Hi people, I would like to thank my two reviews so far for the confidence
in me, and pointing out some terrible mistakes on my part.
Ok, 1) the mysteries changing of names on the character rei/ray that is because my stupid word processor did it grrrrrr. 2) Kianie and Thorn ARE the same person Kianie was the original name of the character in till I decided to change the name to better suit the plot. Hehehe sorry I missed some of them when I was changing them into Thorn. 3) And the large paragraph at the end was because of the html thing I think because when I was typing I did divide them into paragraphs.
Thanks for pointing out the problems I really appreciate it because hey I would of missed them! 0_~ *gives cookies out to everyone* There are still some problems in this chapter but by chapter three it should be fine.
Anji: Ok why haven't you talked about me yet?! Kianie: Because you suck! Anji: I'm your muse! Show me respect!!! Kianie: Why you're a crummy muse, don't quite your day job. Anji: GRRRR *pulls out hacksaw* DIE!!!!! Kianie: eep!
CHAPTER TWO (Kai)
I woke up from a bad dream, panting and gulping for air. I had just re- lived another horrid moment from my stay in the abbey many years back in a dream. I crawled out of bed and quietly sneaking out of the room so not to wake Rai. My eyes had already adjusted to the darkness so I did not feel the need to turn on the light. I walked trough the lounge room and into the kitchen to get a drink of water. After my drink I started to walk back to my room when the front door started to open, I quickly hide behind a chair ready to pounce. I snuck a look over the chair to see what I think is was Thorn. All I could see was her out line, but I knew her out line anywhere because I remember walking on to her when see was in the shower. I blush at the thought and then return to reality "Thorn" I said coldly in a monotone voice she turned around to face me and I could feel the tension build up in the air. "Where have you been?" I question in a cold and angry voice. " None of your business!" she said harshly. "Go to bed, Kai" Now that pissed me off she doesn't control me! I'm the team captain and all she is a rookie, ok a powerful rookie but still so I am a world champion. "No, I'm the captain so you don't tell me what to do, I tell you what to do!" I bite back fiercely. "Fine just leave me alone!!" she hissed and continued to walk to her room. "What do you thing your doing!" I growled at her she was not going to walk away from me without tell me what she was doing out so late. "What!" she glared even though I couldn't see her I could feel her glare drilling holes through my head. " Are you going to tell me where you where all night?" I said, angered that she could have the nerve to talk to me like that she was nearly as worse as Tyson. She snorted, "None of your business, Mr Sourpant." My god I'm going to kill her, she is a rookie she shouldn't be so rude to me. SHE SHOULD RESPECT ME "grrrr .you bitch, listen to me." ".Whatever Mr Sourpants tell me when you grow a personality" she sneered, amusement ringing through here voice. And she walked into her bedroom leavening me in a stupor just standing in the middle of the lounge room in my boxers. _____________________________________________________________________(Thorn)
"Sometimes I wished he wouldn't be so full of himself!" I whispered to my self as I rushed into my room and locked the door. I was leaning on my door when I realised that I had put blood all over the back of the door. "opps got to fix that!" I said sheepishly and smiled a goofy smile to my self. I got up and walked into the bathroom to clean my self up a bit. After I had finished bandaging my wounds I cleaned the rest my room and the back of my door, and went to sleep which I didn't do often. _____________________________________________________________________
Next morning. (Kai)
I woke up sweating heavily and panting. I had another dream about my past again this time it had been about my grandfather and myself been shown through a lab with the screams of young children ringing out though the lab, crying, begging, pleading for the torture there going through to end but it never stopped. I remember a part of the dream that had disturbed me the most it was a young girl the same age I was in the dream staring at me with pleading deep blue eyes, she had huge needles poked into the back of her neck, the base of her skull, her legs and arms. She had a tattoo the base of her neck it said 'Number 3421' with a barcode under that. She reminded him of someone, but whom? Did he know who that was?
