Hellloooo everybody! Next chappy's back! I really think this one is cute. Thank you all for your reviews! And Jctigerwolf4e= you are now second in command for my club! Lol Neways, I am trying out script format…tell me which you like better. Adios amigos.
DOCTOR: Rory Gilmore?
RORY: [jumps up] Yeah?
DOCTOR: Theirs someone in their who wants a visit, she asked exclusively for you first
(Rory walks over slowly)
DOCTOR: [smiles] don't worry, she's fine
[she relaxes her shoulders a bit and so does everyone else]
[In Room]
{L-Lorelai}
{R-Rory}
L- Lil' Ror is that you?
R- yep
L- [turns around] What's up chicken butt?
R-[sighs] nothing, you just scared me that's all
L- yeah, sorry bout that. I almost pulled a Kurt Cobain on you [Rory looks confused]…Okay, it sounded cool at the time. Maybe a Judy Garland?
[Lorelai and Rory are sitting at a table]
R- What happened?
L- they said that it was a mix of stress and a bad diet…all I have to do is work out a little and eat a little better and I will be good as new
R- No more All-Junk-Food Eat Outs?
L- Oh, there will be plenty of those. I just have to execise it off afterwards.
R- Good [smiles and puts out her hand and Lorelai takes it- cue "La La Music"]
[5 Minutes Later]
DOCTOR- Rory, we need to run a few more minor tests on your mom and tell her all about what she has to do, so we need you to leave for a few minutes.
[Rory nods and blows a over-exaggerated kiss to her mom and leaves]
JESS- [looks up from his book] Is she okay?
RORY- yeah, she'll be fine
JESS- [smirks] good….here read this [hands her a book] it's amazing I just finished it.
[Rory takes the book and begins to read it]
[5 minutes later Dean barges through the doors of the hospital and see's Rory and Jess sitting next to eachother reading.]
DEAN: Why haven't you returned any of my five calls? [pauses and looks at Jess] and why are you with him?!
RORY: [puts Jess's book down and gets up from her chair] Woah, Dean calm down. My phone was off.
D: No Rory! I can't be calm when none of my phone calls are returned an your sitting her with this [motions to Jess]
R: [slightly irritated] Dean, I think your missing the point- my mom is in the hospital
D: Well your obviously too busy with this [motions to Jess again]
R: [cuts in] Jess. His name is Jess.
[Jess smirks]
D: [calming down] you obviously don't know how worried I was
R: [really upset] Worried? What that I would do something with Jess? Don't you trust me? Don't you even care my mom is lying on a hospital bed right now? All you can focus your brain on is who I am with or where I am.
D: You've obviously become to one-sided for our relationship. It's been over for a long time but I've tried to ignore it, but I can't not anymore. I hope you have a nice life with that [motions to Jess AGAIN]
R: His name is Jess!!
D: Whatever Rory [exits]
[Rory turns to Jess who is staring confusedly at her.]
RORY: What?
JESS: Nothing [goes back to reading book]
[10 minutes later]
JESS: Are you okay?
RORY: [nods] yeah, I mean you heard the doctor she said my mom would be fine so why won't she be fine?
JESS: I'm not talking about that….
RORY: [sniffs] Oh, yeah, I'll be fine…after a few cartons of ice cream…
JESS: [Puts his hand on top of Rory's. At first shes a little shocked but eventually settles down] You know, if you need anything, I'm here [pause and thinks about what he said for a second] …except for you know all that girl stuff, you can talk to your mom about that.
RORY: [smiles] thanks
[Hospital Room]
LUKE: knock, knock, knock
LORELAI: Hey Luke!
LUKE: How ya holding up?
LORELAI: Great, as long as I don't pass out again. [rubs her shoulder] I think I hit a table on my way down when I passed out.
LUKE: When are you going to be home?
LORELAI: Tomorrow morning
[Luke shifts in his chair, and Lorelai clears her throat]
LUKE: [breaks silence] good
LORELAI: thanks
LUKE: for what?
LORELAI: everything. You know, I thought if I died yesterday, knock on wood, that I knew I would have regretted never telling you how great you are and how much you mean to our family. I mean you are like Rory's father figure, you watch out for her, you feed her. Hell, you are like my father figure to. Okay, maybe not, but you watch out for me to. I just want to tell you how much I appreciate everything you have done for us if you ever need anything don't hesitate to ask.
LUKE: [interrupts] don't mention it. It's the least I could do for a friend like you.
[Morning]
{Lorelai passed her tests with flying colors, the first tests she actually ever passed, and was back at home}
LORELAI: Ooh, I got you a present.
RORY: [confused] What?
LORELAI: In my purse.
[Rory reaches into Lorelai's purse and pulls out a videotape]
RORY: Cardio Salsa. Um you shouldn't have?
LORELAI: Yeah, they play the Miami Sound Machine and you dance around, you get a really great workout.
RORY: Your doctor told you to do this right?
LORELAI: No!
RORY: Yes
LORELAI: Come on.
RORY: No way.
