Sorry about not updating as much, my computer go a virus and so I had to
recover a lot of stuff, then I kind of forgot that I made a Fan fiction
^.^;;
" " = talking
' ' = thinking
( )= author (me) talking
~ ~ ~ = time passed
------ = the 'other' side
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All four of them walked in at the same time, they were immediately shielded from each other's view and the door behind them closed.
---Yuske---
Yuske walked forward, he could neither go left nor right much less backwards. 'This is surely a trap,' he thought as he continued up the endless path. As he walked, he noticed strange things on the walls, first it seemed like it was taking a shape, then it disappeared. Yuske started running, he knew something was wrong, he could feel it. He ran until he met a fork in the maze. 'Right or left?' he asked himself. He realized when he started, he was on the left most side, "Right," he said out loud as he turned right. He continued running along the passageway until he reached two doors on opposite corners of the room. There seemed to be two switches on either side of the room. He pulled one, only to find it able to open the opposite door. He walked toward the door only to have the door close up and the switch switched back again. Then he looked back the way he had come and smiled, "So that's how he did it." There were two tunnels leading to the same room, he and another person had to flick the switches the same time in order to go through. He sat, and waited.
----Hiei----
Hiei walked into the tunnel with his hands in his pocket and his sword strapped to his back. He sighed, 'Another boring test,' he thought, 'Might as well get it over with now.' He jogged, not wanting to waste his energy in running, but wanting to get to where ever he was going quickly. He came across a fork in the maze with three ways to go: straight, left, or right. He hmphed (hopefully we all know how that sounds like), "Typical." He choose the right path and went down it. He stopped when he spotted a dead end. He had no where to run when the wall behind him blocked him from the way he came. He was about to take out his sword when a trap door opened under him and he fell though. As he was falling, he looked down and pulled out his sword just in time to stop his fall. Underneath was a barricade of spikes, just waiting for someone to land on them. Hiei noticed a passageway just beyond it and quickly jumped off the wall, taking his sword that was embedded into the wall with him. He continued the only way he could go, he found himself trapped. Cage like bars held him in the chamber while the switch was on the opposite side. He struck the metal with his sword, but only got a shock up his arm as the vibration of the sword crawled up it. He was stuck.
---Kuwabara---
Kuwabara entered his side of the narrow passage. His side was dark and hard to see. Plus, he kept feeling something at his feet. He went deep inside himself to find his spirit then called it out to be his light. He slowly looked down after feeling something go up his pant leg. On the ground were millions of bugs, all types of them, caterpillars, centipedes, spiders, scorpions, all sorts of 'good stuff'. Kuwabara yelped and ran, his eyes watering with tears. "Why me?" He cried all the way. Not noticing the fork in the maze, he crashed into the wall where it split. He rubbed his head and got up from the ground, "Left or right, eh?" He decided quickly, "Left, my lucky side," he chuckled and ran left. He didn't wait to find out if there were any more bugs on the ground. It seemed that the road got narrower and narrower as he went down. Soon he was in a dimly lit dungeon. He heard a scraping of metal somewhere close. "Hello?" Kuwabara asked. He prepared his spirit sword and walked forward. He came upon a tightly closed cage.
---Kurama---
All Kurama's senses were alert as he walked through the tunnel with both hands in his pockets. Ahead of him he could hear a flutter of wings, at that same time, he saw a soft glint of light ahead. As the sound increased, he found himself in a dimly lit room. He looked up, above him were many birds of different shapes and sizes. Kurama frowned, why would birds be at a place like this unless.it was a trap. He sighed, he had no choice but to continue forward, the only other way was back, and that was closed. He took a deep breath and walked into the room. The first step he took seemed fine, a second, nothing wrong. The third, the room shook and on either side of him the ground began to crumble. Kurama looked behind, there was no turning back, the road behind him also crumbled and fell into a bottomless pit. "Figures," he muttered as he continued on the narrow path. He took a few more steps, the birds above him gave an ear-piercing screech. One after another, they dove to attack. Kurama began running, he called his Rose Whip and whipped it around him so that the birds' attacks were stopped. He ran into the opposite side and turned his whip back into his rose. 'That was too easy,' Kurama thought. He could do nothing but continue forward, so he did, this time at a run. He soon saw another light, it was brighter than the last one, as he came closer, he noticed something, no, someone sitting there. He emerged, "Yuske!" He took sometime to catch his breath.
