A/N: Heya![shake it like a Polaroid picta!] Sorry I haven't updated for a
while. But I was kinda depressed, grades suck, life sucks, what doesn't?
Hadn't had much inspiration, not even now as I write, but I want to at
least update now because I have time. But I seriously do not know how this
is gonna end up : P. Please review, it would make me feel better!
Warning: First part of this chapter is a little dark but steamy. And it will probably be short. I may be planning to write the nc-17 version of it. Ok, you know what, I will, and I'll put the link at my bio page.
-I Learned from the Best- Chapter 4
Legolas opened his blue eyes to meet a pair of steel eyes. He lay on his bed, staring into them for a long time. Then, the owner of those eyes smiled, and pressed his lips onto Legolas'. Legolas could feel his weight press onto his body and found that he could not suppress his arousal. He returned the kiss fully, as his hands snaked underneath the man's clothes, feeling taut muscle, toned after many years of training and harsh battles. They stopped kissing for a moment.
"Amin mella le."
Skin against skin, lips against lips. Hips ferociously colliding, incoherent whispers. Legolas was at his peak, lungs and throat screaming out his lover's name, over and over. Just as he was to release, the man stopped. His eyes were shadowed, and his lips curved into a wicked smile. All of a sudden, before Legolas could do anything, the man grabbed a dagger from underneath his heap of clothes at the foot of the bed. He smiled.
"Amin mella le."
Legolas' eyes widened in utter shock and pain. His love had stabbed his chest. The pain was burning, and blood, his blood, was already staining the bed sheets. He looked up at his love, whose hand was still clasped around the dagger's handle. Then, he twisted the dagger, and with a sickening rip, he pulled his heart out.
"Estel!!!!!!!!!!!" Legolas screamed and gained consciousness His head and heart was pounding, his body shaking violently. He continued to scream and scream. He could not stop the tears from escaping. He tried to breathe properly but he could not, crying, choking, sobbing and screaming.
Sure enough, Elrohir heard Legolas' screams, as he was on his way to his chambers after completing his work. Immediately, he ran all the way to Legolas' chambers and burst through the door. What he saw shocked him and broke his heart. "Legolas!"
Legolas was on the floor, crying and screaming and thrashing about. All he could make out were "Ore [heart]", "Sikil [dagger]", "Yaar [blood]" and "Amin mella le [I love you]". He went on his knees and tried to calm him down. "Legolas! Legolas..shh..shh..it's alright, I'm here. I'm here." Elrohir grasped Legolas' firmly but not too hard. He could feel how violently Legolas was shaking and how difficult it was for him to breathe. His was still sobbing but then his screaming had reduced to mumbling. Elrohir's presence seemed to calm him down a bit. Slowly, Elrohir scooped Legolas into his arms, rubbed his back, and started to rock him slowly.
Legolas' body stopped shaking but remained to tremble slightly. His breath steadied but tears continued to run freely down his red cheeks. He had a hand gripping onto Elrohir's collar. Elrohir kissed Legolas' sweaty brow. Then he whispered, "What happened, mellonin?"
Legolas stiffened. How could he possibly tell him? It hurt him too much and he was terrified. But his chest was bursting, and his mind wanted to explode. He stifled a sob. Then, he couldn't take it any longer. He couldn't. It was driving him insane.
"He stabbed me! Stabbed me! With a dagger, drove it..drove it into me. My chest. My heart. He, he smiled. You know that? He smiled. And told me, "Amin mella le". Amin mella le.amin mella le.and then..then.." Legolas stopped.
"Please finish it, Legolas. Please?" Elrohir asked, reassuringly. Legolas swallowed. He looked up at Elrohir.
"He ripped my heart out." Elrohir was shocked, and for a few moments, both remained silent. Elrohir was about to speak when he saw Legolas' fingers stroking something. His eyes widened with shock and his mind was racing, screaming, "No! No! This can't be happening, not now. Please, Elbereth. Help him. Help me. Help us." All of a sudden, Legolas looked up at him, with a twisted smile upon his face, which was starting to scare Elrohir.
"Legolas? What is the matter? Where are you going?!" Elrohir started to panic. Legolas had rose to his feet, a maniacal grin on his face. "Legolas please stop!" Elrohir cried, and held onto Legolas' robe. "Let go, Elrohir." Legolas said, softly and dangerously. Elrohir let go at once, not because of the order. It was because of how he asked him to. Legolas had never spoken towards him like that. Before he could stop himself, tears began to run down his face. "Legolas.." He whispered, but Legolas had already left the chamber.
Elrohir buried his face in his hands. "Elbereth please save him.."
Legolas' mind was racing. His emotions were bumping into each other and a drum was pounding mercilessly in his head. Then, it happened. His mind snapped. His body was moving on it's own will, not Legolas'. Legolas' mind was shut off, so then, he would not be able to control his actions. He was practically possessed, or maybe even a mad man. He was walking until he reached the healer's quarters. It was already nightfall. It was probably vacant. He slipped on the silver ring he had found earlier onto his wedding finger. He smiled wickedly. He entered the room. Candles softly lighted it, but the light went out as the wind passed by. Then, after weaving in and out of various rooms, he found the room he was looking for.
The room was lit by moonlight, it having a window and all. There, in the middle of the room lay someone soundly sleeping. Well, not for long. All of a sudden, a gust of wind blew in, and the patient stirred. He sat up slowly but stopped, eyes wide open.
"Good evening, Estel."
-TBC-
A/N: So.review? No? Please!!?? I will reward you guys with a good nc- 17!!!Alright? And by the way, I'm sorry that I have to do this, but as a writer I can't help myself, so I'm advertising! I have written a new A/L fic called Beautiful stranger. I really want to know how people feel about it and I really, really need some ideas from others to continue. Ok then. Review ok?
