OK, I kinda wasn't sure how I wanted to do this, but now it's figured out.
I'm going to Have the 1st part(current time with Suzaku), be Suzaku's 1st
person. Then the past-part will be with 1st person in Yuki's opinion. Next
chapter it'll be in Suzaku's 1st person. Then Yuki's again. Get it?
Nuriko: I wanna go back to chinaaaaaaaaaa! ::pout:: Hey- Awwwwww! Okay okay... ::gets out laptop:: ::scenery changes to ancient China:: Nuriko: ^-^. We own nothing, no we don't!!!! ^-^. ::singsong:: What're you so happy about!!!! ::sobs at her lack in ownership::
Title: A subway to Kyoto
Chapter:
By: Hiei_mi
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I never realized how much I would miss you once I walked away. Well then Birdbrain, I guess you deserve everything you get. I regret every second of it. I should have known that nothing is hopeless. Urameshi was lucky to realize that. I was stupid, and I have no excuse for that. I thought I was so high and mighty that I didn't need love, or friendship. I really didn't mind being locked away in Makai. I had my own Kingdom, and everything I needed. But I was wrong. I eventually craved the sunlight. I wanted free of my cage, and I would do anything for it. At this point, Death would be a blessing upon my empty soul.
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I stalked up to him, only inches away. I didn't like him, and I planned to let him know that.
"Speak of the Devil. Just who I wanted to talk to. So Thief, How ya doin'?" I said in the most casual sounding voice I could.
"Hey, no hard feelings between friends!! ...Right?" He said in a sheepish voice.
"Right, Friend," I hit his shoulder just a little too hard. I started to walk away.
"Bitch...," He grumbled. I glared at him, then walked away.
In English class I got a little bored... I really wasn't interested in school. Not a single class took to my liking. Now I'm not trying to sound like I'm some flunker. Because well, I'm not. Actually, I do pretty well. I never pay attention, but I get all my work done so it's OK. And let's just say they appealed to me even less now that he was in most of my classes. How exactly was I supposed to concentrate with that freak sitting directly in front of me. He seemed to be so INTO what the teacher was saying. It was probably something I would never use in my entire life. I shook off my thoughts and open a gum wrapper under my desk. It's not like we were really aloud to chew gum in school. But I did. I chewed it into a ball, made to perfectly fit the end of a straw. I smirked and put it on one, which I just so conveniently had in my pocket. We're not exactly aloud to use spit balls but does that really stop me? I aimed it at his head, and it seemed to hit rather hard. He just reached back to see what it was at first, and when he felt it, he seemed not to react. When he realized what it was, he turned back to see me biting my lower lip, in amusement.
"You little...!!!" He was furious, and he jumped at me. Luckily, I fell backwards on my chair, causing me to dodge it, which wasn't the most graceful thing to do.
"Ahem," we both turned to see the class and of course, out not-so- friendly-looking teacher staring at us.
"Well, it seems you both would like a deten-" he stopped himself, he had the most disturbing look of satisfaction on his face. I really think I liked the detention idea more than whatever he was planning.
"From what I gather" He gestured to the current scene "You two are not that fond of each other, am I right?" We glanced at each other with a mixture of disgust and worry on our faces.
"Hn.. Just as I thought. You two will be working on a report for me. Together." His last word seemed to put me in a look of horror, shock, or utter insanity. At that moment, I actually thought any would match my face.
At lunch, I sat with my friends like normally. Today was basically just another same-old thing kinda day... well except for that damn report! It was just so ironic that It wasn't funny. And there He was, mister 'Im- gunna-kill-you' himself. He sat at an empty table. It's kind of funny. We seemed to have sworn to be mortal enemies, but I didn't even know his name. We we're even partners and I forgot to ask. Then again so did he, so uh, he's not that smart as he thinks he is. Maybe I should just call him, well 'Him'. I'd love to see his expression if I called him that. He started walking up. Just what I wanted. Note the sarcasm. I tried to stiffled a laugh. He had a little less hair on a small patch.
"Er... I just wanted to say sorry for um... well everything. Ya know...," his voice trailed off. I just stared up at him with a bored expression on my face.
"So I uh, well... my name's Suzaku," 'Suzaku' said looking directly at my face. My mouth curved into a wide grin. So he was named after a golden chicken, huh?
"Birdbrain...suits ya well! I'm Yuki," I went to throw out my trash. His eyes looked like they were flaming. I guess his name was pretty important. I laughed to myself as I realized that I had found out one of his weak spots so easily. I smiled and had the funniest idea I had had in a very long time.
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I wonder what her evil plan could be. Actually, no, I don't. CUZ I ALREADY KNOW(AND IT'S PRETTY OBVIOUS)! And you won't know next chapter, cuz then it's Suzaku's turn to have some say in it, and he's too dense. Yes, yes, I realize that he actually Isn't in the show... but maybe she changed him? ::pleading look:: So, uh, anyway, I can't write the fourth chapter until someone does my contest thing... so work(dammit its easy people! Actually... I just want reviews.... T-T) on it and SOMEONE hopefully will have it done before I post chapter 3. Just incase it help, You'll be a demon, and you can decide what they look like. You can pick their personality, but I may not use that... Either way though you'll get to be a pretty cool character, I think. And if Yuki seems like a jerk so far, she kinda is. But Suzaku's not really Mr. Nice either so I guess it works x.x. if you're wondering why my authors note is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo long it's cuz I just wanna get to 3 pages. And yes, that's the longest I've ever done, sadly. I'm not a very long chapter writer, but I'm trying to be more descriptive, so this'll get better(I promise). Oh! Yay, I did 2 pages! Woohoo! Please review. Cuz I already finished the 2nd chapter and I have no reviews. Ok, so it's not a big deal but I want reviews. ::whimper::
The Town Idiot, Ki
Nuriko: I wanna go back to chinaaaaaaaaaa! ::pout:: Hey- Awwwwww! Okay okay... ::gets out laptop:: ::scenery changes to ancient China:: Nuriko: ^-^. We own nothing, no we don't!!!! ^-^. ::singsong:: What're you so happy about!!!! ::sobs at her lack in ownership::
Title: A subway to Kyoto
Chapter:
By: Hiei_mi
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I never realized how much I would miss you once I walked away. Well then Birdbrain, I guess you deserve everything you get. I regret every second of it. I should have known that nothing is hopeless. Urameshi was lucky to realize that. I was stupid, and I have no excuse for that. I thought I was so high and mighty that I didn't need love, or friendship. I really didn't mind being locked away in Makai. I had my own Kingdom, and everything I needed. But I was wrong. I eventually craved the sunlight. I wanted free of my cage, and I would do anything for it. At this point, Death would be a blessing upon my empty soul.