---Hiei---
Hiei heard someone come. He was ready to attack if the 'someone' were to be unfriendly, though he couldn't fight much in his situation, being locked up in a cage and all. The someone called. Hiei lowered his sword and sheathed it, he would be able to recognize that idiotic voice from anywhere. "Kuwabara, you baka, stop yelling your head off."
Kuwabara emerged from the corner, "Hiei? What are you doing in there?" He asked, dim witted, as usual.
Hiei sighed, "You see that lever over there? Pull it."
Kuwabara's eyes narrowed, "Why? How do you know it isn't a trap?"
Hiei, not having much patients with him, "I don't know! How do I know?! I am just in this cage! And the way out SEEMS to be that lever over there." His eyes glared back at Kuwabara.
"Fine, fine," Kuwabara muttered as he pulled the lever, Hiei's door opened, but there was also something else that opened along with it.
---Yuske and Kurama---
Yuske got up from sitting cross-legged. He stretched, he had been sitting there for about 20 minutes. "Finally someone came," he muttered, then to Kurama, "I think I know how to open those doors, both of us have to flick the switches at the same time. The doors should open then, but who knows that awaits us on the other side?"
"Well, we have no choice now, we'll just have to wait and see right?" Kurama said, getting into place along with Yuske. "Ready?" Yuske, on the other side, nodded, "One, two."
"Three!" Yuske pushed the same time Kurama did. Sure enough, both the doors opened at the same time. "Good luck, see you soon," Yuske said as he walked in.
************************ That's for now, please feel free to criticize ^.^
" " = talking
' ' = thinking
( )= author (me) talking
~ ~ ~ = time passed
------ = the 'other' side
****************************************
All four of them walked in at the same time, they were immediately shielded from each other's view and the door behind them closed.
---Yuske---
Yuske walked forward, he could neither go left nor right much less backwards. 'This is surely a trap,' he thought as he continued up the endless path. As he walked, he noticed strange things on the walls, first it seemed like it was taking a shape, then it disappeared. Yuske started running, he knew something was wrong, he could feel it. He ran until he met a fork in the maze. 'Right or left?' he asked himself. He realized when he started, he was on the left most side, "Right," he said out loud as he turned right. He continued running along the passageway until he reached two doors on opposite corners of the room. There seemed to be two switches on either side of the room. He pulled one, only to find it able to open the opposite door. He walked toward the door only to have the door close up and the switch switched back again. Then he looked back the way he had come and smiled, "So that's how he did it." There were two tunnels leading to the same room, he and another person had to flick the switches the same time in order to go through. He sat, and waited.
----Hiei----
Hiei walked into the tunnel with his hands in his pocket and his sword strapped to his back. He sighed, 'Another boring test,' he thought, 'Might as well get it over with now.' He jogged, not wanting to waste his energy in running, but wanting to get to where ever he was going quickly. He came across a fork in the maze with three ways to go: straight, left, or right. He hmphed (hopefully we all know how that sounds like), "Typical." He choose the right path and went down it. He stopped when he spotted a dead end. He had no where to run when the wall behind him blocked him from the way he came. He was about to take out his sword when a trap door opened under him and he fell though. As he was falling, he looked down and pulled out his sword just in time to stop his fall. Underneath was a barricade of spikes, just waiting for someone to land on them. Hiei noticed a passageway just beyond it and quickly jumped off the wall, taking his sword that was embedded into the wall with him. He continued the only way he could go, he found himself trapped. Cage like bars held him in the chamber while the switch was on the opposite side. He struck the metal with his sword, but only got a shock up his arm as the vibration of the sword crawled up it. He was stuck.
