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Notes = Abby and Carter are married and have a little girl called Katie.
Everything is fine until Katie suddenly gets ill!
A Happy Family
Carter and Abby's apartment
"Mommy Mommy"
Abby was woken by her 3-year-old daughters upset voice. She looked up and checked the clock on her bedside table 3:30am. As much as she loved her little girl she didn't like getting up in the middle of the night.
Katie came running into her mummy and daddy's room holding her teddy bear by her side.
"Its alright baby mummies here", Abby helped her little girl into her bed and lay her down next to her. "What's wrong sweetie?" Abby looked at her little girl and couldn't help smiling because she was so beautiful. She had her dad's brown hair and his chocolate colored eyes that as soon as you looked at them made you want to smile.
Katie looked at her mummy and started to cry.
"Aww sweetie shh shh don't cry what happened?" Abby took her little girl in her arms and gave her a big hug.
"I had a bad dream mummy and I was scared so I woke up and then I felt sick" Katie said still crying.
"What was your dream about baby?" Abby hated it when Katie cried. She didn't like to see anyone cry but Katie was the most important thing to her in the whole world, as well as John, and she couldn't bear to see her upset.
"I had a dream that you and daddy got hurt and I never saw you again"
"Well gorgeous you don't have to worry because me and daddy aren't going anywhere I promise, and I'm here now" As Abby said this she took her little girls tiny face in her hands and wiped her tears away. Katie looked at Abby and gave her a little smile.
Abby loved the way she could make her daughter happy again after she had been upset. She had never had anyone in her life before John and Katie that she could make happy and that could make her so happy.
"Where's daddy mummy?" Katie said in her little cute voice that made Abby and John's heart melt every time they heard it.
"Daddy had to work tonight angel but he will be back soon" At this Katie lay back down next to her mummy and they both fell asleep.
At The Hospital
Carter slumped down on the couch in the lounge after a very hard night. All he could think about were his two girls lying at home waiting for him. He hated working nights because he didn't like being away from his family anymore than he had to be.
"Hey you look pretty tired", John looked up to see the familiar face of Susan Lewis a very good friend of him and Abby and Katie's godmother.
"Hey yea, I'm really tired but you would be if you had had the night I just had" Carter said with a slight smile.
"That bad huh?" Susan replied realizing Carter hadn't had a good night. "Yea and all I wanna do is go home" Carter was getting more and more frustrated as he said this. He hadn't been able to put Katie to bed now for a while because of all his night shifts and him and Abby had not got much time alone lately either. Susan could tell he was getting upset.
"Don't worry because just think how lucky you are to have a wife that loves you so much and a beautiful daughter that absolutely adores you" Susan said trying to make him feel better. "Anyway you can go home soon, you only have 2 more patients to see" Susan was right he was lucky and Katie and Abby did love him and understood why he had to work so late.
"Thanks Susan" he said to her as she left realizing what a good friend she was to them. He got up from the couch and went to see his last 2 patients feeling a lot happier knowing he could go home soon.
At the apartment
Abby felt a small poking on her arm and woke up quickly. She turned around and saw her daughter poking her arm trying to get her attention.
"What's wrong sweetie, did you have another bad dream?"
"I feel really sick mummy" As Katie said this Abby could hear Katie start to cry. Abby quickly turned the light on next to her and looked at her daughter. She looked very white and her beautiful little eyes were becoming red from crying. Abby felt her daughter's forehead and realized she was really hot.
"Ok baby mummy's here just wait and I'm going to get something to see how hot you are ok?" Her daughter looked at her with her helpless eyes and gave her a little nod.
Abby ran to the bathroom feeling scared for her little girl. She got a thermometer and brought it back to her daughter who was lying on her bed looking very weak. Abby took her temperature and it said 104. Abby was extremely worried now and she really needed John there to help her. As Abby picked up her little girl to take her to the hospital she started to cry because she was thinking that if anything happened to Katie she wouldn't be able to live anymore.
"Mommy I feel sick"
"Ok baby don't worry were going to the hospital to see daddy and he can make you better. So lets get in the car and we'll take a bag incase you want to be sick ok?" Her little girl nodded. Abby kissed Katie's face while holding her very weak little body.
Abby ran out of their apartment, put Katie in her car seat trying to make her feel better by telling her they were going to see daddy soon and quickly set off for the ER!
