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Responses to Reviews:
Iowntatsuya-kun: Aww, that really was a nice review. Wow, you've read all fifteen? That's pretty awesome, I did too, but not before I rotted my mind by reading online spoilers. Welp, thank you for reviewing and come again,
animefan rikku: Wonderful, I'm glad that you like my ficcy so far. ::Runs off to write the next chapter to save the cities from Bob::
MoonMaiden625: Yay, I like long reviews! Yes, Brian was really mean in blackmailing Kira. When will Rei find out about her secret? I'm not too sure. I'm glad that you like the blackmailing idea though.
fallenangel152: I get and read all reviews, mwah ha ha. I think I'm doing all right with my story so far. Hmm... male or female... and what is my age? Although I enjoy the element of mystery (sexy ne?... or maybe not) I'll tell you guys a little about myself. I am a female high school student, and my first name is Dana. This is all you'll get from me. Any rate, thank you for reviewing, and here's a golden donut for putting me on your favorite authors list (ahh, a long response and a golden donut, aren't you a lucky muffin?) Oh yeah, you're right, according to the manga Rei knows already, but I decided to change it around in my fic. Thank you for pointing it out though, I should have cleared that up earlier.
man: Yahoo, thank you for the great review.
Windshine: Yippe, I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thank you very much for the theatrical review. ::whimpers as I stare at Brian's bloody body:: I never thought that Blueberry Pudding could do so much harm. Thank you for sparing the hamster. Keep up the good work with the reviews.
Yummei: Yes, Brian is a bad one isn't he? I'm glad you like my story. I'll keep reviewing as long a people keep reviewing.
Optical Illusions: Lol, you're right all signs rock. I'm glad you liked the last chapter, thank you for reviewing. A special thank you for helping me with my slight writers block. ::Hands you a golden donut:: Your help meant bunches to me.
Mistress Moon?! Where have you gone? ::Sobs:: I've lost a reader! Was it the shortness?! I've changed my ways I swear! ::Sighs:: Oh well, maybe she's busy... I miss your. pretty reviews though!
Does anybody read the Author's Notes?
"Hey," Rei greeted Kira as he pulled up on the curb of the street on his motorcycle.
At that very moment Brian exited the library and walked over towards Kira.
"Hello Rei, thank you for coming," she said to Rei. She tried very hard to ignore Brian's presence. She was hoping that Rei wouldn't find out about the project this way.
"No problem," Rei said slowly, eyeing Brian carefully.
"I had a nice time with you today Kira, we should get together again soon," Brian said cockily, staring back at Rei boldly.
"Let's go," Kira said quickly after watching Rei clench his fists and tighten his jaw. He couldn't have looked more dangerous, if he had six foot iron chain in hand.
She got on behind him and squeezed his stomach gently, urging him to leave. He was just about to turn on the motorcycle when Brian opened his big mouth again.
"What's the matter lover-boy?" Brian sneered maliciously. "Starting to think that maybe there's something going on between Kira and I. Maybe your position as her boyfriend isn't as secure as you thought it was."
"Please Rei, just take me home," Kira pleaded with him soothingly, placing her head against his black leather jacket.
After that he took his eyes from Brian and looked down at her thin arms across his stomach. She squeezed his stomach again lightly and he started the motorcycle and drove off.
As Kira watched the people walk by on the street she silently wished that this ride would never end. She knew that the second she got off Rei would want answers. She half expected him to take it all the wrong way.
They arrived in front of her apartment soon.
"Why didn't you tell me?" Rei asked coldly after she got off the motorcycle, looking off into the distance.
"I'm sorry, I should have. I didn't want you to get angry with me that's all," she replied softly, placing a warm hand on his knee.
Rei looked down at her small hand. He felt angry and betrayed and wanted to slap her hand away, but made no effort to move it.
"What's going on with you two? Why were you with him?" he asked, his voice laced with anger and suspicion.
"We're working on a project together. I tried to switch partners, but the teacher wouldn't allow it. It's not like I wanted to work with him, honest," Kira explained, praying that he'd understand, but feeling guilty about having to lie to him. All in all, she was glad that he confronted her in a way, it was better than him acting all broody for a week.
He looked into her eyes for a good few minutes, as if searching for something.
She tried hard to keep her breath steady, feeling that if she changed her pace of breathing he'd detect the lie and blow up at her.
"Okay," he said finally, taking both her hands in his, and pulling her close.
Kira closed her eyes and smiled slightly as she braced herself for his mind-blowing kiss.
He kissed her so slowly that it was almost tantalizing.
She frowned a little when he ended it, and wanted to ask him for more.