LORELAI: Salsa with me. Pretend I'm Antonio Banderas with longer hair
RORY: If you were standing in back of Antonio Banderas, I couldn't pretend that you were Antonio Banderas.
LORELAI: Don't you want your mother to live a long and healthy life?
RORY: You already scared me once. Call Luke
LORELAI: What? Please!
RORY: Nope nope I draw the line when it comes to Cardio Salsa, I got to go anyways, senora. Adios.
[Lorelai picks up her phone]
LORELAI: Yo, Luke…
JESS: No, but aren't we sounding better.
LORELAI: Shut up, I still can use the excuse that I was delusional when I hit you upside the head with my purse
LUKE: [to Jess] Give me the phone
[To Lorelai] Ello?
LORELAI: Hey, Luke…
LUKE: What do you want this time?
LORELAI: Being as though I have to get my heart moving to stay healthy, I was wondering if you would want to work out with me
LUKE: Depends, are you running?
LORELAI: No….
LORELAI: No….
LUKE: Speed walking?
LUKE: Swimming?
LORELAI: No…
LUKE: Then what?
LORELAI: Cardio….salsa….
LUKE: No! No! No! times four million hundred thousand!
LORELAI: Please! I have already been denied by Rory.
LUKE: Oh, gee…so I'm second choice?
LORELAI: Please!
JESS: [to Luke] What does she want to you do?
Luke:[to Jess] Cardio Salsa
[Jess laughs and Lorelai hears]
LORELAI: Hey Luke….put Jess on the phone…
[Luke hands the phone to Jess]
JESS: Hey Shakira
LORELAI: Hey Jess, you want to do this old lady a favor?
JESS: Preferably not
LORELAI: If you don't you will never ever ever see my daughter again
JESS: yeah right…
LORELAI: I am her mother I can lock her in her room
JESS: no!
LORELAI: Hey Rory go in your room….bring food…lot's of food.
JESS: She's not even there
LORELAI: Dammit! How'd you know?
JESS: Genius
LORELAI: Yeah? If you were a genius you'd get your butt over here….I am a very powerful women you know.
JESS: If you stop talking I'll come. And you better not tell anyone about this.
LORELAI: [amused] My lips are sealed.
JESS: You better stay quiet.
LORELAI: Come on over. Let's get salsa-ing. Adios senor, see ya on the flip side.
JESS: Yeah, yeah. You know I am only doing this because it will get you to stop whining?
LORELAI: Yeah, but we can tell everyone you love cardio salsa
JESS: LORELAI!!!
LORELAI: [quickly] Bye Jess.
Knock, knock, knock
LORELAI: Jess! My long time foe but never the less supplier of coffee, how overjoyed I am to be graced with your presence.
JESS: Yeah, save it, I'm not gunna dance.
LORELAI: You suck
JESS: You know…I could just leave
LORELAI: [sweetly]And I could lock Rory in a closet
JESS: [enters the house in defeat] fair enough.
LORELAI: So, should I wear my salsa dress or my fiesta hat?
JESS: fiesta hat?
LORELAI: yeah, shut up, I've had it since I was twelve
JESS: okay. Let's get this over with
LORELAI: Don't feel special, you were my third choice
JESS: Oh, it's going to be hard but I'll try.
LORELAI: I'm going to ignore that. But anyways…what's going on with you and my daughter?
JESS: [slaps his head] I knew their was a catch to me coming over hear. Cardio Salsa my ass. If you wanted to ask me about Rory you could have just said something.
LORELAI: I know her and Dean broke up and I know that your going to make your move on my daughter I just need you to promise me something…
JESS: [interrupts] wait wait! Who said I was going to make a move?
LORELAI: Oh come on Jess you have I love Rory written all over your head
JESS: No I don't!
LORELAI: you're a sick puppy just waiting to get out!
JESS: What?
LORELAI: Nevermind, just please, I'm begging you, don't try anything on her…
JESS: [upset] You think I would try something on her!?
LORELAI: Just tell me you won't!
JESS: Geez Lorelai. You obviously think of me the way everyone else does. A bad kid who would ruin Rory's future. So much for getting to know me like Rory did.
LORELAI: You wouldn't do anything to her?
JESS: No! Of course not! [pauses] wait! I never even said I liked Rory….
LORELAI: You are in denial my friend.
JESS: You tricked me!
LORELAI: That I did
JESS: You tricked me!!
LORELAI: Didn't we just clarify that?
JESS: You can do Cardio Salsa on your own!
LORELAI: fine! Be that way!
JESS: [points a finger at her] I will!
[Outside]
JESS:[rubbing his fingers over his temples] I can't believe she tricked me!
[Inside]
LORELAI: [doing a victory dance] Oh yeah, who's good! I got the love sick puppy out of him. Go Lorelai go Lorelai!
Alright…that's chappy! I hope you liked it. I think it's fun…tell me if you like script form better… I think I do…but anyways. Press that little button. I hope for 40 reviews?? I have the next chappy planned out so it should be up soon…Bye for now! Or in cardio salsa language….adios!