snow one-day
not just cold ice.
Anyhow here it is Chapter 3:
(By the way they're like in a hotel opposite another hotel, This will make more sense later)
~~ Taken ~~
(Kai and Ray are in their bedroom) [(LEMON warning) I think that's what you use if there is sex, tell me if I'm wrong. But there is sex in this chapter. Don't hit me if it isn't too good. I can't risk the chance that my little brother will see it. He's only ten.]
Kai kissed Ray pushing him back onto the bed. Ray kissed back eagerly liking what was happening.
'So, Ray, are you ready for this?' Ray nodded licking Kai's lips earning a moan from Kai, 'Okay then…'
Kai took off his tank top as Ray took off his shirt, both the Chinese one and the blue one. Ray looked at his lover's well-molded body, Kai looking at Rays as well. Kai leaned in for another kiss but Ray pushed him away and went for Kai's neck sucking on it hard but gently. Kai moved a little enjoying the feeling. Ray flipped Kai over so that he was now on him. (Ray's now on top of Kai)
He edged his way down Kai's body to his pants. Slowly edging them off Kai until Kai only had his boxers on. Ray took off his pants and lent down on to Kai.
'You ready?' Kai nodded but then surprising Ray he flipped over so he was on top. He took off his and Ray's boxers. Looking down at his prize. Ray blushed which made Kai feel more lucky to have him.
Reaching over to the table getting a tube of lube out of the draw and smearing some over himself and Ray's hole. Placing himself just outside of Ray.
'You sure, last chance,'
'Dead sure. Take me Kai I don't think I can wait much longer.' Ray breathed.
Kai started to move into Ray, slowly but without hesitation. Ray's moans got louder and louder as Kai moved further in. Once Kai was fully in he drew out and plunged back in, startling the Chinese boy beneath him.
'Harder Kai, faster,' was all Ray could manage to say. Kai filled Ray's wishes and pumped harder and faster each time he went in.
He could feel himself reaching his climax and Ray reaching his. He pumped harder and harder until…
'RAY'
'KAI'
Both of the youths came, Kai inside of Ray and Ray between the two. Kai pulled out and lay next to his love.
'Next time I get to be on top.' Ray said contently.
'Whatever you say Ray,' Kai said smiling at Ray stroking his hair.
~~ End of LEMON~~
'So,' said a person watching from the opposing window dropping the binoculars he was holding, 'more to tell Voltaire.'
He walked out the door and across to the hotel where Kai and Ray were.
'He will be pleased to have a reason to torture Kai.' He started to laugh and didn't stop until he got to his destination, out side the hotel room where Ray and Kai were. (The hotel room is more like a small house two unsuited, kitchen, lounge room etc.)
~~ Back to Ray and Kai ~~
The two youths lay peaceful in each other's arms for a while.
'When were the others getting back?' Ray asked.
'No idea. Probably when Tyson finishes.'
'So never.'
'Unless Kenny and Max find some help to pull him away.'
'What if they got take-away? Then they could be back soon.' Kai opened his eyes wide.
'Then we should probably get dressed.'
'Yeah, want to have a shower?'
'Yeah.' They got up and went to the bathroom.
~~~IN THE PARK WITH THE OTHERS AND THEIR ICE-CREAMS~~
'What do you think Ray and Kai are hiding?' Tyson asked
'Nothing. They said they were planning for tomorrow.' Max said.
'Yeah. They'd tell us if something was wrong.' Kenny said.
'Maybe nothing's wrong and something's going on.' Tyson hinted.
'What do you mean?'
'Maybe they…'
'LET GO OF ME, YOU GOOF. I DON'T CARE PUT ME DOWN.'
Tyson and the others couldn't hear what the other voice was saying. (By the way, the park is fairly close to the hotel so they can see and hear what's going on.)
'That sounded like Kai.' Tyson said.
'No way.'
'Uh huh.'
'Let's go check it out,' Max said.
~~~ Back at the hotel while this was happening ~~~
Kai and Ray were just getting out of the bathroom (dressed). When a knock at the door came.
