Disclaimer: Mars is not mine.
Respose to Reviews: Yay, thanks for all the reviews! I think the last chapter broke a record for the most reviews made on one chapter in two days!
Optical Illusions: Thank you for reviewing, and less than an hour after I updated too. You're really fast!
yasha21: Nope, you have not reviewed my story before now, but I thank you for doing so. I'm really glad that you like my story. One of the best you say? That means a lot to me, thank you. Thank you for enjoying my story, and I'll try my hardest to keep up the good work.
fallenangel152: Yay, I'm really glad that you thought that my chapter was satisfactory. Again I apoligise for the shortness. I chose a guy instead of a girl because in the series, it's always a guy or girl that tries to steal Rei from Kira, and never the other way around. I guess that I could have chosen a lesbian girl, but I haven't thought about it until now. Good question though. Yay, I'm really glad that you're enjoying the fic so far. Why stop at your friends, tell your neighbors, teachers, bus drivers, grocery workers, the entire world! J/k. I hope your friends enjoy my story too. Brian's just a little misunderstood, that's all... honest! Cowboy Bebop? It's a very very very awesome anime series, one of my favorites. They used to have it on the Adult Swim on Cartoon Network a while back, I don't know if they still show it now. Anyways, it's about this group of bounty hunters, Spike, Faye, Jet, Ed and Ein (Ein's a dog, and Ed's a little girl). It's very entertaining, and the artwork and music are simply great. I highly suggest it, check it out if you get the chance.
Windshine: Yay, I'm glad you liked my chapter, despite how short it was. Thank you for reviewing and I'll update again asap.
animefan-rikku: Don't break up Rei and Kira? Well, now that I think of it, it's not a bad idea... I'm just joking. I don't plan on breaking them up so far. Thanks bunches for reviewing. ::Waves to Bob::
jackie: Thank you for enjoying my story. Come back when I update!
man: Yippee, thank you for reading and reviewing. I will update again asap.
kitsunia: Yes, Rei was a little mean. Yay, thank you for commenting on the breaking up of the paragraphs. I'm glad you like it. I'll update asap and I never post less than my best!
moonmaiden625: Hiya! No no, I'd never throw a moldy donut at you! I treasure my reviewers! Don't worry Brian will get what he deserves soon enough! Yay, thank you for answering my question! I know what you were talking about with the whole mom thing. I've spent 150 bucks on buying all fifteen volumes. It brings tears to my eyes when I think about how much money I've spent on anime and manga over the years ::sobs silently:: Yay, I'm glad you liked the fluff in the middle! Oh, and about the brian thing, I'll make a list for you j/k.
"Hello Kira," Brian greeted her, as he did everyday.
"Hello Brian," Kira replied curtly, as she sat down and showed him the ending result of their efforts.
He reached out to take it from her, then skimmed through the essay. "It's beautiful," he complimented her when he finished reading through it. "Very well done, I'm confident that we'll get a good grade."
"Thank you," she replied, taking it back from him and tucking it back in her bagpack carefully.
"It's unfortunate that we'll have to hand it in tomorrow," he said airily.
Kira looked up at him slowly, she knew he was comming up with some sort of scheme. She felt her heart-rate quicken.
"With the project handed in we'll have no reason to meet up with each other," he added, placing his hand possesively over her's on the table.
She tried to pull it away, but he held on firmly.
"We shouldn't have to hide like this," he told her.
"Hide like what? What are you talking about Brian!?" Kira asked, tugging her fand from him fiercly.
"I've seen the way you look at me," he explained. "Don't deny what you feel. I know what you want, and we can have it."
"You're delusinal Brian. How many times do I have to tell you that I don't feelings for you before it sinks in?" she said crossly.
"I'll make this easy for you then Kira. Tell Rei it's over, and be my girlfriend, or I'll tell him about your secret," Brian said coldly, to prove that he was not joking.
"What!?" Kira gasped loudly, earning some looks from the people around her, and a glare from the elderly librarian.
"You heard me. Tell Rei it's over, and I'll keep your secret," Brian said.
"You're a controling bastard Brian. I could never go out with someone like you," Kira snapped. With that she stomped away from him, and towards the door.
"You have until tomorrow at lunch Kira, or else you're entire crew will know," he called coyly before she opened the door.
"Hello?" Rei's deep voice answered.
"Hey Rei," Kira said slowly.
"Hey Kira, what's up? Why are you calling so early?" he asked her.
"Um, it's just that I'm leaving early today. Don't bother comming to pick me up," she explained as she watched the cars speed by on the road.
"What's wrong, you sound a little different today," Rei asked, getting ready to jump to all sorts of conclusions.
"No, everything's okay. I'll.. um... see you tomorrow," Kira said.
"Okay, love ya!" he replied cheerily before hanging up.
She felt her heart break into a million pieces, fearing that that might have been the last time he'd ever say those words to her again.
Authors Notes: Hello! I have a new Mars fan fiction up, so check it oout if you're bored or something. So, what did you think of this chapter. Has Brian reached the state of ultimate evilocity!? Will Kira actually go through with this and break up with Rei? Come back for the next chapter to find out. Please review.