I decided to get up and have a shower. _____________________________________________________________________ (Thorn)
I yawned and studied my surroundings, I was in my bed, in my room at the hotel, wearing a plain, blood-red, satin nightie, my hands along with my right shoulder were bandage; slightly stained with my blood, my hair was all messy and as I looked out the window I could tell it was before dawn because it was still dark out; with a look at my watch laying on the bedside table confirmed my theory with the watch showing the time of 3:24am. I slide out of my sheets and sleepily stumbled into the shower and had a quick shower. As I turned on the shower and the warm liquid cascade down my front and my back I inspected my wounds. The gun shout wound had stopped bleeding but it would take 1 or 2 more days to heal and my hands were no longer slashed open but were now just scratches and scabs. My foot had stopped hurting from when I had jumped out of the window and everything else was just fine. As I planned out the day ahead a problem came to mind 'how will I hide my shoulder and my hand wounds from my other team mates if they saw them they would think I was weak especially Kai, and what if they ask what happened I wouldn't be able to tell them and I only have sleeveless tops and have no way to cover my hands. I decided to go shopping and buy some new clothes, "I know that will piss of Mr I-am-King Kai-all haul-me!" I sniggered to myself. I got out of the shower and got ready.
____________________________________________________________________ (Kai)
I opened the shower door that was located in the bathroom that I shared with Ray, my wet hair was sticking to my face and the steam was beginning to settle. I grabbed my towel and began to dry my self of and then got dressed. I walked back into my bedroom and noticed Ray was still asleep PURRING my god sometimes that just pisses me off it makes it really hard to sleep sometimes but I got use to it. I stretched and picked up my blade and looked at it. On my blade was my bit-beast Dranzer she was a phoenix and was the strongest I had ever seen in till one day I meet Thorn and her bit- beat Icteric. When she joined us Tyson battled her she completely destroyed his blade with in seconds of course soon everyone on the team had challenged her and lost with in seconds I had even lost to her, the team was unprepared to battle against her. The whole team has been training harder ever since then, even Tyson trains harder and even stopped complaining about train but unfortunately that only lasted one week. I stuffed my blade into my pocket along with my launcher.
I walked down towards the hotels beyblade gym to train, if I was going to ever destroy her completely in a beyblade battle I was going to train harder than ever. ____________________________________________________________________
(Unknow [for now] )
The snow was falling lightly as the sun slowly peeked over the horizon. On the roof of the opposite building to the hotel the Blade Breakers Team were staying in crouched a young girl maybe the age of 6 or 7 years of age holding a sniper riffle. She mumbled to her self "don't she why I have to get such a boring mission," she rolled her eyes and started to mimic her commander "Satin this is an sniper mission I don't care how fricking long you have to wait but I want you to make sure she is DEAD in one hit, this girl is dangerous". "Well not as dangerous as me!" the small girl gloated. She had been told that BoiVoliot had trained this girl. But she didn't get it; this girl wasn't that good by her record, but her commander kept pushing the idea of how dangerous the girl was. Was there something she didn't know? And if this girl was THAT dangerous why did they not salvage the girl with the rest of the best of the best?