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I stalked up to him, only inches away. I didn't like him, and I planned to let him know that.
"Speak of the Devil. Just who I wanted to talk to. So Thief, How ya doin'?" I said in the most casual sounding voice I could.
"Hey, no hard feelings between friends!! ...Right?" He said in a sheepish voice.
"Right, Friend," I hit his shoulder just a little too hard. I started to walk away.
"Bitch...," He grumbled. I glared at him, then walked away.
In English class I got a little bored... I really wasn't interested in school. Not a single class took to my liking. Now I'm not trying to sound like I'm some flunker. Because well, I'm not. Actually, I do pretty well. I never pay attention, but I get all my work done so it's OK. And let's just say they appealed to me even less now that he was in most of my classes. How exactly was I supposed to concentrate with that freak sitting directly in front of me. He seemed to be so INTO what the teacher was saying. It was probably something I would never use in my entire life. I shook off my thoughts and open a gum wrapper under my desk. It's not like we were really aloud to chew gum in school. But I did. I chewed it into a ball, made to perfectly fit the end of a straw. I smirked and put it on one, which I just so conveniently had in my pocket. We're not exactly aloud to use spit balls but does that really stop me? I aimed it at his head, and it seemed to hit rather hard. He just reached back to see what it was at first, and when he felt it, he seemed not to react. When he realized what it was, he turned back to see me biting my lower lip, in amusement.
"You little...!!!" He was furious, and he jumped at me. Luckily, I fell backwards on my chair, causing me to dodge it, which wasn't the most graceful thing to do.
"Ahem," we both turned to see the class and of course, out not-so- friendly-looking teacher staring at us.
"Well, it seems you both would like a deten-" he stopped himself, he had the most disturbing look of satisfaction on his face. I really think I liked the detention idea more than whatever he was planning.
"From what I gather" He gestured to the current scene "You two are not that fond of each other, am I right?" We glanced at each other with a mixture of disgust and worry on our faces.
"Hn.. Just as I thought. You two will be working on a report for me. Together." His last word seemed to put me in a look of horror, shock, or utter insanity. At that moment, I actually thought any would match my face.
At lunch, I sat with my friends like normally. Today was basically just another same-old thing kinda day... well except for that damn report! It was just so ironic that It wasn't funny. And there He was, mister 'Im- gunna-kill-you' himself. He sat at an empty table. It's kind of funny. We seemed to have sworn to be mortal enemies, but I didn't even know his name. We we're even partners and I forgot to ask. Then again so did he, so uh, he's not that smart as he thinks he is. Maybe I should just call him, well 'Him'. I'd love to see his expression if I called him that. He started walking up. Just what I wanted. Note the sarcasm. I tried to stiffled a laugh. He had a little less hair on a small patch.
"Er... I just wanted to say sorry for um... well everything. Ya know...," his voice trailed off. I just stared up at him with a bored expression on my face.
"So I uh, well... my name's Suzaku," 'Suzaku' said looking directly at my face. My mouth curved into a wide grin. So he was named after a golden chicken, huh?
"Birdbrain...suits ya well! I'm Yuki," I went to throw out my trash. His eyes looked like they were flaming. I guess his name was pretty important. I laughed to myself as I realized that I had found out one of his weak spots so easily. I smiled and had the funniest idea I had had in a very long time.
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I wonder what her evil plan could be. Actually, no, I don't. CUZ I ALREADY KNOW(AND IT'S PRETTY OBVIOUS)! And you won't know next chapter, cuz then it's Suzaku's turn to have some say in it, and he's too dense. Yes, yes, I realize that he actually Isn't in the show... but maybe she changed him? ::pleading look:: So, uh, anyway, I can't write the fourth chapter until someone does my contest thing... so work(dammit its easy people! Actually... I just want reviews.... T-T) on it and SOMEONE hopefully will have it done before I post chapter 3. Just incase it help, You'll be a demon, and you can decide what they look like. You can pick their personality, but I may not use that... Either way though you'll get to be a pretty cool character, I think. And if Yuki seems like a jerk so far, she kinda is. But Suzaku's not really Mr. Nice either so I guess it works x.x. if you're wondering why my authors note is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo long it's cuz I just wanna get to 3 pages. And yes, that's the longest I've ever done, sadly. I'm not a very long chapter writer, but I'm trying to be more descriptive, so this'll get better(I promise). Oh! Yay, I did 2 pages! Woohoo! Please review. Cuz I already finished the 2nd chapter and I have no reviews. Ok, so it's not a big deal but I want reviews. ::whimper::
The Town Idiot, Ki