Respose to Reviews: Yay, thanks for all the reviews! I think the last chapter broke a record for the most reviews made on one chapter in two days!
Optical Illusions: Thank you for reviewing, and less than an hour after I updated too. You're really fast!
yasha21: Nope, you have not reviewed my story before now, but I thank you for doing so. I'm really glad that you like my story. One of the best you say? That means a lot to me, thank you. Thank you for enjoying my story, and I'll try my hardest to keep up the good work.
fallenangel152: Yay, I'm really glad that you thought that my chapter was satisfactory. Again I apoligise for the shortness. I chose a guy instead of a girl because in the series, it's always a guy or girl that tries to steal Rei from Kira, and never the other way around. I guess that I could have chosen a lesbian girl, but I haven't thought about it until now. Good question though. Yay, I'm really glad that you're enjoying the fic so far. Why stop at your friends, tell your neighbors, teachers, bus drivers, grocery workers, the entire world! J/k. I hope your friends enjoy my story too. Brian's just a little misunderstood, that's all... honest! Cowboy Bebop? It's a very very very awesome anime series, one of my favorites. They used to have it on the Adult Swim on Cartoon Network a while back, I don't know if they still show it now. Anyways, it's about this group of bounty hunters, Spike, Faye, Jet, Ed and Ein (Ein's a dog, and Ed's a little girl). It's very entertaining, and the artwork and music are simply great. I highly suggest it, check it out if you get the chance.
Windshine: Yay, I'm glad you liked my chapter, despite how short it was. Thank you for reviewing and I'll update again asap.
animefan-rikku: Don't break up Rei and Kira? Well, now that I think of it, it's not a bad idea... I'm just joking. I don't plan on breaking them up so far. Thanks bunches for reviewing. ::Waves to Bob::
jackie: Thank you for enjoying my story. Come back when I update!
man: Yippee, thank you for reading and reviewing. I will update again asap.
kitsunia: Yes, Rei was a little mean. Yay, thank you for commenting on the breaking up of the paragraphs. I'm glad you like it. I'll update asap and I never post less than my best!
moonmaiden625: Hiya! No no, I'd never throw a moldy donut at you! I treasure my reviewers! Don't worry Brian will get what he deserves soon enough! Yay, thank you for answering my question! I know what you were talking about with the whole mom thing. I've spent 150 bucks on buying all fifteen volumes. It brings tears to my eyes when I think about how much money I've spent on anime and manga over the years ::sobs silently:: Yay, I'm glad you liked the fluff in the middle! Oh, and about the brian thing, I'll make a list for you j/k.
"Hello Kira," Brian greeted her, as he did everyday.
"Hello Brian," Kira replied curtly, as she sat down and showed him the ending result of their efforts.
He reached out to take it from her, then skimmed through the essay. "It's beautiful," he complimented her when he finished reading through it. "Very well done, I'm confident that we'll get a good grade."
"Thank you," she replied, taking it back from him and tucking it back in her bagpack carefully.
"It's unfortunate that we'll have to hand it in tomorrow," he said airily.
Kira looked up at him slowly, she knew he was comming up with some sort of scheme. She felt her heart-rate quicken.
"With the project handed in we'll have no reason to meet up with each other," he added, placing his hand possesively over her's on the table.
She tried to pull it away, but he held on firmly.
"We shouldn't have to hide like this," he told her.
"Hide like what? What are you talking about Brian!?" Kira asked, tugging her fand from him fiercly.
"I've seen the way you look at me," he explained. "Don't deny what you feel. I know what you want, and we can have it."
"You're delusinal Brian. How many times do I have to tell you that I don't feelings for you before it sinks in?" she said crossly.
"I'll make this easy for you then Kira. Tell Rei it's over, and be my girlfriend, or I'll tell him about your secret," Brian said coldly, to prove that he was not joking.
"What!?" Kira gasped loudly, earning some looks from the people around her, and a glare from the elderly librarian.
"You heard me. Tell Rei it's over, and I'll keep your secret," Brian said.
"You're a controling bastard Brian. I could never go out with someone like you," Kira snapped. With that she stomped away from him, and towards the door.
"You have until tomorrow at lunch Kira, or else you're entire crew will know," he called coyly before she opened the door.
"Hello?" Rei's deep voice answered.
"Hey Rei," Kira said slowly.
"Hey Kira, what's up? Why are you calling so early?" he asked her.
"Um, it's just that I'm leaving early today. Don't bother comming to pick me up," she explained as she watched the cars speed by on the road.
"What's wrong, you sound a little different today," Rei asked, getting ready to jump to all sorts of conclusions.
"No, everything's okay. I'll.. um... see you tomorrow," Kira said.
"Okay, love ya!" he replied cheerily before hanging up.
She felt her heart break into a million pieces, fearing that that might have been the last time he'd ever say those words to her again.
Authors Notes: Hello! I have a new Mars fan fiction up, so check it oout if you're bored or something. So, what did you think of this chapter. Has Brian reached the state of ultimate evilocity!? Will Kira actually go through with this and break up with Rei? Come back for the next chapter to find out. Please review.