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Carter and Abby's apartment
"Mommy Mommy"
Abby was woken by her 3-year-old daughters upset voice. She looked up and checked the clock on her bedside table 3:30am. As much as she loved her little girl she didn't like getting up in the middle of the night.
Katie came running into her mummy and daddy's room holding her teddy bear by her side.
"Its alright baby mummies here", Abby helped her little girl into her bed and lay her down next to her. "What's wrong sweetie?" Abby looked at her little girl and couldn't help smiling because she was so beautiful. She had her dad's brown hair and his chocolate colored eyes that as soon as you looked at them made you want to smile.
Katie looked at her mummy and started to cry.
"Aww sweetie shh shh don't cry what happened?" Abby took her little girl in her arms and gave her a big hug.
"I had a bad dream mummy and I was scared so I woke up and then I felt sick" Katie said still crying.
"What was your dream about baby?" Abby hated it when Katie cried. She didn't like to see anyone cry but Katie was the most important thing to her in the whole world, as well as John, and she couldn't bear to see her upset.
"I had a dream that you and daddy got hurt and I never saw you again"
"Well gorgeous you don't have to worry because me and daddy aren't going anywhere I promise, and I'm here now" As Abby said this she took her little girls tiny face in her hands and wiped her tears away. Katie looked at Abby and gave her a little smile.
Abby loved the way she could make her daughter happy again after she had been upset. She had never had anyone in her life before John and Katie that she could make happy and that could make her so happy.
"Where's daddy mummy?" Katie said in her little cute voice that made Abby and John's heart melt every time they heard it.
"Daddy had to work tonight angel but he will be back soon" At this Katie lay back down next to her mummy and they both fell asleep.
At The Hospital
Carter slumped down on the couch in the lounge after a very hard night. All he could think about were his two girls lying at home waiting for him. He hated working nights because he didn't like being away from his family anymore than he had to be.
"Hey you look pretty tired", John looked up to see the familiar face of Susan Lewis a very good friend of him and Abby and Katie's godmother.
"Hey yea, I'm really tired but you would be if you had had the night I just had" Carter said with a slight smile.
"That bad huh?" Susan replied realizing Carter hadn't had a good night. "Yea and all I wanna do is go home" Carter was getting more and more frustrated as he said this. He hadn't been able to put Katie to bed now for a while because of all his night shifts and him and Abby had not got much time alone lately either. Susan could tell he was getting upset.
"Don't worry because just think how lucky you are to have a wife that loves you so much and a beautiful daughter that absolutely adores you" Susan said trying to make him feel better. "Anyway you can go home soon, you only have 2 more patients to see" Susan was right he was lucky and Katie and Abby did love him and understood why he had to work so late.
"Thanks Susan" he said to her as she left realizing what a good friend she was to them. He got up from the couch and went to see his last 2 patients feeling a lot happier knowing he could go home soon.
At the apartment
Abby felt a small poking on her arm and woke up quickly. She turned around and saw her daughter poking her arm trying to get her attention.
"What's wrong sweetie, did you have another bad dream?"
"I feel really sick mummy" As Katie said this Abby could hear Katie start to cry. Abby quickly turned the light on next to her and looked at her daughter. She looked very white and her beautiful little eyes were becoming red from crying. Abby felt her daughter's forehead and realized she was really hot.
"Ok baby mummy's here just wait and I'm going to get something to see how hot you are ok?" Her daughter looked at her with her helpless eyes and gave her a little nod.
Abby ran to the bathroom feeling scared for her little girl. She got a thermometer and brought it back to her daughter who was lying on her bed looking very weak. Abby took her temperature and it said 104. Abby was extremely worried now and she really needed John there to help her. As Abby picked up her little girl to take her to the hospital she started to cry because she was thinking that if anything happened to Katie she wouldn't be able to live anymore.
"Mommy I feel sick"
"Ok baby don't worry were going to the hospital to see daddy and he can make you better. So lets get in the car and we'll take a bag incase you want to be sick ok?" Her little girl nodded. Abby kissed Katie's face while holding her very weak little body.
Abby ran out of their apartment, put Katie in her car seat trying to make her feel better by telling her they were going to see daddy soon and quickly set off for the ER!
Plz send any feed back to groovygirl_fr@hotmail.com thank you. thank you for reading my first chapter. i will write a second chapter soon. Any feed back would be appreciated good or bad. X x x x x