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"Well the other night I was in the lounge after my shift and I was about to go home. Luka came in and didn't say anything to me. I asked him if he was going home and he said 'yeah alone'. I asked him if he was ok and he said he hadn't been ok since the day I married Carter.."
Susan was slightly shocked at this last comment and was still listening intently to what else Abby had to say. Susan had guessed the reason Luka was upset had something to do with Abby but never liked to say anything. She had never thought Luka would tell her himself.
"Then he said that he loved me and he always will!" Abby finished a little surprised she had just blurted it all out. She looked down. She felt bad that she had not even told John and she thought Susan might judge her for that.
"Well what did you say?"
"Obviously I told him that I loved Carter and I had a beautiful daughter with him and we had a family now. He looked hurt but I had to go so I left him there. I know it sounds mean but I didn't know what else to do."
Susan looked at Abby. "Abby this isn't your fault. You haven't done anything wrong but I think you should tell John about it."
"Yeah I know I will," as she said his Carter walked up behind her and put his arms around her waist.
Susan felt a bit like she was the odd one out so decided she would leave.
"Listen you two I'll see you later, what time you leaving?"
"We're leaving at 5:00 which is in a couple of hours which means we better get going soon."
"Ok well I'll see you then. Actually would you mind if I drove you to the airport because it gives me a chance to say goodbye before you leave me here for Sunny Barbados." Susan said with a jealous smile on her face.
"Course you can." Abby said without hesitation. "Anyway it would be good because I'm sure Katie would like to see you before we go." Susan smiled at this comment.
"Yeah it will be fun but we have to pick up Katie from her friends house and then go to our apartment for our stuff, is that ok?" Carter added.
"Yea sure, ok well I'll see you later then." Susan walked away but not before giving Abby a look to say tell Carter. Abby saw this and nodded but Carter saw as well.
"What was that all about?" asked Carter.
"Nothing I'll tell you later." Abby kissed Carter on the cheek and walked away sailing because he was standing there looking at her because he wanted to know why Susan made that face now.
Luka was watching them both have a good time and could tell them were both so in love but instead of being happy for them he was just full with jealousy!
Sorry this is so short. The next chapter will absolutely be longer. Hope you like it so far. Please please please review. Even if you've reviewed already. I would be really grateful and any ideas you have. I will be making the next chapter more exciting involving Luka getting a little nasty.
"Well the other night I was in the lounge after my shift and I was about to go home. Luka came in and didn't say anything to me. I asked him if he was going home and he said 'yeah alone'. I asked him if he was ok and he said he hadn't been ok since the day I married Carter.."
Susan was slightly shocked at this last comment and was still listening intently to what else Abby had to say. Susan had guessed the reason Luka was upset had something to do with Abby but never liked to say anything. She had never thought Luka would tell her himself.
"Then he said that he loved me and he always will!" Abby finished a little surprised she had just blurted it all out. She looked down. She felt bad that she had not even told John and she thought Susan might judge her for that.
"Well what did you say?"
"Obviously I told him that I loved Carter and I had a beautiful daughter with him and we had a family now. He looked hurt but I had to go so I left him there. I know it sounds mean but I didn't know what else to do."
Susan looked at Abby. "Abby this isn't your fault. You haven't done anything wrong but I think you should tell John about it."
"Yeah I know I will," as she said his Carter walked up behind her and put his arms around her waist.
Susan felt a bit like she was the odd one out so decided she would leave.
"Listen you two I'll see you later, what time you leaving?"
"We're leaving at 5:00 which is in a couple of hours which means we better get going soon."
"Ok well I'll see you then. Actually would you mind if I drove you to the airport because it gives me a chance to say goodbye before you leave me here for Sunny Barbados." Susan said with a jealous smile on her face.
"Course you can." Abby said without hesitation. "Anyway it would be good because I'm sure Katie would like to see you before we go." Susan smiled at this comment.
"Yeah it will be fun but we have to pick up Katie from her friends house and then go to our apartment for our stuff, is that ok?" Carter added.
"Yea sure, ok well I'll see you later then." Susan walked away but not before giving Abby a look to say tell Carter. Abby saw this and nodded but Carter saw as well.
"What was that all about?" asked Carter.
"Nothing I'll tell you later." Abby kissed Carter on the cheek and walked away sailing because he was standing there looking at her because he wanted to know why Susan made that face now.
Luka was watching them both have a good time and could tell them were both so in love but instead of being happy for them he was just full with jealousy!
Sorry this is so short. The next chapter will absolutely be longer. Hope you like it so far. Please please please review. Even if you've reviewed already. I would be really grateful and any ideas you have. I will be making the next chapter more exciting involving Luka getting a little nasty.