"Even Kira Aso can be enticed, huh?" Rei joked, placing his hands on her cheek gently.
"I love you," she said softly, running a hand through his long and unruly hair.
"I love you too," he replied, smiling at her lovingly. "I'll see you tomorrow, maybe I'll call you tonight," he added.
"Okay," she said, turning away from him and entering her apartment, wondering how many neighbors had witnessed their display of affection.
"How was your trip to the library with Brian?" her mother questioned as she entered the house.
"Fine," Kira replied curtly, looking through the envelops of mail on the kitchen although she wasn't expecting anything.
"He appears to be a fine young man. I'd rather see you with him, rather than with that hooligan Rei Kashino," her mother commented as her daughter trudged up the stairs. "I'm saying this for your own good, I don't want you to get hurt."
She stopped at that last sentence, and wanted to let her mother know that it was too late for that. Of course she didn't have the heart to say it. It made her sad when she thought about how much her mother and herself lost touch. She still loved her, but herself and her mother were never close, and things only got worse as she got older. She then trudged on up the stairs and into her bedroom to be alone with her thoughts.
Kira smiled when she heard Rei's motorcycle wailing. It was almost like a sacred tradition between them, he never left before she turned on her bedroom light.
Kira spent the moments in her bed before falling asleep thinking about what was going on so far. She worried about Brian, and what else he might use against her. She wondered if it would really be all that bad if she told him about her secret. Maybe he'd be okay with it and she'd be able to get Brian completely out of the picture. Maybe he'd be furious and disgusted, and she'd be alone. She then pondered which would be worse, having Brian blackmail her and be with Rei, or not having Brian blackmail her and risking loosing Rei forever.
She then chuckled, she never thought that she'd be liked by two guys at the same time, let alone one. With that final thought she closed her eyes and drifted off to sleep.
Author's Notes: Hello! I'd like to thank all of the readers for reviewing. Ninety reviews! That's practically one hundred, which is technically, two hundred, which is a lot! J/k. So, what do you think of the some-what different format (spaces inbetween the paragraphs), I thought that maybe it would make it a little easier to read. Do you like it, or hate it? Review to let me know. Please come back for my next update, and shame on anyone who reads this far and does not review! ::Throws moldy donuts at the non- reviewers:: I'm sorry for the short chapter. I really hope that it was satisfying enough. I'll update soon to make up for the shortness.... I hope
Responses to Reviews:
Iowntatsuya-kun: Aww, that really was a nice review. Wow, you've read all fifteen? That's pretty awesome, I did too, but not before I rotted my mind by reading online spoilers. Welp, thank you for reviewing and come again,
animefan rikku: Wonderful, I'm glad that you like my ficcy so far. ::Runs off to write the next chapter to save the cities from Bob::
MoonMaiden625: Yay, I like long reviews! Yes, Brian was really mean in blackmailing Kira. When will Rei find out about her secret? I'm not too sure. I'm glad that you like the blackmailing idea though.
fallenangel152: I get and read all reviews, mwah ha ha. I think I'm doing all right with my story so far. Hmm... male or female... and what is my age? Although I enjoy the element of mystery (sexy ne?... or maybe not) I'll tell you guys a little about myself. I am a female high school student, and my first name is Dana. This is all you'll get from me. Any rate, thank you for reviewing, and here's a golden donut for putting me on your favorite authors list (ahh, a long response and a golden donut, aren't you a lucky muffin?) Oh yeah, you're right, according to the manga Rei knows already, but I decided to change it around in my fic. Thank you for pointing it out though, I should have cleared that up earlier.
man: Yahoo, thank you for the great review.
Windshine: Yippe, I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thank you very much for the theatrical review. ::whimpers as I stare at Brian's bloody body:: I never thought that Blueberry Pudding could do so much harm. Thank you for sparing the hamster. Keep up the good work with the reviews.
Yummei: Yes, Brian is a bad one isn't he? I'm glad you like my story. I'll keep reviewing as long a people keep reviewing.
Optical Illusions: Lol, you're right all signs rock. I'm glad you liked the last chapter, thank you for reviewing. A special thank you for helping me with my slight writers block. ::Hands you a golden donut:: Your help meant bunches to me.
Mistress Moon?! Where have you gone? ::Sobs:: I've lost a reader! Was it the shortness?! I've changed my ways I swear! ::Sighs:: Oh well, maybe she's busy... I miss your. pretty reviews though!
Does anybody read the Author's Notes?
"Hey," Rei greeted Kira as he pulled up on the curb of the street on his motorcycle.
At that very moment Brian exited the library and walked over towards Kira.
"Hello Rei, thank you for coming," she said to Rei. She tried very hard to ignore Brian's presence. She was hoping that Rei wouldn't find out about the project this way.