'They can't have been back that quick.' Kai said going to answer the door, 'Oh no what do you want?'
'Who is it Kai?' Ray asked.
'Your Grandfather requests to see you Master Kai.' Came a strange voice.
'No. I don't want to.'
'You have no choice, or we might have to take your lover instead, and you know what Voltaire would do to him.' The voice emphasized 'lover', 'do to' and 'him.
Ray had been edging closer to the door but when he got there Kai was already struggling with the man there.
'Let him go.' He said.
'No. You'll get him back. Maybe not in one piece but back.' The voice laughed not a cheery laugh but a cruel laugh. He tossed Kai over his shoulder with difficulty, (Kai is still struggling), and walked away.
'STOP,' Ray yelled but was pushed back against the wall by another person knocking him unconscious.
The man with Kai walked down the stairs laughing. He had dropped a note next to Ray explaining what was going on with very few details.
Once out side Kai started to yell (What the others heard) as he was shoved into a car.
~~~ Back with the others ~~~
They watched from a distance as Kai was shoved into a car and driven away.
'Did you see the look on his face?' Tyson asked.
'Yeah, total fear.'
'I can't believe he can feel anything.' Tyson said shocked
'What about Ray?' Kenny asked.
They all ran inside to see Ray. When the found him he was on the floor reading a note and struggling to get up.
'Ray, what happened?'
'They, They took Kai.'
'Who?'
'His grand father I think.' He said getting up and falling again.
'Here Ray,' Tyson said as he and Max supported him, 'Come inside and tell us everything. From the beginning.'
'Okay.'
They all went inside and sat on the couch. Ray started from two days ago when he and Kai had been alone to now. As he talked Tyson and the others read the note.
To Whom It May Concern:
Your friend (lover) Kai has been taken back to be 'sorted out' and 're-taught' how to behave. You may or may not get him back it depends on how he chooses to act.
Signed Hiwatari Courses (name of the company Voltaire runs) Russia,
Voltaire Hiwatari
Head of Balcov abbey
'Great now well never get Kai back he's going to Russia and that place is huge.' Tyson whined.
'No, well yes, but look,' Kenny pointed to the last bit of the letter. 'Balcov abbey. We know where that is and we can probably get there soon.'
'It'll take forever though.' Ray said lowly, then perking up, 'But it's worth it.' He said getting up.
'Where are you going?' Max asked.
'To pack, I'm (emphasis on I'm) going to Russia to get Kai back.'
'Us too. Kenny can you get tickets for as soon as possible?' (By the way they're in Japan)
'I'll get right on it.' He said turning to dizzy while the others went to pack.
~~ Ray's room ~~
Ray looked out the window.
'Don't worry Kai; I'm coming to get you. I won't let that jerk of a Grandfather of yours hurt you.'
So, how did you like it? It's my first LEMON and as I said I can't risk my brother, or worse my parents reading it. I hope you liked it. Please R&R.
~~READ THIS IS IMPORTANT~~
I'm going back to school soon. So my writing will either slow down, stop for a while or the chapters will get shorter. I promise I will do the best I can to update regularly. At school, they block certain sites from view and fanfiction.net is blocked (stupid teachers) but I found another way in. It's called fanfiction.com, BIG difference huh? But it works AND guess what, it's exactly the same. My homeroom (Form room) is one of the computing rooms so that's cool and I have one period a week in a computing room, well two, but only one I can muck around in.
But the problem is that teachers can read your files (talk about privacy invasion), not that they have time to, or would read something they're not meant to, but they can. So that means very little 'romance', fighting and torture would be okay, and that's what the next chapters are going to be.
I've planed the last chapter perfectly, but now I have to write the chapters up to it.
Like I said I'll try my best. If you have any idea's you can re-view them to me, or write to me at MelissaHutchinson1@kzone.com.au. I would put my school one on here but teachers can read that too (haven't they heard of privacy?) and I like getting e-mail at my kzone address. Though I will reply if necessary through my school one because I'm having problems sending on my kzone one.