She drifted out her cloud of thought when she noticed the boy named Kai, had finally came back from training. _____________________________________________________________________ (Kai)
I walked into our room and noticed Max jumping up and down on the lounge with Tyson. 'Gggggrrrrrrrrrr' "TYSON, MAX WHAT IN THE FUCKING HELL DO YOU THINK YOUR DOING!?!" I screamed at the top of my lungs. "Nothing much, so what is Mr. Sourpant doing back so early from training? " Tyson said in a mocking tone. I gritted me teeth and yelled "WELL IT LOOKS LIKE MR. SOURPANTS IS BACK SO EARLY TO FIND TWO OF THE MOST IRRESPONSIBLE TEAMMATES OF THE TEAM JUMPING ON THE HOTELS FRICKING FURNITURE!" "Ohhh." Max said in a hushed tone and stopped jumping. "Look what you did Mr.GrumbleBum" Tyson said angrily. "What ever" I said walking into my rooms' bathroom to take a shower. _____________________________________________________________________ (Thorn)
Walking back home in my new jackest and gloves plus a few other trinkets I bought when I felt a boding feeling in the pit of my stomach. I stopped cold and looked around, what was it? I looked down the street but saw nothing other than the usual basal of the city. __________________________________________________________________
(Satin)
"Finally time to end this boring mission, Goodbye.Rose," I whispered my trigger finger itching to shoot. "Right between the eyes should do it" I grinned evilly. But then a idiotic man stood right in the way talking on the phone, "move" I grumbled "God I waited long enough not now I can't wait one more second, let this stupid mission end already!" I was extremely annoyed now. "That's it die fool no one is to come between me and my mission" I shoot the man down, nothing is to come between me and my mission, nothing. ___________________________________________________________________
(Thorn)
"My god," I breathed as the man before me fell down dead, I quickly looked up and spotted someone on top of the room. Then it clicked 'there after me!' I ducked as a bullet flew over my head "Not good, Not good, Shit, Shit, Shit" a flow of curses flowed from my mouth us I ran for my life into the hotel. ____________________________________________________________________ (Satin)
"I missed. fucking hell!" I yelled extremely pissed off with what I had just done, I threw my sniper riffle to the ground with a thump. Then my cell phone rang fear overtook me immediately, I prayed out loud "Please don't let them know." The phone rang again I gulped I had heard what they did to people that didn't complete their missions, a sudden shiver can from the thought. The phone rang again my hands quivered as I picked up the phone and pressed the speaker button. "Yes?" my voice was shaking as I said this. "You missed." the cold voice of my commander came through the line. They knew! "A slight error on my part I WILL kill her by night fall." "That is all you have Satin in till nightfall if your mission is not completed by then I'm sure you can guess the consequences." I gulped "yes sir", I said trying to hide the complete and ater fear from showing. "Good but remember where watching you and if you don't complete this mission you better hope she kills you first." The phone went dead. I bit into my lip and thought to myself 'this time bitch you won't be so lucky, my life depends on it' _____________________________________________________________________ Next chapter find out a bit about Thorn's past with Boivolt and why are they after her. And sorry about the bad uses of words 'cause I know it doesn't make sense bows down PLEASE FORGIVE ME! _____________________________________________________________________
Read and Review! Thanks to: Frozen Lighting & Kai Baby-girl
Ok, 1) the mysteries changing of names on the character rei/ray that is because my stupid word processor did it grrrrrr. 2) Kianie and Thorn ARE the same person Kianie was the original name of the character in till I decided to change the name to better suit the plot. Hehehe sorry I missed some of them when I was changing them into Thorn. 3) And the large paragraph at the end was because of the html thing I think because when I was typing I did divide them into paragraphs.
Thanks for pointing out the problems I really appreciate it because hey I would of missed them! 0_~ *gives cookies out to everyone* There are still some problems in this chapter but by chapter three it should be fine.
Anji: Ok why haven't you talked about me yet?! Kianie: Because you suck! Anji: I'm your muse! Show me respect!!! Kianie: Why you're a crummy muse, don't quite your day job. Anji: GRRRR *pulls out hacksaw* DIE!!!!! Kianie: eep!
