Yay!! Chappie #2!! Thanks to all the people who reviewed- I was lucky not
to have received any flames, and the one person who made negative comments
at least did so in a CONSTRUCTIVE way. I appreciate that very much!!! By
the way, one thing I want to clear up is that I originally typed up the
chapter using spaces, italics, etc.- it took them out!!! MEANIES!!! Ah,
well...and without further ado, Chapter 2!!!!
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"Who?" Adam said, bewildered.
"God. The immortal spirit. You know, in me you trust."
Adam just stared. "Um, sir, are you feeling alright? Do you need to lie down?"
The man laughed. "No, I'm fine. Adam, trust me. I'm not insane. And quit it with the 'sir' stuff."
Adam couldn't believe this. This guy just wouldn't give up. "Sir, I ireallyi need to get to class.. and, in all due respect, you certainly don't look like God."
The man sighed. "Adam, I'll see you after school. Go to class for now."
Adam hurried away, glad to be rid of this strange old man.
But how did he know about Jane?
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Joan hurried up the stairs, only to be stopped by an elderly old man.
"Joan, I need to talk to you."
She looked at him angrily. "Oh, sure, inowi we talk. God-"
"Yes?"
She winced. "Er... sorry. I was taking your name in vain."
He handed he a tape. "You may want to watch this. That's your assignment for now."
She snatched the tape from his hands, just as the tardy bell rang.
"AAARRGGGHH!!!!!!!!" Joan yelled. "AGAIN?!?"
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After school, Adam slowly walked out of the building. He glanced around, but there was only a little girl on the steps. Good- no sign of that creepy old man who'd stopped him before.
He started to walk down the stairs, but sadly didn't see the toothpick leg that stuck out beneath his feet.
CRASH!! Adam fell down the stairs. He glared up at the evil little girl, with her chocolate-lined grin and her slipping pigtails.
"I said I'd talk to you after school, Adam."
He froze. "Excuse me?"
"That's right. Hello, again. Remember me? You know, God?"
He laughed weakly. "Yeah, right. God's a little girl not even out of preschool. Impressive."
"I have many forms. Now, walk with me."
Adam, hesitating for only a second, got up and started walking next to this almost scary little girl.
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Joan popped in the tape as soon as she got home- this was the only safe time for her to watch, since everyone either had jobs or after-school things now.
What she saw made her gasp aloud- it was too shocking.
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DUN DUN DUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!! What does Joan see? Tune in next time!!! Oh, and I'm looking for a co-writer. This is HARD, people!! Everyone else has used all the good ideas already!!! WAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! Email me at falconairy2003@yahoo.com if you're interested. Thanks!!!!
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"Who?" Adam said, bewildered.
"God. The immortal spirit. You know, in me you trust."
Adam just stared. "Um, sir, are you feeling alright? Do you need to lie down?"
The man laughed. "No, I'm fine. Adam, trust me. I'm not insane. And quit it with the 'sir' stuff."
Adam couldn't believe this. This guy just wouldn't give up. "Sir, I ireallyi need to get to class.. and, in all due respect, you certainly don't look like God."
The man sighed. "Adam, I'll see you after school. Go to class for now."
Adam hurried away, glad to be rid of this strange old man.
But how did he know about Jane?
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Joan hurried up the stairs, only to be stopped by an elderly old man.
"Joan, I need to talk to you."
She looked at him angrily. "Oh, sure, inowi we talk. God-"
"Yes?"
She winced. "Er... sorry. I was taking your name in vain."
He handed he a tape. "You may want to watch this. That's your assignment for now."
She snatched the tape from his hands, just as the tardy bell rang.
"AAARRGGGHH!!!!!!!!" Joan yelled. "AGAIN?!?"
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After school, Adam slowly walked out of the building. He glanced around, but there was only a little girl on the steps. Good- no sign of that creepy old man who'd stopped him before.
He started to walk down the stairs, but sadly didn't see the toothpick leg that stuck out beneath his feet.
CRASH!! Adam fell down the stairs. He glared up at the evil little girl, with her chocolate-lined grin and her slipping pigtails.
"I said I'd talk to you after school, Adam."
He froze. "Excuse me?"
"That's right. Hello, again. Remember me? You know, God?"
He laughed weakly. "Yeah, right. God's a little girl not even out of preschool. Impressive."
"I have many forms. Now, walk with me."
Adam, hesitating for only a second, got up and started walking next to this almost scary little girl.
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Joan popped in the tape as soon as she got home- this was the only safe time for her to watch, since everyone either had jobs or after-school things now.
What she saw made her gasp aloud- it was too shocking.
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DUN DUN DUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!! What does Joan see? Tune in next time!!! Oh, and I'm looking for a co-writer. This is HARD, people!! Everyone else has used all the good ideas already!!! WAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! Email me at falconairy2003@yahoo.com if you're interested. Thanks!!!!