Sorry for taking so long but I finally have chapter 2 up and our campaign
of characters is gonna be increased by 4
Erk: does that include me
Zephyr: probably not
Erk: how do you not know
Zephyr: on to the story
Chapter 2: Saving Serra
Whoosh, soaring along through the clouds florina, lyn, and hector go. After a long, long amount of flying they finally reach a town in some place. (you don't need to know the name . because I can't think of one) ( also I'm gonna try doing caption thingy's or whatever like . im gonna say who is talking . tell me if it is better this way or if it was better the other way)
Hector: Finally I don't think I could of took anymore
Florina: im sorry that you feel that way lord hector
Hector : No, I didn't mean it like it sounded
Florina walks away
Hector: well ummm . lets rest here for the night then take off again in the morning
Meanwhile on Fargus's ship with Dart and Rebecca
Fargus: Argh here we are lets stop here and get some stuff before we deport to look for the treasure
Rebecca: ok
Dart: cheer up Rebecca
Rebecca: . ok Meanwhile in the castle
Serra: you there servant bring me some lemonade, and you go do something, ah . being the marquess is so fun
Meanwhile in some house
Matthew: . leila .. Why . why
Meanwhile right outside the town
Erk: hmmm so my new client is waiting for me in one of these houses . I guess I should get going
Ok now this is just the beginning of the chapter but I need you guys to submit in the reviews any way I could make it better if you like having the names before they talk or like it the other way or just anything you don't like . so just submit some reviews and I'll finish this chapter later
Erk: does that include me
Zephyr: probably not
Erk: how do you not know
Zephyr: on to the story
Chapter 2: Saving Serra
Whoosh, soaring along through the clouds florina, lyn, and hector go. After a long, long amount of flying they finally reach a town in some place. (you don't need to know the name . because I can't think of one) ( also I'm gonna try doing caption thingy's or whatever like . im gonna say who is talking . tell me if it is better this way or if it was better the other way)
Hector: Finally I don't think I could of took anymore
Florina: im sorry that you feel that way lord hector
Hector : No, I didn't mean it like it sounded
Florina walks away
Hector: well ummm . lets rest here for the night then take off again in the morning
Meanwhile on Fargus's ship with Dart and Rebecca
Fargus: Argh here we are lets stop here and get some stuff before we deport to look for the treasure
Rebecca: ok
Dart: cheer up Rebecca
Rebecca: . ok Meanwhile in the castle
Serra: you there servant bring me some lemonade, and you go do something, ah . being the marquess is so fun
Meanwhile in some house
Matthew: . leila .. Why . why
Meanwhile right outside the town
Erk: hmmm so my new client is waiting for me in one of these houses . I guess I should get going
Ok now this is just the beginning of the chapter but I need you guys to submit in the reviews any way I could make it better if you like having the names before they talk or like it the other way or just anything you don't like . so just submit some reviews and I'll finish this chapter later