CHAPTER TWO (Kai)
I woke up from a bad dream, panting and gulping for air. I had just re- lived another horrid moment from my stay in the abbey many years back in a dream. I crawled out of bed and quietly sneaking out of the room so not to wake Rai. My eyes had already adjusted to the darkness so I did not feel the need to turn on the light. I walked trough the lounge room and into the kitchen to get a drink of water. After my drink I started to walk back to my room when the front door started to open, I quickly hide behind a chair ready to pounce. I snuck a look over the chair to see what I think is was Thorn. All I could see was her out line, but I knew her out line anywhere because I remember walking on to her when see was in the shower. I blush at the thought and then return to reality "Thorn" I said coldly in a monotone voice she turned around to face me and I could feel the tension build up in the air. "Where have you been?" I question in a cold and angry voice. " None of your business!" she said harshly. "Go to bed, Kai" Now that pissed me off she doesn't control me! I'm the team captain and all she is a rookie, ok a powerful rookie but still so I am a world champion. "No, I'm the captain so you don't tell me what to do, I tell you what to do!" I bite back fiercely. "Fine just leave me alone!!" she hissed and continued to walk to her room. "What do you thing your doing!" I growled at her she was not going to walk away from me without tell me what she was doing out so late. "What!" she glared even though I couldn't see her I could feel her glare drilling holes through my head. " Are you going to tell me where you where all night?" I said, angered that she could have the nerve to talk to me like that she was nearly as worse as Tyson. She snorted, "None of your business, Mr Sourpant." My god I'm going to kill her, she is a rookie she shouldn't be so rude to me. SHE SHOULD RESPECT ME "grrrr .you bitch, listen to me." ".Whatever Mr Sourpants tell me when you grow a personality" she sneered, amusement ringing through here voice. And she walked into her bedroom leavening me in a stupor just standing in the middle of the lounge room in my boxers. _____________________________________________________________________(Thorn)
"Sometimes I wished he wouldn't be so full of himself!" I whispered to my self as I rushed into my room and locked the door. I was leaning on my door when I realised that I had put blood all over the back of the door. "opps got to fix that!" I said sheepishly and smiled a goofy smile to my self. I got up and walked into the bathroom to clean my self up a bit. After I had finished bandaging my wounds I cleaned the rest my room and the back of my door, and went to sleep which I didn't do often. _____________________________________________________________________
Next morning. (Kai)
I woke up sweating heavily and panting. I had another dream about my past again this time it had been about my grandfather and myself been shown through a lab with the screams of young children ringing out though the lab, crying, begging, pleading for the torture there going through to end but it never stopped. I remember a part of the dream that had disturbed me the most it was a young girl the same age I was in the dream staring at me with pleading deep blue eyes, she had huge needles poked into the back of her neck, the base of her skull, her legs and arms. She had a tattoo the base of her neck it said 'Number 3421' with a barcode under that. She reminded him of someone, but whom? Did he know who that was?
I decided to get up and have a shower. _____________________________________________________________________ (Thorn)
I yawned and studied my surroundings, I was in my bed, in my room at the hotel, wearing a plain, blood-red, satin nightie, my hands along with my right shoulder were bandage; slightly stained with my blood, my hair was all messy and as I looked out the window I could tell it was before dawn because it was still dark out; with a look at my watch laying on the bedside table confirmed my theory with the watch showing the time of 3:24am. I slide out of my sheets and sleepily stumbled into the shower and had a quick shower. As I turned on the shower and the warm liquid cascade down my front and my back I inspected my wounds. The gun shout wound had stopped bleeding but it would take 1 or 2 more days to heal and my hands were no longer slashed open but were now just scratches and scabs. My foot had stopped hurting from when I had jumped out of the window and everything else was just fine. As I planned out the day ahead a problem came to mind 'how will I hide my shoulder and my hand wounds from my other team mates if they saw them they would think I was weak especially Kai, and what if they ask what happened I wouldn't be able to tell them and I only have sleeveless tops and have no way to cover my hands. I decided to go shopping and buy some new clothes, "I know that will piss of Mr I-am-King Kai-all haul-me!" I sniggered to myself. I got out of the shower and got ready.
____________________________________________________________________ (Kai)
I opened the shower door that was located in the bathroom that I shared with Ray, my wet hair was sticking to my face and the steam was beginning to settle. I grabbed my towel and began to dry my self of and then got dressed. I walked back into my bedroom and noticed Ray was still asleep PURRING my god sometimes that just pisses me off it makes it really hard to sleep sometimes but I got use to it. I stretched and picked up my blade and looked at it. On my blade was my bit-beast Dranzer she was a phoenix and was the strongest I had ever seen in till one day I meet Thorn and her bit- beat Icteric. When she joined us Tyson battled her she completely destroyed his blade with in seconds of course soon everyone on the team had challenged her and lost with in seconds I had even lost to her, the team was unprepared to battle against her. The whole team has been training harder ever since then, even Tyson trains harder and even stopped complaining about train but unfortunately that only lasted one week. I stuffed my blade into my pocket along with my launcher.
