Hi! Warpstarmaster122 reporting for duty! The inspiration for this story
hit me like a bullet train but I don't know if I can send it back full
force to wind it into words to create this story -.-;;
Dullahan: Oh, I can help you get that inspiration back! Formina Sa- *about
to cast Formina Sage*
Me: You do it and I'm not making you those brownies!
Dullahan: Eep!
Me: Anyway, on with the show! Dullahan *shudders*, will you please open
with the disclaimer?
Dullahan: It depends. you making those brownies?
Me: *Rolls eyes* Fine, I'll make you the freakin' brownies.
Dullahan: Okay, with that settled, FORMINA SAGE!!!!
Me: AHHHHHHHH!!!!! I've got to stop being such a sucker if I want to
survive this job x.x
Dullahan: Well, I have to hold my end of the bargain.
Disclaimer: warpstarmaster122 does not own Golden Sun, Dullahan, any of the
characters, blah blah blah. Ugh! I can't believe that humans are so
stupid that they need authors to spell things like this out for you.
So it begins.
Dark Mage
Chapter 1: Unspoken Love
Ivan was just propped up on his bunk, his diary open at his lap. Even though it was the middle of the day, he liked to take the time to sneak to his bunk because it was the only time he got a little privacy to write in his diary, what with everything going on the decks of the ship. With Mars Lighthouse lit, every one was returning home, and everyone was busy: Isaac and Mia being totally infatuated with each other, Garet and Jenna arguing over something stupid, Kraden babbling on and on questioning Picard about the ways of Lemurians, Felix manning the orb, Isaac's dad and Felix's parents doing Jupiter knows what, and Sheba-
Sheba. Ivan's thoughts suddenly flashed towards the other Jupiter Adept on board, all blissful. Ever since Isaac decided to join Felix in lighting the lighthouses, he had been questioning his feelings toward her. Turning to a new page in his diary, he decided that would be the topic of the day. It usually was.
I remember in my travels with Isaac and my friends that until we were in Tolbi, I felt that deep in my heart, something was missing. Then I met Sheba. I remember that she was being held hostage by Babi to force the people of Lalivero to build his lighthouse. Such beauty, such innocence. When I saw her, I could have sworn I felt Cupid's arrow hit me. It all started with a feeling of lightheadedness and the blushing. Also with the sweaty palms and the weak knees. I wonder if that's normal. I'll have to ask Isaac some day. I could tell she was a Jupiter Adept because when I read her mind she sensed it. After I left, those feelings went away after a while. Then when we were atop Venus Lighthouse, I saw Sheba again, and the feelings came back full force. I did everything I could do to try to save her: I gave Saturos and Menardi the Shaman's Rod and fought harder than I ever knew I could fight, but it was all for naught, for after Venus Lighthouse lit and was about to collapse, Sheba fell into the sea, and Felix dived down after her. I wasn't able to protect her, and "Damn" was the only thing I could say. By the time we met again in Jupiter Lighthouse and got a proper introduction in Contigo I finally recognized that what was happening: I was falling in love! My love for her had grown deeper and deeper ever since.
Now that I know that I love her now, I have no idea what to do. I want to tell that I love everything about her: her emerald green eyes, her short blonde hair, everything. It's just a matter of saying it now. My heart aches to live to see a day when we are just more than friends and we can look into each other's eyes and share what it means to love and then share true love's kiss. Yet I cannot tell her for my heart also fears the pain and tragedy of rejection. The heart break to experience that would hurt more than the deepest of battle wounds poured over in salt. But that leaves me in quite a predicament now because if I don't confess my love to her, I'll never know if she loves me back. Therefore, I must try to get her to love me back.
With that, Ivan stopped writing in his diary for a moment to think. He wished he could spill his guts to Sheba as well as he could to his diary. No one even knew that he had a diary. Isaac, Mia, Garet, and Jenna made it look so easy. It's quite ironic that I can take on the mighty Dullahan and take down the Doom Dragon, but I can't even muster enough courage to tell Sheba I love her, Ivan thought to himself. Maybe, just maybe he could do it today. Then again, he had been saying that for about a week now. Every time he so much as looked at her, his heart skipped a beat, and every time he was around her, he felt right, and every time he was about to tell her, something always seemed to happen.
He immediately shut his diary and fished out the box where he put all his stuff from under his bunk when suddenly he frowned. Among one of the things he had in his box was the Tomegathericon. It didn't bother him while he was on his quest but now ever since Alchemy had been unleashed it had given him a chill down his spine whenever he came in contact with it. For now he just shrugged off the feeling and tried to focus on more pleasant thoughts as he placed his diary in his box and shoved it back under his bunk. As he started to leave the room he said aloud: "O how I wish I could put the power of my love for Sheba in the form of words."
Little did he know that Sheba was saying the same thing about him.