See ya. Kai-Koi
Anyhow here it is Chapter 3:
(By the way they're like in a hotel opposite another hotel, This will make more sense later)
~~ Taken ~~
(Kai and Ray are in their bedroom) [(LEMON warning) I think that's what you use if there is sex, tell me if I'm wrong. But there is sex in this chapter. Don't hit me if it isn't too good. I can't risk the chance that my little brother will see it. He's only ten.]
Kai kissed Ray pushing him back onto the bed. Ray kissed back eagerly liking what was happening.
'So, Ray, are you ready for this?' Ray nodded licking Kai's lips earning a moan from Kai, 'Okay then…'
Kai took off his tank top as Ray took off his shirt, both the Chinese one and the blue one. Ray looked at his lover's well-molded body, Kai looking at Rays as well. Kai leaned in for another kiss but Ray pushed him away and went for Kai's neck sucking on it hard but gently. Kai moved a little enjoying the feeling. Ray flipped Kai over so that he was now on him. (Ray's now on top of Kai)
He edged his way down Kai's body to his pants. Slowly edging them off Kai until Kai only had his boxers on. Ray took off his pants and lent down on to Kai.
'You ready?' Kai nodded but then surprising Ray he flipped over so he was on top. He took off his and Ray's boxers. Looking down at his prize. Ray blushed which made Kai feel more lucky to have him.
Reaching over to the table getting a tube of lube out of the draw and smearing some over himself and Ray's hole. Placing himself just outside of Ray.
'You sure, last chance,'
'Dead sure. Take me Kai I don't think I can wait much longer.' Ray breathed.
Kai started to move into Ray, slowly but without hesitation. Ray's moans got louder and louder as Kai moved further in. Once Kai was fully in he drew out and plunged back in, startling the Chinese boy beneath him.
'Harder Kai, faster,' was all Ray could manage to say. Kai filled Ray's wishes and pumped harder and faster each time he went in.
He could feel himself reaching his climax and Ray reaching his. He pumped harder and harder until…
'RAY'
'KAI'
Both of the youths came, Kai inside of Ray and Ray between the two. Kai pulled out and lay next to his love.
'Next time I get to be on top.' Ray said contently.
'Whatever you say Ray,' Kai said smiling at Ray stroking his hair.
~~ End of LEMON~~
'So,' said a person watching from the opposing window dropping the binoculars he was holding, 'more to tell Voltaire.'
He walked out the door and across to the hotel where Kai and Ray were.
'He will be pleased to have a reason to torture Kai.' He started to laugh and didn't stop until he got to his destination, out side the hotel room where Ray and Kai were. (The hotel room is more like a small house two unsuited, kitchen, lounge room etc.)
~~ Back to Ray and Kai ~~
The two youths lay peaceful in each other's arms for a while.
'When were the others getting back?' Ray asked.
'No idea. Probably when Tyson finishes.'
'So never.'
'Unless Kenny and Max find some help to pull him away.'
'What if they got take-away? Then they could be back soon.' Kai opened his eyes wide.
'Then we should probably get dressed.'
'Yeah, want to have a shower?'
'Yeah.' They got up and went to the bathroom.
~~~IN THE PARK WITH THE OTHERS AND THEIR ICE-CREAMS~~
'What do you think Ray and Kai are hiding?' Tyson asked
'Nothing. They said they were planning for tomorrow.' Max said.
'Yeah. They'd tell us if something was wrong.' Kenny said.
'Maybe nothing's wrong and something's going on.' Tyson hinted.
'What do you mean?'
'Maybe they…'
'LET GO OF ME, YOU GOOF. I DON'T CARE PUT ME DOWN.'
Tyson and the others couldn't hear what the other voice was saying. (By the way, the park is fairly close to the hotel so they can see and hear what's going on.)
'That sounded like Kai.' Tyson said.
'No way.'
'Uh huh.'
'Let's go check it out,' Max said.
~~~ Back at the hotel while this was happening ~~~
Kai and Ray were just getting out of the bathroom (dressed). When a knock at the door came.