I walked down towards the hotels beyblade gym to train, if I was going to ever destroy her completely in a beyblade battle I was going to train harder than ever. ____________________________________________________________________
(Unknow [for now] )
The snow was falling lightly as the sun slowly peeked over the horizon. On the roof of the opposite building to the hotel the Blade Breakers Team were staying in crouched a young girl maybe the age of 6 or 7 years of age holding a sniper riffle. She mumbled to her self "don't she why I have to get such a boring mission," she rolled her eyes and started to mimic her commander "Satin this is an sniper mission I don't care how fricking long you have to wait but I want you to make sure she is DEAD in one hit, this girl is dangerous". "Well not as dangerous as me!" the small girl gloated. She had been told that BoiVoliot had trained this girl. But she didn't get it; this girl wasn't that good by her record, but her commander kept pushing the idea of how dangerous the girl was. Was there something she didn't know? And if this girl was THAT dangerous why did they not salvage the girl with the rest of the best of the best?
She drifted out her cloud of thought when she noticed the boy named Kai, had finally came back from training. _____________________________________________________________________ (Kai)
I walked into our room and noticed Max jumping up and down on the lounge with Tyson. 'Gggggrrrrrrrrrr' "TYSON, MAX WHAT IN THE FUCKING HELL DO YOU THINK YOUR DOING!?!" I screamed at the top of my lungs. "Nothing much, so what is Mr. Sourpant doing back so early from training? " Tyson said in a mocking tone. I gritted me teeth and yelled "WELL IT LOOKS LIKE MR. SOURPANTS IS BACK SO EARLY TO FIND TWO OF THE MOST IRRESPONSIBLE TEAMMATES OF THE TEAM JUMPING ON THE HOTELS FRICKING FURNITURE!" "Ohhh." Max said in a hushed tone and stopped jumping. "Look what you did Mr.GrumbleBum" Tyson said angrily. "What ever" I said walking into my rooms' bathroom to take a shower. _____________________________________________________________________ (Thorn)
Walking back home in my new jackest and gloves plus a few other trinkets I bought when I felt a boding feeling in the pit of my stomach. I stopped cold and looked around, what was it? I looked down the street but saw nothing other than the usual basal of the city. __________________________________________________________________
(Satin)
"Finally time to end this boring mission, Goodbye.Rose," I whispered my trigger finger itching to shoot. "Right between the eyes should do it" I grinned evilly. But then a idiotic man stood right in the way talking on the phone, "move" I grumbled "God I waited long enough not now I can't wait one more second, let this stupid mission end already!" I was extremely annoyed now. "That's it die fool no one is to come between me and my mission" I shoot the man down, nothing is to come between me and my mission, nothing. ___________________________________________________________________
(Thorn)
"My god," I breathed as the man before me fell down dead, I quickly looked up and spotted someone on top of the room. Then it clicked 'there after me!' I ducked as a bullet flew over my head "Not good, Not good, Shit, Shit, Shit" a flow of curses flowed from my mouth us I ran for my life into the hotel. ____________________________________________________________________ (Satin)
"I missed. fucking hell!" I yelled extremely pissed off with what I had just done, I threw my sniper riffle to the ground with a thump. Then my cell phone rang fear overtook me immediately, I prayed out loud "Please don't let them know." The phone rang again I gulped I had heard what they did to people that didn't complete their missions, a sudden shiver can from the thought. The phone rang again my hands quivered as I picked up the phone and pressed the speaker button. "Yes?" my voice was shaking as I said this. "You missed." the cold voice of my commander came through the line. They knew! "A slight error on my part I WILL kill her by night fall." "That is all you have Satin in till nightfall if your mission is not completed by then I'm sure you can guess the consequences." I gulped "yes sir", I said trying to hide the complete and ater fear from showing. "Good but remember where watching you and if you don't complete this mission you better hope she kills you first." The phone went dead. I bit into my lip and thought to myself 'this time bitch you won't be so lucky, my life depends on it' _____________________________________________________________________ Next chapter find out a bit about Thorn's past with Boivolt and why are they after her. And sorry about the bad uses of words 'cause I know it doesn't make sense bows down PLEASE FORGIVE ME! _____________________________________________________________________
Read and Review! Thanks to: Frozen Lighting & Kai Baby-girl