Sequel to fire, can be read independently. Disclaimer : Zigzag belongs to
Louis Sachar, and the sister and father to. I think.
Longer than the others, sry.
* * *
He came again today.
Always dressed in white.
Always so tall.
So high.
So far away.
Like the life I had before that day.
That day when he came home late.
Why he did it, I can't know.
It was on march 22.
I remember it perfectly.
Kathy gave me a present that day.
She gave one every month.
She loved giving things.
Someday she's going to save lives.
I used to be proud.but I don't want her to become like Him.
Like the white.
She's better than that.
She's not like other people.
She knows that the black is better than the white.
She so smart.
So wise.
So honest.
But she wants to be like Him.
Everybody looks up to Him.
Why?
Why!
But I know why!
He lies to me, so he probably lied to them to!
Thats it.he manipulated them.
Even Kathy, who was so smart.
All of them.
The doctors.
The police officers.
The teachers.
Thats why they're all against me.
It's because of him!
Of the white!
He did it!
The fire always told me it was him!
I should of listned.
I should of burned his office instead of that classroom.
All those years, I thought there were different evils in this world.
That it was random.
But now I know.
Oh yes I know.
He orchestred it all.
He is the One behind the White.
He is the devil.
Hell isin't red like the fire.
Hell isin't black like the darkness.
Hell is white.
A blinding light.
Silky.
Sticky.
Heavy.
Like a pressure, permantly trying to get into you, to know your every secret.
Wait.
I'm repeting myself.
But no, since I'm just talking to myself.
It's weird.
To have all this time to think.
Maybe I should just talk.
It would stop then.
**But I didn't mean to hurt anyone!**
Ha.
What a « coup de theatre »
Will they by it?
The poor, poor crazy child, treated by his father, hated by all, who only has slight moments of lucidity when he cries out his innocence.
Maybe, Maybe not.
I can't see anything.
The white finally got into me.
I can feel it.
It's like a slight chill.
It smells like burned toast.
It's almost soothing in a way.
A flash.
A door.
Opened.
People.
Looking at me.
Staring at me.
Only their eyes can I see.
White everywhere again.
A room.
Chairs.
The white, tall staring down at me.
**The judge**
A voice tells me.
So this is a court room.
But how?
I only spoke a handfull of times!
I never once admitted to what I did!
How do they know?
HOW?
They got inside my head.
Inside of me!
Theyre the white!
All of them, everyone, only I am black, made of fire and darkness, why does everybody think that the white is good, and black is bad?
**Because it's true?**
That voice again, inside of me.
Inside of me?
In my head?
What.
**You finally figured it out hey Ricky.
It's to late though.you told them everything. All this time, you thought you were silent. Fool, thats what you were.
See your father? See your mother? See your sister?
All of them crying.
They heard it all.
Theyre against you now.
See them all dressed in black?
And you in white?**
The white.it betrayed me.
Everything white.
As I fall, I feel myself burning with white fire.
The fire of sorrow.
* * *
It's over! *sheds a tear* no but seriously im happy of the result. But christ it's got angsty! It's very liberating to write this.I hope you liked it :) If so review!!! Id like at least as much as Fire got :)
*
Thanks for Fire and White
* Beena-Pani who reviewed both Fire and White, you rock :)
Spice of Life who also reviewed both of my storys, I really appreciate it :)
ZiggyGurl who reviewed Fire, go you!
Foundapeanut who reviewed White, Bravo to you, you got the part about the dad right, and basicly Zigzag sees the white as a way to put in words everything bad in his world.
Drowchild who reviewed White, thanks! I know its confusing, but when you go and try to put in words all your thoughts it always comes out being overwhelming. X__x
I really appreciated your reviews, people underestimate the power a reviewer has.
So now to the dilema of doing a third and last 3part fic on Zigzag. would finish quite nicely, but I would of needed to put White last after Fire and Black.oh the confusion, anyways thanks to everybody who took the time to read it even if you didnt leave reviews, and I hope I didnt make sociaty angry by writing this. ;)
Karine Black.
