Thanks for all the reviews again!
I'm starting to think this story is going to have not 1 or 2 more chapters, but quite a few more!
I was going to have Kai blind, but then people reviewed saying not to, and again...making treats... lol
so I had to rewrite the whole ending, but I guess it isn't so bad right?
Anyway...here's the next chapter!
Enjoy!
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"Hey Doc! Wait!" Tyson exclaimed seeing that the Russian doctor was leaving.
He stopped and turned around and looked down at Dragoon's master.
"Isn't there a way you can try and save his eyes?" Tyson asked eagerly. "I mean think about it....what's Kai without beyblading?"
"Yeah." Kenny and Rei agreed.
The doctor only sighed sadly. "Well, when Kai came back in, we immediately brought him into surgery and started on his eyes, but as I've said before, that did little good. Unless by a miracle, Kai won't see at all!" The doctor explained.
The boys became depressed again, and Tyson plopped down in a chair.
"Cheer up boys! Kai's a pretty strong kid, he'll pull through, and find a way to keep on beyblading." Mr. Dickinson said.
"Yeah I guess you're right Mr. D. Kai's not going to let anything stop him." Rei replied after a few moments of silence.
The room then became quiet once again as everyone waited for Kai to come out of surgery again.
About 5 hours later, a young nurse about 25 years old came out and greeted the BladeBreakers. She looked cheerful as she smiled at everyone. "Mr. Hiwitari has come out of surgery. If you would like, I'll take you to his room." She said with a thick Russian accent.
Everyone jumped out of their seats and followed the nurse down the hallway.
She lead them to another part of the hospital they hadn't seen before, Kenny guessed that it was intensive care.
They evintually came to a white door, with 2 guards standing by it. The nurse had to show them her hospital ID before they let her inside.
"This was a smart idea. Now that I think about it, they should've posted guards around Kai in the first place!" Kenny whispered to Rei, who nodded in agreement.
As everyone entered the large grayish room, they saw Kai laying motionless in a bed centered in the room. He was hooked up to just about every machine in that hospital or so it seemed. There was no window in this room, but it was larger than the first one he was in.
"I'll leave you all alone now." The nurse whispered and left.
They boys walked slowly over to Kaia's bed.
Everyone was quiet and the only sound that could be heard was the beeping of the machines every now and then.
Kai had a thick bandage around his eyes. It covered most of his face. The blue triangles were washed off, and a Band-Aid was placed on his right cheek. He also had another bandage around his head, and blood was seeping through in a little area.
His bare chest was covered in bandages, coming up around his shoulders and neck and in some places blood was seeping through.
Kenny became nauseous at the sight of the blood and ran off to the bathroom.
Kaia's left arm was bandaged from the elbow down, and was resting in a sling across his chest. His other arm was less damaged, but had an IV line sticking in his hand. There was also another bag of blood that was connected further up on his arm, giving Kai the blood he much needed to recover.
In addition to all the bangs, there were multiple wires stuck on his right arm and different places on his body.
"Man Kai....they sure did a number on you." Rei said to himself grabbing his right hand softly.
"Hey Kai....I don't know if you can hear me, but everyone's here and you gotta pull through!" Tyson said
"Come on boys....let him rest." Mr. Dickinson said sadly opening the door to leave.
The boys turned and followed.
"Wake up soon Kai." Rei said before exiting the room.
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I am already finished with the next chapter, so I might post it later today or tomorrow. I think it's kindof long so it should satisfy people for a little bit (hopefully)
don't forget to review!
later!
oh! I also wanted to comment on the spelling and stuff....I am a really bad speller at times, and the spell checker on my computer is really........strange and it skips words sometimes..so I am sorry about it..you'll just have to put up with it
^_^
I'm starting to think this story is going to have not 1 or 2 more chapters, but quite a few more!
I was going to have Kai blind, but then people reviewed saying not to, and again...making treats... lol
so I had to rewrite the whole ending, but I guess it isn't so bad right?
Anyway...here's the next chapter!
Enjoy!
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"Hey Doc! Wait!" Tyson exclaimed seeing that the Russian doctor was leaving.
He stopped and turned around and looked down at Dragoon's master.
"Isn't there a way you can try and save his eyes?" Tyson asked eagerly. "I mean think about it....what's Kai without beyblading?"
"Yeah." Kenny and Rei agreed.
The doctor only sighed sadly. "Well, when Kai came back in, we immediately brought him into surgery and started on his eyes, but as I've said before, that did little good. Unless by a miracle, Kai won't see at all!" The doctor explained.
The boys became depressed again, and Tyson plopped down in a chair.
"Cheer up boys! Kai's a pretty strong kid, he'll pull through, and find a way to keep on beyblading." Mr. Dickinson said.
"Yeah I guess you're right Mr. D. Kai's not going to let anything stop him." Rei replied after a few moments of silence.
The room then became quiet once again as everyone waited for Kai to come out of surgery again.
About 5 hours later, a young nurse about 25 years old came out and greeted the BladeBreakers. She looked cheerful as she smiled at everyone. "Mr. Hiwitari has come out of surgery. If you would like, I'll take you to his room." She said with a thick Russian accent.
Everyone jumped out of their seats and followed the nurse down the hallway.
She lead them to another part of the hospital they hadn't seen before, Kenny guessed that it was intensive care.
They evintually came to a white door, with 2 guards standing by it. The nurse had to show them her hospital ID before they let her inside.
"This was a smart idea. Now that I think about it, they should've posted guards around Kai in the first place!" Kenny whispered to Rei, who nodded in agreement.
As everyone entered the large grayish room, they saw Kai laying motionless in a bed centered in the room. He was hooked up to just about every machine in that hospital or so it seemed. There was no window in this room, but it was larger than the first one he was in.
"I'll leave you all alone now." The nurse whispered and left.
They boys walked slowly over to Kaia's bed.
Everyone was quiet and the only sound that could be heard was the beeping of the machines every now and then.
Kai had a thick bandage around his eyes. It covered most of his face. The blue triangles were washed off, and a Band-Aid was placed on his right cheek. He also had another bandage around his head, and blood was seeping through in a little area.
His bare chest was covered in bandages, coming up around his shoulders and neck and in some places blood was seeping through.
Kenny became nauseous at the sight of the blood and ran off to the bathroom.
Kaia's left arm was bandaged from the elbow down, and was resting in a sling across his chest. His other arm was less damaged, but had an IV line sticking in his hand. There was also another bag of blood that was connected further up on his arm, giving Kai the blood he much needed to recover.
In addition to all the bangs, there were multiple wires stuck on his right arm and different places on his body.
"Man Kai....they sure did a number on you." Rei said to himself grabbing his right hand softly.
"Hey Kai....I don't know if you can hear me, but everyone's here and you gotta pull through!" Tyson said
"Come on boys....let him rest." Mr. Dickinson said sadly opening the door to leave.
The boys turned and followed.
"Wake up soon Kai." Rei said before exiting the room.
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I am already finished with the next chapter, so I might post it later today or tomorrow. I think it's kindof long so it should satisfy people for a little bit (hopefully)
don't forget to review!
later!
oh! I also wanted to comment on the spelling and stuff....I am a really bad speller at times, and the spell checker on my computer is really........strange and it skips words sometimes..so I am sorry about it..you'll just have to put up with it
^_^