"No problem," Rei said slowly, eyeing Brian carefully.
"I had a nice time with you today Kira, we should get together again soon," Brian said cockily, staring back at Rei boldly.
"Let's go," Kira said quickly after watching Rei clench his fists and tighten his jaw. He couldn't have looked more dangerous, if he had six foot iron chain in hand.
She got on behind him and squeezed his stomach gently, urging him to leave. He was just about to turn on the motorcycle when Brian opened his big mouth again.
"What's the matter lover-boy?" Brian sneered maliciously. "Starting to think that maybe there's something going on between Kira and I. Maybe your position as her boyfriend isn't as secure as you thought it was."
"Please Rei, just take me home," Kira pleaded with him soothingly, placing her head against his black leather jacket.
After that he took his eyes from Brian and looked down at her thin arms across his stomach. She squeezed his stomach again lightly and he started the motorcycle and drove off.
As Kira watched the people walk by on the street she silently wished that this ride would never end. She knew that the second she got off Rei would want answers. She half expected him to take it all the wrong way.
They arrived in front of her apartment soon.
"Why didn't you tell me?" Rei asked coldly after she got off the motorcycle, looking off into the distance.
"I'm sorry, I should have. I didn't want you to get angry with me that's all," she replied softly, placing a warm hand on his knee.
Rei looked down at her small hand. He felt angry and betrayed and wanted to slap her hand away, but made no effort to move it.
"What's going on with you two? Why were you with him?" he asked, his voice laced with anger and suspicion.
"We're working on a project together. I tried to switch partners, but the teacher wouldn't allow it. It's not like I wanted to work with him, honest," Kira explained, praying that he'd understand, but feeling guilty about having to lie to him. All in all, she was glad that he confronted her in a way, it was better than him acting all broody for a week.
He looked into her eyes for a good few minutes, as if searching for something.
She tried hard to keep her breath steady, feeling that if she changed her pace of breathing he'd detect the lie and blow up at her.
"Okay," he said finally, taking both her hands in his, and pulling her close.
Kira closed her eyes and smiled slightly as she braced herself for his mind-blowing kiss.
He kissed her so slowly that it was almost tantalizing.
She frowned a little when he ended it, and wanted to ask him for more.
"Even Kira Aso can be enticed, huh?" Rei joked, placing his hands on her cheek gently.
"I love you," she said softly, running a hand through his long and unruly hair.
"I love you too," he replied, smiling at her lovingly. "I'll see you tomorrow, maybe I'll call you tonight," he added.
"Okay," she said, turning away from him and entering her apartment, wondering how many neighbors had witnessed their display of affection.
"How was your trip to the library with Brian?" her mother questioned as she entered the house.
"Fine," Kira replied curtly, looking through the envelops of mail on the kitchen although she wasn't expecting anything.
"He appears to be a fine young man. I'd rather see you with him, rather than with that hooligan Rei Kashino," her mother commented as her daughter trudged up the stairs. "I'm saying this for your own good, I don't want you to get hurt."
She stopped at that last sentence, and wanted to let her mother know that it was too late for that. Of course she didn't have the heart to say it. It made her sad when she thought about how much her mother and herself lost touch. She still loved her, but herself and her mother were never close, and things only got worse as she got older. She then trudged on up the stairs and into her bedroom to be alone with her thoughts.
Kira smiled when she heard Rei's motorcycle wailing. It was almost like a sacred tradition between them, he never left before she turned on her bedroom light.
Kira spent the moments in her bed before falling asleep thinking about what was going on so far. She worried about Brian, and what else he might use against her. She wondered if it would really be all that bad if she told him about her secret. Maybe he'd be okay with it and she'd be able to get Brian completely out of the picture. Maybe he'd be furious and disgusted, and she'd be alone. She then pondered which would be worse, having Brian blackmail her and be with Rei, or not having Brian blackmail her and risking loosing Rei forever.
She then chuckled, she never thought that she'd be liked by two guys at the same time, let alone one. With that final thought she closed her eyes and drifted off to sleep.
Author's Notes: Hello! I'd like to thank all of the readers for reviewing. Ninety reviews! That's practically one hundred, which is technically, two hundred, which is a lot! J/k. So, what do you think of the some-what different format (spaces inbetween the paragraphs), I thought that maybe it would make it a little easier to read. Do you like it, or hate it? Review to let me know. Please come back for my next update, and shame on anyone who reads this far and does not review! ::Throws moldy donuts at the non- reviewers:: I'm sorry for the short chapter. I really hope that it was satisfying enough. I'll update soon to make up for the shortness.... I hope