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Foreign Attraction
Summary:
Sakura is madly in love with Eriol, the leader of her school's track and field team, but she finds out that Tomoyo, her best friend, is also deeply in love with him too. Sadly, Sakura decides to escape the love triangle and takes a vacation to Hong Kong where she meets Syaoran Li. Syaoran soon falls in love with Sakura, but Sakura still loves Eriol. What will happen?
Prologue:
"Go! Go! Go!" the Tomoeda cheerleading squad cried out as they cheered for their school's famous track and field team. Some waved their pompoms around while others flipped their batons brilliantly into the air, creating twirls in the sky. Sakura Kinomoto was the talented leader of the excited cheerleading squad.
It was a warm Friday afternoon in Tomoeda, with the sun shattering its radiance amongst the runners. A slight breeze whistled pass while the runners as they got ready for the long distance running race. The crowd on both sides of the fields cheered and whistled for their favorite athlete. Amongst the crowd, a quiet girl with long black hair, shaped into curls, sat calmly with sparkling eyes gazing admiringly at Tomoeda's track and field team leader, Eriol Hiragizawa. Eriol was the most popular boy in the entire high school. Being 18 years old, he had a strong and good looking build as well as eyes that filled with wisdom. His blue hair shone to the sunlight making him look even more handsome. Eriol was also very smart in his academics, despite being a starred athlete, making him an even dreamier boyfriend to have. However, he's still single, with many girl fans, but the only girls that he happens to hang around with are Sakura Kinomoto and Tomoyo Daidouji.
"Ready! Get set! Go!" the caller called aloud as he let out a blow from his gun. All the racers that were previously lined up behind the start line got to their feet and sprinted across the fields. Loud cheers filled the air as the runners tried their best to win the race.
"Taking the lead is our young racer, Eriol Hiragizawa from Tomoeda High, and following close behind is Takani Korashini, track and field leader from Raikani High School. Seems like our two team leaders have gotten themselves into an one on one race," the loud speaker spoke from above.
"GO ERIOL! GO ERIOL!" the Tomoeda cheerleaders cried aloud, all excited. Amongst team, Sakura Kinomoto was screaming the loudest of them all. Eriol gave a sharp glance at Sakura who was almost shouting from the tops of her lungs, and smiled. As he neared the finishing line, he suddenly picked up a sudden jolt of speed and surpassed Takani, beating him first to the finishing line.
"Hooray!!!" the loud crowd cheered as they threw things into the air. There were popcorn, chip bags, soda cans, and all sorts of different items that you could hardly ever imagine, flying through the air. The rest of the track and field team hurried over to Eriol and gave him praises and congratulations. Lots of people hugged him and all the girls crowded around him, holding their notebooks up for his autographs. The cheerleading squad hurried over and waved their pompoms and batons around, as a sign of admiration for their school team. The team picked Eriol up and tossed him up into the air.
From faraway, Tomoyo rushed over to Sakura and smiled sweetly as she looked up at Eriol. Eriol gave a glance at Sakura and both her and Tomoyo and smiled widely. When he finally got back down to his feet, he walked over to his two friends where they congratulated him.
"O my god Eriol! You were so great!" Sakura cried with pride, her emerald green eyes shimmering with admiration.
Sakura was also one of the most popular girls in Tomoeda High. Although she didn't fancy fashionable clothes or makeup, she was still very pretty with her beautiful brown hair and attractive smile. She was rather slim and performed better in sports than many other guys. On the other hand, her best friend, Tomoyo, was also a little angel too, with her large violet colored eyes. However, Tomoyo was more shy and quiet compared to Sakura.
Tomoyo blushed scarlet as Eriol grinned to Sakura's comment. "Yea Eriol, you were great!" Tomoyo added in with another blush.
Eriol smiled, "Thanks Tomoyo."
Soon the judge asked Eriol to go up to the stage to retrieve his gold medal and the school's trophy. The crowd cheered in chaos. As Eriol got back off stage, he gave another stare at Sakura and winked at her before he got back into the school to change. Sakura blushed hard and dropped her head down when she saw the killing wink. Tomoyo also blushed and turned away.
"Eriol, stop killing the girls!" one of the jealous guys cried as they shoved him back into the changing rooms.
Sakura and Tomoyo too retired to the girls' changing rooms where Sakura got out of her cheerleading outfit and into her regular clothes. She took out a white t-shirt and a pair of jeans and dressed herself into them.