---Kuwabara---
Kuwabara entered his side of the narrow passage. His side was dark and hard to see. Plus, he kept feeling something at his feet. He went deep inside himself to find his spirit then called it out to be his light. He slowly looked down after feeling something go up his pant leg. On the ground were millions of bugs, all types of them, caterpillars, centipedes, spiders, scorpions, all sorts of 'good stuff'. Kuwabara yelped and ran, his eyes watering with tears. "Why me?" He cried all the way. Not noticing the fork in the maze, he crashed into the wall where it split. He rubbed his head and got up from the ground, "Left or right, eh?" He decided quickly, "Left, my lucky side," he chuckled and ran left. He didn't wait to find out if there were any more bugs on the ground. It seemed that the road got narrower and narrower as he went down. Soon he was in a dimly lit dungeon. He heard a scraping of metal somewhere close. "Hello?" Kuwabara asked. He prepared his spirit sword and walked forward. He came upon a tightly closed cage.
---Kurama---
All Kurama's senses were alert as he walked through the tunnel with both hands in his pockets. Ahead of him he could hear a flutter of wings, at that same time, he saw a soft glint of light ahead. As the sound increased, he found himself in a dimly lit room. He looked up, above him were many birds of different shapes and sizes. Kurama frowned, why would birds be at a place like this unless.it was a trap. He sighed, he had no choice but to continue forward, the only other way was back, and that was closed. He took a deep breath and walked into the room. The first step he took seemed fine, a second, nothing wrong. The third, the room shook and on either side of him the ground began to crumble. Kurama looked behind, there was no turning back, the road behind him also crumbled and fell into a bottomless pit. "Figures," he muttered as he continued on the narrow path. He took a few more steps, the birds above him gave an ear-piercing screech. One after another, they dove to attack. Kurama began running, he called his Rose Whip and whipped it around him so that the birds' attacks were stopped. He ran into the opposite side and turned his whip back into his rose. 'That was too easy,' Kurama thought. He could do nothing but continue forward, so he did, this time at a run. He soon saw another light, it was brighter than the last one, as he came closer, he noticed something, no, someone sitting there. He emerged, "Yuske!" He took sometime to catch his breath.
---Hiei---
Hiei heard someone come. He was ready to attack if the 'someone' were to be unfriendly, though he couldn't fight much in his situation, being locked up in a cage and all. The someone called. Hiei lowered his sword and sheathed it, he would be able to recognize that idiotic voice from anywhere. "Kuwabara, you baka, stop yelling your head off."
Kuwabara emerged from the corner, "Hiei? What are you doing in there?" He asked, dim witted, as usual.
Hiei sighed, "You see that lever over there? Pull it."
Kuwabara's eyes narrowed, "Why? How do you know it isn't a trap?"
Hiei, not having much patients with him, "I don't know! How do I know?! I am just in this cage! And the way out SEEMS to be that lever over there." His eyes glared back at Kuwabara.
"Fine, fine," Kuwabara muttered as he pulled the lever, Hiei's door opened, but there was also something else that opened along with it.
---Yuske and Kurama---
Yuske got up from sitting cross-legged. He stretched, he had been sitting there for about 20 minutes. "Finally someone came," he muttered, then to Kurama, "I think I know how to open those doors, both of us have to flick the switches at the same time. The doors should open then, but who knows that awaits us on the other side?"
"Well, we have no choice now, we'll just have to wait and see right?" Kurama said, getting into place along with Yuske. "Ready?" Yuske, on the other side, nodded, "One, two."
"Three!" Yuske pushed the same time Kurama did. Sure enough, both the doors opened at the same time. "Good luck, see you soon," Yuske said as he walked in.
************************ That's for now, please feel free to criticize ^.^