Me: ^______^ Dullahan: What is it with the really dumb grin? Me: *as I place fresh hot brownies on the table* I just finished the first chapter of my first fanfic! Dullahan: I really don't think it was that great. Me: Then again, it isn't YOUR story and you're not into romance fics! Dullahan: whatever, loser Me: Grrr! *about to smash brownies into non-existent face* Alright warpstarmaster122, keep your cool, remember it's your first impression on your fans. Dullahan: You mean your non-existent fans? Me: *Picks up phone* Dullahan: What are you doing? Me: Calling the GS crew to come and kick your butt! : P Dullahan: Eeeep! *Hides in corner and tries to suck thumb, in which he realizes he can't.* Me: That's what I thought. Now, everyone, I want you all to review this chapter now and tell me what you think. Be honest! I have room for improvement. But first, just a reminder. If you liked it, tell me what you liked about it. If you hated it and think I forever botched the spirit of writing, tell me why. Don't just say "You suck," say "You suck because." followed by a logical explanation. The last thing I want to do is disappoint my fans ^_^ Dullahan: Uh-oh, the second batch of brownies is burning! Me: Oh my God! Well, gotta go, see ya! @_@
Dark Mage
Chapter 1: Unspoken Love
Ivan was just propped up on his bunk, his diary open at his lap. Even though it was the middle of the day, he liked to take the time to sneak to his bunk because it was the only time he got a little privacy to write in his diary, what with everything going on the decks of the ship. With Mars Lighthouse lit, every one was returning home, and everyone was busy: Isaac and Mia being totally infatuated with each other, Garet and Jenna arguing over something stupid, Kraden babbling on and on questioning Picard about the ways of Lemurians, Felix manning the orb, Isaac's dad and Felix's parents doing Jupiter knows what, and Sheba-
Sheba. Ivan's thoughts suddenly flashed towards the other Jupiter Adept on board, all blissful. Ever since Isaac decided to join Felix in lighting the lighthouses, he had been questioning his feelings toward her. Turning to a new page in his diary, he decided that would be the topic of the day. It usually was.
I remember in my travels with Isaac and my friends that until we were in Tolbi, I felt that deep in my heart, something was missing. Then I met Sheba. I remember that she was being held hostage by Babi to force the people of Lalivero to build his lighthouse. Such beauty, such innocence. When I saw her, I could have sworn I felt Cupid's arrow hit me. It all started with a feeling of lightheadedness and the blushing. Also with the sweaty palms and the weak knees. I wonder if that's normal. I'll have to ask Isaac some day. I could tell she was a Jupiter Adept because when I read her mind she sensed it. After I left, those feelings went away after a while. Then when we were atop Venus Lighthouse, I saw Sheba again, and the feelings came back full force. I did everything I could do to try to save her: I gave Saturos and Menardi the Shaman's Rod and fought harder than I ever knew I could fight, but it was all for naught, for after Venus Lighthouse lit and was about to collapse, Sheba fell into the sea, and Felix dived down after her. I wasn't able to protect her, and "Damn" was the only thing I could say. By the time we met again in Jupiter Lighthouse and got a proper introduction in Contigo I finally recognized that what was happening: I was falling in love! My love for her had grown deeper and deeper ever since.
Now that I know that I love her now, I have no idea what to do. I want to tell that I love everything about her: her emerald green eyes, her short blonde hair, everything. It's just a matter of saying it now. My heart aches to live to see a day when we are just more than friends and we can look into each other's eyes and share what it means to love and then share true love's kiss. Yet I cannot tell her for my heart also fears the pain and tragedy of rejection. The heart break to experience that would hurt more than the deepest of battle wounds poured over in salt. But that leaves me in quite a predicament now because if I don't confess my love to her, I'll never know if she loves me back. Therefore, I must try to get her to love me back.
With that, Ivan stopped writing in his diary for a moment to think. He wished he could spill his guts to Sheba as well as he could to his diary. No one even knew that he had a diary. Isaac, Mia, Garet, and Jenna made it look so easy. It's quite ironic that I can take on the mighty Dullahan and take down the Doom Dragon, but I can't even muster enough courage to tell Sheba I love her, Ivan thought to himself. Maybe, just maybe he could do it today. Then again, he had been saying that for about a week now. Every time he so much as looked at her, his heart skipped a beat, and every time he was around her, he felt right, and every time he was about to tell her, something always seemed to happen.
He immediately shut his diary and fished out the box where he put all his stuff from under his bunk when suddenly he frowned. Among one of the things he had in his box was the Tomegathericon. It didn't bother him while he was on his quest but now ever since Alchemy had been unleashed it had given him a chill down his spine whenever he came in contact with it. For now he just shrugged off the feeling and tried to focus on more pleasant thoughts as he placed his diary in his box and shoved it back under his bunk. As he started to leave the room he said aloud: "O how I wish I could put the power of my love for Sheba in the form of words."
Little did he know that Sheba was saying the same thing about him.
Me: ^______^ Dullahan: What is it with the really dumb grin? Me: *as I place fresh hot brownies on the table* I just finished the first chapter of my first fanfic! Dullahan: I really don't think it was that great. Me: Then again, it isn't YOUR story and you're not into romance fics! Dullahan: whatever, loser Me: Grrr! *about to smash brownies into non-existent face* Alright warpstarmaster122, keep your cool, remember it's your first impression on your fans. Dullahan: You mean your non-existent fans? Me: *Picks up phone* Dullahan: What are you doing? Me: Calling the GS crew to come and kick your butt! : P Dullahan: Eeeep! *Hides in corner and tries to suck thumb, in which he realizes he can't.* Me: That's what I thought. Now, everyone, I want you all to review this chapter now and tell me what you think. Be honest! I have room for improvement. But first, just a reminder. If you liked it, tell me what you liked about it. If you hated it and think I forever botched the spirit of writing, tell me why. Don't just say "You suck," say "You suck because." followed by a logical explanation. The last thing I want to do is disappoint my fans ^_^ Dullahan: Uh-oh, the second batch of brownies is burning! Me: Oh my God! Well, gotta go, see ya! @_@