Warning: First part of this chapter is a little dark but steamy. And it will probably be short. I may be planning to write the nc-17 version of it. Ok, you know what, I will, and I'll put the link at my bio page.
-I Learned from the Best- Chapter 4
Legolas opened his blue eyes to meet a pair of steel eyes. He lay on his bed, staring into them for a long time. Then, the owner of those eyes smiled, and pressed his lips onto Legolas'. Legolas could feel his weight press onto his body and found that he could not suppress his arousal. He returned the kiss fully, as his hands snaked underneath the man's clothes, feeling taut muscle, toned after many years of training and harsh battles. They stopped kissing for a moment.
"Amin mella le."
Skin against skin, lips against lips. Hips ferociously colliding, incoherent whispers. Legolas was at his peak, lungs and throat screaming out his lover's name, over and over. Just as he was to release, the man stopped. His eyes were shadowed, and his lips curved into a wicked smile. All of a sudden, before Legolas could do anything, the man grabbed a dagger from underneath his heap of clothes at the foot of the bed. He smiled.
"Amin mella le."
Legolas' eyes widened in utter shock and pain. His love had stabbed his chest. The pain was burning, and blood, his blood, was already staining the bed sheets. He looked up at his love, whose hand was still clasped around the dagger's handle. Then, he twisted the dagger, and with a sickening rip, he pulled his heart out.
"Estel!!!!!!!!!!!" Legolas screamed and gained consciousness His head and heart was pounding, his body shaking violently. He continued to scream and scream. He could not stop the tears from escaping. He tried to breathe properly but he could not, crying, choking, sobbing and screaming.
Sure enough, Elrohir heard Legolas' screams, as he was on his way to his chambers after completing his work. Immediately, he ran all the way to Legolas' chambers and burst through the door. What he saw shocked him and broke his heart. "Legolas!"
Legolas was on the floor, crying and screaming and thrashing about. All he could make out were "Ore [heart]", "Sikil [dagger]", "Yaar [blood]" and "Amin mella le [I love you]". He went on his knees and tried to calm him down. "Legolas! Legolas..shh..shh..it's alright, I'm here. I'm here." Elrohir grasped Legolas' firmly but not too hard. He could feel how violently Legolas was shaking and how difficult it was for him to breathe. His was still sobbing but then his screaming had reduced to mumbling. Elrohir's presence seemed to calm him down a bit. Slowly, Elrohir scooped Legolas into his arms, rubbed his back, and started to rock him slowly.
Legolas' body stopped shaking but remained to tremble slightly. His breath steadied but tears continued to run freely down his red cheeks. He had a hand gripping onto Elrohir's collar. Elrohir kissed Legolas' sweaty brow. Then he whispered, "What happened, mellonin?"
Legolas stiffened. How could he possibly tell him? It hurt him too much and he was terrified. But his chest was bursting, and his mind wanted to explode. He stifled a sob. Then, he couldn't take it any longer. He couldn't. It was driving him insane.
"He stabbed me! Stabbed me! With a dagger, drove it..drove it into me. My chest. My heart. He, he smiled. You know that? He smiled. And told me, "Amin mella le". Amin mella le.amin mella le.and then..then.." Legolas stopped.
"Please finish it, Legolas. Please?" Elrohir asked, reassuringly. Legolas swallowed. He looked up at Elrohir.
"He ripped my heart out." Elrohir was shocked, and for a few moments, both remained silent. Elrohir was about to speak when he saw Legolas' fingers stroking something. His eyes widened with shock and his mind was racing, screaming, "No! No! This can't be happening, not now. Please, Elbereth. Help him. Help me. Help us." All of a sudden, Legolas looked up at him, with a twisted smile upon his face, which was starting to scare Elrohir.
"Legolas? What is the matter? Where are you going?!" Elrohir started to panic. Legolas had rose to his feet, a maniacal grin on his face. "Legolas please stop!" Elrohir cried, and held onto Legolas' robe. "Let go, Elrohir." Legolas said, softly and dangerously. Elrohir let go at once, not because of the order. It was because of how he asked him to. Legolas had never spoken towards him like that. Before he could stop himself, tears began to run down his face. "Legolas.." He whispered, but Legolas had already left the chamber.
Elrohir buried his face in his hands. "Elbereth please save him.."
Legolas' mind was racing. His emotions were bumping into each other and a drum was pounding mercilessly in his head. Then, it happened. His mind snapped. His body was moving on it's own will, not Legolas'. Legolas' mind was shut off, so then, he would not be able to control his actions. He was practically possessed, or maybe even a mad man. He was walking until he reached the healer's quarters. It was already nightfall. It was probably vacant. He slipped on the silver ring he had found earlier onto his wedding finger. He smiled wickedly. He entered the room. Candles softly lighted it, but the light went out as the wind passed by. Then, after weaving in and out of various rooms, he found the room he was looking for.
The room was lit by moonlight, it having a window and all. There, in the middle of the room lay someone soundly sleeping. Well, not for long. All of a sudden, a gust of wind blew in, and the patient stirred. He sat up slowly but stopped, eyes wide open.
"Good evening, Estel."
-TBC-
A/N: So.review? No? Please!!?? I will reward you guys with a good nc- 17!!!Alright? And by the way, I'm sorry that I have to do this, but as a writer I can't help myself, so I'm advertising! I have written a new A/L fic called Beautiful stranger. I really want to know how people feel about it and I really, really need some ideas from others to continue. Ok then. Review ok?