MY FIRST SERIOUS STORY. Hmm. this won't end well..
Goku invited Vegeta, Yamcha, Krillen, and Piccolo to his house. It was a very stormy day, and Goku was surprised to see them there.
"Man, it sure is pouring out! Look at that!"
"Yeah, Krillen, but I'm glad you could make it!"
"So, where's Gohan?"
"Well, Yamcha, If you ask me, his mother is probably making him study."
"How did you know?" Chi Chi asked with a puzzled look on her face.
"Ugg."
"So, Vegeta, how---" ::Goku freezes in fear. His eyes widened.::
"Blast Goku, what is --- What the hell is that power?"
"I'm not sure guys, but it can't be good.. IT'S COMMING FROM GOHAN'S ROOM!" Goku said with a horror in his eyes.
As they run towards Gohans room, they hear Gohan's faint wimpering. They slam the door, to see a tall, shadowed figure. His eyes glowed red and a strange red gem was on his forehead. That's all they could make out of him in the shadows. Gohan was raised high in the air by his throat by this strange figure. He was bruised, and one of his arms looked limp, which probably means that it is broken.
"Fa.ther." The shadowed figure tightened his grip on his throat. Gohan coughed a little, then went silent. He let his grip go on his throat, but only enough so he could breathe. Gohan was barely alive.
"LET GO OF MY SON!"
Shadow: ::evil laugh, fires beam at krillin, blows him up. Then uses his psychokinetic powers to slam yamcha against the wall, then making him explode::
"Krillen, Yamcha, NOO!" ::Goku runs at the mysterious figure, but he hold Gohan in front of him as a sort of hostage::
"Now, now, little goku, we wouldn't want you making a foolish mistake, would we?" ::Throws Gohan in the air for a brief second, then catching him by the hair:: "One more move and I can kill your precious 'Gohan.'"
"LET GO OF MY SON, YOU MONSTER!!!"
"Dad. (cut off by shadows talking)"
"He, he, he, he. He, He, He, He, HA, HA, HA, HA, HA, HA, ARE YOU THREATENING ME!? INSOLENT FOOL!" Kicks gohan in his broken arm, then punches him hard in the chest.
"You'll pay for that! Gohan, don't worry, I'll save you soon." Backs up, stammering in fear of his son. The shadow laughed and fired beam into gohans chest, killing him. then threw him into the ground, and flew away
"GOHAN, NOO!!!" Tears come to Goku's eyes, as he picks up his diseased son, and lays him gently on his bed. Chi-hi fainted.
"Kakarot, Who was that?"
"I don't know, but by hell I'm gonna find out. he'll pay for what he has done."
::Goku and Vegeta fly off to find him, they can do it easy, because they can sense his immense power::
"So, you and your pathetic friends were able to find me. so be it. you will perish.." Gets up, then goes into a fighting position.
"Who are you!?" Piccolo said, holding back his rage.
"Who am I, you ask? I will tell you. My name is-"
AREN'T I MEAN! JUST TO MAKE YOU READ MORE, IM WAITIN TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER. UMM.. YEAH DUCK, HAVE FUN. R AND R!!
Goku invited Vegeta, Yamcha, Krillen, and Piccolo to his house. It was a very stormy day, and Goku was surprised to see them there.
"Man, it sure is pouring out! Look at that!"
"Yeah, Krillen, but I'm glad you could make it!"
"So, where's Gohan?"
"Well, Yamcha, If you ask me, his mother is probably making him study."
"How did you know?" Chi Chi asked with a puzzled look on her face.
"Ugg."
"So, Vegeta, how---" ::Goku freezes in fear. His eyes widened.::
"Blast Goku, what is --- What the hell is that power?"
"I'm not sure guys, but it can't be good.. IT'S COMMING FROM GOHAN'S ROOM!" Goku said with a horror in his eyes.
As they run towards Gohans room, they hear Gohan's faint wimpering. They slam the door, to see a tall, shadowed figure. His eyes glowed red and a strange red gem was on his forehead. That's all they could make out of him in the shadows. Gohan was raised high in the air by his throat by this strange figure. He was bruised, and one of his arms looked limp, which probably means that it is broken.
"Fa.ther." The shadowed figure tightened his grip on his throat. Gohan coughed a little, then went silent. He let his grip go on his throat, but only enough so he could breathe. Gohan was barely alive.
"LET GO OF MY SON!"
Shadow: ::evil laugh, fires beam at krillin, blows him up. Then uses his psychokinetic powers to slam yamcha against the wall, then making him explode::
"Krillen, Yamcha, NOO!" ::Goku runs at the mysterious figure, but he hold Gohan in front of him as a sort of hostage::
"Now, now, little goku, we wouldn't want you making a foolish mistake, would we?" ::Throws Gohan in the air for a brief second, then catching him by the hair:: "One more move and I can kill your precious 'Gohan.'"
"LET GO OF MY SON, YOU MONSTER!!!"
"Dad. (cut off by shadows talking)"
"He, he, he, he. He, He, He, He, HA, HA, HA, HA, HA, HA, ARE YOU THREATENING ME!? INSOLENT FOOL!" Kicks gohan in his broken arm, then punches him hard in the chest.
"You'll pay for that! Gohan, don't worry, I'll save you soon." Backs up, stammering in fear of his son. The shadow laughed and fired beam into gohans chest, killing him. then threw him into the ground, and flew away
"GOHAN, NOO!!!" Tears come to Goku's eyes, as he picks up his diseased son, and lays him gently on his bed. Chi-hi fainted.
"Kakarot, Who was that?"
"I don't know, but by hell I'm gonna find out. he'll pay for what he has done."
::Goku and Vegeta fly off to find him, they can do it easy, because they can sense his immense power::
"So, you and your pathetic friends were able to find me. so be it. you will perish.." Gets up, then goes into a fighting position.
"Who are you!?" Piccolo said, holding back his rage.
"Who am I, you ask? I will tell you. My name is-"
AREN'T I MEAN! JUST TO MAKE YOU READ MORE, IM WAITIN TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER. UMM.. YEAH DUCK, HAVE FUN. R AND R!!