Author's Note:
Oh my gosh, I'm sorry! I just realized I put a star (*) next to the name Eliza Goodwen, and I didn't tell you who she is!
She comes in before Kira comes in, but after the feast, right when the festivities - such as dancing - are taking place.
Here's her excerpt::
Throughout the evening, Li was asked for numerous dances and to fill up dance cards. The most persistent female was a bulbous nosed, runny eyed Eliza Goodwen who kept picking up his hand in her pudgy, sweaty fingers and batting her lashes so she continually flicked water onto him.
Fortunately, after this torment began, another stranger had come up to rescue him. After dancing a few rounds with his saviour, he was relieved to note that Eliza Goodwen was spending all her affection on Georgie Greggan, and he looked quite the happier for it.
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And that is Eliza Goodwen's part. Minimal, but I had wanted this in there for a comparison or something. *shrug* ^_^
Oh my gosh, I'm sorry! I just realized I put a star (*) next to the name Eliza Goodwen, and I didn't tell you who she is!
She comes in before Kira comes in, but after the feast, right when the festivities - such as dancing - are taking place.
Here's her excerpt::
Throughout the evening, Li was asked for numerous dances and to fill up dance cards. The most persistent female was a bulbous nosed, runny eyed Eliza Goodwen who kept picking up his hand in her pudgy, sweaty fingers and batting her lashes so she continually flicked water onto him.
Fortunately, after this torment began, another stranger had come up to rescue him. After dancing a few rounds with his saviour, he was relieved to note that Eliza Goodwen was spending all her affection on Georgie Greggan, and he looked quite the happier for it.
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And that is Eliza Goodwen's part. Minimal, but I had wanted this in there for a comparison or something. *shrug* ^_^