Longer than the others, sry.
* * *
He came again today.
Always dressed in white.
Always so tall.
So high.
So far away.
Like the life I had before that day.
That day when he came home late.
Why he did it, I can't know.
It was on march 22.
I remember it perfectly.
Kathy gave me a present that day.
She gave one every month.
She loved giving things.
Someday she's going to save lives.
I used to be proud.but I don't want her to become like Him.
Like the white.
She's better than that.
She's not like other people.
She knows that the black is better than the white.
She so smart.
So wise.
So honest.
But she wants to be like Him.
Everybody looks up to Him.
Why?
Why!
But I know why!
He lies to me, so he probably lied to them to!
Thats it.he manipulated them.
Even Kathy, who was so smart.
All of them.
The doctors.
The police officers.
The teachers.
Thats why they're all against me.
It's because of him!
Of the white!
He did it!
The fire always told me it was him!
I should of listned.
I should of burned his office instead of that classroom.
All those years, I thought there were different evils in this world.
That it was random.
But now I know.
Oh yes I know.
He orchestred it all.
He is the One behind the White.
He is the devil.
Hell isin't red like the fire.
Hell isin't black like the darkness.
Hell is white.
A blinding light.
Silky.
Sticky.
Heavy.
Like a pressure, permantly trying to get into you, to know your every secret.
Wait.
I'm repeting myself.
But no, since I'm just talking to myself.
It's weird.
To have all this time to think.
Maybe I should just talk.
It would stop then.
**But I didn't mean to hurt anyone!**
Ha.
What a « coup de theatre »
Will they by it?
The poor, poor crazy child, treated by his father, hated by all, who only has slight moments of lucidity when he cries out his innocence.
Maybe, Maybe not.
I can't see anything.
The white finally got into me.
I can feel it.
It's like a slight chill.
It smells like burned toast.
It's almost soothing in a way.
A flash.
A door.
Opened.
People.
Looking at me.
Staring at me.
Only their eyes can I see.
White everywhere again.
A room.
Chairs.
The white, tall staring down at me.
**The judge**
A voice tells me.
So this is a court room.
But how?
I only spoke a handfull of times!
I never once admitted to what I did!
How do they know?
HOW?
They got inside my head.
Inside of me!
Theyre the white!
All of them, everyone, only I am black, made of fire and darkness, why does everybody think that the white is good, and black is bad?
**Because it's true?**
That voice again, inside of me.
Inside of me?
In my head?
What.
**You finally figured it out hey Ricky.
It's to late though.you told them everything. All this time, you thought you were silent. Fool, thats what you were.
See your father? See your mother? See your sister?
All of them crying.
They heard it all.
Theyre against you now.
See them all dressed in black?
And you in white?**
The white.it betrayed me.
Everything white.
As I fall, I feel myself burning with white fire.
The fire of sorrow.
* * *
It's over! *sheds a tear* no but seriously im happy of the result. But christ it's got angsty! It's very liberating to write this.I hope you liked it :) If so review!!! Id like at least as much as Fire got :)
*
Thanks for Fire and White
* Beena-Pani who reviewed both Fire and White, you rock :)
Spice of Life who also reviewed both of my storys, I really appreciate it :)
ZiggyGurl who reviewed Fire, go you!
Foundapeanut who reviewed White, Bravo to you, you got the part about the dad right, and basicly Zigzag sees the white as a way to put in words everything bad in his world.
Drowchild who reviewed White, thanks! I know its confusing, but when you go and try to put in words all your thoughts it always comes out being overwhelming. X__x
I really appreciated your reviews, people underestimate the power a reviewer has.
So now to the dilema of doing a third and last 3part fic on Zigzag. would finish quite nicely, but I would of needed to put White last after Fire and Black.oh the confusion, anyways thanks to everybody who took the time to read it even if you didnt leave reviews, and I hope I didnt make sociaty angry by writing this. ;)
Karine Black.
