Hey again!
Thanks for all the reviews....and I didn't realize that I made so many stupid mistakes!
AUGH! I'm REALLY sorry!
Gomen nasai!
I'll try to be more careful from now on! Thanks though to the people who caught my mistakes. They won't happen again.....hopefully!
XP
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Kai fell down hard on the cold snow. He was trying to catch his breath, but was having a hard time.
"I....can't go....any....further." He said.
Tala stopped immediately and turned around to his wounded friend.
Kai went into a coughing fit, bringing up blood. He had overdone it now, and was sure he was going to die.
Tala was desperately trying to think of what to do. He had to get Kai to a hospital soon! But how was he going to get there? He knew the way out of the forest, but if he took Kai, it would slow him down and it would be too late for the beyblader to survive! But if he left him, Voltaire could find him!
"What to do what to do!" Tala thought to himself. He looked up and saw light from flashlights and heard people yelling at each other in Russian.
"Tala......leave me here......." Kai started, but fell unconscience.
"Crap! Kai! Wake up!" He hit his friend lightly on the face, but he wouldn't wake up.
Kai was barely breathing now.
Tala hoisted Kai onto his back and took off running.
A few minutes later, the guards had come to the stop where Kai had fallen. There they saw blood on the snow. One of the guards yelled to another that they were close.
"You won't get far Kai." Voltaire thought to himself.
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Yes I know it's a short chapter, but before I go on, I need some help trying to end this thing. I have an idea on how to end it, but I'm not sure if you guys are going to like it. So please tell me how you would like it to end.
Thank you!
Thanks for all the reviews....and I didn't realize that I made so many stupid mistakes!
AUGH! I'm REALLY sorry!
Gomen nasai!
I'll try to be more careful from now on! Thanks though to the people who caught my mistakes. They won't happen again.....hopefully!
XP
~~~~~~~~~~~
Kai fell down hard on the cold snow. He was trying to catch his breath, but was having a hard time.
"I....can't go....any....further." He said.
Tala stopped immediately and turned around to his wounded friend.
Kai went into a coughing fit, bringing up blood. He had overdone it now, and was sure he was going to die.
Tala was desperately trying to think of what to do. He had to get Kai to a hospital soon! But how was he going to get there? He knew the way out of the forest, but if he took Kai, it would slow him down and it would be too late for the beyblader to survive! But if he left him, Voltaire could find him!
"What to do what to do!" Tala thought to himself. He looked up and saw light from flashlights and heard people yelling at each other in Russian.
"Tala......leave me here......." Kai started, but fell unconscience.
"Crap! Kai! Wake up!" He hit his friend lightly on the face, but he wouldn't wake up.
Kai was barely breathing now.
Tala hoisted Kai onto his back and took off running.
A few minutes later, the guards had come to the stop where Kai had fallen. There they saw blood on the snow. One of the guards yelled to another that they were close.
"You won't get far Kai." Voltaire thought to himself.
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Yes I know it's a short chapter, but before I go on, I need some help trying to end this thing. I have an idea on how to end it, but I'm not sure if you guys are going to like it. So please tell me how you would like it to end.
Thank you!