"Ohh...Tomoyo, did you see that? Eriol winked at us! He's so dreamy!" Sakura sighed as she gave a twirl and sat down onto a bench in the middle of the girl's changing rooms.
"Don't you think so too Tomoyo?" Sakura asked.
"Um..Oh..he's alright," Tomoyo said as she blushed again.
"Well, I think he's terrific!" Sakura cried aloud, clapping her hands together. Tomoyo stared into Sakura's eyes to look for traces of emotions and then whispered softly, "Umm...Sakura, do you like Eriol?"
Sakura looked down and blushed furiously for she knew that deep down inside, her affections for Eriol were growing rapidly.
"I...uh.." Sakura stuttered, still unable to make any eye contact with anyone.
Tomoyo bored her eyes into Sakura's and could pick out the answer at once, for the truth was unanimous. Passions of love spoke out from Sakura's eyes. It was unquestionable; Sakura loved Eriol.
"Sakura loves Eriol too.what am I going to do?" Tomoyo thought to herself.
Just then, Sakura spoke up and disturbed Tomoyo's thought.
"Hey why don't we get Eriol and we could all go out for an ice cream?" Sakura suggested, pulling herself away from the embarrassing topic.
A little surprised, but still liking the suggestion, Tomoyo answered "Yes".
The trio walked to an ice cream parlor where each of them bought their favorite flavored ice creams. The two girls tried paying for their own ice creams but Eriol had insisted on paying, claiming that the treat was on him. In the end, both girls relented and thanked Eriol for his offer. After the three finished their ice creams, they all headed back to their homes. Tomoyo's house was closest and so Sakura and Eriol decided to walk her home first. At the entrance of the Daidouji mansion, the two said their goodbyes to Tomoyo and headed away. The two talked and laughed their way out, leaving Tomoyo still standing by the entrance watching over them.
"Bye Sakura..Bye Eriol..." Tomoyo said in a soft tone with watery eyes. She made a little waving gesture with her hands and headed back into her mansion.
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So, that was the prologue! Liked it? Hated it? Have any suggestions? Feel free to contact me through reviews..haha..Anyways, please give reviews since I just LOVE hearing comments from you! Any comments are okay! So anyway, hope you liked my fic so far...that's just the beginning though, but I hope it was satisfying. Toodles!
Foreign Attraction
Summary:
Sakura is madly in love with Eriol, the leader of her school's track and field team, but she finds out that Tomoyo, her best friend, is also deeply in love with him too. Sadly, Sakura decides to escape the love triangle and takes a vacation to Hong Kong where she meets Syaoran Li. Syaoran soon falls in love with Sakura, but Sakura still loves Eriol. What will happen?
Prologue:
"Go! Go! Go!" the Tomoeda cheerleading squad cried out as they cheered for their school's famous track and field team. Some waved their pompoms around while others flipped their batons brilliantly into the air, creating twirls in the sky. Sakura Kinomoto was the talented leader of the excited cheerleading squad.
It was a warm Friday afternoon in Tomoeda, with the sun shattering its radiance amongst the runners. A slight breeze whistled pass while the runners as they got ready for the long distance running race. The crowd on both sides of the fields cheered and whistled for their favorite athlete. Amongst the crowd, a quiet girl with long black hair, shaped into curls, sat calmly with sparkling eyes gazing admiringly at Tomoeda's track and field team leader, Eriol Hiragizawa. Eriol was the most popular boy in the entire high school. Being 18 years old, he had a strong and good looking build as well as eyes that filled with wisdom. His blue hair shone to the sunlight making him look even more handsome. Eriol was also very smart in his academics, despite being a starred athlete, making him an even dreamier boyfriend to have. However, he's still single, with many girl fans, but the only girls that he happens to hang around with are Sakura Kinomoto and Tomoyo Daidouji.
"Ready! Get set! Go!" the caller called aloud as he let out a blow from his gun. All the racers that were previously lined up behind the start line got to their feet and sprinted across the fields. Loud cheers filled the air as the runners tried their best to win the race.
"Taking the lead is our young racer, Eriol Hiragizawa from Tomoeda High, and following close behind is Takani Korashini, track and field leader from Raikani High School. Seems like our two team leaders have gotten themselves into an one on one race," the loud speaker spoke from above.
"GO ERIOL! GO ERIOL!" the Tomoeda cheerleaders cried aloud, all excited. Amongst team, Sakura Kinomoto was screaming the loudest of them all. Eriol gave a sharp glance at Sakura who was almost shouting from the tops of her lungs, and smiled. As he neared the finishing line, he suddenly picked up a sudden jolt of speed and surpassed Takani, beating him first to the finishing line.