'They can't have been back that quick.' Kai said going to answer the door, 'Oh no what do you want?'
'Who is it Kai?' Ray asked.
'Your Grandfather requests to see you Master Kai.' Came a strange voice.
'No. I don't want to.'
'You have no choice, or we might have to take your lover instead, and you know what Voltaire would do to him.' The voice emphasized 'lover', 'do to' and 'him.
Ray had been edging closer to the door but when he got there Kai was already struggling with the man there.
'Let him go.' He said.
'No. You'll get him back. Maybe not in one piece but back.' The voice laughed not a cheery laugh but a cruel laugh. He tossed Kai over his shoulder with difficulty, (Kai is still struggling), and walked away.
'STOP,' Ray yelled but was pushed back against the wall by another person knocking him unconscious.
The man with Kai walked down the stairs laughing. He had dropped a note next to Ray explaining what was going on with very few details.
Once out side Kai started to yell (What the others heard) as he was shoved into a car.
~~~ Back with the others ~~~
They watched from a distance as Kai was shoved into a car and driven away.
'Did you see the look on his face?' Tyson asked.
'Yeah, total fear.'
'I can't believe he can feel anything.' Tyson said shocked
'What about Ray?' Kenny asked.
They all ran inside to see Ray. When the found him he was on the floor reading a note and struggling to get up.
'Ray, what happened?'
'They, They took Kai.'
'Who?'
'His grand father I think.' He said getting up and falling again.
'Here Ray,' Tyson said as he and Max supported him, 'Come inside and tell us everything. From the beginning.'
'Okay.'
They all went inside and sat on the couch. Ray started from two days ago when he and Kai had been alone to now. As he talked Tyson and the others read the note.
To Whom It May Concern:
Your friend (lover) Kai has been taken back to be 'sorted out' and 're-taught' how to behave. You may or may not get him back it depends on how he chooses to act.
Signed Hiwatari Courses (name of the company Voltaire runs) Russia,
Voltaire Hiwatari
Head of Balcov abbey
'Great now well never get Kai back he's going to Russia and that place is huge.' Tyson whined.
'No, well yes, but look,' Kenny pointed to the last bit of the letter. 'Balcov abbey. We know where that is and we can probably get there soon.'
'It'll take forever though.' Ray said lowly, then perking up, 'But it's worth it.' He said getting up.
'Where are you going?' Max asked.
'To pack, I'm (emphasis on I'm) going to Russia to get Kai back.'
'Us too. Kenny can you get tickets for as soon as possible?' (By the way they're in Japan)
'I'll get right on it.' He said turning to dizzy while the others went to pack.
~~ Ray's room ~~
Ray looked out the window.
'Don't worry Kai; I'm coming to get you. I won't let that jerk of a Grandfather of yours hurt you.'
So, how did you like it? It's my first LEMON and as I said I can't risk my brother, or worse my parents reading it. I hope you liked it. Please R&R.
~~READ THIS IS IMPORTANT~~
I'm going back to school soon. So my writing will either slow down, stop for a while or the chapters will get shorter. I promise I will do the best I can to update regularly. At school, they block certain sites from view and fanfiction.net is blocked (stupid teachers) but I found another way in. It's called fanfiction.com, BIG difference huh? But it works AND guess what, it's exactly the same. My homeroom (Form room) is one of the computing rooms so that's cool and I have one period a week in a computing room, well two, but only one I can muck around in.
But the problem is that teachers can read your files (talk about privacy invasion), not that they have time to, or would read something they're not meant to, but they can. So that means very little 'romance', fighting and torture would be okay, and that's what the next chapters are going to be.
I've planed the last chapter perfectly, but now I have to write the chapters up to it.
Like I said I'll try my best. If you have any idea's you can re-view them to me, or write to me at MelissaHutchinson1@kzone.com.au. I would put my school one on here but teachers can read that too (haven't they heard of privacy?) and I like getting e-mail at my kzone address. Though I will reply if necessary through my school one because I'm having problems sending on my kzone one.
See ya. Kai-Koi