"Hooray!!!" the loud crowd cheered as they threw things into the air. There were popcorn, chip bags, soda cans, and all sorts of different items that you could hardly ever imagine, flying through the air. The rest of the track and field team hurried over to Eriol and gave him praises and congratulations. Lots of people hugged him and all the girls crowded around him, holding their notebooks up for his autographs. The cheerleading squad hurried over and waved their pompoms and batons around, as a sign of admiration for their school team. The team picked Eriol up and tossed him up into the air.
From faraway, Tomoyo rushed over to Sakura and smiled sweetly as she looked up at Eriol. Eriol gave a glance at Sakura and both her and Tomoyo and smiled widely. When he finally got back down to his feet, he walked over to his two friends where they congratulated him.
"O my god Eriol! You were so great!" Sakura cried with pride, her emerald green eyes shimmering with admiration.
Sakura was also one of the most popular girls in Tomoeda High. Although she didn't fancy fashionable clothes or makeup, she was still very pretty with her beautiful brown hair and attractive smile. She was rather slim and performed better in sports than many other guys. On the other hand, her best friend, Tomoyo, was also a little angel too, with her large violet colored eyes. However, Tomoyo was more shy and quiet compared to Sakura.
Tomoyo blushed scarlet as Eriol grinned to Sakura's comment. "Yea Eriol, you were great!" Tomoyo added in with another blush.
Eriol smiled, "Thanks Tomoyo."
Soon the judge asked Eriol to go up to the stage to retrieve his gold medal and the school's trophy. The crowd cheered in chaos. As Eriol got back off stage, he gave another stare at Sakura and winked at her before he got back into the school to change. Sakura blushed hard and dropped her head down when she saw the killing wink. Tomoyo also blushed and turned away.
"Eriol, stop killing the girls!" one of the jealous guys cried as they shoved him back into the changing rooms.
Sakura and Tomoyo too retired to the girls' changing rooms where Sakura got out of her cheerleading outfit and into her regular clothes. She took out a white t-shirt and a pair of jeans and dressed herself into them.
"Ohh...Tomoyo, did you see that? Eriol winked at us! He's so dreamy!" Sakura sighed as she gave a twirl and sat down onto a bench in the middle of the girl's changing rooms.
"Don't you think so too Tomoyo?" Sakura asked.
"Um..Oh..he's alright," Tomoyo said as she blushed again.
"Well, I think he's terrific!" Sakura cried aloud, clapping her hands together. Tomoyo stared into Sakura's eyes to look for traces of emotions and then whispered softly, "Umm...Sakura, do you like Eriol?"
Sakura looked down and blushed furiously for she knew that deep down inside, her affections for Eriol were growing rapidly.
"I...uh.." Sakura stuttered, still unable to make any eye contact with anyone.
Tomoyo bored her eyes into Sakura's and could pick out the answer at once, for the truth was unanimous. Passions of love spoke out from Sakura's eyes. It was unquestionable; Sakura loved Eriol.
"Sakura loves Eriol too.what am I going to do?" Tomoyo thought to herself.
Just then, Sakura spoke up and disturbed Tomoyo's thought.
"Hey why don't we get Eriol and we could all go out for an ice cream?" Sakura suggested, pulling herself away from the embarrassing topic.
A little surprised, but still liking the suggestion, Tomoyo answered "Yes".
The trio walked to an ice cream parlor where each of them bought their favorite flavored ice creams. The two girls tried paying for their own ice creams but Eriol had insisted on paying, claiming that the treat was on him. In the end, both girls relented and thanked Eriol for his offer. After the three finished their ice creams, they all headed back to their homes. Tomoyo's house was closest and so Sakura and Eriol decided to walk her home first. At the entrance of the Daidouji mansion, the two said their goodbyes to Tomoyo and headed away. The two talked and laughed their way out, leaving Tomoyo still standing by the entrance watching over them.
"Bye Sakura..Bye Eriol..." Tomoyo said in a soft tone with watery eyes. She made a little waving gesture with her hands and headed back into her mansion.
***********
So, that was the prologue! Liked it? Hated it? Have any suggestions? Feel free to contact me through reviews..haha..Anyways, please give reviews since I just LOVE hearing comments from you! Any comments are okay! So anyway, hope you liked my fic so far...that's just the beginning though, but I hope it was satisfying. Toodles!
